RiShbala Ts 'ChecKmate' ||Completed#PG.24|| (25/09)

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Lets First celebrate.. our Dear Forum Member's Happy Wala Birthday..
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On, this Special day.. I wanna say once again, U are The wonderful person i Met in the forum, and i Always adore u as Person, and Cherish Our friendship Bond :)
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Here Is a Two Shot On Rishbala...
I dont Know how it is, Its just a vague Idea on Which i Wrote :)
Give it a Try Please :)

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PROLOGUE:

Four Shots on Rishbala !

Things changes.. Time Changes.. Circumstances Varies !!
She is leading a Normal life, nothing adventurous nothing Dull,
When he Stepped in Her simple life.
They get to know Each other,
Which started as Friendship, developed into Love !
She started seeing her World in him.

But is It Real or it is a Facade !
It is Love or It is Game, Where the Two are players.. Waiting to Checkmate Each Other !

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Checkmate
Part-1



"I love you because I know no matter what happens, you'll always love me back"


The setup

"No mumma.. Its too soon, please don't do this." A girl in her Twenty, spoke distressed, standing in a hall.
"Madhu nothing is just too soon ok. In two week u will be 21." Padmini, Madhu's mother spoke sitting on sofa holding a photograph in hand.
"But i just finished my graduation." Madhu reasoned "I wants to study further, do jobs."
"They don't have any objection with ur studies Madhu." This time malik spoke looking at Madhu, sitting beside Padmini "Infact they said they will fund ur studies, and they will let u do job too, if u get good one. This alliance is perfect for u."
"But, he is soo older than me papa, how'll i adjust ?" Madhu said, as tears threatened her eyes. She was in her final semester when her relative started bringing alliance for her, but none was suitable, And Malik too supported her that time but now when her results is out, Malik is keen to marry her off to this guy. In malik's view this is the best family his daughter could ever got.
"Just 12 years difference, Madhu, not much & its socially & biologically accepted too. Ur mom & mine age difference is of 7 years." Malik reasoned.
"7 years, and my 12-13 years, he is 34 for god's sake." Madhu cried. How she wished, she could shout in the whole world at the injustice which is being hurled upon her.
"Madhu, try to understand baby. All ur cousins had got married & now only u is left, and We wont give u away to Anyone right. He & His family is very respected, their social status is very good. And we wont get u marry in this month, it will take 7-10 months to get everything finalise." Padmini spoke, feeling content seeing the photograph of her To Be son in law. The alliance is brought by her own brother, and she couldn't deny it.
"Is money everything ?" Madhu asked almost in tears. Yes, the guy belongs to rich family, but he is not appropriate for her, according to madhu.
"The groom, money & his family. U will be happy there. Trust me, i wont hand u over to anyone who is not suitable for u." Malik stood up, walking towards madhu he kept his hand on her head. Madhu looks at her father with tears brimming soft eyes, then turning away she straight away walks to her room, banging her door shut.
She fell on her bed, and give in to her tears. Such a big decision of her life & she has no say in it. How she dreamt of a nice husband with whom she can fell in love, but whatever is happening its far away from her dreams, she cant bring herself to accept her parents decision.

~~~~~~

*After few a Days*

*Hii* madhu was scrolling down her cell, when she got a whatsapp message from her best friend, Trishna.
*Hey* Madhu typed back.
*whats up girl ? Why didn't u came online for all these days* Trishna typed.
*I was depressed yaar* madhu lay on her bed with mobile in her hand.
*why ? Marriage topic again ?* Trishna typed. Trishna is madhu's best friend from High school, she knew her very well.
*yes, and this time its very serious* Madhu replied back sadly.
*Meet me tomorrow at 5 eve, ok* Trishna pressed the send button.
*ok* madhu agreed. She needs change & fresh air.
*Don't take too much tension. Bye.. Good night* Trishna typed.
*Night !* madhu switches off her data pack, sighing she closed her eyes. Her 21st birthday is coming too, but she is not at all excited for it. Everything seems like nightmare.

~~~~~~

"So ?" Trishna asked madhu as they sits on coffee caffe day.
"Nothing" madhu shrugged her shoulders.
"What have u decided ? Did u pull on ur crying drama ?" Trishna sipped on her coffee.
"Not drama yaar, this time I really cried in agony from my heart, but after rejecting 5 alliance, my Parents are totally into this guy, and this alliance is brought from my maternal uncle, so mom-dad is very serious about it." Madhu replies.
"So, u are going to marry that Uncle type of guy ?" Trishna asked.
"I don't have choice." Madhu sighed.
"How'll u adjust with him ? He is from different city no.. Means u'll leave me too, breaking our friendship." Trishna muttered sadly.
"Fate" madhu looked away sadly.
"It will be better off, if u find had a guy for urself" Trishna said suddenly.
"Sadly, to be good girl to my parents, i didn't." Madhu looks at Trishna.
"Seriously yaar, we haven't experience this boyfriend thing." Trishna said dreamily.
"Yaa.. First i thought its bad to have boyfriend, but when i grew up, i was scared that my parents would find out if i had one. I don't wanna betray their trust on me" Yes, they both are from conservative families, so they clicked well.
"But its not bad to have bf. Especial when u are going to get a husband like that, with no love, no commitment in ur relation." trishna said thoughtfully.
"Now, i really feel that for once i should experience having bf, cause what i dreamt its not gonna happen, soo.."
"Soo ?" Trishna probes.
"Don't see more meaning into it ok. Am getting married in months time." Madhu put full stop to Trishna's thinking "BTW, i do smell something."
Madhu raise an eyebrow at Trishna.
"well, I'm seeing A guy, this time !" Trishna Confessed grinning like a fool, making madhu chuckle at her expression.
"Finally eh !"

~~~~~~

*After few Week*

*Hey.. Listen* madhu checked her phone in night after having dinner to see Trishna's whatsapp message
*Yaa..* Madhu settle herself on bed & typed back.
*I got a friend , He is basically the friend of the guy whom i'm seeing, and he have good job too, and he is not much aged, just 2 year senior to us. If u say Should i talk about u to him.* Madhu furrowed her eye brows reading Trishna's message. What the heck is she talking about.
*what the hell ? What are u talking about ?* madhu typed back anticipated.
*He is very good in behaviour and good-looking too. He lives in our area. Now say.*
Came another message from trishna.
Madhu read it repeatedly, wide eyes before typing about.
*What are u saying Trish.. Am not getting u*
*Arrey silly.. See its convenient. He is like what u want, educated, employed, young too from our generation. Whats say, should i talk ?*
*U planned it wholly naa* madhu laughed, trishna is really crazy.
*Am serious, and he too, he said he wants to be in serious relation.* trishna said.
*U are mad* madhu let the matter go, not taking Trishna's words seriously.

