Rishbala SS Mysterious Saviour part6 page26(dt13/10)

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Hi friends.here is a new story . please read and quote your views

Mysterious Saviour

Prologue


Madhus POV
I am looking into the wardrobe searching for a nice dress..guess what ..I am doing it from last one hour.can you imagine ..how could a girl be a girl so dumb to select a dress from past one hour.yoh may think that I am a dumb girl..but I am not .as my mamas words I am different and that makes me special.i am going for a party today..yes you are right..it's my first time .don't think that my place is really an uncivilized one to have parties.i am living in a city where you can find many billionaires including my father.i am not a party person i.hate it and often I avoid such things while my parents usually go for it.
I keep on myself and often locked my self in the studies.yes I am like a book worm and most of my classmates call me so.but I am not a nerd.my glasses and simple dressings gave me the look.i am pleased with what I am and not intend to change myself.
And now about the party .it's my best friend dips birthday .she persuaded me for this party.i denied her but she is a bit stubborn.i reluctantly agreed to her because we love each other .we have another friend too.her name is ria.but dips and ria are not like me .they are always partying and enjoying Thier College days.everyone wonder how come I be Thier friend.i don't Know why they stick to me while all other girls prefer someone smart and enthusiastic.
I looked through the dresses and pick out a sleeveless top and a skinny jeans.i took a shower and put a light make up.i prefer the small heart shaped pendant and a small eardrops.thats it ..I am done.i put on my glasses and looked at my image in the mirror.dips and ria tried to change my glasses into contact lenses but I can't as it irritates my eyes
I went to the downstairs where Mama was watching some daily soap and papa was reading paper.papa saw me and asked me where I am going.i said him about the party and they looked at me awestruck.
"What?"I asked them
Nothing just chill out"papa said
I waited for ria s car.i know how to drive a car,but ria wanted to take her car so that I can drop her after the Party,she is sure to take drinks and drunken drive is dangerous.i saw her car at the road .she waved me and said"Madhu hop in"
I climbed inside and Smiled at her.i looked at her .she looked really ravishing.her red lips and the smoky eyes gave her a gorgeous look.i am not envying because I loved the way she look.
We reached dips house and dips hugged us .she led us to the cozy room .so many guests present there .I saw the boys devouring rias beauty.she waved at them and walked to them.dips led me to the couch and we sat down.we chat for few minutes and then Sultan arrived.well..sultan is her boyfriend.dips ran to him and hugged him .he presented him with a beautiful bouquet and kissed on her cheeks.dips went with Sultan and joined with others.she gesture to join them.but I am not interested in their gossips I am comfortable sitting there.ria came back with a Coke and offered me .I took it from her.her face lightened up by a beautiful smile when she saw mukund.
Mukund said"hey Madhu pleasant surprise.you and Party?no way"m
"Just for dips"I smiled
"Okay carry on"mukund said and they left to the dance floor.
I felt alone.my friends have boyfriends and have Thier own life .I am happy for them.but I am sick and tired of parties because I already said I am not enjoying it.boys are always away from me they think I am a nerd.its obvious who ever choose a girl like me.deep inside me I am longing for love.a love that can be only awaken by man.i like to be kissed .I want to Know the warmth of love.but no one ever chose me and I didn't feel the crush to any one yet.i sipped the coke looking at the glistening tear drop shaped lights.they are of different colors.
An unknown man POV

I looked at the beautiful girl sitting on the couch.defenitely shr looks like a nerd but she is a real beauty in such simple dressings.i saw her friends talking with her and they left her alone .she is sipping the coke and now she is looking at the lights.she Removed her glasses and I saw the different colors glistening in her orbs.its the colors of the lights in the party.its really mesmerizing me .but I have to control myself .I am here for a dangerous work and I have to execute it away.i took out my phone and looked through the photos and confirmed its the same girl madhubala malik.i saw her stood up from the couch and heading outside to the garden.may befor some fresh air.i followed her.

Madhus POV
I get bored by sitting there and watching them.i decided to get some fresh air.i walked to the garden outside . All of the guests were inside dancing chatting or eating .I wanted to get out of the loud music there .when fresh air hit me I felt relaxed.i saw a man coming towards me
"Hi"he said
"Hello"I said
"Well...why are you here.do you not enjoying it"he asked
"No.. actually I don't like the loud music"I said
"Oh..same to me"he said
I smiled
"Dipali bhatias friend?"he asked
"Yeah..we are classmates"I said
"Oh...I am ther father's colleague"he said
"Oh..but this party is for her friends only"I said
"I crashed the party" he said
"But y?"I asked
"To meet someone"he said
"Oh...'i said
I Know he is a typical man.i have this experience so many times.now he will ask about either dips or ria to me.i am not interested in this play .I thought
"Hey..what are you thinking"he asked
"If you want to Know anything about dips or ria.i had only one answer they already had boyfriend and they are not intended to break up with them"I snapped at him
"Oh..easy madhubala.."he said
"How do you know my name"I asked him
"I came to meet you"he said
"Me?why?"I asked
He dipped his hand in the pocket and took out a rag.i looked at him wide eyed.
"For my business"he said
Before I could react he pressed the rag on my face and I blacked out


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maithu_ thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo for the newt story!
Interesting!
Is the man RK or someone related to RK?
First time Madhu came to a part and got kidnapped.
Her fate!
Lovely prologue!
Thanks for the PM!
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Congrats on this new story chechi..
OK kidnapped madhu..??
Do you wanna know something.. Me too planned a story were rk kidnap madhu...
Really interesting start..
Pls update soon..
Thanks for the pm..
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wow different concept lovely start waiting for next
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Congrates for new story ka..
Nice start..
Madhu was kidnapped..
Who is that culprit?
Is he RK?
Waiting for known about that..
Update soon ka..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Madhhu is kidnapped from her first party.
Interesting start.
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Fabulous what a start. Keeping going dear
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Madhu is daughter of a billionaire. She is a bookworm n keeps out from parties but now kidnapped from a best friends party. Who kidnapped her? Thanks a lot for the pm. Update soon.
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Superb start di
Is that unknown man rk
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Rach congrats on the New Story.
Awesome start, loved it.
Madhu loves to be simple whereas her friends are ultra modern.
RK is here to kidnap Madhu but who has sent him, any business rival of Malik.
Waiting to read more of the story.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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