RishBala SS : Crazy About You (Completed - 12/07 - P:41) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Is rk and dipali is pretending to be married?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: dharsii

Nice update...
I thought,madhy has little doubt on him..
He is planning something..
Dips and RK are staying in separate room..
Why?Did Rk and Dips love?
Waiting for known about that..
Thanks for pm..

Thank you!
He is even planning something big!
For your questions dear!
The answers are not with me! I mean in future parts.
Will update tomorrow.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update loved it

Are RK and Dips married or is it their plan coz RK loves Madhu.
Curious to know what happens next.
Maithu thanks for the PM dear.

Thanks buddy!
How can you be sure that RK loves Madhu?
Did I miss something?
It's my pleasure that you like my story.
See you tomorrow with a new part!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

lovely update wat is rk upto

Thank you!
He is up to a lot of things dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

hmm.. so there is something in rk's lil heart for madhu..
good that dip & rk are living separately..
clear way for madhu..
nice updatw..
tnx fr pm !!

You mean to say there is something in his great mind?
Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you like it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice upsate maithu..

so they are living in separate rooms..
hm..ao something is there..
waitint to know what happend next..
pls update next part soon..
thanks for the pm..

Thanks yaar!
Something is for sure fishy.
Will try to reveal it soon.
Next part tomorrow.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb update

Rk and dips leaves in seperate room
Y is there marriage was forced

Thanks dear!
You will come to know in upcoming parts buddy.
It can even take few more parts.
see you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: harini_

Awesome update,
Rk is happy knowing Madhu is staying with them for 2 days,
something is off with Dipali's behaviour,
Rk-Dipali are living separately,if they don't like each other then why they got married or is it a fake marriage,
continue soon,
thanks for the update

Thanks dear!
Why will not be happy with GM mind always active.
Most of the story will go around RM, Deepali is a side character playing an important role in this.
Update on its way for tomorrow.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhumi1492

Is rk and dipali is pretending to be married?

Can't answer your question here dear, Sorry!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Hello everyone!

I'm back with the next part!
Link to previous part: Part 3
Just a small warning:
From here on there would be touch-touch scenes and kisses. I can't warn always. So here it goes.
Read at your own risk and don't blame me. LOL
Happy reading!

*******

Part 4

With that question of Madhu's, Deepali avoided eye contact.
"No! I'm not sleeping in a separate room."

*** I saw you Sistah. Why are you lying to me? ***

Madhu leaving her work, turns to her sister's side and holds her by her shoulder
"I can see that you are hiding something from me. I know you are stubborn as much as I'm.
From your face I can tell that you are happy but something is missing between you and Jiju."
"Nothing like that. Rishab is the best man anyone can be with. He loves and cares for everyone."
"What about you Sistah? You must be special? The vibes between you two is nothing like man & woman. I saw you entering the room next to his last night when I came behind you to give your phone."
"I went there just to take my night dress."
"I waited 30 minutes outside the room but you didn't show up. Even if it's for your dress, why is it in a separate room?"
"It was just"
"Tell me when you want. I will always there for you. By the way, did you charged you phone this morning, it went off around the same time." cutting her sister in between.
"Hmmm" she nodded showing her phone.

*** She is one stubborn woman. And yeah, like me. ***

Madhu started to cut vegetables while Deepali started to cook.
"Morning ladies! Can I get my morning coffee please?" Asked Rishab to no one in particular as he took a place in the kitchen stool from where he can see the whole place.
"Morning" said Deepali.
"I will say pre-afternoon!" smiling to herself.
"My coffee?" he reminded.
"Madhu can you please make it. I will continue cooking."
"Okay!"

Madhu turned to her left, opened the door of the kitchen cabinet which is above the oven to take the coffee powder box.

- Oh my sexy lady! -

Once she done with it, she sets it back.
And the coffee was served in front of Rishab within minutes.
"Saree suits you!" he complimented.
"Thanks Ji Thank you!" and she went back to cutting her precious vegetables until they were disturbed by a call for Deepali.

"I got to take this call. You just cut the vegetables, I will be back." saying so, she turned off the gaz and made her way out.
"Who is it Sistah?"
"Annie. I told you yesterday I'm going for her marriage next week. May be it's for shopping." and she is already out of Madhu's view.

- Nice timing. -

Madhu was humming a song and doing her work until...

He snakes his left hand over her bare waist through the saree while he blocks her way of escaping by placing his other hand on the kitchen slab.

