Mukammal ishq,updated on page#35 - Page 6

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

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Didi, itna suspense?? mujhe iss umar mein heart attack dena hai kya??🤢
RK- madhu from rival tribes & fell in love..
Those people are fighting without even knowing the cause of rivalry.. such dumbheads🤣
But madhu's family got to know getting her married..
Such a brute her father is, how can he point gun at his own wife..😡
OMG!! RK ko shoot kar diya
Yeh kya tha?? 20 year old son.. ye sab flashback mode mein chal raha??😲
My stomach aching with so much suspense.. yaha to sinful nights ke RK aur love blooms in hearts ki madhu ke past se bhi zyada bada suspense.. dono ka combined past jo hai..😆
very beautifully penned di..👏
You are such an amazing writer aur tabse bhav kha rahi thi, when we asked you to write..😡
From narrating part to the dialogues delivered, everything was written with such finesse..
Exact emotions portrayed by each character.. & each emotion was well described..
Perfect amount of curiosity to be filled in the minds of the readers..👍🏼
It did have the feeling of watching a suspense thriller.. 😳
In suspense it can give takkar to mydriya's junoon..
& in terms of writing skills, it can give complex to aaniya di's sinful nights..
(these were the one's I felt topped the two genres I mentioned above, but seems like you have snatched their positions)😉

P.S.- Now that you have started writing, don't you dare stop.. warna

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

never re,no heart attack plz😆

Yes der r frm rival tribes n dey loved each other

Yo dey r dumbos😆

Dey spied n gt to knw about rishbala affair

Her father is v cruel

U forgot kya,teaser mein madhu ki gaud mein baby tha
Haa, toh wo 1 & half year ka baby tha, 20 year ka baba nahi😉

Yes dey sht rk

Awww itni tareef 😲😳
Agar koi taarif kare toh chup chap le lena chahiye, samjhi..😛

Na na baa aaniya n mydriya r brilliant writers n im zero re😆
zero nahi hota to baaki numbers ka koi mol nahi hota..
1 ke aage jitne zyada 0 utni hi zyada uski value..
Aur aapne ram lakhan movie ka wo gaana nhi suna,
main hoon wo zero, ha ha ha zero..😉

Will try my best
Try nahi.. make sure you do it, warna
ab issey dhamki samjho ya chetawni, aapki marzi hai😈

Thanksss a ton dear😳
Welcome😉😳

Originally posted by: aishu007

Res..

Hehehe

Unres...

Amazing start dii.. I thought it is a os but there is more parts.. Hehe..

Rk & Madhu's families are rivals.. They love each other so much..

Shamseer forced Madhu to marry a sh*t named Rahul..

Dii.. I don't want that marriage to happen.. No.. No.. Never.. Don't do this if you don't want me to give me a sleepless night.. 20 yr old son..?? So it was all Rk's thought about past..??

Hope Rishbala are together & Rishi is this son..

Waiting for the next part ..

Please.. You have to update soon..

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

its an os but my lappy is dead so im updating it frm phn,

Dats why devided it in parts

Awww thank u so much😳

Yes dat baby is a grown up rishi nw

Marriage happened dear and rk gt shot😉

will try to update tmrw inshAllah