~~~~~~

*After few Days*

*Trish* madhu message Trishna in whatsapp.
*yaa..* came the reply.
*The groom's family is coming to see me in 7 months :(* madhu broke the info.
*oh god !! Now ?*
*My Hard Luck.. !* madhu typed back.
*listen, don't mind, But Ur Brother, Atharv is the Main problem.* Trishna typed.
*what ? From where does Atharv came in between.* madhu frowned profusely.
*Don't mind my words, but Ur bro is downright Pig ! He had created a hell lot of fiasco*
*what ! * Madhu said shocked. Arthav & Madhu are Siblings, Arthav is elder than madhu, but they don't share that good sibling bond. Madhu was always in missionary school, staying in hostel, while Arthav in home. Madhu came back home for graduation, but Her relation with Arthav didn't got well. They talk to each other formally.

*There is quite a list of his misdemeanors which I'll tell u some other time, but for now u know the Guy i told u about the other day, Arthav has Fought with him too.*
Trishna gave her new info.
*what ? Why ?* madhu quickly typed.
*The Guy's name is Rishab Kundra. He & Arthav had a Misunderstanding over Arthav's Girlfriend, and they had the guy fight, but everything is solved now*
*am not getting anything Trish, and did u talk to this Guy, Rishab about me ?* Madhu typed nervously. What the heck is happening, what Trishna got her into.
*yes, I told that u are Arthav's sister. He said to tell u everything & let u decide.*
Reading the reply Madhu became thoughtful.
*oh..* madhu typed.
*He is good yaar, else i will never tell u about him. Here is his FB Link. Check his account & pic in facebook.*
Trishna went offline after that, as madhu kept on thinking about Trishna's offer. She got tempted to Open Rishab Kundra's Profile. She quickly log on to her fb account & search Rishab kundra aka Rk & there, she got him. She stares at the pic of quite A handsome guy, who is standing leaning against a car, wearing plain button down black shirt, black denim & goggle. His hairs gelled up, his features really manly. What the hell, she cant believe that she is checking out a guy in fb. Oh god !! This trishna is too much.
But regardlessly she checked his details, the school & university he went to. Presently he is working in a MNC, and he is 3 years elder to her, with relationship status single.
But its not right. Even if she opt for casual dating or get to know each other, and that comes out in open then She could get herself in huge trouble, and Moreover he has some problem with Her Brother Arthav, what if its all a game plan, a revenge plan ??
That would mean to blow a hammer on her own feet.
The thought is enough for her to back off, and she did. She didnt talked to Trishna about Rk, and Trishna too never forced her.

~~~~~~

*Some Other Place*

A guy came out of his bathroom, after shower, wearing a towel around his waist. The water droplets hungrily kissed down his skin as he wipe himself dry. He went to his cupboard, drawing a pair of clothes, he gets into it. The full sleeves Stylish T-Shirt covered his torso, complementing his well defined body. Blowing his hairs dry, he occupy his red couch with his touch screen phone, checking out for mails & messages.

*Hey.. How's is ur job Going on ?* he got a message from his common friend, Trishna.
*Hey Trishna, all good.. What about u ?* He typed back, leaning back on his couch, checking other mail on additional tab.
*Am fine, when are going back to ur work place ? I have a Friend, whom u can like.*
Rk, Rishab kundra, furrowed his eyebrows getting the message from Trishna.
*am here for 5 more days & what're u talking about. I didnt get u ?* Rk typed back.
*Simple, u wants a Gf & she Bf, soo..am being the matchmaker* came the reply.
*Who is she.. Do i know her ?* Rk typed back.
*Madhubala Malik, no u don't know her.* trishna replied.
*hmm.. What she said ?* Rk typed.
*I haven't talked to her yet, but she is very nice & she is in for Serious relation * trishna warned.
*Am planning to settle in life too, Trishna. Can i have her pic ?*
*No, i cant give u her pic without her permission. i don't want to hurt her in any way.* trishna replied.
*Its ok, then talk to her first* Rk let it go.
*Do u know Arthav Malik ?* Trishna asked.
*Now i doubt about the Surname. Yes i know him. We had a fight on a matter* Rk said honestly.
*oh no.. Madhu is Arthav's sister* Came a shocked reply. Rk stares at his mobile screen as he recalls the Past.

He & Arthav were not that close, but they were in common friend circle. Arthav used to change girlfriends like handkerchief. It all started when Arthav got in Relation with a girl, Ria Mehra & she became his recent fancy, but Ria was courting Rk at that time. Though Rk maintained a decent distance from her, yet She Got Rk & Arthav in a misunderstanding Claiming that Rk wants her & he asked her out.
And that led to man-to-man fight between Rk & Arthav, cause Arthav had lost his mind, abusing Rk, Starting the fight first. Rk couldn't held back, and They soon became the enemies.
Rk knew Arthav has a sister, but that sister was in hostel. He never thought, Madhubala will come in the picture like this.

*U talk to her, and tell her everything happened, then let her decided. Dont forced her into anything.* Rk typed after a moment. Yes, dating an Enemy's sister is not less than letting urself in front of a hungry lion.
*Ok* Trishna said.
Rk turn off his data pack, thinking about what Trishna said. He closed his eyes, and leaned his head back against the couch.
He had been in a problematic relation a year ago. He was in love with a girl name Dipali Bhatia, very hot & sexy. He had been serious about her, but she was not. She was just using him. He had caught her red handed, cheating on him, after which they broke up but even after that every time when Dipali was in problem, she came to him & he, like a stupid fool, became all available to her.
Now he wants a serious relation, but Arthav. Rk can never forget what Arthav did to him, never.

