RiShbala OS 'EveNing DreaMz' (29/01)

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Hey Guyz, here is an one shot on rishbala, hope u will like it..😳
Dedicated To YASMINE16, aka Yas as she is the one to ask for it !!
What, how, why.. i will answer it at last.
toh, i'll get to u all at the end of the story😳


Evening Dreamz


Sometimes, it happens that the thing u want is right in front of you, in ur hand reach & u wanna grasp that, yet u cant.. U cant reach it..
Cause its not yours & can never be but yet u dont wanna give it but neither u can have it..
But, then again the temptation to have it is way too powerful that it overcome your scenes !!


She raise her eyes, looking at him through her lashes. He too isnt ignorance of her glances as he was staring at her, her every moves, her body language.
"Madhu.. Come with me in the kitchen" breaking their lil eye lock radha called madhu standing from the sofa.
"Yes, mom" madhu, close the magazine which was there in her hand. Keeping it on side table she stands up, darting a last glance at him, she followed her mother in law to the kitchen.

"Rishab, did u studied the Mehra's case file ?" Mohan, Rk's father asked him as soon as Radha & madhu went to kitchen.
"Yes dad.. The case is lil tricky & i guess we need more strong evidence to hold on to the case" Rk answered. Rk, Rishab kundra is a reputed lawyer by profession, his father Mohan Kundra is also a very famous lawyer himself.
"Okk.. And yeah, i want u to not take that sinha case. He has a link with underworld & it wont do any good to ur career" mohan said.
"Yeah dad.. Bittuji told me about it & i am not interested in his case either. Its baseless" rk answered.
"Dad" madhu softly interrupts them and both the men look up at her.
"Dinner is ready !" She informed.
"Okk madhu, we are coming !" Mohan smiled at her. Nodding her head she glance at Rk to find him looking at her. His eyes, holds something very intense for her. She turn around & strolled back to the dining room as Rk watch her curvaceous body moving, she is wearing a thin saree & he can very well see her enticing skin.
"We will discuss the rest in study room after dinner" mohan said breaking Rk's thought.
"Yeah !"
"Come, they have already set the dinner" mohan sauntered to the dinning hall leaving Rk. Rk closed his eyes while resting his back against the sofa, now-a-days he is having a different feeling having her around. He feels restless, he feels soothing, he feels confused, and he dont know what else to do. Shaking away the thoughts he stands up from the sofa & followed his father to the dinner hall. Mohan, has already got seated in his head chair, to his left radha is there & madhu is serving them dinner.
He just cant exactly explains what he feels whenever he saw her. She is a pure beauty, the aura around her is so enticing that he feels himself getting drowned in her. Breaking his reverie, madhu called him seeing him standing at a distance like a statue.
"Rishab.. Plz be seated" she said gently. Rk looks at her as their eyes met, but madhu quickly looks away sensing everyone presence. Rk lazily strolled to his chair, to the left of his father & sit down there. Madhu came across to serve him too, setting his plate.
She looks at him, he seems to be in deep thought, he seems to be distracted, but still his handsome visage with the frown is worth worthing. She can spend several hours of a day just by looking at him. She stands next to him & starts serving him. Feeling her close to him, he stiffened. Madhu watch his actions closely.
"Madhu, if u are done sit there. We can serve ourselves" radha said.
"OK mom" madhu nodded & draw the chair beside him & took place. She noticed the side glances of Rk on her.
"Madhu did sultan called ?" Radha asked & rk snapped his head at her, its like coming back to reality.
"Yeah mom.. He called in evening. Everything is good there" madhu replied politely
"When is he coming back ?" Mohan asked "and is the house ready yet ?"
"Dad.. He said its under renovation & more one week will be needed & he will be back once its done" madhu said.
"Means u are here for just one week" radha smiled at madhu. Rk just silently listen to their conversation, digging on his food.
"We could have done the Marriage of sultan & madhu after six months but sultan's architectural work needs his presence & there was no auspicious dates available too, so everything went in jiff right, radha" mohan brings up the topic.
"Yes mohan, but everything was done in much relaxed manner. Malik & padmini is happy too" radha assured.

