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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: janumkrk

how the damn did i miss this story these many days...

😊

its super interesting ...

THANKS MERI JAAN❤️

i read all part in one go pls pls pls my dear princess continue soon...

am Waiting eagerly for next part.


UPDATING



try to update weekly once ..


HOW COULD I IGNORE MY RKS WORDS..BUT A LITTLE LATE MY JAAN..I AM SORRY

. its sooo goood


KEEP SUPPORTING JAAN


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maithu_

Great to see this story back dear!

😊

Poor RK! He half heartedly expected her to accept him but she is just a kid and need time.


YEAH



So I think it is not a pbm!
Loved the whole part!


THANKS


Waiting for the next part dear!


UPDATING SOON

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi friends
Here is the next update
Please read and comment
One of my friend suggested me to ask some questions to the readers to improve my writing and to get new ideas

Please answer these
1)whichpart you feel good in this update
2),which part is worst
3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?
4)what happened with madhu ?


Please read the story are quote the views


MYSTERIOUS SAVIOR



Part8


Rks POV
I sensed them even from a mole away but I waited for them to knock at my door and in few minutes I heard them knocking at my door
"Cone in" I see to them in my authoritative voice .they opened the door and entered.sahil bowed to me and I nodded to him.alina,the beat witch,who beauty is famous in supernatural world ,smiled at me and I gestured them to take a seat.
"Hi alpharishab..I am so glad that finally you wanted me for something" alina said happily
"Yeah...I want your help" I said
"What can I do for you?" Alina asked
"Well...I want you to keep it a secret whatever i am going to say to you.." I said her seriously.
"Yes I promise alpha" alina said
"Alina,I found out my mate" I said and stopped looking at her face.
"What ?" Her smile fell a little.
I sighed and continued ignoring her words"but she is a human "
"A human?...that's really pathetic" she scoffed
I ignored her words again "I want you to help me " I said
"What do you want ?r u going to reject her and you wanted dome potion to relieve your pson?don't you know no potions is effective against rejection pain" she said looking at me wide eyed.because no one in supernatural world dare to reject those mate .it is extremely pain and most of them won't survive it and eventually they will die. The moongoddesshave given the mates such a curseso that they won't reject her decision.very rarely some I might have survived the situation but they had to pay for it by losing some of their powers.
"No alina...I am not gonna reject her..I know the consequences very well." I stood up from my seat and kept walking to and fro.their eyes were watching me curiously.
"Alina,she is just a human and she can't survive in our world... You knowledge my pack is one of the world's best pack and you know why it is so?/..everyone of our pack are trained to fight and they can protect themselves ...but what if there is a weak Luna in our pack and thewprd leaks out..our enemies who are trying to get control over this pack will try to kidnapped her to make me weak and of course my mate will be my weakness .then I have to surrender my pack and my peoples for that weakling...I can't do that to my pack " I said looking out them
"Don't you love her alpha?" Alina asked
"Of course I love her alina... Its the bless given by moon goddess to fall in love with our mate at first sight itself...but I can't besalfish..I can't put my pack in danger for my own gain" I said
"I understand you alpha...why can't you change her?" Alina
"Alina...don't you know.. A human never survived a transformation... They are wean" I said
"Then y do goddess paired with you..there should be a reason ,rk" alina said
This girl is just pisssing me.why don't she understand the situation. I thought she hard an eye on me and she will be happy to help me to get rid of my mate.so that she can have a chance with me,even though I won't give any chance to her.
"What about Ashton,alpha?" Alina
"He will eventually understand and come back to Mr" I said
"No I won't" Ashton growled to me and I shut him out of my mind
"Okay...if you wish so..what I have a to do?" Alina
"I need a potion to erase her memory of last two weeks" I said and sahil stared at me and gasped.even though he knew what I was going to do ..hehot worried when I word it.I glared at him and he looked away from me painful.
"Then what about you?" Alina
"Me?...what about me?...you can't erase my memory... You can't do it to any supernatural" I scoffed at her
"I know it" she said angrily "I asked about Ashton being getting mad and taking control of you.he will go after her"
"I have made a plan for it..I am got t send good to her parents... She is gonna call gee parents from the my phone and I am gonnt throw away the sim in the river so that I won't search for her number.. I am going send her to the town with my sahil and he will drop her in the airport .and arranged some human to get her ticket to wherever her place is .then erase that humans memory..so that I won't have any access them her even if I tried" I said and congratulate myself for such a seal proofed plan
"You bas***d" Ashton growled at me.but I ignored him
"Okay...nice plan alpha..so let me cast the spell and make the potion
Madhus POV
I waited for rishab to come to my room .but he never came to visit me and I had more breakfast and lunch in my room..no one came to my room except the maid who used to serve me the food.she was stealing glances at me every now and then..I felt angry for being ignored and the maids odd behavior
" what?"I asked
"Nothing Luna. .I am sorry" the maid said
Finally I decided to ask her
"Where is Trish and other?" I asked
"They are busy with their works Luna" maid said
"Okay" I felt frustrated
The maid handed me a green colouredjuice"alpha wanted you to drink it"
"What is it?" I asked her.it looked weird like they had crushed some bitter plants and mixed it with some dirty liquids.
"I don't know Luna...but alpha said it is good for healing you" maid said
I felt angry. He is concerned about my health but not want to visit me or talk with me.he us ignoring me like I am a plague.
"No I won't drink it" I said sternly.
Either he has to come to me or call me to make me drink it.if he is stubborn ..I am super stubborn"I thought
Soon sahil and trishna came rushing into my room.they lookedpanic and I know how they reached here...mind linking...super cool right?
"What is it madhu...just take the drink " Trish said worriedly
"First answer me...why you are ignoring me?'I asked
She looked at sahil and I saw pain one her eyes which is mirroring sahils eyes too.
" what's up with these guys"I thought
"Well...its ...we...you...know about us and we ...you..might..hate..us" Trish stuttered
I sighed and walked to her and hugged her
"I am sorry Trish...when I realized it I could comprehend it but now I am in a with it ..I accept you as my friends and I accept him as my .." I stopped as I couldn't say the word mate as I am embarrassed by it
A small smile appeared on Trish's face and it soon replaced by guilt or pain and I couldn't figure it out from her face.she looked at sahil again and he reverted his gaze.
"Something is going on " I thought
Trish sighed"drink it madhu"she said
"What is it with everyone forcing her to drink that juice." I thought
"Why rk ignoring me?", I asked Trish
" he is busy with some work "Trish said
" he never failed to attend me every now and then ..even I'd it is for a few minutes ..hr used to come to me"I thought
"Drink it madhu" Trish said
Here goes it again... And an idea click into my mind... I want to talk to him ..I want to apologize to him...Andi want to say him that I have feelings for him..
"I will drink it if rk come and me and say it by himself" I said stubbornly
"Hah...made for each other" sahil whispered.. But I heard it and smiled
"Yeah stubborn like your alpha" I said.and sahil chuckled.

