Rishbala SS 'ImPassiOned' ||COMPLETED@PG.71|| (30/11)

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Hii guyz.. back with a new story & a different Rk, from all my other stories.. hope u all like it..!!
Here it goes..


Impassioned
Part-1


"F**k" a guy hissed.
"Am sorry.. Am sorry.." A girl pleaded as they are on a restaurant.
"u blind b***h, cant u see where u are going" he abuses her while brushing off the water droplets from his jacket.
"Excuse me.. I mistakenly dropped the water glass on u as we dashed & u too was talking on the phone while walking" the girl said offended as she mistakenly dropped the water glass on him & he is making a scene.
"U.. How dare u revert me back !" He guy said drawing out his gun pointing at the girl. The girl gasped horrified as on-lookers looks on.
"All smartness gone" he spat dangerously. No mirth in his voice.
"Am sorry" the girl trembled.
"F**k with ur sorry." He hissed as he kept his finger on the trigger of the gun.
"Oh hello.." Came a loud sweet voice. All heads turned to her as she made her way inside the restaurant & run towards the man with gun huffing & puffing.
"Is it real ?" She asked the guy painting pointing at the gun in his hand. His eyes travelled down her body taking in her appearance. She has a Bright angelic face with wet hair locks falling down her shoulders. She is wearing a patilaya pinkish suit which is fully wet, sticking to her body, her beautiful brown orbs looking at him with curiosity.
"yes" he answered gravely.
"OMG.. Keep that thing away from my didu" she shrieked & pull the gun down holding his hand.
He looks at her surprised__
1. For being daring to touch his gun
2. Her soft touches on him
"Madhu.. Stay away.. He is dangerous" the elder girl on whom the gun was pointed pulled madhu back.
"Didu wait.." Madhu said & step forward again. The guy continues to stare at madhu.
"See.. Its raining" she beamed at the guy "So anyways u would get lil bit wet right.. !! Didu mistakenly dropped water glass on u.." The guy looks at her with interest.
"But even now too if hold grudge & want revenge.. Here.." Madhu took a glass full of water from a table & holds it in front of him.
"U know tit For tat.. Didu pour water on u & now u can pour water on me" she said as matter of fact.
"Am already drenched, it wont make a difference though" madhu giggled "But u'll get ur revenge."
The guy looks at her mesmerized & said "No need"
"Matter resolved then?" She asked happily.
"yes" the guy smiled.
"Great.. Am sorry on behalf of my sister & u should say sorry too. U used profanities on a girl" she demanded an apology cutely.
"Sorry" he said without thinking looking at madhu.
"Scores even & settled" madhu cheered & turn back to Trishna, her elder sister.
"Didu.. Rain will stop come.. Come..cone" madhu shrieked as she ran in rain enjoying herself carefree, ignorant of the pair of eyes watching her.
"Sultan bhai" a man probes seeing his boss looking lost "U said sorry to the girl ?" He asked & sultan smirked.
"Get info of her & keep an eye on her. But remember no harm" sultan ordered his men.
"Madhu.." He whispered lovingly looking at madhu from a glass Door.

---~---

*After Some Months*

"Dont.. Dont.. Please.. Spare me" a man pleaded as a guy in hooded clothes points a gun at him.
"Ur ticket is confirmed" the guy said gravely in his splendid baritone.
"Who are u ?" The man asked sweating. The guy dropped the hooded cap off his head revealing his Greek god handsome face.
"Rk" he introduced himself looking coldly at the man.
"What enemity u have with me ?" The man asked.
"Nothing.."
"They why u want to kill me ?"
"I got order from.." He paused "From Sultan".
Rk ended and fired a shot right at the man's head snatching the man's life. He took a deep breath in the air full of gun spark & blood smell & walked out of the dark alley.