Madhubala malik, became Madhubala Sultan Kundra just a week ago. It was an arranged marriage & the marriage was grand. She is trying to settle in her new family with her MIL, radha, FIL, Mohan, and BIL, Rk.
Kundras are family of four with Mohan, radha & their both sons Rk & sultan. Rk is lawyer by profession while sultan is architect by profession. Rk stays with his parent while sultan stays in another town alone, and soon madhu too is going to live her new life with sultan away from everyone. Sultan has already left just a day after his marriage, while madhu has just a week to know her new family.

"Rishab.. U have to take madhu out for shopping tomorrow, hope u remember" radha probes.
"Yes mom" rk said dryly. He just dont want to be in all these talk. Madhu sensed Rk's changed in mood.
"Its okk.. If u dont want to" madhu started saying looking at Rk.
"There is no problem" Rk said to madhu in composed tone looking straight in her eyes.
"U have taken day off ?" Mohan asked.
"Yeah" rk replied in monosyllable & leaves the hall done with his dinner.

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He let his body to free fall on the bed & closed his eyes. The only image formed after closing his eyes is of madhu. Why ? Lately he is having this strange feeling for her, a strange unknown attraction. Its wrong, she is forbidden & thats made his hormones grow wild. He didnt knew her before, wish he knew her before then she would be his, she would be in his room, in his bed, she wont have to leave. He jerk open his eyes realising where his thoughts are going. A girl is plaguing his mind, his thoughts.
Again he closed his eyes, only to see her in dreams, having wet dreams.☺️

*Next day*

"Hii !" Madhu smiled a little as she step inside the car & close the door. Rk is already on driver seat with his one hand resting on steering.
"Hey !" Rk greeted "where do u want to go ?"
"Somewhere near by, i dont have much stuffs to buy" madhu replied. Rk nodded his head & starts driving keeping his eyes on road but his heart is going in another direction at different speed. Have her seated so close to him in this enclosed space of the car. She continues to glance at him occasionally but didnt said anything. Soon, they reached the mall & madhu went to buy herself some dress with Rk tagging behind her. While shopping she noticed a thin black netted saree on a dummy.
"Can u show me that !" Madhu ask the sales girl & the sales girl forward her the saree which is team up with matching deep neck blouse too. Taking it from her hand madhu went to trial room while Rk left behind waiting for her.
After waiting for some time, when madhu didnt came out he went to the trial area to check on her. The area is not much crowded except for few people who are going for trial. There he spot madhu outside the trial room, in thin netted saree. He stood stunned seeing her back profile, the saree is wrapped around her curvy waist teamed up with backless blouse, showing ample area of her back to him. The more he wanted to divert his eyes the more his eyes yearned to look at the sight before him. Her skin, her grace, he right now want to grab her, pushed her back in the trial room, close the door shut and...
He simply lost his mind, seeing the seductress before him. Sensing piercing gaze on her madhu turn around to find him staring at her like anything. His eyes held the captivating raw desire which touched her intently. Rk roamed his eyes down her body drinking her looks. Her swan like neck, on which he can trailing down his lips, the saree drape around her fuller breast & the fabric of blouse piece to is not helping him either. His eyes went down her creamy waist, making his hands itched to touch her. Her doe shaped brown eyes looking at him trying to understand his hidden emotions, her pink petal lips slightly parted. God ..! She is driving him insane.
Forcing his eyes to look away, he hastily turned around & went out of the store straight to his car. He never believe on the effect of girls on man but now when he is experiencing it, its uncontrollable for him, the urge to get her is unexplainable, he wants to run away from her, somewhere far away.. But still she will be there on his mind, capturing his thoughts.