~~~~~~

*On Madha's B'dy*

"Happy birthday sweetie" Trishna hugged madhu wishing her.
"Thanks trish" madhu said delighted.
"Lets go to get the yummy cake" Trishna said as they settle themselves on scooty. They are going to market to get the cake for madhu.

"He asked for ur pic, but i didnt gave him. If u say i will give him" Trishna said while Riding scooty, while madhu was Sitting behind her.
"No trish dont give him, what if he misuse it. What if its revenge plan or something, am Arthav's sis & not to forget He & Arthav has enmity." Madhu said alarmed.
"Relax, he is not like that. U can give it a try, and if u guys clicked, ur parents too wont have any problem with the relation in future & his parents are quite cool"
"Still no. If he promise no revenge, and keeping our relation discreet, i may think about it." madhu is still hesitant. She is really scared of possibilities.
"He is very nice guy madhu. He was in relation, which he broke up a year ago." And Trishna went on to tell him everything Rk told her.
"Hmm.. Now again if his ex-gf come back, he will again went back to her, given to his past experience." Madhu mused.
"No madhu, he wont, he has got over it. He is very honest, and thats why he revealed everything about himself" trishna still stand on her point.
"I need time to think" madhu said.
"And He asked me to wish u happy birthday on his behalf" Trishna smiled teasingly at madhu, as Madhu looks away smiling.

~~~~~~

*Few Days after*

*So ?* Trishna asked madhu, through message.
*Am scared* Madhu replied honestly.
*Dont be. Atleast talk to him. If u didnt give this a chance now then u're bound to get marry to that uncle* came an crisp reply.
*well..* Madhu typed taking a deep breath. She really is tempted to give this a chance but she is scared at same time cause it may mess her future.
*Ok, am giving him ur pic then.*
*yes, but tell him to keep his promise* Madhu typed back. She dont wanna leave any evidences. She is still edgy about it.
*Ok, i'll let u know what he said.*

~~~~~~

Beep-Beep

Rk, view his cell phone while going down for dinner with his parents. He checked whatsapp, to find some of Trishna's message along with a pic of a beautiful girl, which attract his eyes.
"Rishu.. " Radha, his mom called him, and soon he slide back his phone in his track's pocket & went to carry on the dinner.

After dinner, Rk returned to his room, closing the door, he hit his bed, and quickly open whatsapp, he once again look for madhu's pic. The girl is the pic is very cute & simply beautiful. She is not gorgeous like his ex-Gf but She definitely have something in her face, her eyes, which can drew lots of male's attention towards her.

*keep ur words, dont misuse her pic. Am trusting u* He reads Trishna's message.
*Dont worry, i wont !* Rk, waited for a minute for the reply which soon came.
*U liked her ?* Trishna questioned.
*Yes* Rk typed quickly.
*U better Talk to her by urself. Here is her fb user id, Madhu.Malik.8* Trishna finally opened a way for Rk to talk to Madhu.
*Hmm.. Thanks* Rk thanked, Its better to talk to Madhu directly & talking through Trishna wasnt much helping either.
He quickly log on to his account, and typed Madhu's address, which is given by Trishna. There, her profile got opened, it contains all her info, except her pic. Hmm.. She is really conscious.
Rk, clicked on Add Friend option, and Friendship request send, it showed.

~~~~~~

"Hello.." Madhu received the call leaning against the window pane.
"Hey i gave him ur fb id" Trishna informed.
"Ok, so what he said ?" Madhu asked nervously.
"Same thing, that everything depends on u. Now u two talk directly with each other, am out of this now" Trishna said coyly, coughing, teasing madhu.
"TRISHNA.. Am scared yaar.. What if some problem raise"
"Stop getting scare like a Rat, Madhu.. Ur choice, ur decision, no one will force u.." Trishna sighed.
"I think i was better off without guys in life" madhu frowned.
"Am off !" Trishna said "But remember am always with u"
"I know.." madhu smiled.
"Chal bye, take care"
They bids each other bye & hung on the call.
Anticipated, madhu log in to her fb account feeling anxious, she dont know what is she waiting for or what, but she kept on scrolling down the news feed, check message, etc. Then after an hour, she log out, feeling sleepy & calling it a day, she snuggle onto her comfortable bed.

~~~~~~

"Madhu, i have prepared the curry & veggies, u Make the Rotis before dinner, ok" padmini said to Madhu as she switch on the tv.
"Yes maa, am making" Madhu replied moving towards the kitchen. She prepared dough, and switch on the Roti maker. She took her cell, checking her whatsapp & Fb, when she spot a new friend request. Her heart started beating fast, as she check on who is it, and its the person whom she was expecting, Rk ! She pressed on Accept button, and keeping her phone aside she quickly started making Rotis.

"Maa.. I have made rotis, and am going to my room." Madhu came out of the kitchen after few minutes.
"Mhmm.." Padmini hummed engrossed in tv. Madhu run to her room & closed the door, she settle herself on bed, and opens her account. There is a message, from Rk.

*Hey.. * it says. Madhu thinks for a moment before answering.
*hii..* she typed back, biting her lips in anxiousness. A part of her says its not right, but her rebel half says to go with it.
*Trishna gave me ur id* came the reply after a minutes, as he came online.

Rk was unpacking his bag, taking out his clothes, as he moved back to his apartment an hour ago. He is a software engineer in An MNC company in Indore, and he got his own apartment to live in Indore, Though he visits his Home & parents, once in every month.
While unpacking, he check on his fb account to find a customary message from madhu, and he replied with the first thing that came in his mind.

