Mukammal ishq,updated on page#35 - Page 5

Originally posted by: aishu007

No..

You have swear on me..

You have to unite Rishbala at any cost dii..

Or I will disappear from this forums for days & only will come back after done with my crying & that's not fair :(

Don't do this to me..

🤣

aishu di stop worrying about ds rishbala, first unite ur own rishbala..
where is the update ha??

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

aishu di stop worrying about ds rishbala, first unite ur own rishbala..
where is the update ha??

Don't worry about that.. I will unite my Rishbala.. No matter what happens.. But I'm still confused about Rk's reaction.. Thinking to ask the opinion of readers..

Originally posted by: aishu007

No..

You have swear on me..

You have to unite Rishbala at any cost dii..

Or I will disappear from this forums for days & only will come back after done with my crying & that's not fair :(

Don't do this to me..

😲think seema think..hw to unite rishbala..God help me pls

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

😲think seema think..hw to unite rishbala..God help me pls

You have to.. To save your sister aishu's head..

di!! why do I get this idea that there are two madhu & two rishabh.. & original ones are alive & their duplicate partners die..
now you will do punarvivah of originals😛

Will reply to all comments later on,

Res..

.😲
Didi, itna suspense?? mujhe iss umar mein heart attack dena hai kya??🤢
RK- madhu from rival tribes & fell in love..
Those people are fighting without even knowing the cause of rivalry.. such dumbheads🤣
But madhu's family got to know getting her married..
Such a brute her father is, how can he point gun at his own wife..😡
OMG!! RK ko shoot kar diya
Yeh kya tha?? 20 year old son.. ye sab flashback mode mein chal raha??😲
My stomach aching with so much suspense.. yaha to sinful nights ke RK aur love blooms in hearts ki madhu ke past se bhi zyada bada suspense.. dono ka combined past jo hai..😆
very beautifully penned di..👏
You are such an amazing writer aur tabse bhav kha rahi thi, when we asked you to write..😡
From narrating part to the dialogues delivered, everything was written with such finesse..
Exact emotions portrayed by each character.. & each emotion was well described..
Perfect amount of curiosity to be filled in the minds of the readers..👍🏼
It did have the feeling of watching a suspense thriller.. 😳
In suspense it can give takkar to mydriya's junoon..
& in terms of writing skills, it can give complex to aaniya di's sinful nights..
(these were the one's I felt topped the two genres I mentioned above, but seems like you have snatched their positions)😉

P.S.- Now that you have started writing, don't you dare stop.. warna