RISHBALA SS- One Night Journey (Last Part pg 25 dt 28/4)

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Hi friends here is my new story...This is different from my all stories..i dont have much experience i writing investigation story...hope u all support me 😊..




One Night Journey




Prologue




"excuse me.."rk looked the girl who called him..
"yes mam.."he replied politely..
"i want to go to one place..can u help me.."girl.
"i am a driver so its my duty plz.."he opened the door for her..she get inside the car..they hears the sound of the train which is passing the station..he starts the car..
"r u new here..?"rk.
"hm.."she just hummed..her phone starts ringing & she pick the call..
"hello madhubala hear.."madhubala..sweet name.."he thought.
"yeah work was done..i am coming back to delhi.."madhu.."so she is from delhi.."he mumbled..
"mam..where u want to go.."he interrupted her conversation..
"i will call u back.."she cuts the call..
"stop here.."madhu..she says when they reached near a construction site.
"here.."he mumbled & stops the car..
"wait here.."madhu moves to the construction site..rk looks through the window & thought..."y she here in this time..?"his mind tells he want to find it out so he followed her...he hides behind a pillar & looks her..she took a small plastic bag from her bag & buried it under the soil..
"what is inside it...y she buried it.."he thought..as he saw she is coming back he return to his car & sat on driver seat..she came back & sat on the passenger seat..
"ok lets go.."madhu.
"hm.."rk starts the car..
"go to railway station.."madhu.
"she came from railway station na..then y she is going back to there..something is fishy.."he stops the car when they reached railway station..
"Thanks.."she paid him..
"u r welcome.."he drove away...while driving he thought " what she buried there...?i want to find it.."rk..he drove to the construction site..


he walk towards the place & dig there...he saw the plastic bag & opened it..he got shocked to see pistol inside it..he took it with his kerchief..
"freeze..."he heard a sound behind him..he turns his face & saw inspector mukund is pointing gun at him..
"Rishab sir.."he lowered his gun.
"look pistol.."he show it to mukund..
"sir it means..."mukund..rk opened it & took the bullets out..
"3 more out of 6.."he smirked..
"1...2...3..."mukund got a call when rk counted 3..
"hello.."mukund.
"sir v got her.." a lady constable's voice came from the other end..
"what u think about this ACP Rishab kundra.."rk.
"ok come lets go.."he puts the pistol inside a plastic cover..




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Police station


"Sir she is not telling the truth.."lady inspector trishna tells to him..
"hm.."he nodded & goes to the room where madhu is sitting..she gets shocked to see him in police attire..
"ms.madhubala malik u did'nt expect this na.."rk..she looks away..
"did u hurt her.."rk asked trishna.
"not yet.."trishna replied..
"Ok..every one plz move from here for sometime..i want to talk alone with her.."rk..they leaves...
"u look so beautiful.."he blowed at her..she glared at him..
"ok madhubala..i have 3 questions..if u give answer to it v will not do anything to u but if u dont cooperate with us.."he looked her..
"my first question..y u killed balraj..?
second...where is sultan..?
third..who is ur next target..?"he asks came close to her she smirked..




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If you dont like this plz tell me frankly..

Thanks Rachana chechi for this thread...




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varshajoshi17 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start
so rk is inspector and madhu is criminal

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for the new story,
Interesting prologue,
Rk is ACP and Madhu is criminal,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.nicely written.so rk is ACP.he disguised as a taxi driver to arrest madhu. continue soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrates for new story Aishu..
Nice start aishu...
Rk is ACP and Madhu is criminal..nice.
update soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aishu you are on a roll baby, so many stories.
Congrats on the New Story.
Fantastic Prologue.
RK is a Police Officer and Madhu is a criminal or is she trying to save someone.
Curious to know what happens next.
Continue soon, waiting for the update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for the new ff
Nyc prologue continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo again..
Great prologue..
Acp kundra.. Is always a treat to read..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Interesting concept
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story aishu. .
interesting prologue. .
rk is police and madhu is criminal
why she killed balraj. .
even she didn't regrets. .
thanks for pm. .

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