*yaa, i know. She told me* he read the message from madhu.
*oh.. Umm.. Belated happy birthday* Rk typed back, as he kept his trolley bag away after fetching out all cloths.
*Thanks* came the monosyllabic reply.
*I am going for shower, will be back soon* Rk typed.
*Okie* came a quick reply, and then he went offline. He feels tedious after the journey & he needs a shower.

Madhu was waiting for him to come back. She cant go on like this, she need to clear few thing, its feels so awkward talking with him, a stranger whom she dont even know. This Trishna naa, Madhu shouldnt have fell for Trishna's words.
*Am back* madhu look back at her phone hearing a beep.

*yaa.. Ugh.. U had ur dinner ?* Rk, wear tracks & Tshirt, then taking the phone he headed towards kitchen.
*nah.. Gonna make it now.* he typed back as he pour the contents to make simple khicidi, so that he can eat & sleep quickly.
*U're making it ?* came a surprising question by madhu.
*ofcourse, no one is here to make it & maid will come in the morning* Rk clarified. Madhu was reading the message again & again, and then she got it that he might have left his home, Trishna told back that he was going back to his work place in 5 days.

*U mean, u're in ur work place* Rk reads the new message by madhu.
*yes, Indore. Am software engineer here*
*Nice.. Trishna told me* madhu typed, thinking how to approach him directly.
*hmm..* Rk just hummed, serving himself a plate of Food, he move to the drawing room & start feeding himself.
*So, what have u thought ?* Rk typed the words coming to the point, making it easy for madhu to open up.

*Can i tell u everything honestly ?* madhu asked hesitantly.
*I'll appreciate it* Rk replied.
*See, I dont have any problem with u, Nor do i care about the issue u & Arthav had, cause Whatever happened it between u two.*
*Fair point* Rk replied.
*Its just that Am not a Girlfriend material. Am afraid that I wont be able to handle, Relationship tag, Calling timely, chatting day & night, meetings.. Etc..I cant do that* Madhu expressed herself.

*See, am working guy, i dont have whole 24/7 to chat, and about meeting i return back home once in a month, so basically we'll be having long distant relationship* Rk explained her.
*I understands.. And..What i can offer U is friendship, in start, nothing more than that* Madhu prompts.
*Am ok with it* He replied. Its better to take things slow.
*If we clicked, then we can work on it* he added.

*And one more thing..* Rk got another message from her, as he finished his food.
*I request for discreetness, And in future if we dont gel up, we']] end it in good notes, so it doesnt affect mine, ur & Trishna's relation.*
*Am cool with it* Rk typed, and got up with his plate. He washed it & few other utensils, then headed back to his room.
*Anything else ?* he asked before closing the topic.
*No..* came the reply.
*Good night.. Then * He typed.

