RISHBALA SS- One Night Journey (Last Part pg 25 dt 28/4) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Congo again..
Great prologue..
Acp kundra.. Is always a treat to read..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm :)

Thank you so much aan..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Congrats for new story
Interesting concept

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnaf52

congrats for new story aishu. .
interesting prologue. .
rk is police and madhu is criminal
why she killed balraj. .
even she didn't regrets. .
thanks for pm. .

Thank you so much sapna..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manna43

Congratulations for new story. Killer madhubala n ACP Rishabh Kundra.Wow ! Eager to read.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

Congrats for new story

this is very interesting
thanx for pm

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhumeandyou


very nice strting aishu. do continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Congrats for the new story dear.Differnt concept and i liked it dear.Rk is a police and madhu is a criminal and the concept is interesting dear.Please update soon dear.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#28


One Night Journey



Part-1



"I want answers for my questions.."he shouts seeing her reactions..
"Answers..."madhu stood up from the chair...stands on her toes & wrapped her hands around his neck..
"so u want answers na..then hear..
i killed balraj becoz he deserves it..
& sultan..search him in hell..& my next target..."she winked at him..
"1...2...3..."she counted..when she counted 3...

"sir u have a call.."mukund came there & told..he looks madhu who is smirking at him..

"Hello ACP Rishab Kundra hear.."rk.
"DCP Harshavardha kapoor speaking.."DCP.
"sir.."rk.
"y u arrest that girl..?"DCP.
"sir she is a criminal.."rk.
"no..she is not the real culprit..leave her right now..v got the real culprit.."DCP.
"sir..but.."rk.
"Leave her right now..its an order.."DCP.
"yes sir.."rk cuts the call.
"release her.."rk told to trishna..
"bye mr.ACP Rishab Kundra..u played with me..with this madhubala malik..will soon meet u.."she leaves..rk glares at her & hit the desk in anger..blood oozes from his fist..


Madhu got a call & picks it.

"hello r u safe.."a lady's voice came..
"hm...i met rishab kundra today...he is not like what i thought..enough clever to fool me..but i will not leave him..so i met my next target Rishab kundra.."madhu.




After 1 week




Rk appiled for a long leave of 2 months as he get irritated after that incident..madhu mocked him & get out from custody easily..it made him more anger..


"Rishu..what happend beta..y u r so desp.."radha asked him..
"radha ji someone came to see u.."a servant & tells her..radha nodded & leaves..she saw a girl wearing a blue saree with yellow shades & matching blouse standing on the doorstep..she stepped towards her..


"namasthe..i am madhubala.."she folded her hands..
"namasthea..who r u beti.."radha..she starts crying..
"hey..y r u crying..?"radha.
"help me..i have no one.."madhu.
"come.."radha invites her inside..
"whats ur problem.."radha asks by caressing her hairs..
"i am the wife of ur son rishab.."madhu.
"what..?"she stepped back in shock.
"y v did'nt got legally married..actually i am from a middle class family ur son had a crush on me..but i am not a girl like that..he looks several ways to get me finally he files a fake case against me & arrests me..my family commits suicide becoz of this..finally i am forced to do all what he said..i gets pregnant & he said me to abort my child..i were helpless so i obeyed him..now he cant marry me..he said when i force him to marriage he will charge case against me..what i can do..i have no one.."she cried..
"Rishu..rishu.."radha calls him angrily..
"hah ma.."rk comes there..he gets angry to see madhu there..
"you..?"he rushed towards her but radha stops him..
"ma.."he looks her confusd.she slaps him.."what u do have done with her rishu.."she again slapped him..
"ma..she is a criminal.."rk.
"shut up..i dont want to hear anything...how can u fall so low..r u my son..?like this i taught u..?"radha.
"ma.."rk.
"no..u will marry her..tomorrow itself..get ready for marriage.."she leaves from their angrily..he glares at madhu..
"what u have told to my ma..?"rk.
"only small..small lies like u used me now trying to throw me like.."she said without much seriousness..
"you.."he raised his hand for slap her but she holds his hand..
"no..no..what happen if ur ma see this..she is a heart patient na.."madhu..
"what u want..?"rk.
"y r u asking like this sweet heart..i want u obviously u..i will not leave u pathi dev..oh would be pathi dev.."she smirks..
He looks her confused..she leaves..
"Something is definitely there..third target then me..is i am her next target or someone related to me..?ma.."he went to radha's room..
"Ma.."he saw radha sitting on her bed & sobbing..
"Ma...hear my words..she is lying..u know me na.."rk.
"I tell u na...i dont want to hear anything from u..u will marry her its fixed.."radha.
"Ma.."rk.
"Its swear on me.."radha leaves without hearing anything from.
"Y..y know one is ready to hear my words.."he saw mohan's pic with garland & went there..
"Papa..u know ur rishu wont do anything like that..then y papa..y this is happening to me..that madhubala..she is a fraud..y ma is not believing it.."rk.




Morning



Radha makes madhu ready for marriage & arranged everything for marriage..she went to rk's room to check whether he gets ready or not..but she saw he is still sleeping on his bed..
"Rishu.."radha shouted..he opened his eyes & saw her..
"What ma..?"rk.
"Today is ur marriage & u r sleeping.."radha.
"No ma..i will not marry her..y cant u understand.."rk.
"Rishu..i told u a thousand times dont me angry.."radha.
"Ma plz..he trying to take revenge from me.."rk.
"So u r not ready for marriage hah..fine..then get ready to see my death.."radha..
"Ma..ok...if u cant understand what i will do..but one condition i will marry her now itself.."rk.
"Hah ur marriage is today..go & get ready fast.."she gave him a golden shervani..
"I told u know itself..straight from bed.."he stood up & went to hall...
He saw madhu sitting on the mandap..he sat near her...
"Rishu what r u doing..?"radha...padit looked him astonished seeing his attire but madhu did'nt reck it.
"Start..."rk..radha placed her palm in her head..
They got married..
"Mr.Rishab kundra..did u saw hell..?"madhu..rk glares at her..
"I did'nt but u will saw it soon..i know y u marry me..ur next target is me or someone related me..u played with my ma's feelings..i wont leave u..."rk..
"Wow..u r very cleaver..i am proud of u.."madhu.
"U cant do anything.."rk.
"No one can stop me...i will surely do the thing what i want to do..u will simply look it.."madhu.
"Lets see.."rk..they glares at each other..





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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Nice update.you are really superb girl.i like the twist in the story line. Radhaji believed Madhu..
Pity on rk.
So now who is gonna see the hell rk or Madhu?
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Superb update Aishu.
Loved it.
What is it that Radha believed Madhu and not her own son.
Madhu is taking revenge but why from RK, what has he done to her.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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