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Rk was lying on sofa-cum-bed in the terrace of his house, looking aimlessly at the sky, stars. He can see moon, the north start, few dull stars, many shining stars. Its evening, and the gently breezing keep stroking his entire body. He heard footstep coming towards him. He looks up to find madhu hovering over him, in her usual saree which he finds quite sexy. He sigh loudly looking at her.
"I dont have decent thoughts on you !" He said looking up at sky. Yeah, he just cant keep pretending to ignore her.
"I know, it can be seen in ur eyes, the way u look at me says in all." Madhu said after a minute.
"Why are u here then ?" He asked.
"I find it hard to resist u" madhu drawled as she too lie next to him, keeping distance between their bodies.
"Mom dad ?" Rk asked as he watched her lying beside him.
"They have joined evening club recently opened by dad's friend.. So they left" madhu answered. In reply Rk nodded his head.
"U haunts my dreams" rk said after a moment breaking the silent.
"And u never leave my thoughts. U made me feel strange" madhu confessed.
"The way u stares at me.." Madhu trailed off.
"Thats the only thing i can do" rk said as the tension begins to arise between them at the proximity. Madhu turns her head sideways to have a full look at him.
"Dont look at me like that. U made me lose myself" rk whispered unable to present his feelings.
"I find u very alluring !" Madhu said.
"U dont know what effect u have on me. Every cells of my body gets in fire being near u.. Its craves to.." Rk stops in mid way.
"To ?" Madhu probes.
"To touch u intimately" rk said huskily as he raise himself, turning to madhu keeping his weight on his elbows he looks at her in her eyes for reaction.
"And ?" She didnt gave any eriee reaction as if she knows what he feels.
"To trails my hand down ur body, cuddling & pressing ur curves making u hot & wet for me" he said in husky voice making her breaths heavy.
"To take ur lips in between mine, sucking them till the point it lose the juices filled in them, nibbling them, moulding ur tongue with mine" rk said, himself getting highly turned on.
"To keep dashing inside u, until u scream out my name from ur lips" he said with raw passion in eyes & madhu squirmed under his heated gaze.
"Then watching u satiable with my thrust, in nude glory in my bed" he whispered the last part & madhu sits up.
"Thats enough" she breathed out.
"Am sorry.. " rk too sits up beside her "i know its wrong but i cant help having fantasies on u"
"Hmm.." Madhu just hummed saying nothing.

"What do u think is between us !" Madhu asked again after few minutes of silence.
"Attraction.. Desire.. Lust.." Rk spell out each words.
"Love ?" He looks at her with questioning looks.
"The things we see through our eyes is lust & that we see through our heart is love" madhu said smoothly looking at him.
"Wish i would have gotten u before.. Before this marriage" rk said.
"Wish.. Dont come true.. Wish only means regrets" madhu replied.
"What do u think of me ?" Rk asked.
"Nothing better than what u think about me" madhu smiled.
"Our thoughts are illicit." Rk said lying back but looking at madhu.

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Rk entered his room from day work out to find madhu sitting cross legged on his bed. He closed the door, and a sly smile crossed his lips as he advance towards her discarding off his coat on floor. Madhu didnt budge an inch & continues to looks at him reflection the same smile as his. Rk crouch near her on bed & slowly starts unbuttoning his shirt holding madhu's gaze. Soon the shirt was on floor, and he, in upper nude form. Madhu looks at his every taunt muscles, his abs & finally at his lips. She slowly came near him closing the gap between them. She breath on his face as their breath mingled, his lips mere lips away from her to caress her lips & tongue with his, to explore her & then she backed away.
"Ur show was quiet tempting !" She sighed along with Rk.
"But still we are resisting !" Rk said.
"Ur snacks.." Madhu stands up from bed & forwarded the food plates.
"And..!" She stops.
"And ?" Rk encourage her.
"Sultan is coming back in a day !" She said followed by silence. Rk nodded in acknowledgement & she left the room to let him be alone.