---~---

"Work done" rk declared walking inside the hall.
"Rk..my brother. I knew it only u could have killed that minister" sultan rejoice hugging Rk.
"Who is next ?" Rk asked expressionless breaking the hug.
"wohh.. Stop My killing machine..Always Ready to kill.. Take a breath" sultan patted Rk's shoulder.
"Killing soothes me sultan" rk said coldly.
Sultan is an underworld don, & Rk is his righthand. Sultan took care of Rk since rk was a teenage boy. From then till now sultan treat Rk as his brother & also Rk is very useful to sultan.
"tsk..tsk..tsk.. Lil brother. This time i have a different task for u" sultan said.
"what is it ?" Came a cold question from rk.
"U dont have to kill. U need to take care of someone"
"Care & me ? " Rk smirked mockingly.
"yes.. U have to take care of my life" sultan said dreamingly & rk furrowed his eye brows.
"Sultan bhai is in love with a girl from months & now he is planning to abduct her" sultan's men cleared Rk's confusion.
"What i need to do?" Rk asked.
"Abduct her & keep her safe for some days. Then u have to bring her to Switzerland where i'll build a palace for her & keep her like a queen, my queen." Sultan answered with a smile.
"Nahh.. Not my type of job ! Baby sit a girl.. Nahh.." Rk discarded the idea "Give me some killing activity."
"She is shamsher malik's daughter" sultan grinned maliciously as Rk's jaws clenched & his cold eyes turned into fire "Abducting her, mr.malik's daughter, his princess.. Means to kill him with slow poison. It will serve two purposes. Both ur & mine. I'll get my madhu & u'll get ur revenge"
"Plan ?" Rk asked without wasting time.
"Wait till she, My madhu attract some enemity on her. Then abduct her. No one will think that we are behind her kidnapping. All will doubt her enemies. Wait for some days till u get my order. When the palace will get ready u'll bring her to me" sultan ended as Rk nodded.
"And remember she is very delicate. Dont hurt her."

---~---

*After some days*

"Sikky how can u cheat on my sister ?" Trishna asked enraged as madhu stands there sadden.
"Trishna..u know ur sister & madhu u.." Sikky turned to madhu "We are best friend. We are in relation for 2 Years & have u ever thought to take our relation forward ? No.. U didnt even kiss me for once & i am a man & i have needs" sikky growled.
"what needs ? Dont u trust urself that u can produce children ?" Madhu asked as sikky pull his hairs.
"okk..not children but a child.. Even one sperm would do. But here u r f**king around to know that u r impotent or not" trishna burst out laughing hearing madhu while sikky looks at her flabbergasted.
"anyways..now i doubt u.. So its over..end..finish..goodbye" madhu stumped her feet walking out.

---~---

"Happy anniversary mom-dad" madhu said lovingly embracing malik.
"My princess.. Thankyou.. But i want gift, what my princess got for me ?" Malik said lovingly caressing madhu's hair.
"here..see" madhu forwarded a small wrapped box. Padmini opens it & burst out laughing.
"Madhu..grow up baby" padmini said adorably looking at madhu as madhu pick up the teady bear holding a diary key ring, which she brought for her dad.
"Isnt it cute & u can write here important things too. I brought it with my own money"
"ofcourse princess..ur all gifts are precious to me" malik said
"And mine?" Trishna probes
"haha..my both daughters" malik said enveloping both madhu & trishna.
"Dad..mom..party is downstairs..lets go" they went downstairs as they has thrown their anniversary party.

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"Thats my piece of cake" madhu squealed running behind Trishna who has ran with madhu's piece of cake.
"I want to eat that creamy rose" madhu whined while running when
THUD !!
"ouch" madhu winced as she found herself hugging the floor. She looks up to find a man..no..Greek god with dark eyes looking at her. She was running mindlessly when she collide with this man & fell down on the ground with the impact of collusion.
"help.." She said cutely forwarding her hand to the man to fetch her up. But the man didnot help her instead he kept staring at her with his cold stares.
"okk" madhu Stretched as she help herself & stands on her feet matching his height.
"u are like wall.. So tough" madhu said amazed.
"what u eat ?" Madhu asked excited as he looks at her with bored cold expression.
"pardon..do u have ur sound box defected ? Why dont u talk then" she frowned & without answering her he walk past her.
"Oh helloo.. Am talking to u.. Pardon.. But are u deaf too ?" Madhu yelled behind him but he is already gone.