Rks POV
I was sitting in my office lookiy through the pending works.. I am going through the files of warrior training .anew batch of kids are joining for the training and oi was going through their profiles.then I heard my mates sweet voice
She was asking for Trish and others .I know they were ignoring her because of my orders and they feel guilty for erasing her memory. Then I hear her denying to take the potion .the maidmindlinked me and toldll about the situation.I mind linked sahil and Trish to go to her and make her drink the potion.I couldn't concentrate on my work and I decided to eavesdrop.I heard her asking trishns about ignoring her and all..I felt a pang in my heart for doing that to her..but I am helpless I can't put my pack or my mate in such a situation and I want her to live a happy life.
Then I heard her talking about accepting trishna and everyone .and u chuckled at her notable to say me as her mate.I imagined her beautiful face blushing deep red and I wanted to kiss those rosy lips and make love with her till she forgets everything except my name all by those thoughts my boner get excited
",hmm...rishab don't blame me this tin" ashtonsaod playfully and I felt embarrassed .each time I blame him for putting me in such situations.. Now its me myself had done the worse.
"Yes...its you" Ashton said. I felt him doing a happened dance.
"Shut up and hear her out Ashton" I managed to came out of my gutter hole thoughts
"Its not gutter hole thoughts rishab...its our love if our mate and that's how we are gonna make our pups" Ashton said
"Stop it ,Ashton, yes are not helping" I shut him down
Then I heard she demanding for many and sahils comment on me..yes my mate is Stubbs I knew it and I felt happy for the word'madefor each other'
I decided to give in and visit her.I stood up from my dear dragging the chair away with then sahil mind linked
"I know rk you heard over... Here is a situation and you are needed here.
" yes I am coming "I said and shut the link.

