Rishbala Ts-The Moment Of Truth**Completed**Last part (B)pg 11 dt 30/5 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Awesome update dear😊Rk is a prince and madhu come to his chamber to seduce him and its interesting what will happen next?.

Thank you dear..will update soon..😊
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Hi friends..here is the last part but i today i am updating "A" part only..when i complete writing the update it became too long that may make you bored..so i split that part into 2..updating part A today & part B will be on tomorrow..i am not good at health & headache add more to it..so i couldn't concentrate in writing as screen light irritated my eyes

you may find uneasy to digest this part as its completely fictional..whatever my mind blabbered i just pen it..so here it goes..pls ignore mistakes..


The Moment Of Truth


Last part(A)


"BUT..BUT WHAT HAPPENED IF FATHER COME TO KNOW ABOUT THIS..??"for a moment he came back to reality..
"what r u thinking prince..?"she asked stepping forwards..
"who r u..?y u came here..u shouldn't do this..if father come to know about this..he will kill u..u know he have so many powers.."he said..she gave a sly smile to him...
"u r afraid of ur father..??"she asked sitting on the bed..
"yes..its normal v want to obey our father na..dont u afraid of ur father..??"he asked innocently..
"my father..??"she smirks"leave it..u r not a kid na..then y r u afraid..??u too have powers na.."she asked looking him..
"no..i dont have any powers..father will give me power only after my crowning ceremony..."he said..she looks him astonished.."dont he know about his powers..??he have 100 times more power than his father thats y balraj is afraid of him..so mohan hide his powers from him.."she thought...
"what r u thinking..?"he asked..she again came back to her senses..
"ha..nothing.."she said..
"b/w how u came here..??human's cant climb up here.."he said...
"but i can.."she said..
"how..?"he asked eagerly..
"i have the ability to fly..so i can go anywhere at anytime.."she said..
"fly..!!!"he jaw dropped hearing it.."she can fly..but humans cant na..then who is she..is she any supernatural..father said keep distance from strangers..so is she came here to harm me..??"many questions popped up in his mind..he came back to when he feels a soft lips on his cheek..he flinched back & looks the girl who kissed him..
"what u done..??dont u know i am the prince of this kingdom..this is wrong.."he said..
"how v ppl can know u r the prince..u didn't came outside yet na..dont u want to know how ur ppl r living..??u r not bothered about anything..u r enjoying ur luxurious life here.."she said which made him stoop his head..
"u r getting all ur happiness in ur life while ur ppl r suffering.."she said & looks away..
"happiness is forbidden for me..freedom is forbidden for me..everything is forbidden for me...what wrong i had done..born as king mohan kundras son...i am not living a life..i cant take any decision by my own..ppl atlest can live there life na..freely enjoying this nature's beauty..but i am imprisoned in this golden cage.."he said in a low pathetic voice..she looks him with pity.."y this evil balraj want to aim this innocent prince.."she thought but she have no right to take her own decisions..she want obey whatever had balraj said...
"do u want to go out..??"she asked..
"can u..?"he asked her amused..
"yes..i can.."she said..
"but..father.."he said with concern...
"dont worry..no one will come to know about this.."she said..
"come..hold my hands...i will show u a new world.."she said & extended her hand..he looks her hesitantly..
"dont worry..i said na.."she said..he moved towards her & holds her hand.."b/w u didn't told ur name yet na.."he said..
"madhubala.."she said & he smiled..they went near window..madhu spelled something & they raised in air..they went out of the castle...it was his first experience..he went outside..that to with a girl..he never thought of it..he didn't even thought that he can touch the ground but now he is flying..madhu heard his giggling sound..
"aahh.."suddenly he starts screaming..
"what happend price...?"she asked worriedly..
"dont know..but this moonlight..i cant bear this.."he said wincing..
"wait..v will land on ground.."she said & they landed on ground..
"what happend price.."madhu again asked..
"dont know..i feel sharp pain in my chest.."he said & pressed his chest..he beveled & falls on the ground..his whole started to gleam..madhu looked him astonished..she tried to touch him but his body pangs like fire..after sometimes he again came back to his normal stage..she gasped in relief while tears rolled down her eyes..
"r..u..ok..??"she asked with trembling voice..
"yes.."he nodded & sat down on the ground..
"v can go back.."he said..she nodded & they went back to castle..she started to move towards the window..
"r u going..??"he asked..
"yes.."she said..
"will u come tmr..?"rishab..
"do u want me to come..?"she asked with a smile..
"u r my only friend.so.."he said..
"thats it..?"madhu"only friend..?"
"my..my best friend.."its the max that he know..she smiled & jump ofd the window..

