Rishbala Ts-The Moment Of Truth**Completed**Last part (B)pg 11 dt 30/5 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends here is the B part..pls ignore mistakes..



Last part(B)


"Rishab...u cant make me ur queen.."she said..
"madhu.."he called suspiciously...
"ur life is in danger.."she said & he looks her confused..
"what r u saying..?"he asked...she said everything to him..for what she came & about balraj's plan to get his heart..except for who is she..she hided that she is the princess of that kingdom..hearing the truth he flinched back...
"so u were acting madhu.."his voice enunciate the pain inside him..
"yes..but.."before she could complete he took his sword from the scabbard & pointed at her..
"u tricked me..u played with my feelings..father said truth..all r liers..how could i believe a stranger like u..?"he said & tears rolled down his cheeks..
"rishab let me say..i love u..really i love..its not lie.."she said..
"i cant trust u anymore..u & ur master r threat for this kingdom..u both should die.."he said..
"then kill me if u dont believe me.."she said & tears starts flowing from her eyes..he tightened his grip on the tip of the sword & wield it at her..she closed her eyes let that sharp sword chop off her head..but he stops when it reached near her neck..she opened her eyes & saw him standing in front of her with quivering hands..the sword fall from his hand..he fell on his knee & cried.. "i am a fool to believe that u loved me..i starts dreaming a life..i thought i have someone for loving me but everything was just my illusion..."he said..she sits near him on the floor & touched on his right shoulder & said..
"do u think my love is ruse..??"she asked..he looks her with wet eyes..
"u know y i came here now..??to say the truth before my end.."she said & stood up..he also stands on his feet..
"i wanted to say u the truth before he kill me.."she said..
"madhu.."rishab..
"i am going to end today he will kill me.."she said..
"who..?"he asked confused..
"balraj chowdary..my heart is with him..i cant resist him..my life is under his control.."she said..
"but..y he want to kill u..?"he asked confused..
"he is afraid of u & ur powers..so he send me here to take ur heart but now he know that i love u..he wont spare me alive..this may be our last meeting..but i wont let anything happend to u.."she said & hugs him with tears..rishab hugged her back..
"madhu...will he leave u if he get my heart..?"he asked breaking the hug..
"what u mean..??"madhu asked him..
"take it madhu.."he said & she flinched back..
"no rishab..u want to live..i wont let that evil win.."she said..
"he will kill u.."he said..
"let him do what he can.."she said & at the very next moment an unknown force pulls her & she fell on the floor..
"madhu what happend..?"he tried to make her stand but he too was pulled by an unknown force..
"aahh..balraj is doing something..i am..i am burning.."she said..


In cave

balraj is chatting mantras & pouring ghee in the fire with madhu's beating heart nearby..
"what r u doing balraj..?"kuku asked..
"going to kill them.."he said..
"them..?"kuku..
"rishab & madhu.."baraj said without stopping his activity...
"but how..??"he asked..
"i am going to freeze her heart.."he said..
"but u said na she will not die untill he die.."kuku..
"he will die..he cant see her in pain..so he will die for sure..wait & see kuku.."he said & continued..

"madhu...try to stand.."he said & she tried to stand but again fell down..
"no rishab..i will not survive.."she said & balraj..
"balraj.."he roared..

"yes prince rishab kundra.."they hears balraj voice & looks around but finds no one..

"where r u..?leave her.."he said..

"ya..will surely leave her but u want kill urself for saving ur love.."he said..
"no..dont do it.."she said..

"then u will pay for it.."his voice again came & madhu's pain increased & red marks appeared on her body..

"balraj stop this..u want to see my death hah..i am ready.."he said..
"no rishab..u want to live..ur father need u..this kingdom need u..let me die..."she said..
"but i want u madhu..i cant see u in pain.."he took the sword from the floor..madhu tried to stop him but he raised it & stabbed himself on his heart's side..
"Rishab..."she screamed & he falls on the floor..she extended her hand & he holds her hand..
"what u had done rishab..for saving ur life only i came here..but u.."she said by crying..
"u r my life madhu..i done this for saving u.."rishab"balraj..now spare her.."he said..in return they heard a laughing sound..