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"Our last evening together" rk said as madhu lay next to him in their usual spot, looking up at sky.
"Hmm.." She hummed.
"When are u leaving ?" He asked.
"Tomorrow" she replied.
"I will miss u..!" He said.
"I will miss this time with u. U are a great person" she smiled.
"Still we cant love each other !" Rk grimaced.
"Our ways have already parted. We met late" madhu said.
"I don't feel good !" Rk complained.
"It will pass over" madhu assured.
"How can u be so calm ?" Rk asked.
"Being reactive wont help. Our situation is different" madhu explained "trust me, we will get over it. After a year or two when we will get settle in our life, this time, this things will be feel so stupid.. A lust, a crush.. We will be laughing over it with our partners"
"Lust, crush and ?" Rk probes.
"Attraction, hitch, infatuation, desire to do the forbidden" madhu continues.
"And love" rk looks at her intently.
"But not that strong to hold on & Fight for." madhu counter.
"I know" rk look away "something are never meant to be"
"Just live in the moment Rk. Dont brood over.
Time will heal everything.. Just give the time, some time !" Madhu smiled at him as he pass her a small smile.
"This evening will pass. The dreams may not.. My evening dreamz !!" He whispered with a smile.

~~~~~~

He watch on, with his arms crossed over his chest as she hugged his mom dad, taking their blessings. Her husband, his brother sultan took hold of her hand and they walked out of the mansion to start fresh. She stopped on door step & turn back at him. She waved her hands at him as he reciprocate with a small smile on his lips, letting the forbidden thing go back to its forbidden territory.

"But the memories that hang heaviest are the easiest to recall. They hold in their creases the ability to change one's life, organically, forever. Even when you shake them out, they've left permanent wrinkles in the fabric of your soul."

Something in life can only be felt, it cant be explained, the situation, the desire, the thrill cant be explained, even though its wrong it still felt right.. And then u have to let it go...!!



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So, this girl yas, said that i always write *ahem* type of stories & hence, dont know what came in her mind that she asked me to write one shot on rishbala WHERE THEY CAN'T KISS EACH OTHER, HUG & NOT EVEN TOUCH EACH OTHER.. maintaining complete distance🤣
Three concept came in my mind one to cut Rk's hand, make him dumb, deaf, blind.. then get madhu a deadly disease & kill her.. and this forbidden one which i posted above😆
Plz read & drop ur views friends. 😳

Yas, waiting for ur reply babe..
Pms of this will be send with hasina-kamina in a day..!!
Thankyou..
Aaniya
Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago

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sapnaf52 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing story. ...aani
This idea is better than your 3 other ides like making rk deaf, dumb, blind ...cut rk hand. . 🤣
phir vi tum ko sultan hi mila Tha. ... 😡...
madhu k hubby k Lia. . 😡
you didn't make some "ahem ahem "scene. ..
but add words. . 😉..
and Yasmine. .what a challenge. .
not to touch. .but you should said not to ahem ahem part. ..look aani make sultan madhu husband! !! ...
and he touch our madhu. . 😔

Aani now you finish your challenge. ..Yasmine demands
Now our. .All rishbalaian ki demand. .kill the sultan 😆😆... 🤣🤣..accident kar Dena ...way me 😉
or just make sultan ex - depali come. ..and they want second chance for there relationship. .. 😉..
just make sure it's before sultan and madhu's. .
"oh Jara Jara touch me touch me "haha 🤣🤣

Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice os.
Well written..
Rishbala attracted eachother.
But it is too late.There is no way.
But My heart didn't accept their separation.
I don't want Sulbala patchup..
Will u change the end?
We always want Rishbala..
Thanks for pm
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Reee..
Unres...

Finally i read this story... Now only love liaison is left to read and comment.. Will do that tomrw...