*** Who the hell is this? ***

With the sudden contact on her waist and the hot breath fanning on her left shoulder, she jerked in her place and tries to free herself when she got shocked seeing the person stuck to her back.
The only word that escaped her mouth is "Jiju!" all the while struggling to free herself.

*** Did he take me as Sistah?
No! He saw her go. ***

"You look sexy in this." he said sucking her cheeks when she is shaking her whole body to get out of his hold.
"Leave me!"
"If that was the case I wouldn't been doing this." with his lips over her visible shoulder.

- You taste good Doll. -

"What are you doing? Leave me!" stamping on his foot.
"I'm doing what I wanted to do since you came."

- Wanted to do more than this but this is more than enough for now. -

"Ahaaa" he yelped leaving Madhu free and holding his right hand with his left as blood is coming from the cut she gave him.
"Don't come near me!" showing the knife, she went away from him.
"If I come."
"I will kill you."
"You won't!"
"I will tell my sister!"

"I want you!" he announced.
"You can't do that!" she yelled with anger visible through her red eyes, holding a knife in her hand.
"I can do more than that Doll!" he informed her.
"Pervert!"
He smirked and left from there and she collapsed on the floor.

- Take time to sink this event. Will be back Baby Doll. -

Few minutes after she gathered herself and went to the bathroom inside her room and closed it behind her.
Standing under the shower, she let her tears merge with water.

*** He can't do this.
He can't do this to my sister.
I can see love in Sistah's eyes even when she is not speaking about him or she is not around him.

I have to go from here. ***

TOK TOK. TOK TOK.

"Honey! Annie said she wanted me immediately. I asked Rishab, he said he is going to order pizza for you both. I will be back around 3. Then, we can go for shopping and once back we will cook dinner." Deepali said once the sound of shower stopped.
"And ahaan I cleaned kitchen. See you!" she added before leaving from there.

*** How long have I been here?

I need to go from here.
I need to go away from here.

It's wrong.
It's unethical.

I have to speak to her.
I have to. ***

She was still in the bathroom when someone entered her room and went inside her walk-in-closet.

Madhu came out of the bathroom with a towel around her and went near her bed, lifted the pillow revealing a diary.

She took it and opened it.

"I thought you were as good as everyone think about you.
I thought you were as best as I always thought about you.
I loved you more than anything, even more than myself until I came to know I can never be yours.
I dreamt a lot about myself with you until I got to know I don't have right to dream about you.

I lost the rights to even pronounce your name.
I lost my dreams.
I lost you." tears started to form in her eyes.

"I don't know if you remember the first time we met.

I accidentally bumped into someone and I lost the balance of my fish pot, I was scared to lose my golden fish, my only friend, my life.
You were the one who took it safely and gave it back to me.
I didn't see your face that day but I saw your bracelet with initials written on it. That day I learned that if a fish can hold this much importance in my life. How much important I must be to my parents with whom I fought to have a bike.
I immediately rushed home and made up for my behaviour with my parents.

Since that day I searched you, I didn't know why but I wanted to see you.

I met you again 2 months after in a success party of my father's friend's company.
There, I was about to fall when I stepped on a kid's toy when you held me from kissing the floor.
When I was about to move after I thanked you, our bracelets got attached. That's when I saw the same initials, I was doing somersault in my head like a crazy teenager.
Once you freed my hand, you turned away and went from there as someone said your mother was waiting for you." tears rolling down her cheeks.

"That day I lost my bracelet in that party. Along with that I also lost a most important factor of my life too.
I got to know who you were and what you were doing.
From that day, I started to read economical magazines and to watch channels corresponding to you domain just to follow you.
I became a crazy fan-lover of a young businessman I met twice in my life." she laughed a mocking laugh to herself.

"My parents had an attack seeing me interested in business while I was used to watch cartoons.
My sister was suspicious about my activities whenever we came face to face.
All the whole, I became a new Madhu without my knowledge." caressing the page.

"It feels like yesterday but now I regret why I met you.
I was happy with my life until you came back into my life." hugging the open diary close to her heart.

"If you wanted me when you were the person I knew I would have given myself to you.
But now, you are not someone I want to be with.
You are not someone with whom I can be with." she closed the diary and pushed away the rest of her tears.
She got up leaving the diary on the bed.

"I hate myself for loving you.
I hate you for making me hate you.
I hate you Rishab."

*******

Thanks for reading buddies!
Hope you got few of your answers.
Did you thought she would have a past like this?
LIKE & COMMENT if you are eager to know what's coming up!
Next part Part 5

- Maithili


Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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