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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Rach awesome update loved it

THANKS DEAR
Madhu knows now that she is not in heaven and she is alive.
What mystery RK has, he has super natural powers or he is undercover cop.
HE IS A WEREWOLF
Rishbala are falling for each other.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_

Finally read all 3 parts all together and it's superb!

Interesting starting and liked how the story is moving.
THANKS
Poor Madhu thinking to be in heaven.
YEP
Couldn't laugh loud as I was at work, read it during break.
She is sooo innocent!
RK blushed! Ohhh!
Can't wait to see how the story is going to move.
I WILL UPDATE SOON
How Malik is going to react, how Madhu will react to RK's real identity...
WAIT FOR FEW EPISODES

Thanks for the PMs!
Waiting for the next part eagerly!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...

awesome..well written

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou


Abhay is still luking for madhu.
YEAH
Madhu realised she is on earth itself lol. And she got embarrassed knwing rk changed her clothes. Rk is a vet doc.
HE IS SOMETHING MORE
Hmm but why dsnt he wish to have a normal life? Why afraid of love? What is his secret past? Is it related to wolf or smthing?
YEP
Thanks for the pm. Do update soon
I WILL UPDATE SOON

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prasimpy

amazing

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madhu thought she died😆 very funny

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks friends for reading and commenting .I am really sorry for late update.
About the story..you might know about werewolf concept.the pack is lead by an alpha and Luna is his better half .beta his first man in command and gama second in command.
A werewolf is a creature in which both a human and a wolf resides .they can communicate with each other like two different individual.
So that's all about werewolfs.please read and quote your views.


My Mysterious Saviour

Part4


rks POV
I went back to my room .her red cheeks brought a smile on my face.she is really beautiful.i heard him jumping with joy.finally we find out her.she is back for us .he wanted to claim her.but I can't ..I can't make the same risk .but I heard him whimpering
"She is ours ..then y can't?"he asked me
"Don't you remember what happened last time,I can't take the same risk.i want her to live a beautiful Normal human life."I said
He remained silent .I know he is disappointed with me.he is a real animal he want to claim her and live with her ,which makes us perfect.
I heard a foot step ,from the scent ,I know it's Trish.
"Bhai.is she your mate?is she back?"Trish asked
"No"I said turning my back to her.
She touched my shoulder.
"Bhai ..I Know you very much.y you helped a random girl and y Ashton growled ?"Trish
I turned to face her.it took my whole effort to act normal.my sister know me better than anyone else and after all the damn royalbblood is always Perfect.
"It's just your assumption trish.i felt pity for that human .that's all... don't assume anything . it's not going to happen"I said
"But Bhai...the pack... without a Luna?"Trish said
"Trish..I managed it without a Luna from past few years and it will go for few more years"I said
"But Bhai...you need a life"Trish
"Go trishna.."I shouted.she pouted and said
"Yes..alpha.i am sorry to bother you"Trish said and left my room
I saw her eyes is welled up.i felt sorry,its the first time.i am shouting at my sister.she was the one who supported me at my lose and helped us to.get over our sorrows.ashton was in a verge to die and me too.losing Someone so precious ,I was brooding in my thoughts and trishna Helped me to take over my duties . She is the best sister anyone ever had,but what I have done,I just shouted at her.i sighed,I have to apologise her.i went to her room.she was lying on her bed and weeping.i touched her shoulder.she swatted my hand.and she growled
"Trish"I called
"Go away"she said
"Trish I am sorry"I said
"No..I am sorry alpha rishab.who am I to question you?"Trish
"It's not like that Trish,you are my baby sister "I said
"Oh.. really"Trish
"I apologized na.. don't forget an alpha is apologizing..please"I said
She stared at me and Smiled mischeviously.
"On one condition"Trish
"What?"I asked.i Know it's going to be something difficult.
"Actually two conditions"Trish
"Okay"I said.i have no other way than to yield her
"First Condition is I want strawberry ice cream"she said
"Okay"I said.its a simple thing.i have an idea what she is going to Ask.
She looked at me and again smiled.here is the bomb going to blast
"Next I need an answer for my question,a genuine answer"she said
"No.."I growled.i expected it.
"Okay ..then no compromise"she said
I have no other way than admit the truth.i could feel Ashton Ashtons happiness.i looked at her for the question
"Is she your mate?"she asked
"Yes"I sighed
"I Know that."she jumped in joy"at last we got our Luna"
"Trish..no..she won't be your luna"I said
"But y Bhai?"Trish asked
"Don't you remember anything?"I asked
"I remember everything and that was just someone else's mistake.y you blame it on your self."Trish
"Trish ..if I were a little careful.."I said
"Stop it Bhai..go and claim her.ashton will be very happy"Trish said
"No Trish..I don't want to fall in any relationship"I said
"It's different this time bhai..she is your mate.mate bind will be there"Trish said
"No Trish.. please..she is a mere human and I am a werewolf.how could she accept me.she will be scared of me when she realize what I am"I said
"No Bhai..I think she is attracted with you."Trish
"Trish she is attracted to Rishab ,a human,not a werewolf alpha rishab or a wolf Ashton."I said
"Then give her chance to know you as a human and when she unconditionally fall for you ,reveal the truth"Trish said
"What do you mean, to betray her"I Asked
"No I asked to give her time"Trish said
I shake my head in disapproval.i turned to leave.
"Bhai.."Trish called
"I will tell beta sahil to bring ice cream"I said before leaving her room.