Cave

madhu stand in frond of balraj with stooped head..

"for what i send u there..& what u have done.."balraj roared at her..she remained silent..
"i want ur answer..say.."he said..
"that..he..he wasn't well..something happen to him suddenly..moonlight hurts him.."she said with fear..
"what moonlight..?u two went outside today..what u have done..??"balraj asked in dangerous tone..
"that..he..he wanted to go out..so.."she said by quailing..
"did i said u to take him outside..ur dudy is to do what all i say..not anything more than that.."he snapped at her.."he is gonna kill me.."she thought..
"y u r this much worried..any problem..??"kuku asked balraj..
"hm..he got his powers.."balraj..
"what but..mohan only can do this na..?"kuku asked confused..
"no..actually that mohan hide his powers from him using his powers..today is full moon day..two things only break that bond..one mohan..second moonlight in full moon day..u know his whole power is on his heart..he is 1000 times powerful than us so he couldn't endure that much power in a trice.."balraj said..
"so v r in problem now..??"kuku asked..
"yes but..v can use this too if v move cleverly.."baraj said with an evil smirk..
"what u mean..??"kuku..
"hm..if v get his heart...then v will get that powers na.."balraj..
"what r u saying..its not possible.."kuku said..
"its possible...but risky..u will do it for us madhu.."balraj said which made madhu boggle..
"go & bring him here yank out his heart.."kuku said..
"stop saying foolishness.."balraj"do u think u can pluck out his heart..before that he will do it..& girl only can do it..a girl whom he love most.."he said looking at madhu"now u only want want to do one thing..trap him in ur love game..& u know na what v want.."he said..
"but..he..but he will die na.."madhu..
"obviously...did u ever heard that a person live without his heart..??surely he will die.."balraj said cruelly..
"but..i am living..."she hesitantly asked..
"for that u dont have life na..ur like is in my hands...i can take it from u at any time..dont ask me anymore question..go & do what i said..u have 2 weeks before u.."balraj..
"sorry..i..i cant kill anyone.."she said quiveringly..
"how dare u..u will pay for this.."he said & took a fistful of ashes from a plate & threw it to madhu which burns her soft skin & she groned in pain..
"say..u will do it hah.."balraj asked by again throwing ashes at her..
"i will do..i will do..pls stop this.."she said & wept..he stopped his activity.."so u will go there tmr..hah then hear one thing..he should be virgin.."balraj's word's made kuku confused.."what he had said & what he is saying now..??"kuku thought & by his glance balraj understood what all stupid questions running through his mind.."i will answer u kuku..v r gonna take that powers directly from him..for that he should be a virgin or.."he looks mandhu & gestured her to go..
"or..what happen..?"kuku asked with eagerness..
"their bond will break.."he said..
"bond will break..for that they dont have any connection na.."kuku..
"no..they have connection..& if their bond break it will lead to our collapse..i will loss all my powers that i have now.."balraj..kuku gave him a questioning look..
"but.."before kuku opening his big mouth fully balraj said..
"yes..v didn't planned like this before..becoz that time he didn't have any powers..but he got his power now but yet he didn't realized it..& that madhubala na she is not my creation but i can control her.."balraj said which made kuku gulp unknowingly.."that..means..she have.."
"life.."balraj completed..
"she is princess madhubala.."balraj..
"what..u meant malik's daughter..?mohan's younger brother..but how it possible..i heard that she was killed by someone when she was just 6.."kuku asked confused..
"it was me...u know..rishab & madhu born with powers..malik & mohan bonded their powers together..if their both powers united then no one can resist them..so i kidnapped her when she was a kid & took her heart..& these all my powers r from her heart..its her powers.."he said..
"dont she know who is she..??"kuku..
"no..she dont know anything about her..the only thing she know is she is my slave.."balraj.m
"but if u took her heart from her then y didn't she die..?"kuku..
"i didn't killed her kuku...do u think i am a fool..they r bonded together if there is no madhu means no rishab they both want to die at same time..if i tried to kill madhu then it will lead to my end..& i need madhu for getting rishab's power.."balraj.."a small threat was that malik..i finished his chapter years ago.."
"how u took her heart from her without killing her..??"came kuku's next question which made balraj angry..
"oh..questions above questions..becoz i have power to do that understood..& her heart is still with me so she cant do me anything..u dont need to worry..& i am going to get rishab's power too..when i get his heart i will get the powers & i will rule over the world..."balrj laughs..
"what u said..?"kuku..
"i meant v.."he said & kuku gave him a sly smile..
"hey moron once i get the power i will finish ur chapter first.."balraj thought & smirks...
"i will make their powers mine & will send u to hell balraj.."kuku thought..
the night faded by bringing a new dawn..rishab opened his eyes slowly with a smile..he feels fresh..its the first morning which he started
with a smile..he looked at the window which is still open..he get off from the bed & moved towards the window..he saw an anklet on the window side..he took it & smiled..he suddenly closed the window hearing someone's footstep..after a minute mohan entered his chamber & rishab bowed his head..mohan looks him top to bottom his eyes stuck on his feet..Mud...!!he gave him a murderous glare..
"rishab.."thats only he said rishab understood what his father want to ask him..
"its..me..."he stammered..
"who came here yesterday..??"mohan asked raising his head a bit..
"no..no one came..."he looks away..
"u r lying...whats in your hand..?"mohan asked which made rk clench his fist to hide that anklet..he wished if it would disappeared when he open his fist but there is no way to escape from his father.."show me it rishab..open ur palm..."he said which rk obeyed..but for his wonder his palm was empty..where is that anklet..."what happed..did it happend real..?but how.."he thought..
"i am gonna close this window for ever u broke ur promise.."he said & shut that window using his powers..it got closed with a thud sound..
"no..father pls.."he pleaded before mohan..
"no rishab..i cant believe u anymore.."mohan said & left..rk looked at the window with watery eyes..i lost my last reason to live he fell on his knees totally broken..
"what u had done father..y u done this to me.."he wept..


