Rishbala ~~ Drabbles Thread ~~ Updates in pg 9 Dt 20/11 & 21/11 - Page 3

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...Seema... thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great job,thanks fr opening this thread
...Seema... thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Pyar ki nishani
A very good scene by aish n umang
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Iam confused
Fantastic job rachana
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rishabh was feeling restless as he hasnt recieved a single message from madhubala yet,since morning he was waiting for her good morning message,at last he tried to call her up but she didnt recieved his call even.This made him more restless but suddenly he got a message from madhu ,it was evening but he recieved a good morning message as he has strictly asked her to never use the word evening as in his philosophy he always wanted her to be happy and shining like a new morning.He always used to laugh out whenever she used to ask the reason,but only he and his God know the reason that he loved her.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rishabh was trying to get to madhu but failed so now he is trying to call her sister,while talking to her about madhu she told that madhu got lost suddenly though now fine and home now but as soon as rishabh heard over the phone about madhu being lost the other day he got restless he wanted to ask thrishna the details but suddenly network went down in the area where superstar rk and his team were shooting a scene.Director was continuously calling rk to get ready for a shot but rk was engrossed in thoughts of his madhu and her well being,the people on sets started talking about rk being arrogant and showing attitude but none of them knew that the person who appears to be arrogant is now really worried about his love who got lost,after being diagnosed with brain tumours which are badly affecting her memory,he sat down crying silently and let people talk about his rude attitude.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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1.first one

Awesome dear
Someone doesn't like to hear good evening that's really nice and a unique thought.



2 nd scene

Nice but emotional
one
I was thinking why he is so worried that she got lost and she is back at home.
And then you let out that really hurting news
OMG...I am Really feeling like I want to cry with him.
And the world doesn't know his pain and judging him as a rude man..
Really heart touching
Nice work

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalmirage

1.first one

Awesome dear
Someone doesn't like to hear good evening that's really nice and a unique thought.



2 nd scene

Nice but emotional
one
I was thinking why he is so worried that she got lost and she is back at home.
And then you let out that really hurting news
OMG...I am Really feeling like I want to cry with him.
And the world doesn't know his pain and judging him as a rude man..
Really heart touching
Nice work

thank u so much rachana
Yes in the first one rishabh doesnt wanna hear good evening
In the second one,madhu is suffering from brain tumours and rjshabh loves her
Edited by ...Seema... - 6 years ago
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Rishabhhh,, madhu screamed at the top of her voice,Rishabh came running towards her,he just came back from hectec schedule of shooting but madhu scream forced him to come to madhu,What happened madhu,"he asked madhu breathlessly,madhu looked torwds him and said, iam hungry rishabh,and Rishabh without any thought ran towards kitchen,and then came out as he hadn't asked her what she wanna eat,and madhu told him that she wanna eat white rice with dal,and rishabh moved towards kitchen quickly madhu went behind him and sat down on the marbled counter ,chatter ing non stop,and rk irritatingly sighed saying ,"koi madhu ka pause button daba do",and she stopped at once,realising his mistake he desperately begged her to start talking again,fear gripped his heart but after a while she started laughing,making rishabh heave a sigh of relief,rishabh prepared white rice and dal,keeping the cabbage which he took out back in the fridge,as madhu stomach is allergic to cabbage,and at last the dinner was ready,rishabh placed the dishes on the dinning table,both sat down after praying to God and rk took a spoon full of rice mixed with dal and put it in his mouth with tears in his eyes,this has become their routine,madhu demanding for her favourite dish and then rishabh used to eat it on her behalf as she cant have solid foods because of her stomach cancer.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi seema di..
Hope you are doing good..
Nice scenes but 2 of them are really emotional.. At the starting I told light hearted, cute things would do coz emotional scenes would be painful to read & I hope you will write cute/funny scenes between Rishbala..
Plz try to avoid writing sad scenes as it would be really difficult to read & it's just a fun thread so nothing serious 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi aish..
Not feeling well just logged in and saw this thread so thought to share something
Sorry for making u sad
Take care

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