Madhus POV
I heard the foot steps and I was sure that its my rk..my mate.I became happy to see him and soon I saw him at my door steps ...I don't know how I managed to do it but before I realized it I was hugging him tightly and he was looking at trishna and sahils smilies face.I parted from him and looked at him. His eyes were flickering brown and blue. I gently cupped his left cheek and he immediately leaned to it.his eyes is sparkling blue and I knew it is his wolf Ashton in control.
" I am really sorry Ashton... I shouldn't have done that to you..I accept you my mate"I said with at most love and regret in my voice
"You know me my beautiful mate" ashtray said with his gruffy voice .
"Yes as thon" I said smiling
A smile spread on his face and soon he forcefully closed his eyes and when he opened it.it turned to his usual brown Color and now rishab is in control.
"Rishab?" I asked
He nodded and backed away from me an I felt shirt in my heart.but I managed to hide it and smiled at him.he took the goblet from the table and offered it to me
"Drink it" he said without any emotions
I felt the pain again
"Is he going to reject me or he don't like me...I am just a liabliry to him..he was asking to call my parents... Is he going to sent me back... Why he is so cold to me today...he was not the one I met and where is that love I had seen in his eyes...everything gone?" So many questions swirled in my mind like a whorl wind.
"Madhu " rk called me pulling me out of my trance
I looked at me and he forwarding me the drink.but I want the answers .
"I want some answers after that u will drink whatever you give me even if it is poison" I said
He looked at me startled and then he looked at sahil and Trish.as if they got the cue they went out of the room and shut the door.
He sighed and sat down on the chair near my bed and I followed him and sat in my bed .he securely put the drink on the table and looked at me
"Ask me", he said in his manly voice and it melt m y heart and I felt a stir in my feminine core.soon he sniffed the air and looked at me wide eyed.his eyes turned to blue again .
" your arousal smells good... So desperate for me Han?"Ashton asked
"Plese Ashton...I want to talk with rishab." I plead him
"Okay.." He said and turned back
"I...I ..am sorry for his behavior" rk said embarrassed at his wolfs cockiness.
"Its okay" I felt embarrassed too.
After a few minutes he cleated his throat "ask me" he said
"Well...I am your mate?" I asked
"Yes" he nodded
"Why didn't you Tell me about it?" I asked
"You didn't know about us and I can't trust a human" he said looking away from me
I sighed"okay...I..I..understand.. But what you gonna do now?"o asked
He looked at me wide eyed for a second and composed himself. He might have taken aback by my direct questionings.
"Well..." He licked his lips and fidgeted with his hands"you...you are a human and out works and its laws are different ...you can't cope cope up with it"he said
"What if I wanted to cope up with it?" Sent asked
He sighed and brushed his hands through his hair
"Look madhu...we supernatural are very power... With supernatural hearing ,strength agility,speed etc...you humans can't be equal to us in anyways" he said
"So you are wishing for someone equal...is it something like that?" I asked with hurt lacing my words
"No...no...madhu.its not that...I am not thinking like that...I...I.." He stuttered
"So you think I am weak ...I am pathetic ,helpless woman,?*I asked
" no madhu...you are not weak for a human and you are the bold human I ever met...you can even accept some wolves in your life...but.."he stopped
"But what rishab?" I asked him furiously
"You..you are weak for our world.. You can't defend yourself and a weak Luna is a great weakness for a pack and it will put the pack in instability and vulnerability.. I don't want my pack in danger" he said without meeting my eyes
"So that's it. ...everything is for your pack...I am just a liability ..a weakling Han?" I asked him and I felt tears brimming in my eyes
"No madhu . .its for your safety too" he said worried
He tried to wipe my tears I shoved his Hand.
"My safety?" I scoffed"what about my heart rishab...its breaking.. Can't you feel the Bond between us...even though I am ahumab I can feel it ..why can't you?"I asked him .
"I can madhu...but I have to ...we have to do it" he said standing up from the chair.. I stood up from the bed too .I looked at his eyes