Night

"where is rishab..?"mohan asked one of his servent..
"price is in his chamber ur majesty.."servent..
"didn't u call him for dinner..?"mohan inquired..
"yes..but he said he dont want anything.."sevent..
"hm.."mohan.."i dont want to risk rishab's life.."he thought..

in rishab's chamber

he lie down in the bed by looking towards the window...hot tears welled up in his eyes..

**knock-knock**

he hears a knock at the window...of course its madhubala..he can easily conclude it...
"u go back..it will not open again..."he said..
"y..what happend..dont u like me coming here..?"her voice came..
"father closed it for ever...i cant open it.."he said..
"use ur powers prince..u can it"she said..
"i have no powers..i tried a lot but no use..its better u go from here.."rishab said..
"try again..u can it.."she said continually knocking..
"y cant u understand.."rishab..
"i will help u..pls try once again..."madhu said..he went towards the window & pushed it with force..& for their wonder it got opened..he looked at his own hands astonished...she stepped inside..
"i said na u can.."she said..
"y u came here..?"rishab..
"varied question.."madhu..
"i dont like u coming her...becoz of father lost his believe on me.."rishab..
"becoz of me..??what i had done..?"madhu asked confused...
"everything happend becoz of u only..father come to know that i had gone out.."rishab said & she looks him appalled..
"did u said about me..?"madhu..
"no..how can i..?"he asked with a frown.."if i said about u..father would definitely killed u by this time.."
"then y didn't u said if u didn't like me coming here..?"she asked ruptured hearing that he dont like to see her.."ok..if u dont like i will not come again.."she said & moved towards the window..rishab's eyrs filled..what he had done..it hurts her..he mentally slapped him for saying that..
"hey stop.."he said & she stopped on her tracks..she turns & look him.."what..??"
"aa..hm..nothing.."he fumbled..she diverts her eyes from him & again took steps towards the window..
"madhu.."he said..this time she stops without turning back..
"u can come here at anytime.."he quoth..she turns & looks him amused..he went near her..
"u r my only friend...i cant loss u..."he said & hugs her surprising her...he hugs him back & smile soon her smile faded by remembering y she is there..she is there to take his life..life of an innocent soul for that devil balraj..she breaks the hug & looks him..
"pri.."she opened her mouth to say some thing but he cuts her off.."u can call me rishab..."he said..
"but.."madhu..
"father only call me rishab..that too rudely..but my mom & sister were not like that..they loved me very much but my ma dead when i was 21 & my sister deepali got married 3 years back..now i am all alone here.."he said..
"i am with u na.."she cupped his face & said..
days passed madhu used to visit rishab regularly & they started developing feelings for each other..rishab started to her truly while madhu was worried about him..