*Night !!* madhu typed back, and soon she saw him went offline. Keeping the phone she sighed. Thats unbelievable that she talked to Rk, She thought he wont agree to her conditions but he didnt seems to force her in anything. Well, she just wish to go on with the flow, and rest, what the fate had decided upon, it will happen.

~~~~~~

*After Few Days*

*Hey.. Madhu..* Madhu was checking news feeds, when a message popped up. Its from Rk, she excitedly opens it & start typing, replying to it.
*Rk.. Hii.. U are back ?*
*yes, just now i returned back. Today was really a hetric day at work* Rk replied while peeling off his shirt, tie, coat.
*oh.. Busy on ur new project ?*
*yes, the same one, but what're u doing online this late ?* he asked, drawing out fresh pair of cloths from his wardrobe. Yes, its already past 10:30, and as far as he knew Madhu sleeps off by 10:30.
*err.. I was.. Waiting for u..* came a hesitant reply after a minute.
*I guess u have to wait for 5 more minutes, I'll just have shower & get back to u.* Rk replied with a smile.
*Sure, am here* madhu typed back shyly. It showed the message has been seen but Rk didnt replied back. Madhu started to drive away her silly thoughts, as He said he is in shower soo. Oh god madhu, no, what the heck u are thinking. Stop it !! She gently hit her palm on her forehead, she has completely lost it, how can she imagine him in shower, when she has not even seen him in real. Thats really crazy.

*Am back* Rk returned back from shower while wiping his hairs dry.
*And now u're going to cook something for urself ?* Madhu asked.
*Nahh.. We had dinner meeting, so had my dinner from there.* Rk replied, finally hitting his bed.
*Hows ur day ?* he asked back.
*I applied for Master degree* madhu replied excitedly.
*Thats good, u should have a master degree. When the classes are going to start ?*
*Soon, after they verify the originals* madhu replied. Rk thought for a moment, and then typed a number.
*Here is my Number, in case u want for not being awake for me this late ;)*

He just gave her his number, and he just teased her too.

*i was just.. Nothing.. !! Good night* madhu typed back flushed.
*Night !! Sweet dreamz* Rk replied back quickly. He is tired too, and he need sleep too. They log out from their accounts, while Rk made a quick call to his parents asking about their wellbeing.
He slept off, Thinking about Madhu. She had been a great friend throughout, he likes talking with her, sharing his things with her. Since a few days, he started flirting with her too conversationally, first she didnt reacted but now slowly she is reacting.

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*After a month*

*Sorry Madhu.. I couldn't replied back earlier. I was with my friends in club* Rk typed in his whatsapp, and press send button quickly, waiting for Madhu to reply back.
On other hand, Madhu frowned seeing his message. He didnt replied her back for a day, even after seeing numerous messages of her, and now all he has to say is that he was with his friends.
*Madhu, come online baby.. Am waiting* he typed again.
Madhu read his message, and opened her whats app.
*Thank god, u decided to show up* Rk typed, seeing her online.
*Who disappeared for a day.. U or me ?*
Rk looks at Madhu's angry reply.
*Thats why i told u to call me* Rk reasoned.
*I cant.. I feel awkward.* madhu typed back.
*We had a day out today as it was Ayesha's b'dy, and then we went to night club* Rk explained.
*yeah.. Its ok..* madhu replies. She dont feels like fetching a silly matter, and Ayesha, she has heard a lot about her from Rk, and needless to say, She feels jealous of this Ayesha, though she cant explain why.

*Can i call u now madhu ?* Rk typed back after a moment. They had talked on cell for 1-2 times, as Madhu was always surrounded by her parents, she finds it difficult to attend his calls & she had mentioned it to him in start itself that she cant be available to him all day/night. But, It really feels amazing talking to her, and the way she understands him, supports him, hear him out, suggest him, it attracted him more to her. Though she denied having any formal relationship with him. She said she is not a girlfriend material, yes she is not ! She is wife material.
Rk couldnt help but to think about Madhu & Dipali together. They are pole apart from each other. Madhu never enforce herself on him, she gives him space, even when she is angry with him, she dont pester him, she simply fetch a line between themselves, and all he has to do is to say a sincere sorry & she get back to herself. They find peace in each other company without meeting & talking 24*7. She understands his priority.

With Dipali everything was different, she was around him most of the time, their closeness was always there, he had to respond to her beck & calls every damn time else she would get upset with him, and then he had to get some gifts to get her back to normal.

*Yes.. After a minute* Rk's thought broke as Madhu's reply came. A smile crossed his lips, having her consent. He eagerly dials her no. And waited for her to receive it, standing outside the night club.

Her cell buzz as she looks at it with thumping heart. Hell !! She said yes, but what will she talk to him. Nervously she received the call.
"Hello"
"Madhu.." He whispered from other side.
"Rk.. Hii" madhu said softly fidgeting with her finger.
"Am extremely sorry for not replying to ur messages, am feeling terribly bad." Rk confessed.
"Its ok, no problem" madhu prompts.
"We were busy in arrangements whole day then the party, so.."
"Its alright Rk.." Madhu dismiss his apology.
"U're very sweet, Madhu" madhu blushed hearing his compliment.
"Thats cheesy.."
"Cheesy ?? Not at all. It would have been cheesy if i would have said, Madhu ur every words are like honey to my ears" Rk flirted with her.
"Like really ? U're copy pasting this line on me ?"
"Ugh.. Cant u ever respond delightfully to my flirting words ?" Rk laughed.
"Delightfully in the sense ?" Madhu asked perplexed. She is straightforward, she dont know how to play coyly.
"Leave it, u are better off as u are !" Rk said honestly. Yes, he likes her as she is, no pretension, no show off.
"U are still in club ?" Madhu asked suddenly hearing the faint music.
"Yes, outside. Did u had ur dinner ?"
"Its 11, do u expect me to stay hungry till this late ?" Madhu counter back.
"Of course not, i was asking conversationally" rk answered, after which they both gone silent, waiting for the other one to say something.

"I have a news" Rk said after few minutes.
"What is it ?" Madhu asked.
"Am coming back next week." Rk informed.
"Really.. Thats great !"
"What are u doing next weekend ?" He asked.
"Nothing.." Madhu replied knowing what he is going to ask.
"Can we meet ?" He asked taking a deep breath. Yes, he wanted to meet her in person for a long time but she never agreed to meet him.
"Madhu.. U there ?" Rk asked, as he didnt get any response from her.
"Rk.. I.."
"Its ok, if u dont want to meet. I just asked causally" Rk cuts her off.
"No..i.."
"Means u wants to meet me ?" He interrupts her again.
"No, i mean.."
"U dont wants to met me then ?" He intervene.
"Will u tell me speak ?" Madhu spoke a lil annoyed.
"Ya.. Ok.. What were u saying ?" Rk ask back.
"I didnt said anything, its u who was saying." Madhu sighed.
"U got a temper girl" madhu can sense his grin.
"I mean, i'll talk to Trishna, if she can accompany me, we'll meet u." Madhu spoke gently this time.
"Really ? I'll talk to Trishna, u dont have to worry" Rk answered promptly.
"No, i'll talk to her.."
"As u wish.." Rk let it go.
"Ok, then.. Bye. " madhu decides to hang on as she has nothing to talk more.
"Ok, good night & am sorry once again." He apologise again.
"U are forgiven.. Good night" she smiled brightly, hanging up. This is so new to her, yet everything seems so pleasant.