"how can i leave her...she is a cheater..she is gonna pay for betraying me.."they hears balraj's voice..

"u cheat.."rishab said while wincing..

balraj poured ghee on the fire for the last time & then put madhu's heart into the fire & it flared..

"aahh.."madhu winced & took a long breath for the last time by looking him..her eyes r still opened but the soul leaves her body..
"will not leave u balraj.."he said & closed his eyes after gripping her hand tightly..mohan opened the door hearing a sound from there & saw rishab's & madhu's lifeless body...
"rishab.."he screamed & went near him & fell on his knees..
"rishu..y didn't u hear my words..the thing i scared happend for real..for preventing this i prohibited u from everything.."he said & caressed on his hairs..then his eyes fall on madhu & he fumes..
"becoz of u i lost my son.."he said & tried to burn her body in rage using his powers but it reflected & mohan jerked back..he looked her astonished.."a normal body cant repeal this power.."he thought & moved towards her..he kept right palm on her forehead & closed his eyes..he got the vision of all past incidents including who is madhu..
"balraj..."he gritted his teeth..
"harshavardhan.."he called aloud.. harshvardhan who was sleeping came there hearing mohan's roaring sound..he got shocked to see rishab's lifeless body there.."omg..how this happend..?majesty is gonna cut my head for my irresponsibility.."he thought & took small steps towards..
"ur...maj..majesty.."he stammered..
"bring my royal sword.."he said..
"what..??"he looks him bewildered..
"do what i said.."he said..harshavardhan left from there & came with mohan's royal sword & gave him..
"balraj is trying to capture prince rishab kundra's & princess madhubala malik's powers.."he said formally hiding his emotions..harshavardhan looks at the lady's corpse which is lying near rishab's..king is saying she is princess madhubala..disbelief filled in his eyes..anyways he want to hear king's words..its his duty..
"ur majest..but balraj..he loss all his powers na...while trying to kill u.."he asked confused..
"so he kidnapped madhu & killed my brother.."he said"& now he trying to get rishab's power too..if it happen then complete disaster will be the result.."he said..
"what will v do now..??"he asked...
"he want to die..."mohan said clenching his fist.."blood for blood..my son will kill him.."
"but...how its possible..??"he asks..
"its possible..they will come back..foe complete their incomplete story & for killing that evil..THEY WILL COME BACK.."mohan"death is only for body not for soul.."he said..

"what r u doing..?"kuku asks balraj seeing him put out the fire..
"i am going to get the power..they r no more.."he said & laughs..kuku too join him..suddenly kuku starts screaming in pain..
"what happend..?"balraj asked him..
"dont know..something is happening to me.."he again screamed & with in
seconds he turned into ashes shocking balraj..

"balraj..."he hears mohan's sound..
"u done a great sin balraj..u r gonna pay for this..i am cursing u..until my son come to kill u..u wont die..u will will change the most grotesque human in this world..my son will give u a death which is even worse than ur situation.."mohan says..

balraj looks around startled hearing his curse..soon wrinkles appears on his body..his hairs withered..burns & cuts appeared...he lost the vision of his right eyes..& his left hand got paralyzed...his right leg got a limp & he turned into a grotesque human..

"harshavardhan.."mohan..
"yes..ur majesty.."harshavardhan..mohan forwarded his royal sword to harshavardhan & said.."my son & madhu will come back..dont know when..but they will surely come back...using this sword he will kill that evil.."he said..
"u want to keep this this sword with u..u want guard this until they came.."mohan said & he bowed accepting his words..

years passed..after harshavardhan's death also his soul keeps that sword...& balraj lead a tortuous life & took oath to kill rishbala's reincarnation too at anycost..


