RiShbala OS 'EveNing DreaMz' (29/01)

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Sana

@luvvivian286

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Very different and unique concept

Amazing os

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Chitra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Woah completely different story
loved it but the ending was unexpected or funny rather
what a pain they couldn't be together

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Aravind Das A M

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Ohh teri yaarrr kahani mein twist haa😆. Mein toh soch rahi thi ki ab toh ahem ahem** hogi hogi😲 lakin mili toh babaji ki tullu🤣. Tume toh puri story ulta kar li. No rk madhu milan. But dear lovd it. Diffnt plot, & emotions. Nice one. Very wel wriiten👏

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zonnakhan

@zonnakhan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Aaniya U proved once again that u r amazing writer!😉

You showed such a hot intimacy just by words...No action.. hahaha i feel pity for my RK.. He and his fantasies.. ☺️ I just can't believe how our Rishbala hold themselves 😆

Different and unique story from ur other ones... The thing i didn't like is Madhu going with Sultan... 😭

If possible can u write another part to this story where RK Madhu met! Want happy ending! 😊

Edited by zonnakhan - 8 years ago

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

i love rk and madhu jodi only dear.

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

madhu n rk had forbidden feelings for each other, love, lust, desire but they controlled their self knowing that they are not meant to be.. while madhu is married to his brother, he would find his better half soon

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

I'm So sorry for Late Comment,I am Busy in Exams.😭

It was Awesome Os.😊

Please Write like this.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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yahoii

@yahoii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

but wud b happier if u turned it into a ss and let rishbala end up together..!!

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

thanks for reading... friends :)

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Mikolingam

@Mikolingam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Good one but not RK & Madhu ending up like this. They should always be together. Their souls are intertwined. You have great ideas and you express the words of romance is good. Please continue to write more love to read your stories. Very talented.

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