RiShbala Ts 'ChecKmate' ||Completed#PG.24|| (25/09) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: maithu_

The story is superb!
THANKS..

Loved how RM relationship progressed!
Is RK going to revenge Madhu's bro using her? Hope NO!
HOPE NO.. LOLZ..

What is going to happen with the alliance that her parents are seeing?[
MARRIAGE..

/DIV][DIV]A lot of questions arrises!
It's so damn interesting!

I also got the negative vibes towards the last.
HAHAHAA.. IT WAS MEANT TO BE ;)


Eagerly waiting for the next part.

THANKS FOR READING :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb start dear
THANKS VARSHA..

Loved it
Rk and madhu are in relation
YES.. THEY GOT INTO IT..

Last part gave me goosebumps
I hope rk doesnt do any mistake and make madhu miserable
HE IS GOING TO DO THAT.. NOT ONLY MADHU BUT HIS LIFE TOO..

Update soon

P.s. happy bday dear

thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: bhumi1492

Hope madhu should know his true colour soon.
HE WILL HIMSELF COME OUT IN OPEN.. BUT HE IS NOT CHEATING HER..

And Don't do something foolish.
AHAAN..

Between rk and atharv's enimity poor madhu is going to suffer.
REALLY...

Please update next part soon.

THANKS FOR READING BHUMI
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Happy birthday Deepti.
Nice thread.
Coming to the story. Awesome.
Like how RK Madhu relation progressed.
Is RK taking revenge?
Madhu is innocent.
Update the second part soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Happy birthday Deepti...
Have a great day ...Enjoy...🥳
Awesome thread..😃

Res for comment on story...😳

Aaniya...congratzzz for becoming Sizzlers again...🥳..

Unres
Awesome...really, loved this story so much...

Madhu and Rk's journey of love...wah!!..😳...It was so cute and so real lovestory...friend getting both's connection, and Madhu's inexperience, her hesitance, scare of parents...so real...
Their gradual change in relationship...slowly becoming intimate...I loved the first hug...how he asked it and she gave in...

But, last part scared me...revenge??? ...He really loves Madhu right...and is he thinking of revenging Atharva now through Madhu??? 😕...I am so scared...don't do anything wrong Rk...



Edited by kaustavi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Happy birthday deepti...




Awesome thread aani...👏👏👏

Res for story..

Unress


Awesome story...⭐️⭐️⭐️
Superb job aani...👏👏👏

I hate Madhu's parents...😡
she is only 20... if she don't want to marry then she don't...She has her own life...
and 12 years difference... is too big...
Thank God rk is not that person...

Trishna seems to be genuine friend ... i liked her...

Loved the way how rishbala relationship progressed!😉😊

Rk seems a guy with moral values...
I don't think rk is cheating with madhu...

Last part is too scary...
Is really RK going to avenge Madhu because of her brother... plzzz Nooo...

I don't want sad ending...plzzz...

Waiting for the next part...
Thanks for pm...😊


Edited by shree001 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
ya right but madhu have a self respect so after this madhu fully broken down do its veeter she leave him so he regret for hurting diplai cheated him so wy nt revegeing her wy madhu he is hypcarte hate rk nice plz di this time nt a open ending type nice updare soon also update chahat as well
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEEPTI AKA RM14 .May God Bless u..

Aani yaar Amazing one..I loved the whole ..
Honestly 1st I taught that Rk is the Groom but nah u kept a Twist, Yaar U made Rk and Madhu's bro as Enemy..Its definitely thrilling to read now.
This trishna na is surely doing a great matchmaker over here..
After reading the last line, I am getting nervous over here.
DARE U AANI,IF RK REVENGE MADHU,I am gonna kill u.
Yaar Madhu is sweet and she trust Rk , Rk should not break the Trust..
I so knew it someone gonna fall in love, But Rk is First here..
Tu story likhe aur INTIMATE Scenes na Ho,Aisa Ho sakta hai kya????? .
Can't believe yaar ,Both r in Fast mode doing it on Hotel and all.I can believe now but its Aani's story..lol..
Really loved this..Thrilling one..
Just can't wait for the Next part..
Thanks for this story and writing..Love u..God bless u.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Happy B'day Deepti..

Superb update Aani.
I thought,the groom is Rk at first..
Trishna finds RK for Madhu..
After long time of friendship turn into love..
But RK is using her for revenge..
Oh No..will Madhu forgive him?
Poor madhu,,..
Eagerly waiting..
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow very beautiful story. I really like Trishna. How RK asks permission to hug or kiss Madhu is very very cute. Some of the scenes were very hot. I hope this is not a revenge plan of RK. Madhu undeserving of this and she trust RK, I hope he will not destroy her trust. Thanks a lot dear for the new story, waiting for next part
Happy birthday Deepti.

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