Present

hearing the story sikky burst out into laughter..
"uncle i think by treating psychos u too become a psycho..who else believe this story..king..queen.. reincarnation.."he said & laughs again..
"yes..this is unbelievable..but yet i feel its true.."dr said..
"its the magic of rishab kundra..dont u know who is he..?something is disturbing him from past 6 months..& his mind may developed this story to for forgetting his worries & for add more to it a girl too madhubala..if anyone else hear this story surely they will think he loss his senses.."sikky said..
"do u think he is mad..?"dr.asked..
"i didn't meant that.."sikky said..
"anyways..u closely watch him today & if u seee any change in him then v can decide what want to do.."dr.said..

Evening


"rk..y r u so silent..."sikky asked him..

"nothing sikky..i feel like something is gonna happend.."rk said..

"leave it dude.."sikky said..

"sikky..madhu.."rk..
"shut up rk..who is she..just a stranger..& now ur mind starts to develop stories with her.."he said...
"what..what u said now..?"rk asked..
"its..its.."sikky starts stammering as he didn't said anything to him which dr. said to him..
"i meant..now u started to think about her na..its not good..u both may never meet again.."sikky said..rk looks him..
"u said right..i should stop thinking about her..she is just a stra..."he stops..sikky noticed tears in his eyes..
"should i tell him about that story to him..??no it make his condition even worse.."sikky thought & keeps mum patting on his back consoling him..


Night

rk was sleeping suddenly he got dreams about some incidents that happend on his past & madhu..then he saw a sword which is shining like a star..someone is calling him to there..he get off the bed without opening his eyes & starts walking..

He opened his eyes & found himself on a secluded area..
"where am i..??"he looks around & starts walking..he entered to a small forest & looks around..
"u r welcome prince rishab kundra.."he hears someone's voice & got startled..
"who is this..??"he asked by looking around..
"i am a soul guarding this royal sword.."the voice came & the next moment he saw the same sword which he saw in his dream..
"i didn't came here to steal this.."he said by thinking the soul is trying to harm for coming there..
"u owns this prince..this is urs..pls take this & kill that evil..u & princess can only do that.."he said..
"princess..?i didn't got u.."rk asked looking around..
"i am no one to say it..u will realize it by urself or may not..now take this & go on price.."he said..rk moved towards the sword..he took it from its place & suddenly he felt an energy entering into him..
"save ur girl..prince.."saying this the voice stopped..he looks around not knowing whats to do..he starts moving & went out of the forest..he wanders here & there & reached some unknown place..there he saw an old house & screaming of a girl from inside..
"leave me..what i did to u..y u r doing this to me.."he moved towards the house hearing a familiar voice..he sneaks inside & got shocked by seeing the sight before him..madhu tied in a chair she is totally drenched & he can sense the smell of kerosene..& and a man resembling an ugly monster chatting some mantras before the fire..
"mukund.."he called & mukund went near him..he helped him to stand..madhu looks him with fear filled eyes..
"y u r doing this to me...u killed my family brutally..took away my happiness..for bearing all this what i had done to u..?"she yelled.."mukund..i didn't expect this from u..u was my friend..my family treat u like their own son..yet u joins with him..who r u..y u r doing this to me..?"she asked in tears..rk watched all this shockingly..
"mukund..."he signaled him..mukund leaves him after making him stand by supporting on the hand of chair in which madhu is tied..
"i am balraj..balraj chowdary..ur greatest enemy.."he said...
"i dont know u.."she said..
"u know me..i know he & u came back to kill me..but dont think i will let u do that..he is nothing without u..so i am going to burn u alive today.."balraj's words made madhu gasp in shock as well as rk who is hiding behind a pillar..mukund came back with a firebrand in his right arm..madhu screamed out for help..balraj took it from mukund's hand & brought it near her but he was stopped when he feels a sharp objest pierced inside him..the firebrand fell off his hand..he turns to see who stabbed him & his eyes popped up seeing rk..
"You.."
Rk jerked back & again stabbed him..balraj fell on the ground & winced in pain..mukund witnessed this with shock..he untied madhu & stepped towards mukund which made him step back in fear till no space left for him to move back as he had already hits the wall..rk swished his hand which have sword & its sharpness chop off mukund's head in a glimpse..seeing that madhu's heart skips a beat..she is witnessing a thing like this for the first time in her life..she thought how mukund's head flyed in air like a football..they heard a slosh & saw balraj's body turned into ashes as soon as he dead..madhu went near him..he looks her..
"Y u came here to save me at this time..for what purpose risked ur life.."?she asked..he drops the sword down & held her shoulders with his arms..
"I didn't came here to save u.."
"Then...??"she asked confused..
"Some unknown force brought me here for something & i think its over.."he said..she didn't understand what he meant but didn't opened her mouth to ask a more question..its better to keep mum than getting confused more..
"Whats next..?"she looks him with blank eyes hearing his question..
"How u r going to live..??"his question made her eyes filled..her future life is the big question before her..she has no answer for him..without uttering a word he held her hand & starts to move..she keeps looking him..he hold on his steps for a while & looks her..they gazed at each other for a while..madhu's lips curved into a smile giving answers to thousands questions in his mind..seeing her smile he smiled at her & held her closer to him...she kept her head on his shoulder..he circled his hand around her waist..they together stepped into a new life where there is no horrible past,nightmares,violence...the only thing now exist in their life is love & peace..the sun brings a new dawn of hope for the lovers & they will be together for ever..