~~~~~~

"U did a good thing by agreeing to meet him." Trishna said as They sat in a caffe coffee day, which is Far away from their residing area.
"He is no more stranger, so" Madhu adjust her bracelet.
"when will he come ?"
"He said he'll here anytime soon" madhu looks towards the entrance waiting for Rk to show up. For the first time they are going to meet in person, she is nervous. They talked fairly good, but meeting !!
"He's here" Trishna waved her hands at someone. Madhu look alarmed, as a guy enter the cafe, wearing off his shades, revealing his gorgeous eyes. He is wearing formal over coat, black shirt & denim, his hairs gelled up. The pic which madhu has seen, didnt justify his male beauty.
"Hey.." Rk approach them. He shook his hand with Trishna, Keeping his eyes on Madhu. She is wearing a Baggy cotton top, denim, with her curly hairs flowing open, her eyes kohl, her lips appearing sweet. She is exactly like what he has seen in pic.
"Hii madhu" he greets her formally, as he sits between madhu & Trishna.
"Hii.." Madhu forced a smile. She is really nervous.
"Have u ordered something ?" Rk asked on one in particular.
"No, we were waiting for u." Trishna replied.
"Sorry, the traffic took my time. Just a sec.. " Rk calls for waiter.
"Yes sir.. Ur order"
"I'll have a cold coffee" Trishna said.
"A black coffee for me and madhu..?" He looks at madhu, cause she hasnt said a word.
"Cream coffee" madhu steal a glance at Rk, then looks at the waiter.
"Anything else ma'am ?" Waiter asked.
"No.." Madhu shook her head & the waiter walk away to get the order.
"So, how is everything ?" Rk started the convo looking at madhu.
"Good, and what about u ?" Madhu looks at Rk, trying to answer calmly.
"Good" he replied. He find it difficult to talk to madhu in presence of trishna. They sat in silence stealing glance at each other, while Trishna kept on feeding them with useless information. Soon their coffee arrived, and they drank it in silence.
"Have u ever tried black coffee ?" Rk asked madhu shifting his chair close to her, seeing Trishna busy with someone in phone.
"No.." Madhu shook her head in negative.
"Sir here.." Waiter came with the bill in the meantime. Madhu took her clutch to pay, but before that, Rk paid for it.
"But.."
"Leave it.." Rk insist. Madhu didnt argue further but she didnt seem pleased.
"Umm.. Can we leave now ? Its already 7" Trishna asked.
"Yaa.." Madhu prompts much to Rk's disappointment. They didnt even talked properly. But regardlessly he walked out of the caffe, following Madhu & Trishna. They walked silently to the isolated side of the road, where Trishna had parked her scooty.
"Why u parked ur vehicle here, its not safe." Rk commented.
"Privacy reason." Trishna shrugged waking forward to get her scooty, madhu was about to follow her when Rk stopped her.
"Madhu.." He stepped in front of her. Madhu looks at him, so did trishna.
"U guyz can talk till then i will get my scooty ready" giving a teasing smile she move to other side to get her scooty, while Rk cornered madhu.
"Rk.."
"Is there any problem ?" He asked, seeing her not talking usually.
"No.. There isnt !"
"U seems quite" rk commented.
"Woh .. I.. "
"Its ok, i understands" Rk cuts her off.
"Can i call u tonight ?" Rk asked.
"Yes, but just drop a message before" madhu said.
"Sure, and u looks beautiful" rk complimented.
"Thanks" madhu looks away.
"Madhu.."
"Yeah.. ?"
"Can i hug u ?" He asked bluntly. Yes, he really wants to feel her in his arms, right from the moment he saw her in person. Madhu looks at him stunned, she dont want to hurt him by denying, but she never thought about the physical closeness. But he isnt asking for anything big, its just a simple hug. Madhu nods her head, looking away shyly. Rk brightly smiled at her, and in one quick step, he embrace her in his arms, keeping his hands on her slim curvy waist. She had a great figure, the thought crossed his mind, as he inhale her scent, with her chest pressing against his. Madhu stiffened feeling his manly hand around her waist, his Cologne stir her nostril, and she has to admit, it feels pleasant to be with him.
*cough*
Trishna cough bringing them back to earth, they parted away from each other, while Madhu's cheeks got redden.
"Will see u around" rk said to Madhu. Madhu nods, and quickly settle herself on Trishna's scooty.
"Bye.." She waves her hand at Rk, as Trishna drives off. He kept standing there, watching Madhu's retreating back.

~~~~~~

*After Some Months*

"Why are u not replying to my messages ?" Rk asked her furiously as soon as she received his call.
"Rk, i cant talk to u now." Madhu whispered silently. She asked him not to call her without asking her permission, but still he kept calling her, leaving no option for her, other than to attend his call.
"I demand an answer madhu" Rk inhaled a sharp breath.
"Please understand. I cant talk now. I'll come online after 10, then i'll explain." Madhu pleaded.
"Fine.. I'll wait for u" saying so Rk cuts the call. Its been a week, madhu was not replying properly to him, over to that for 2 days neither she came online, nor did she called. On asking Trishna, she said Madhu didn't contact her either, so he was left with no other option, than to call her.

~~~~~~

*What is it ? And u didnt inform me or Trishna anything too ?* Rk typed on whatsapp.
*am sorry, i was upset* madhu replied.
*why ?*
*how'll i explain it to u ?* madhu asked hesitant.
*Just say madhu, i promise i'll try to understand u.* Rk promised.
*There is this guy in our batch. I thought he was just being friendly, but..*
*But what ? Say it clearly* Rk quickly typed, frowning.
*He proposed me* madhu typed after a minute.
*What the f**k !!* Rk couldnt help but to swear. How dare anyone to ask his girl out, when he himself have not Proposed her, yet.
*I know, i said him the same* madhu prompts.
*what ?? U swear at him ?* Rk asked shocked, he never thought Madhu could use such swear words.
*yeah.. Is there any problem ?* madhu asked perplexed.
*nothing.. Then..?* Rk urged.
*He was being persistent, so i was upset* madhu said.
Arent they are together, dating each other, ok, they are not in official relation, but still Isnt madhu is his girl ??
*what did u said to him ?* Rk asked, with his heart beating at fastest speed.
*That am not available, & not interested*
*good* Rk felt content *I'll look after him, just tell me his name.*
Madhu stares at her mobile screen wide eyed. Has he lost it ?? Literally he is saying that he is going to pick up a fight. Oh god !! Men !!
*hey, its okk.. Am sure he'll understand & i am maintain distance so he will get over it soon* madhu said.
*Can i call u now ?* Rk asked suddenly.
*rk..*
*plz madhu, i' wont take much of ur time* he insist.
*ok, i'll call u in a minute* madhu said.
*am waiting* he typed back.
Madhu locked her room' door, then dialed Rk's no.