After a week(In cage)

"madhu..u have only 2 days before u..i want his heart.."balraj informed her..
"i cant hurt him.."she said in return she got a murderous glare..
"u want to do it..or else u know me na.."he said..
"u r controlling becos my heart is with u na if it was not with u..then u cant do me anything.."she said & he finched back in shock..
"what..what u said now..?how u know about that.."he asked..
"2 days before i heard ur conversation with kuku..& now i know who am i..u will pay for ur sins balraj.."for the first time she raised her voice against him..
"no..u cant do this.."he said..
"i will do.."she said & disappeared from there with a shine..balraj gets startled..


In castle(rishab's chamber..)

he hears a knock at the window & opened it with a smile as he knew its hus madhu...as he opened she stepped inside hurriedly..

"rishab..i want to say u one thing.."she said..
"u didn't came here since 2 days..what happend..?"he asked..
"its rishab.."she starts panting...
"hey madhu calm down.."he said & make her sit on the bed...
"y u look so worried..?"he asked her by taking place beside her..
"its.."her hearts starts to palpitate..what she is gonna tell..how she will make him understand..what will be his reaction when he come to know that she came into his life to trick him..but she is really loving him..but will he believe it after knowing the truth..anyways he want to know the truth..she want to say it..that moment may destroy everything..she attained strength to say it & parted her lips to say but before that he start speaking...
"madhu..my crowning ceremony is on next week..dont know y father arranged everything so fast...u know after taking upon the crown i can take my own decisions..& on that day i will declare u as my queen.."he said & smiled..



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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
lovely update tc of ur health
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update aishu
Rk wanted to went outside and he got his power by moonlighting
Salute to your imagination
They are bonded with each other
Madhu is a princess in real
Kukku and balraj is doing this for Thier power
And he is keeping madhubalas heart and threatening her
Madhu don't want to do anything against rishab
She wanted to tell the truth to rk
He is now happy about crowning ceremony
Dreaming of announcing Madhu as his queen
Nice going
Please update soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!!! Amazing update...

So Madhu is actually a princess and Rishab has a huge power...All this Balraj's evil doings are for power...Balraj is such an evil...thank god, Madhu got to know everything...

Madhu was about to say Rk truths but Rk is so happy, planning to announce her as queen in crowning ceremony...will Madhu tell truths now?

Rk is so innocent here...Loved Madhu- Rk's bond...
What will be Rk's reaction knowing Madhu's truths...curious to know...

Thanks for pm...loved it..
And take care of your health...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update Aishu..
Rk is living in loniness...
Rishbala have bond..That balraj took her heart for power...
Feel bad for Rk..he wants love and care..
He lives like a bird in cage..
Madhu found truth about them.
will she say to him?
waiting for that .
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Awesome update loved it.
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update!
Thanks for the PM!
Loved each part of it!
Luckily Madhu heard Balraj.
Did she listen when they were talking about their unison and her being the princesse and all?
Rishab should try to use his power so he can learn what all he can do.
He is really an innocent soul.
Waiting for the crowning ceremony and the end of Balraj with Kuku!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
Madhu got to know the truth hope she tell truth to rishab
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awesome update ash..
aww.. i love this rk..
so sweet & nice..
ahh.. the princess so she is..
and rk holds power too.
made for each other jodi..
but some evil people & their plan..
keep rocking baby...
tnx fr pm :)

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