--- --- The End --- ---


So i think this is the craziest end ever i gave to a story..
I am thanking my all readers,friends,silent readers everyone for loving & supporting me & my stories..so this is the last update from my part..sorry i left some stories discontinued as i didn't get any further idea about it..so i am taking a break from my writing life for few months..if any new idea strike on my mind i will surely pen it & share it with you all..i will think for a romantic one next as my story lacks romance...so till then continuing here as a reader..once again thank you so much friends..love you all & miss you very badly..

-Aiswarya-


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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Wow!!! ⭐️This story is amazing..👍🏼 Thanks for pm😊
But it ended😔..

Rk and Madhu's past story...so wonderful..⭐️⭐️
Doctor too believed the story..😲...but Sikky didn't..
Mohan had given Balraj curse..
And Rishbala were reincarnated to kill Balraj..wow!!

And they did it...Rk killed him...👏
At last...Rk was saying he was confused...after that...did they automatically remembered everything?
Now, they would live happily..😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Thank a lot for this wonderful story.

I was drowned in it.
One of the best I have read.
Loved the ending where a simple smile made the 2 souls in 1.

Take rest!
Will be waiting to read more of your writings in future.
See you.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Superb update Aishu..
past was really nice ..
Rk stabbed himself for save her..
But there is no use..Balraj cheated him..
Mohan has given correct punishment for him..
Rk has killed balraj...for his sin..
Rishbala patchup..
Happy end..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Superb end dear loved it
Awesome end
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
How is your health baby?

It was really a nice concept 😊 and I thought Madhu will sacrifice her life for Rk but Rk sacrified his life for madhu!!
Expecting more stories from you..
Keep writting and rocking.. 😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Nice ending for a beautiful story
Balraj and kukku needed it
And at.last..

Madhu and rk is together
Nice work
Thanks for pm
Write more stories
Best of luck
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Beautiful ending
Madhu n rk r together n rk killed mukund n balraj
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
last part A..
beautiful update aishu. .
awesome. .unique aishu. .
so ..madhu is real princess. .
rk get power from moon. .
Balraj and kuku had madhu heart and threatening
her. .
I love this rk ..his is so innocent
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
last part B. .
beautiful. .totally unique. ..
your best work. ..aishu. .
going to miss this story. ..this innocent rk. .
rishbala past story. ..god I just want to cry in there dead scene. .beautifully written. .
mohan gave curse ..
rishbala reincarnation. .then rk kill balraj. .
beautiful story dear. .
thanks for pm

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