---~---

"Madhu"
"hmm"
"u shouldnt have called sikky impotent" trishna said sipping on her cold drinks.
"why ?"
"men's ego are badly hurt. What if he plans revenge on u ?"
"I havent thought of it didu..but if he come in front of me naa i'll beat him blue & black" madhu winked at trishna.

---~---

"Am taking this hand bag" madhu declared standing on bed posing with a hand bag.
"Madhu thats for mom" trishna chided her as they are sitting in their parents room after party opening the gifts. Malik & padmini were sitting on a couch admiring their children.
"I opened the gift so its mine & mom's belongings are mine as mom is mine" madhu winked.
"Mom is mine too" trishna said offended.
"see..it matches with my dress too" madhu is wearing a pair of jeans & sleeveless loose top of choco brown colour.
"Madhu keep it" padmini smiled.
"Then i am too keeping this jewellery set" trishna said showing a gift.
"Keep it" padmini said.
"Now enough princesses.. Its too late. Go & sleep. Tomorrow u can open the rest" malik said picking up the gift wrappers which his daughters have scattered.
"Okk..dad night !" Both of them shouted & ran out holding their gifts.

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"Madhu dont sneak in my room to steal jewellery set" trishna warned as they walk to their respective room.
"ha.. I am not interested even. Am too tired. I'll fall on bed & dozed off" madhu said while entering her room & closing the door.
"Night lamp" she went to switch on the night lamp to lit up the The dark room when she felt some movement near the window. She quickly switch on the lights & went to window to do her lil survey.
"Strange but u do saw some movement" she shrugged seeing no suspicious thing. She climb on her comfy bed, switched off all lights except night lamp & close her eyes falling on her back.
A pair of dark eyes watch her every moves hiding behind a shelf. He watch on as her breath became slow & stable, her chest rising in a periodic interval. He came out from his hiding place & look around the room. He went to windows & opened it wide. He came back to the bed on which madhu is sleeping peacefully. He kneeled on bed with his one leg touching the floor & other leg bent on the bed. He looks at her sleeping form for a minute with lamp's light falling on her face.
"what sultan saw in her that he fell for her. She is just a piece of showpiece with good looks" the man, Rk, said in disapproving tone.
"but with u i'll make malik beg for his death" rk spoke viciously in a low voice with clenched jaws. He fetch out his handkerchief & a bottle from his pocket. He sprayed the liquid on his handkerchief & draws out a rope & tape. As he is going to keep his handkerchief on her mouth she turned to other side in her sleep covering her face with a pillow.
"Stupid girl" rk breath out in frustration. He climbs down the bed & move to other side where her face is. Again as he is going to drug her she change her position turning to other side in sleep. Rk curled his fingers in a fist & watches her for sometime. In every 5 minutes she keeps changing her sleeping position. Sometime starfish, sometime fetus, sometime god know's what. She kept rotating in her bed drawing the patience out of rk. Having enough rk kneel on bed hovering over her he turned her harshly towards him as she is sleeping on her stomach.
Madhu scrunch her eyes feeling the disturbance & the next moment she felt something pressing over her nose. She opens her eyes wide & looks at The man above her with angry eyes staring at her. She tried to shout but only muffle sound came out. Then she starts wriggling under him. Seeing her twisting & turning rk press the handkerchief over her mouth more firmly & holds her both hands in his grip, lying above her keeping his body weight on her to stop her body movements. Madhu tries to push him off but her senses were giving up as her eyes shut closed & her body becomes limp.
Rk watched her going motionless & withdraw himself off her. He roughly remove her hairs from her face & ties her both hands on her back & sealed her mouth with tape. Blindfolding her he lift her up from bed. As he was walking towards the window his eyes falls on paper. He thinks for sometime & tossed madhu back on bed. He took the paper & pen.
"no one will suspect us.. All will doubt her enemies" rk remember sultan's saying. He wanted to let shamsher malik know that he, RK is taking madhu with him.
"But that will create problem for sultan..the less u know, the better is for u malik. But ur pain is not going to reduce shamsher malik" rk whispered as he scramble something on paper. Leaving the note he lifts madhu in his arms & make his way out of the window.