"Madhu.." Rk received it on first call.
"Rk.."
"Dont ever block me out Madhu" He said over the phone, his voice commanding as well as pleading.
"Am sorry Rk.." Madhu realised her mistake, she should have told him, instead of blocking him.
"Promise me that u'll share everything with me."
"I promise" madhu said solemnly.

~~~~~~

*After a period*

Days passed, Months Passed, when everything seems so pleasant to madhu. Rk is really like a dream guy for her, exactly like what she had think of, but still she denied to name their relation. She was taking it as causal dating, but now no more she can be casual, cause she has growing feeling for him. They chat, they talk, they meet sometimes, and Rk always hugs her, holds her hands, scoot her close to him. Though she was not ok with it initially, but now Seems like her senses too crave for his touch.

*Splash*

Her daze broke, when a girl sprinkle water on her face, standing next to madhu. Madhu took a deep breath stepping back, closing the tap. She has came out on a date with Rk, in a classy restaurant, and she had excused herself to clean her dress as she mistakenly pour juice over it. Madhu took the tissue paper, and Clean the stains, thankgod its not that dark. Throwing the tissue she walked out of the washroom when someone held her wrist. She was going to shout when she saw who it is.
"Shhh.." Rk shushed her keeping his finger on her lips. She looks at him bewildered. Rk looks at her beautiful kohl orbs shining bright, then his eyes dropped to her lips, which appears so soft beneath his finger. He wonder how would it feel in between his lips. The thought is enough to turn him on, he has been thinking about her since months now, but he never got his chance with her.
"Rk, what are u doing here ? Outside ladies washroom" madhu whispered.
"Come with me.." Rk tighten his hold on her wrist & drags her to the nearby corridor, entering men's restroom, which appeared to be empty right now.
"Rk, why are we here ?" Madhu asked holding his hand, as he closed the door. He turns back to her & without a words, he surrounds his arms around her petite waist, drawing her close to himself, caressing her pinkish cheeks, which his eyes lingered on her delicious lips.
"Rk, what're u doing ?" Madhu ask him nervously with her heart hammering against her rib cage. She can feel his proximity, and sneaking together in men's rest room, gave her all together a different feel.
"Can i kiss u ?" Madhu's eyes widened, registering his words. He is asking her permission to get intimate with her, her body shouted yes, while at back side of her brain, a voice insist her to say no. This way they are going to go far away in a relationship, after which turning back would be difficult.
"Please just a kiss. Say yes.." Rk urged her, while running his fingers sensually behind her ears, her cheeks, down her neckline.
"Just one kiss" he whispered again, eyeing her lips. Madhu held his intense gaze, and give into the need of her body. She kept her hand on his chest, closing her eyes, permitting him to do what he ask for.
For Rk, it just meant a fraction of second, he just wanted her permission, and as soon as he got it, he pressed his lips against hers, smouldering her lips, he started sucking on her sweet lips, just like a bee sucking nectar off the flower. Madhu cant explain how she feel in that moment, she felt hot, her body crave with desire, as her hormone become active. She is having the feel of lips for the first time, she is experiencing kissing for first time, and it seems mind blogging. She cling on to him, clutching his jacket as he continue his expertise on her.
It wasnt a sweet kiss, it was demanding as he took her lips between his, nibbling on it, asking her to give entrance.
Madhu who doesnt know the courtesy of kissing, break apart with shortening of breath, but it was not enough for Rk. He pushed her gently to near by wall, pining her both hands against the wall on either side of her head, he claim her mouth again, this time, entering in her hot zones, playing with his tongue, making her lose all her sense, he devour her to his heart content.
"Rk.. !" She breath heavily as he pulled away from her lips, she is too weak to stand on her knees. Rk snake his arms around her waist letting her cling onto him.
"U are amazing" Rk whispered in her ears, looking at her lips which is of natural shade of red with no lipstick, and he again wish to take those inviting lips in his, but not now. He would scare her off, he if did so, cause he had already claim her lips for many times in past few minutes.

~~~~~~

Madhu lie on her bed, on her back, staring at the ceiling hugging a pillow, recalling her kissing adventure with Rk, blushing like anything. The feeling she had with him is something which she can explain. Its been A Week, and their kiss is still fresh in her mind. With him she forgets everything.

*Beep-Beep*

Madhu checks her cell, she saw a message from Rk in whatsapp.
*Am missing u terribly.*
Rk has Went back to Idore few days back.
*I miss u too.. Hows ur project going on ?* she types back.
*All good. What are u doing ?* he instantly came online.
*nothing.. Just sleeping* Madhu typed. She waited for few minutes but no reply came.
*Rk ??*

*u are playing with my mind badly* Rk typed back. Really, various images of her filled his mind & none of them are decent one.
*Rk..*
*I soo wants to kiss u senseless now* she reads the message, wide eyes.
*On ur sweet lips* came another message. God, he is getting naughty.
*Stop it Rk..* She flushed, after which her phone started buzzing. Its him.

"Rk ?" Madhu pick up the call making sure no one is there.
"Didnt u like the kiss ?" Rk questions her from other side.
"Rk, how shameless are u ?" Madhu asked flabbergasted.
"We are adults, for god's sake" she can hear him groan from other end.

"Say something" rk said hearing her not saying anything.
"What ?" Madhu asked, as her cheeks got hotter.
"Did u like kissing me ?" He asked, to which madhu blushing staying mum.
"Am waiting" he said impatiently.
"Yes" then he heard a slyly reply.
"How i wish to be there to hug u tight." He said over the phone, imagining her.

~~~~~~

*After a month*

"Happy birthday Rk"
Madhu wished happily over the phone.
"Madhu.." Rk said instead of saying Thank you.
"Yes Rk.."
"I wanted to say something from few a days" he took a deep breath.
"What is it?" She asked confused.
"I love you !" He said it.
"What ?" Madhu shouted not able to believe her ears.
"I said i love u" Rk repeats. Yes, he has fallen for her, he likes her very much.
"But.."
"I know, and No pressure on u" Rk cuts her off "we decided that if we dont click we'll end things on good terms, and if we clicked it should be serious. So, am serious about u. I want u to know it."
Madhu fell silent, hearing him. She knows what he meant & what he is saying, but there is a problem, a bigger one.
"There is thing which u need to know.." Rk heard madhu's soft tensed voice after a moment.
"What ?"

~~~~~~

He pressed her soft frame beneath his body, as he claimed her lips, invading her mouth, his one hand pinning her hand against the bed, while his other hand running up & down her torso, feeling her fuller curves. She opens her mouth giving him more access, responding to his wild kisses.
"Rk.." She moaned feeling his hand, creeping inside her top, running upwards, cupping her breast over her undie.
With her moan, he use more pressure of his hand on her curve, pressing her flesh, playing with her mound over the fabric, as he suck on her neck line, discovering her body all over again. Madhu withered under him with the pleasure he is offering her.