Different attempt... Well written... But... Sorry to say this i didnt like it.. Neither the story nor the characters... I m really sorry Aanya... I want ti give my honest feedback to u.. I have always given my honest reviews.. I don't sugar coat my words.. So i m telling u u might not like thid comment... But that doesnt mean i m not appreciating ur effort to write something different and unique.. U aleays come with unique concepts.. And at times i just go awe at u for ur imagination... But here it didnt meet up the level.. U have created a bench mark... But its okay.. One slip.. Happened to me many times... Most of my stories r not worth reading.. But still i wrote and posted here and coerced u all to read by sending pms.. Lol... So its nothing big compared to mine.. Hahaha..

Okay... The story was short... Felt unfinished..
I felt uh huh.. Nah nah nah.. This can't be true... Like that when i came to know madhu is married to sultan.. I hope him to die hehehe..seriously... I know that will be so repetitive but still i wanted that so that rishbala can unite.. But thst didnt happen...

Ur challence.. No kiss.. No hug... Nothing.. Well they wanted to do all that but they curtailed themselves from doing just bcos its a forbidden relation.. I would havebeen happy... If they had eloped to some foreign country and settled.. Lol.. Ditching his bro.. For her her new hubby.. Hahaha... But they didnt... Their lust attraction infatuation.. Love or whatever didnt get fulfilled... He simply let her go.. Without making any appearance sultan won in this story.. Which irked me... 🥱 for me this is not my rishbala... I dont mind rk and madhu being sinners... But in the end they shld end up together... Even if they wanna kill each other... Hahahaa...

Among ur three ideas i loved the madhu facing some deadly disease and in death bed... I know thats not a new theme... Its very old... But still that would be a hit.. In emotional genre... U would have made us cry... We would have applaud Rk for loving her truly and supporting her in her hard times... And he could have kissed on her forehead after her death... Breaking the challenge u have given by Yas... Hahah...

Evening dreams... Turned out to be a nightmare to both Rishbala... I guess first time i m critizing u story.. For which i really feel bad... Please domt get hurt... Or hate me... I can understand the effort a writer puts in writing a story... And i get hurt if i get negative comments... But i always try to take it in a positive way to improve my creativity...

Once again asking sorry for being brutally honest here...
I thought to lost few pleasant words and keep my comment short... But i just couldnt.. Sorry...


One more thing... U r good in writing hot romantic stories... So u can write more such stories... We would love to l read.. U r not a saint to write story without kiss scene.. U r EVIL! 😆
Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice os

I wanted madhu and rk together in last but alas it didn't happened

But this concept was nice compared to ur other concept where rk and madhu both are disabled 😆
Edited by v.p.joshi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi v v different n unique concept...it was really amazing how they felt for eachother but still maintained their stands...v v nice good ff😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all i want to tell u one thing..
Ur writing skill was amazing...
But..u broken my heart dear🥺..
Oh no..sullu madhu..no..no..no..😭
But i will imagine this story on my mind & kill sullu in an accident on the way & unite rishbala
This forbidden union will be my evening dream dear aan 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsome dreams...
Madhu is mrried to sullu
RK is attracted towards his babhi..
Madhu too is attracted towards rishu..
They both love eachother...
But they fell eachother forbidden for eachother..
They spent quality time with eachother..
After that sullu retuned n .madhu went along with him..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely os..
Start sa feel hua rishbala married hai par kuch problems hai unka relation ma par jab sultan ka name aya tab lag hi gaya madhu sultan ki wife hai😳
Rishbala ek dusra ka taraf attracted hai par apne limit cross nahi karta hai apne reation ko pure rakhta hai and apne dil ki baat ek dusra sa share karta hai jo vi hai..
Different concept but huma Sullubala nahi chaiha Rishbala mangta hai dil😃
Dreams ma Vi hum Madhu ko Sullu ka saath sochna nahi chahta.. Ek kam karo Sullu ko marr dalo aur rishbala ki shadi kar doa😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res Aani..
I will edit it soon.. U wrote it fab Aani..
yaar u made Sultan and Madhu as a Pair.. Wat abt Rk???

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