Abhays POV

I opened the door and hugged my brother .he hugged back And caressed my back
"Calm down Abhay"he said
"Bhai..I am really tensed..Madhu.. don't know what happened to her"I said
"It's okay ..abhay.dont worry we will find her our asap"he said
He sat down on the couch and looked at me .
"Sikkys theory is right ..I think so.. someone helped her .I assume it will be some tribe people.we will go there and talk with Thier head"Aryan said
I sighed and nodded my head.i am even ready to be with anyone to get my Madhu back safe and sound.we went to the tribe house.journey through the woods was really difficult and strainful.i gasped for air when we climbed the steep rock.
"How could some manage to take her to such a place" I asked
"What if they were in a group and crossed the river for something"sikky said
I nodded and walked with them .we finally reached the tribe house.it was hours we started walking and I felt fully exhausted.i sat down in a log and watched Bhai talking with the tribal head.i looked around and saw some little children looking at me from Thier huts and they were giggling.i gestured them to come near me,but they didn't,they are scared about me,whowwon't I am a monster who abated a girl .finally Bhai came back with the tribal head.the head bowed his head in honor.i Smiled at him.he gestured me to a hut .we placed our things in the hut and he went outside again bowing.i was really eager to k ow the development.
"What's it bhai?"I Asked
He was thinking something and scratching his chin.its the sign that he is really worried .I touched his shoulder and he looked at me startled
"What?"he asked
"Don't you hear me?"I asked
"Abhay..I..I am sorry..they didn't have any clue about her"he said
"Then..what the hell are you saying?she just into vanished into thin air leaving bo clues"I shouted
"Calm down Abhay..the head said a possibility but..but..I can't.."Aryan said
"What is it Bhai?"I asked
"Just some superstitious shit"Aryan
"What do you mean?"I asked
"He said that..the other side of the river is ruled by wolves and that's y they don't dare to cross the river , because it's a sin for then to touch the wolves land,"he said
"What do you mean.we are staying there and we are the land owners"I said
"No..Abhay they are talking about the deep forest"Aryan
"So?"I asked
"They assume the wolf taken her"Aryan
"No..not possible.we didn't find any blood or anything like that"I said
"No ..he said taken alive"Aryan
"Alive? hah...do you think she just followed the wolf like a good child following it's parents"I asked
"No..she might not followed.the head says that wolf taken her"Aryn
"How?"I asked
"A werewolf abhay"Aryan
I couldn't control my laughter.
"A werewolf..Bhai you are living in a 21 St century"I said
"Abhay..we know a little about this world "Abhay
"Bhai I can't do anything with you.you became a dumb ass"I said.
"Then tell me something to prove her disappearenc"Aryan
"What about some hunters,it's possible right?"I asked
"May be..but how could someone tresspass our territory Without our gaurds knowledge?"Aryan
"What if they are just lying?"I asked
"Abhay they won't..they are our best trust worthy men.."Aryan
"Okay...now what's your next plan..to search for a myth creature?"Abhay
"First we have to talk with papa..and then we decide it.npe let's take some food and take rest.we will go.back in the morning"he said .
I laid down on the rag after the food. The only thing in my mind was her Beautiful face.madhu ...where are you?
I sighed and the darkness came over me.i wake up from my sleep hearing a snarl .I looked around and found Aryan and sikky in deep sleep.i got up and Opened the door of the hut.i looked into the darkness.i saw nothing and turned to the hut,then I heard a snarl from my right .I turned and looked at the gaint wolf I had ever seen.i felt a lump in my throat .I wanted to run back but my legs are behaving like they had Thier own mind and they wanted to stay there freezed.the wolves eyes were glowing and it's teeth reflected the moonlight.i felt my palmed are sweating.the wolf again snarled at me..soon I heard the sound of something breaking . the wolf changed into a man,but his eyes were glowing yellow and he had sharp canines in his mouth.he looked at me like a predator.i felt my mouth dried and my tongue stick to the palate.
"Don't go behind her.she doesn't belongs to you .she belongs to someone else.go back to the damn place where you come from"he said in a inhuman voice .the creature changed back into a wolf and ran to the forest.i felt Someone shaking me .I Opened my eyes and saw Aryan looking at me worried
"What happened Abhay ..why are you sleeping outside the hut.i have been trying to wake you up from last few minutes,"he said
I rubbed my eyes and looked at the faces around me.was that just a dream or a real one ?I don't remember what happened after the encounter with that creature.it was just a dream?
I got up from the soil and mumbled"a wolf"
The tribal head heard it and he started making horrible noises.the whole tribe started making the same noise.what the hell.the head stopped the noise and then the people became silent.he came near me and sniffed around .then he nodded his head and again started making the same sound.we looked at them confused.every tribal people knelt down besides us and mumbled something.
"What's it?"I asked
"They want us to leave.they are scared of werewolves.they are saying a werewolf came here last night.it never happened in his life time.the girl is meant for someone else.so he want us to go back and stay away from everything"he explained
So that was not a dream.what.these people believes are true.but I couldn't believe it even though I had seen it with my own eyes

