Mukammal ishq,updated on page#35

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Please chup hojao beta please,"a worried madhu tried to calm down her 1 and a half years old son,the cruel tribal people killed her husband and she is crying,sweating and running to save her and her sons life,more precisely her sons life.
And suddenly a truck hit her from behind,a loud cry was heard"rishabhhh".
In the same city rishabh kundra was sitting in his office,feeling uneasiness and restlessness in his system,though not knowing the exact cause behind those unknown feelings.
Suddenly the office phone rang and his secretary connected the call and what rishabh heard from the other side of the phone turned his world upside down.
The person from the other siide gave words to the feelings he had sometime earlier which he was unable to name,"His madhu was no more".

Howz the teaser guys??
Will try to post the story by tomorrow evening,its an os on rishbala😳
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Part 1:
Rkkk ,"where are you,a very worried madhu asked ,panting and sweating,relax madhu relax,iam here only,i just went away to answer the call,dadaji called me up,nothing else,why are you so worked up,rk held her hand and they moved towards one of the benches in the park,where they were seated a while ago before rk got the call.
Rk i...i...saw in dream last night that iam trying to reach you,but someone is trying to pull me away from you"madhu told him crying badly.
Please madhu i dont believe in all this,and you too forget about it,told rk and wiped her tears ,caressing her cheeks lovingly.
Madhu though stopped crying but was hell scared of losing rishabh,her love her life.
Rk sensed her worry and tried to change the topic,"madhu when are you going back to village?"
Rk pleaseRk dont remind me of that place,u know na they are hell bent on getting me married to that bas***d rahul,and her eyes again filled up with fresh tears and she hugged rk and cried."
"For God sake madhu,stopped crying otherwise i will start crying too",rk pleaded helplessly and wiped away her tears and took her to his apartment,where he prepared her favourite aloo paratha and feed her with his own hands.
And then he took her to the room to spend some quality time together.
Rk and madhu belonged to the tribal areas of southern punjab and there families were rivals God knows from how long,but the hatred and enmity was going to pass from one generation to next generation,and they were losing men and women even without knowing the details of how and why this hatred was born and originated.
Rishabh kundra as known as rk and madhubala malik met in the university and fell in love with each other,without knowing about their families and their hatred towards each other but when they realised they decided not to get their love affected by the enmity created by their ancestors.
They have completed their studies and now madhu family wants their daughter to be married and they selected rahul sharma to be her groom.
Madhu got up startled from deep sleep hearing loud sounds outside her apartment,she also heard phone ringing,she took up thd phone and saw "bhai calling", and she recieved the phone,hearing fierce voice of sultan malik asking her to open the door of her apartment,.
As soon as she opened the door,her brother and father entered and held her harshly from her hairs",sharam nahi ayi kundra key sath mounh kala karte hue",and madhu hissed in pain and fear gripped her heart.
And without giving her any chance to speak,they dragged her away,she cried,begged,pleaded but the cruel father and brother took her away.
In morning
Rk was worried as he didnt get madhu good morning message,he tried her number but it was switched off.
Rk decided to meet madhu and when he went there,he found out about what happend last night.
He didnt know what to do and thus decided to leave for his home at the village.
"Rishabhhh azadi dene ka matalab ye nahi ke tu jaa k malik ki bete se pyar kar bete,bhol jaa,koi aur mil jyege,"rk got almost the same reply from his dadaji,bao ji and bhai when he tried to convince them about madhu.
Rk tried a lot but he failed miserably in contacting madhu.
At madhu place preparations were going on,but madhu was feeling disgusted.
"Bao ji,i dont wanna marry rahul please"she pleaded in front of her father but he turned a deaf ear to her.
Mein apni jaan le lungi,a helpless madhu threatened her father,who in turn put pistol on padmini head,asking madhu to marry rahul,otherwise she gonna see her mother dead body.
Madhu cried and agreed reluctanly.
Next day she was getting married and rk came there but shamsher malik shot him right in the chest,wid people runing here and there,telling ,"shamsher malik killed mohan kundras son,.
"Papa,pappa,a 20 years old rishi kundra brought rk out of his thoughts,
"Ji beta"mom is asking for something but iam not getting her,please go and check on her,rishi asked his father.
Edited by ...Seema... - 7 years ago
Moonrox thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic start baji,madhu is dead.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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When u posted this..and u didn't not tell me..Me..Ur biggest fan cum grand daughter 🤣

Phle to u murdered Madhu..( I m still wondering)..now hell or heaven..Earth or in sea..U will hv to unite rishbala.. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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By the way teaser is heart wrenching!!:(
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seema congrats on the new story
Awesome teaser
Who is Madhu's husband who is killed by the tribal people and where is she?
Rishab is feeling uneasy and gets a call to be informed that Madhu is no more
How are Rishbala related?
Waiting to know more about it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg,rishabh is not madhu husband?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Tribals killed madhu husvand,then who is rishabh?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yeh kab hua?? di aapne mujhe bola nahi..😲
very bad..😡
I was supposed to comment first..😭

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kaafi interesting start tha..
Happy that you finally decided to write something on your own..

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