",are you going to reject me?" I asked
"H..how you know about rejection?" He asked
"Werewolf books" I said
",oh...okay." He said
"Are you going to reject me" I caught the collar of his shirt with my hands and repeated my question furiously. He removed my hand from his collar and moved away from me.
"No ..." He said in a low voice.
"Then?" I raised my brows and looked at him.
"We will discuss it later.. I have some works to do...please drink it and rest .I will come back after sometimes" he turned to leave.I caught his hand .he looked at our hands and then at me.
"I want few moments with Ashton" I said
"What?" He asked me wide eyed
"You heard me...I want to talk on him" I said
"Okay" he sighed"do I have to shift?"he asked
"No Ashton in human form" I said
He nodded and so on his eyes turned blue.
"Madhu..." Ashton called in his gruffy voice
"Ashton" I cupped his face"I love you so much"I said
"I love you too my mate" he said
"Ashton...I know rishab is going to do something to get rid of me and I don't know I could see you two again... So I wanted to talk with you" I said
"He loves you madhu..but he is helpless.. He is sacrificing our lives for our pack" he said
"I know and I don't blame him " I sighed
"I am sorry madhu " Ashton said and he wiped the tears rolling down my eyes.he cupped my face and leaned towards me.our lips met for a fraction of second and he pulled away .I looked at his brown eyes and I knew its rishab. I gripped my hand in his hair and pulled him back .I crashed my lips to him and hungrily kissed him .he hesitated for a few minutes and then he took control.he pulled my lower lip into his mouth and bit it gently.I opened my mouth and his tongue entered swiftly cherishing the warm heaven. His hands roamed through my body and gripped at my waist .he trailed his hands further up and stopped at the valley of my bossom.I moaned into his mouth and he left my mouth to kiss on my cheeks to my jaws and then to my neck.he licked on my neck and I moaned at the pleasure .he started sucking and licking at a soft spot on my neck.his hands trailed up and touched my moundand I felt something grazing on my neck.I gasped at both innervation... Is he touching me inappropriately ..we are not into a relationship yet and is he going to mark me?...
"Rk..." I called him desperately
Soon he moved back from me panting and looked at me with regret .his canines were out and I could see a little blood on it.
"I...I am sorry...I just.." He stuttered
"Rk...you were going to mark me" I asked
"He looked at me wide eyed" Han..werewolf books...yeah..I lost my control ...I am sorry...now take the herbal juice and sleep",he left the room without looking at me
I sighed and went to the dressings mirror. I looked at my neck to saw two small spots on my neck...it looked like a hickey and I smiled at the thought .I went back to the bed and took the goblet .I looked at the weired liquid and gulped it down.I kept back the goblet on the table and felt a little dizzy . I fell on the bed and fell in to the oblivion of darkness.
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I tried to open my eyes but the bright light above me was making me difficult to do it.I opened my eyes slowly and soon it got adjusted to the light.I looked around the room and slowly raised myself into sitting position. I felt my joints are aching and heaviness killing my head.I felt my mouth dried up and looked around for any source of water. I saw a jug of water on the table.I crawled myself out of the bed and tried to reach it..but my legs gave away and I was ready to hit the floor ..but a hand kept me from kissing the floor.the hand steadied me and help me to the bed .I sat down and wiped the sweat away from my face..I saw the hand holding out a glass of water in front of me and drank it greedily.I wiped my mouth and looked at the owner of the hand.I stared at him for a few minutes and then I smiled at him
"Thanks" I said
He nodded and continued staring at me as if he wanted to knowledge something from me and then I raised my eyebrows at him .but he didn't change his gaze at me I felt self-conscious.and it pissed me ..you might feel the sane if someone keep looking at you like him.. Right?
Then I asked him"what is it rk?"i
And he started coughing.sahil ,Trish and jay dashed to the room and loom at me as if I had grown a horn on my head.



