Rishbala SS 'ImPassiOned' ||COMPLETED@PG.71|| (30/11)

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#501

nice parts read all 3 parts in one go rk realise love for madhu he handover madhu to her parents he don't want to spoil her life madhu run behind rk to save him from sultan sultan angry from rk not bring madhu he beats rk and tels him he just using him for his purpose s rk hurt malik rembers he live radha and left becoz madhu born he start fresh rk tels him he no it forget past but for madhu he forgave him finally rk killed sultan and save madhu both rishbala have ahppliy after hi plz don't leave us or a awesome writer dear can u continue or is beast y in love and other story avenging u

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#502

Awesome part...full action pack episode..

Everything ended happily n also impaiomed RK turned completely passionate

Waiting for new story

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#503

Part 6:

Beautiful Rishbala moments.

RK left Madhu with her family inspite of his love.

Sultan is coming.

Part. 7:

As expected Sultan is mad at RK.

Madhu is unbelievable, she was lecturing Sultan.

Finally RK killed Sultan and he is free.

Rishbala are together.

Enjoyed the story.

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Rumi

@RijaMalik

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#504

awesome update..

RK went to sultan to make him understand his point. but sultan refused to.understand n shot RK n kidnapped madhu.

loved the way RK taught sultan a lesson n saved his love...

bittuji helped RK alot..

loved the last scene.. rishbala moments were awesome..

awesome ss it was

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mani

@Odd12

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#505

lovely update
sultan and bhujang are dead.
madhu and rishabh together
lovely and beautiful ending
overall story was so good

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#506

Res..

now in office.. so i will read and unres later dear...

unres...

Awesome update👏

haha... yeah i know... you can't just blow him in the midair... its needed for the story to keep a face off between Sultan and Rk... but don't you think you made that bas***d beat my Rk a little more than required? how dare he lay his hands on my Rk?? on top of that he shot Rk... and took his love, his madhu with him... bloody f**ker! 🤢

moron he was using him for his own needs but this rk like a fool trusted and treated him like his own brother... at least he realised he made a mistake by joining hands with this shit-face Sultan...

haha... its so true.. madhu never listens to Rk.. she always do the exact opposite to what he tells her to do... she is really crazy...

well, as u said bittuji indeed played a major part.. he dropped a bomb at the right time and killed all the underworld criminals... and escaped Rk and also cleared his name from the police record.. now he is so pure as priest... LOL!!! so he can start a new life with his love..

poor madhu was scared and cursed Bittuji for killing her love... but then he fooled her.. it was one well executed plan by Rk... very nice!

hmm... I don't think malik made any big mistake... if anyone to be blamed then i will blame Radha... she should have moved on and lived happily with her husband and child.. if her husband was abusive and uncaring then she could have got a divorce and got the custody of her son and moved out... instead of exposing her love for malik.. which riled him up and made him hurt her and take away his son... well, its all fate... Rk can't fully hold Malik responsible for losing his parents.. so its good thing he forgave malik ... for madhu or not.. he forgave him and that's very appreciable...

well, i really felt the update... so perfect.. i loved it...

like always i enjoyed reading this story too...

u have brilliant concepts dear.. and u r penning it down so well... good luck... keep it up!

Thanks!!!

Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago

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abhiya2405

@abhiya2405

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#507

awsome update...i do wanted more of it but for now i am satisfy with it...if madhu had nt followed rk,he would have long dead...rk shouldnt had trusted sultan lilke brother bt sultan will had become kabab mein haddi..lol..i mean to say u wrote such way that we couldnt have imagine.. do continue ur work...

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#508

Superb part

rk took madhu to her house

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Rishkara

@Rishkara

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#509

loved this story a lot.
will surely miss updates of this story.
Finally madhu n rk live happilyever after.
I love bittuji here.
sullu ,bhujang n team gone.
very good ending