They are in official relation for months now, and contrast to what she thought, she has willingly gave in to his every wish. She sneaks out with him to hotels, she attended his calls more often, They spend time hugging & kissing each other, and after he proposed her, they had went more ahead in their relation as Rk finds excuses to get her alone & do erotic things with her. He becomes desperate with her.

"Strip madhu.." He said as he tore his lips away from her lips, leaning up a bit he unbutton his shirt, and wished she could quickly strip herself. Madhu keeps looks at him breathing unevenly, his chiseled chest inviting her eyes on feast on it, as he discard his shirt. Soon, she felt his hand on her body as he pulled out her thin top out of her head, and pull down the straps of her bra off her shoulder, revealing her secrets to him. Every damn time she is with him, he just wants her all for himself. He just cant keep his hands to himself, he can never get enough of her. One sight of her bare skin invoke fire in him.

Madhu clutched the bed sheet, feeling his warm breath on her sensitive mound & soon his warm breath got replaced with his warm moist mouth, with his tongue playing with flesh & his hands squeezing the other one.
She moans heavily, as he increases his speed of tortured pleasure on her body. Warmth spread in her whole body, as his lips continues exchange between her lips & her curves, meanwhile his hand moved down her torso, to her stomach, down her belly, to her thighs, caressing her inner thighs moving up to her womanhood, and that was enough to bring her back to reality.
"Rk Stop..!" She breath hard, holding his hand which was on her thighs. Rk stopped taking ragged breath, looking at Madhu, as she shifts a bit looking at him nervously.
"Am sorry, i got carried away." He spoke after a moment, pulling himself up, he shifts away from her, but still remain close to her.
"I just wants to touch u, i promise i wont cross the line." He held her eyes. He only knows how he is controlling himself to keep his promise.
"I trust u.." Madhu stretched her arms to him, and he willingly got back in her arms, cuddling her.

~~~~~~

*Dont take stress madhu..* Rk types on his lappy, talking to madhu through fb.
*They are coming to see me* madhu replied. Yes, she told him about her marriage alliance when he proposed her, and he said He dont want her as his Gf, he wants her as his wife. At that point they officially started their relation, and to Madhu's luck, the Groom's family couldnt turn up on the fixed date to see Madhu, but now they are coming to approve her & fix dates.
*I have already talked to Mom-Dad, they will make it look like arrange marriage. Ur aunty will soon come in ur home with our alliance* Rk assured.
*But they're coming to see me* madhu repeats the same thing. She is really scared.
*They'll just see u, ok. Dates wont get fixed this soon. It just matter of 3-4 days. Have patience madhu, we need make our marriage seem arrange, so i just cant come with my family to ask for ur hand*
*I don't know why, but am scared* yes, its her intution.
*Dont be* Rk typed back.
*Ok, Good night, I'll talk to u tomorrow*
*Night !! have Rk filled dreamz* Rk added teasingly, after which madhu went off line.

Rk was scrolling down his news feed, when he Spot a pic and his eyes harden. The Pic is upload by one of his common friend, and his hatred enemy Arthav was there in the pic with a girl beside him. Its a party pic. Rk stares at his laptop screen, as his mind filled with the thoughts of Arthav.
He definitely wants to settle the score between them, and there is no best Time, as of now. He knows how to get even with him, but what he failed to understand at that time is, his hatred is gonna cost someone's dear life !!

"Love is Tender,
Love is Soft..
One blow of betrayal,
Can make it shatter !!
And the Love is Lost !!"


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guyz..

pms will be up soon..

And if u have problem while loading this page.. plz .. drop a comment or pm me..

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Congrats on this new story aan..
Amazing start..
madhu have a great believe on rk..
& I think he too love her..
But plz don't make rk avenge madhu Bcoz of that stupid arthav..
& I really don't want a heart breaking ending to this beautiful story..
Waiting for the next part..
Update soon..
Hope nothing bad happen..
I don't think he is that much bad for playing with a girl's feeling by reading his character..
I demand a happy ending from my buddy.. Hope you don't make me cry..

& now...

A very very happy birthday to you deepti...
May god bless you & fill your life with joy dear..
Keep smiling & shining dear..






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nice but hate rk gor avenging rk he is cheating a innocent girl wat madhu fault she is diffulty to trust him n he is just playing with her feelings hope madhu soon gt to know his real face n leave him its better she marry of her parents choice
i always want on madhubala serail after rk cheats madhu should leave him he is egoistic n selfish but hm but madhu easliy foragve him hope here rk gt punished for his deeds nice update soon
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The story is superb!
Loved how RM relationship progressed!
Is RK going to revenge Madhu's bro using her? Hope NO!
What is going to happen with the alliance that her parents are seeing?
A lot of questions arrises!
It's so damn interesting!

I also got the negative vibes towards the last.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Superb start dear
Loved it
Rk and madhu are in relation
Last part gave me goosebumps
I hope rk doesnt do any mistake and make madhu miserable
Update soon

P.s. happy bday dear
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Hope madhu should know his true colour soon. And Don't do something foolish. Between rk and atharv's enimity poor madhu is going to suffer. Please update next part soon.
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Originally posted by: cutical

nice but hate rk gor avenging rk he is cheating a innocent girl
HE DONT HAVE INTENSION TO CHEAT HER..

wat madhu fault she is diffulty to trust him
YES.. RIGHT .

n he is just playing with her feelings hope madhu soon gt to know his real face
YEP.. IN NEXT UPDATE..

n leave him its better she marry of her parents choice[
THAT WOULD BR PAINFUL ALSO..

BR]i always want on madhubala serail after rk cheats madhu should leave him he is egoistic n selfish but hm but madhu easliy foragve him
YES.. AND THEY NAME IT AS LOVE..

hope here rk gt punished for his deeds nice update soon

HEHEHW.. LETS SEE..
THANKS FOR READING DEAR :)

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