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Edited by magicalmirage - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Ress
unres..
Before giving the review I'm gonna answer to the question in two ways..
Firstly in guttery way

1)whichpart you feel good in this update..??

Well.. All the Ahem-Ahem parts like Rk getting turned on, Ashton sniffing (it was kinda funny)& of course Rishbala make out session 😉😳

2),which part is worst ..??

When suddenly they stopped making out to my utter disappointment..😭 I hoped he would mark her & do something more 😉

3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?

Well.. Just think there is a guttery minded reader is here who is desperately waiting for Rishbala romance so you can often write some streamy romance of Rishbala😳😉 (Lol.. I know sometimes I talk like a pervert but only in the matter of Rishbala 😳)

4)what happened with madhu ?

Maybe she didn't loss her memory (don't have a naughty answer for this)

Now the decent side.

1)whichpart you feel good in this update..??
Madhu's love confession to Rk..

2),which part is worst ..??

Well not the worse but I didn't like Rk's decision to erase Madhu's memory.

3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?

I love the way you write chechi.. Simple way of writing but make us readers so desperate to read with the twists & turns in the story..

4)what happened with madhu ?

Same answer may be she didn't forget anyone..

*sigh* Now review :)

This is a shocking surprise..
Naan pinakka..😭 You didn't say you were going to update when I msged you thank God this time I was able to grab my 1st position 😃
Well I love my Ashton more.. If there was any way to separate the wolf from Rk I would have done it & run away with my Ashton giving Rishabh to Madhu.. Hehe.. He is a sweetheart.. I love when Ashton take over Rk sometime.. My romantic wolf.. So dreamy..!!
Rk.. You better hear your wolf's words how dare you even think of erasing Madhu's memory.. Even if you plan to leave her we won't let you.. Rachana chechi won't let you.. Hena chechi..??
Oh my.. Madhu baby.. I loved your trick.. I know why you asked for Ashton coz he is the most romantic wolf & won't resist you .. Don't worry Madhu Ashton won't let Rishabh go away from you & he will pursue Rishabh until he agress with him.. Hr can't always switch him back..
Why everyone was wondering looking at madhu at last ..??
Waiting eagerly for the next part ..
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm chechi :)
Edited by aishu007 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update dear
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Oh so madhu didn't loss her memory
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
you know what princess you are making me greedy for updates of this ff...

can you make it weekly 2 updates. pls


and talk between aston rishab and madhu its omg types i loved it.


i dont like my rk sending her away but atlast u gave the twist.


after drinking that green potion also madhu have her memory it is because of that bite rk gave.

or someone changed the potion... alina or ??????

anyways am happy she remember him.

madhu i give u a idea, u get seductive potion from alina so that aston will take control of rk for few hours.. after that u know what i mean




WHY U WANT TO KNOW ANYWAYS ASHTON KNOWS WHAT TO DO WITH HIS MATE IN ABSENCE OF RK'S CONTROL...
Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update,
loved it,
So Rk wants to erase Madhu's memory of last two weeks that's why called Alina,
no one is happy about his decision especially Ashton still Rk wants to send Madhu away from him he is sacrificing their love for his pack,
Madhu confessed she loves them,
so even after drinking that potion Madhu still remembered them or did she remembered only her initial days with them,
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
First of all
Thanks for the PM dear!
Loved this part as the battle between heart and mind and wish was so visible and lovely!
Wished Aston took power over RK and told don't drink the juice but anyways it didn't work on her LOL
Happy that Madhu is fully as herself and no one else!

Coming to your questions!
You are writing superbly!
As you said yourself grammar and spelling mistakes only! Rereading will help to reduce it!
Just put through words what you desire and the art is in it only ;-)

Waiting for the next part dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Thanx for the pm:)

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