Madhus POV

I was thinking about the past events ,then Trish came with an extremely handsome man.they smiled at me
"How are you now..Luna..?"he asked
"I am sorry ..my name is madhubala and I am fine"I said.
"Oops...sorry.i forget .madhubala..okay"he smiled
Oh..god every handsome man you created resides in same house.i thought
",Btw I am Jay ..Jay khurana..Trish's mate..I mean boyfriend"he said
"Oh..Trish told me about you"I said
"What she said?I am a hottest handsome man?"Jay
I heard a growl and turned back to see rishab staring at Jay
"Sorry Ashton..just a friendly talk"he said
"Ashton?"I asked
"Hmm.. yeah..he use to call him Ashton"Trish said
"Oh.."I said
"Okay..take rest"Jay said
I heard someone knocking at the door and I saw another greek god face
Don't you think ..I am right about the thing..God created handsome men to reside in same house.he went inside and Smiled at me
"Luna...how are you?"he asked
"I am sorry..I think someone erred you by saying my name as luna.i am madhubala."I said
Hellooked at me bewildered for few minutes and then he looked at rishab.
They started at each other as if they are linking through mind"oh . okay I am sorry.. anyways welcome to our moonlight pack"he said
"Pack?"I asked
"Yeah..it's some sort of club..you know"Trish said
"It's sounds like a werewolf thing"I laughed
Everyone looked at me startled
"Chill guys I was just kidding.i read some stories ..these words like Luna and pack comes in such stories"I said
They all looked at each other and Smiled.
"Oh yeah ..we too are werewolf fans.so we made this group and named it a pack"Trish said
"So who is the alpha here? " I asked
"Well..alpha rishab and his wolf ashton.beta is sahil and .."trish
Before she could tell "his wolf?"I asked
"Brad"Trish
"And where is gama?"I asked
Trish gestured to Jay "and his wolf is Bryan"she said
"And you?"I asked Trish
"I am gama female my wolf is blessy"she said
"Uhh...great..then please may I join your club ..I mean pack?"I asked
"Of course ..you will be our Luna"sahil said
"Luna?"I asked and then realization hit me .
"Yeah...girl friend to our alpha"sahil said
I looked at rk ,who was smiling at me.i felt myself blushing scarlet red.



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Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
First
Wow chechi..
Amazing update...
Loved it..
I always like to read supernatural stories..
This is really an awesome story..
Ashton is really naughty.. He want to claim her..
Rishab..waiting for what... Chaim her... Like Ashton me too waiting for that..
But about what risk he is saying about...??
Eagerly waiting for the next part..
Update soon pls..
Really can't wait to read..

Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Ka..
Superb update..
Asthon is waiting to claim her..
But What things RK's fear about?
Abhay is trying to find .Madhu..
RK warns Abhay..At first he didn't believe about werewolf..
Will he go back ?
Madhu is blushing,while trishna said she is luna..
Waiting ka..
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
Loved the last part
Where madhu was blushing

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