RiShbala OS 'EveNing DreaMz' (29/01) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Really its. Different one ...
You didn't add any ahem but u put that in your words...Haha

Sultan and madhu...Ohhh nooo
Poor rishabh baby ,can't even get a kiss from her...
Surely it was different one with all of it othet stories...
All the best...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Congrats for your new story Aaniya..👏

Res.😳
UNRES

Awesome OS ..and great idea given to you ..and you did great job 👏😉and also managed to give us Rishbala moments even without any ahem ahem..😳

that's the beauty of writer..⭐️

ok so Madhu is married to Sultan but Rishbala are attracted to each other..
hayee..kaash Sultan beech main na hota..😉

Loved this OS of yours too..❤️
diff concept..diff story..very well written..⭐️

keep writing..
thanks for pm dear AA.🤗



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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Congrats for new story
Rk n madhu r attracted to each other but she is sultan wife n at end she went with her husband
I don't like sulbala will u change the end?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Its amazing and different
But i would say u should leave it as open end so that readers can use their imagination to their best to complete the story...like u did for frozen under moon..

Still no worries i anyhow will imagine my own ending for this
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Aaniya brilliant OS, Rishbala are so near to each other but can never be one. This concept is better than the concepts you thought of.
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Amazing story. Totally different and beautifully written.
But sadly I didn't like it a bit. I love your rishbala when they are passionate and crazy. This rishbala is sober n decent and I don't like it they don't feel complete to me. However beautifully written and great attempt.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Totally agree with sapnf52 that now u have finished the challenge. So spare madhu from sultan. Yuck its so horrible to add sultan's name with madhu. Thanks for not cutting rk hand n not making him deaf n dumb. And very big wala thank not give madhu any life threatening disease. Ufff it gives me shiver to think of such situations as i know u can write on any situation n can do anything with them. Plzzz i beg u dont separate them or i will give u karele ka juice. Now go to ur launchpad n write second part to clean our tears.
Thanks for pm. Waiting for HAPPY ENDING.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
awesome os😃
why sultan ...😆
i don't know what to say ...😳
life is unpredictable
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Wow this was an intense os even if rk n madhu didn't get to be together
The looks
The dreams
Rk describing his fantasys
I kinda hoped sultan would realise her
But they resisted n decided to move on in their lives
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Ohhh wowww...this is wrongly right,,
they know their limitations yet attracted to each other,,,,even I dont knw how to define what they share,,,LOVE< LUST or something lese huh but GOSHHH this is one of teh sensuous OS that I read..

Just by mere imaginations and conversations u showed the intimacy and irresistible attraction they share,,,

sparks fly but still they calmed and composed themselves...the way they observed each other..the exchange of intimacy through eyes is quite unique idea wowww...

the scene at the Store..wowww...for a mere secodn I thought they will loss their control but man,,,they are so on hold wowww..

Sullu ullu got married to Madhu, good that he went away immediately the next day and made MAdhu to drip wet for this man and I am sure...she can never replace him with anyone in her dreams...

and RK...goshhh he cursed hismelf for not seeing her before marriage otherwise she would have been in his life forevere ...aah destiny na sometimes plays a very very cruel game, see it made our EVIL write intimacy through words between Rishabala and made us hanging and beggign for actions than words hahahahah

DIRTY MINDS we are hahahhahah

All I can say is, u r just making our expectations so high on u that , I am just waitign for ur next updates or stories..
as I said, I am ur fan now and autograph please 😳😳😳

thank u so much EVIL...coz u r surely the one 😆😆😉

keep it up...muah

Love,
Ashu

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