RiShbala Ts 'ChecKmate' ||Completed#PG.24|| (25/09)

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Superb dear. .
RK nd madhu r in relation ...hmm interesting
Thxc 4r pm

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

firstly...happy happy Birthday Deepthi...have a great and wonderful year ahead sweety..

oke comign back to this TS...waise when are you gng to Update the story that you have dedicated to me huh...u forgot abt that ..

lol oke let me come back to this...Checkmate !!! nice title...

so RK is the player here along with Atharv???(love the name Atharv) ...

Madhu is the innocnet and naive soul out of all teh characters, Trishna seems to be genuine friend who who is wishing for her best friends well being in all the matters..

Madhus parents orthodox thinking is not acceptable...she is a girl with dreams and look what their ignorance towards her decisions, made her to fall for a guy who is giving respect to her, making her as his priority and considerign her words ( as per her opinion ...) ..so her inclination towards him has over powered her some morals in life coz, after all we are victims of destiny ..

Anyways...their long distance relationship which has grown into smthng beautiful, but Rishabh is gonna destroy that ???? was he thinking abt Atharv when he is gettign close to Madhu???

the story is definelty gonna take a new turn when Madhu thinks that Rishabh used her to take revenge ...But i guess Its not the truth ...RIshabh seems a guy with some morals...

ayways, will leave it to you and thank u so much for being there sweety.

My Evil baby...keep being this awesome and stay blessed..

* love it when u claim me as "your Ashu di " 🤗*

love,

Ashu

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Aaniya beautifully penned down, loved it.

Poor Madhu feeling bad for her if RK is doing all his for revenge but more than Madhu it will be him who will pay the price coz he is in love with Madhu.

Madhu marriage is getting fixed and listening to Trishna she decides on casual dating with RK but the matter has turned into a serious one.

Waiting to know what is RK's plan, continue soon.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

i really liked the starting..

how slowly they went ahead in their relation..

taking one step at a time..

Madhu is so sweet.. always shying..

and after reading the end.im shocked.

I just hope rk is not with madhu just for revenge..

poor madhu will be so damn broken.. she is so series about their relationship

they both are planning on getting married..

is rk gonna leave Madhu on Thier wedding day????? nooo

continue soon

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Omg Ani you just mak me it feel like erotica story. I loved it. L loved how you narrated the whole story and it was a long story. Best and the bestest. Superb

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Wishing a very happy birthday to Deepti.

Nice n long update.Is Rk going to avenge Madhu because of a silly fight with her brother.He seems a nice boy ,is this all fake.Poor Madhu.

Update soon.

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Awesome story dear.Congrats for the new story dear🥳.This story was amazing and i loved it so much dear.Madhu's parents want madhu to marry a uncle type man.Madhu and rk's relationship was so superb dear.Rk and madhu loves each other verymuch and their scenes are awesome dear...I am excited to know what will happen next?.

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-LoveAnnie-

@-LoveAnnie-

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

first of all wishing u a very happy belated birthday deepti RM14. 🥳

now coming to the TS...😛

i have no words yaar . honestly i don't😕 .. at first while reading the story ...

i thought that RK will be that Groom uncle Madhu doesn't wants to marry,😆😆

but you shocked me and completely rocked it.⭐️ !and what a turning point you wrote at the end giving the hint about upcoming track.😲👏 And out of all of these the best part was the quote at the end. it was like a lesson at the end of the story * a moral type* 👍🏼,

i was surprised to know that you wrote it in a hurry😲. lol... i can't still believe it that someone could be this much talented that she wrote such a deep quote in a hurry. 🤔

Hats Off !! you nailed it Aaniya..👏

now please please please and pretty please don't make us wait a lot to give the update of it.😭😭 It's really hard for us readers to stay without a Rishbala Doze of yours ;)😉 especially ME.. i have not fully recovered ! remember that😳.. and i might need a doze again ;) hahaha😆😛😃

As i have a surprise waiting for you 😉. So i wanna sincerely apologize for not giving a lengthy comment this time. but will surely give one on next update. 😳😳

Take Care. 😛

Saranghae :* ;)❤️

Love,

Annie

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susan7

@susan7

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Superb update..

Continue soon..

Thanx for d pm dear

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Thanks for pm. Nice update. Everything was going smoothly n sweetly until the last point of the update. I was shocked as after getting so dreamy update the last point smell of conpiracy. Like everything was fake n means to cheat only. I m sorry for late comment as i was shocked by rk's expressions. I just crossed my fingers that whatever u quote in the poem was just a quote n does not have anything with heart of madhu. Waiting for next.

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