---~---

*Next morning*

"Trishna where is madhu ? Call her for breakfast'' padmini said while setting plates.
"Last night she was tired so must be sleeping" trishna mumbled & went to madhu's room.
"Madhu..madhu. " she calls for madhu seeing the opened window & messy bed
"Madhu are u in washroom ?" Trishna checked the washroom but it's empty too.
where can she be ?" Trishna thought as he eyes fall on a note.

"Dad..dad..mom" malik heard trishna's yelling. Malik exchange a look with padmini as they rush to madhu's room.
"Trishna what happened ?" Malik inquired.
"dad see" with trembling hands trishna forwards the note.
"PAY TIME" Two simple words were written on the paper
"where is madhu ?" Padmini asked on instinct.
"she is Nowhere" trishna answered.
"my daughter..my madhu is kidnapped'' malik stumbled back in shock.
"What will happen to madhu now ? What will the kidnappers do with her ?" Padmini cried.
"who did this ? How will i find my daughter ?" Malik broke down.
"dad..dad..i..i think its sikky. Few days ago he & madhu had a fight"
"i'll call police now" malik draws out his phone.

---~---

RK was driving his car with unconscious madhu beside him. As the drug effect vanished madhu gain consciousness. She can feel the warmth of sun on her skin, she can hear the sound of car, she can feel the winds passing by but THATS IT !! She cant move, she cant speak, & worst she cant see.
How would it feel like when u slept peacefully perfectly alright in night & in morning u found ur eye sight missing. Being petrified madhu started wriggling in her seat fervently, low whimper escaping from her lips. Rk looks at her irritated as she is causing disturbance to his driving.
"stop twisting.. Else i'll push u out of the moving car" rk said sternly. Madhu hears him saying & starts jumping on her seat throwing her legs. Rk pulled the brakes suddenly making madhu's head bang on dashboard. Madhu stops moving with the sudden stoppage. Rk pulled her arm harshly making her face him & went close to remove her blindfold. Madhu felt his breath on her face & she tries to move back when rk again pulls her to himself.
"If u want to see the colours, sit straight" Rk ordered & madhu nodded her head. Rk pull out the blindfold as madhu flutters her eyes & the first thing she saw is light, sunlight outside the window. She took a deep breath & turn to looks at jet abductor. She frowned looking at him while he continues to give her angry glare. Madhu turns her left & kick the car's door hardly.
"Hey girl.. There are more ways to break ur legs rather than kicking my car, like make u lie in front of my car & ride the car on u" rk spoke gravely making madhu's eyes go round.
RING-RING
Rk diverted his eyes from madhu & see the caller ID 'Sultan'
"yes" he said looking directly at madhu & madhu too match his gaze listening to one side convo of Rk.
"Madhu is with u ?" Sultan asked from another side
"yes" rk replied in monosyllable keeping his eyes fix on madhu.
"Where are u ?"
"On the way'' madhu frowns at his answer.
"Send me a pic of madhu" sultan said excitedly. Rk rolled his eyes inwardly & quickly clicked a snap of madhu making her wonder.
After few seconds again Rk's cell rang.
"what ?" Rk asked.
"In what worse condition have u kept her ? She is in pain cant u see ! Open her hands & mouth & feed her something now. I want her all hail & healthy as before" sultan ordered. Rk looks at madhu who is sitting uncomfortably with her hands tied on her back.
"Okk.." Rk said & cut the call. Rk move close to her to remove the tape when madhu moves back again seeing him coming close.
"Sit straight" Rk hissed shaking her by her arms. He chastely opens her hands from her back & in seconds tied them in front so that she cant use her hands to save herself from him. Madhu looks on as he removes the tape from her mouth.
"u are the same guy from my party naa.." As soon as Rk remove the tape she begins speaking. Without answering her Rk moves back & draws out a bottle of water & food packet from car's back seat.
"How dare u kidnapped me ?" Rk opens the food packets.
"And how did u enter my room ?" Rk gave her his deaf ears & opens the water bottle.
"U know naa.. Its ill manner to enter someone's room without knocking" she said as rk gave her u-r-unbelievable look. Here he has kidnapped her & she is talking about door knocking.
"The party was meant for guests to eat, have fun & go back but u stayed in my house without permission and..."
Rk hold her mouth with his left hand & put the bottle in her mouth to stop her questionnaires & make her drink water BUT madhu starts coughing with the sudden flow of water Down her throat. Rk remove the bottle from her mouth & wait for her coughing to die down.
"u were not invited in our party right, then how did u came.. I should have doubt u when u were looking at me like that.." She said as soon as her coughing stopped. Rk thrust the bottle in her tied hands between her palms.
"Drink." He said.
"No.. U might have mixed something in water'' madhu shake her head in negative.
"Fine die then..!! Without food & water" he snapped on madhu snatching the bottle from her.
RING-RING
Sultan calling again.
"Hello" rk answered the call.
"Madhu ate food ?" Sultan inquired.
"No" rk replied in an uninterested tone.
"What.. Then make her eat"
"am not her f**king baby sitter" rk said loudly exasperate with the girl & her question & sultan's chanting to take care of her. He is much better with killing people rather than handling stupid girl.
"Rk she is ur responsibility until u get her to me & we have talked it out before too" sultan said sternly.
"Fine.." Rk cuts the call & looks at madhu annoyingly. Opening the cap of the same bottle he drinks some water from it & forwarded the bottle to madhu.
"Its safe.. Here drink it" madhu looks at him for sometime, then took the bottle from him with her tied hands & drinks some water. Rk took back the bottle from her & put a sandwich in her palm to eat.
"if u wanted to stay in my home guest room was there" madhu spoke again munching on her sandwich, which she considered safe to eat for some reasons. Rk thrusts one more sandwich in her palm & starts driving.
"U can talk right.. Yes.. U talked on phone then why aren't u answering me?" She asked again taking a bite.
"i am kidnapped & i have right to know why i am kidnapped" she demanded but Rk didnot answered.
"Didnt u liked the food in the party & thats why u kidnapped me ? But guess what i didnot made that food" madhu said trying to find logic behind her kidnapping.
"shut up !" Rk said hearing her stupid Logic.
"My dad is not rich.. Even if u call for extortions he cant give u money"
"I dont want money" rk stated straightly looking ahead.
"Then why did u kidnapped me ? Its not like i did something to u earlier & u are taking revenge on me cause i dont know u" madhu said trying to know why she is kidnapped.
"Not u.. Through u am taking revenge on someone else" rk said with clenched jaws.
"who ?" Madhu furrowed her brows & rk choose to keep silent, driving without answering her.
"Okk dont tell.. But dont go on silent mode okk" madhu pleaded taking bite of her sandwich.
"see.. Today u'll take revenge on someone.. Tomorrow they will take revenge on u.. And this will go on forever.
Darkness cant drive away darkness, only light can..
Hatred cant drive away hatred, only love can.
" Madhu spoke softly. Rk kept his face straight but something stir in his heart after years with her words.
"shut up.. Am not interested in listening to ur quotes" he spat back.
"All i wanted to say is am useless to u. U wont get money for me. My dad dont have that much money. Plz send me back" madhu tried once again to persuade him.
"U are human & thats too a girl" rk spoke while driving.
"So..?"
"There are lot of uses of human girl in this world."
"How is that related to me ?" Madhu asked not getting a thing of what he is saying.
"Kidnapping..human trafficking..trading..selling..money.. Ring a bell ?" Rk asked viciously making madhu gulp with her eyes go round with the possibility of what else he can do with her.
Rk looks at her frightful expression & smirked inwardly. Well, he is not gonna do anything to her but he can derived satisfaction in her silence. She irritate him too much with her talking.
"U are going to sell me.." She asked after a while with shaky voice, eyes ready to well up.
Rk glance at her & recognize the fear in her voice. He is a killer definitely, but not a monster. He had never taken advantage of woman & never will. He is with sultan in all his illegal business, drug, murder, black money but not in girls trafficking.
"No.. That was simply an answer to ur question that in what all ways u can be use" rk replied assuring her that he wont do anything nasty with her.
"Phew.. U scared me" madhu heave a sigh of relief & took another bite of her sandwich.
"How did u get me out of my house ?" She popped up with another question.
"U drugged me too.. What if i didnt gain consciousness ?"
"U kidnapped in my sleep, u know i was in verge of getting a heart attack" and again she started with her stupid blabbering. Rk closed his eyes to control himself from blasting on her.
"And my hands.. Dont u have idea that it can stop the flow of blood in my muscles" madhu said finishing off her sandwich.
"And my eyes.. How scared i am of dark. Thats why i kept night lamp on" Rk stop the car abruptly & glare her hardly.
"with that blindfold i was having difficulty in breathing.. What if i would die and..." Rk didnt let her speak any further as he swiftly put the tape back on her mouth making her go silent.
RING RING
"Speak.." Rk said receiving the call.
"Rk.. Did madhu ate ? U freed her ?" Sultan inquired.
"Yes..madam Queen is alright" rk replied sarcastically "She ate food & i freed her too" he lied the last part looking at madhu.
"Good rk.. She is very sweet, handle her softly okk.. & take her to out place for now" sultan said.
"Too much sweetness leads to diabetics." Rk said & cut the call. Madhu tries to say something but only unclear whimper came out of her mouth.
"U want me to blindfold u again ?" Rk ask calmly. Madhu shook her head in negative.
"Then keep quiet" Rk snapped at her & starts driving the car.

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Sultan is in Switzerland building madhu mahal..😆
Hope u all like the start..!! More to come..!!
Plz.. LIKE & COMMENT.
Thanks
Aaniya
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INDEX
Part-1 above

Part-2 on Page 14
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4723956/rishbala-ss-impassioned-completed-pg-71-30-11?pn=14
Part-3 on Page 23
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4723956/rishbala-ss-impassioned-completed-pg-71-30-11?pn=23
Part 4 on pg 38
Part 4 on page 38

Part 5 on page 48
Part 5 on page 48

Part-6 on page 61
Part-6 on page 61

Part-7 on page 71
Part-7 (last part)

For my other works.. visit Aaniya's Book's book..!! 😉 😳
Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago
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Yipeee me first
Congrats for your new fiction Aaniya 👏
And yeah your like button is working...😆 So before it ditches you, you have clicked how many ever likes possible 😆

Coming to the update...brilliant 👏
I actually thought the guy at first is RK...but I didn't think the girl would be Madhu...coz she was little stupid 😆 But my guess gone wrong...it's Sultan 😆 The invincible cold hearted, cunning, manipulative Underworld don, a drug dealer, murderer is fallen for Madhu that too at first sight 🤣
Madhu is a thief nah? Stole Sullu's heart at first instance itself? 😆

He even asked his men to keep a watch on her...but no harm 😆 Sorry...I didn't even feel disgusted but I found funny...And like Shah Jahan who built Taj Mahal for his dead wife, Sultan is building Madhu Mahal...but unfortunately not in India, but in Switzerland 😆 Or it would have been 8th wonder right? 😲😆😆

Seriously...Madhu talks a mile...not caring if the guy is pointing a gun at her or even if some guy kidnaps her 😆 Shit! 😆 Even I felt like closing her mouth with that tape...but I expected RK to do it by other ways...you know what I mean 😉 😳

Sikky! Trish suspects him to be the kidnapper...my god! He is spineless...but let him suffer for cheating Madhu!
Malik family appear to be so warm and affectionate...then what's the prob between FIL and SIL?

And I think Shamsher Malik killed his family or something like that...or he misunderstood that Madhu's father is a killer can't say anything for sure 🤔


And here comes our Hero...a killer but not a monster as he says 😆 OUR RK! 👏
His intro 👏
Madhu's intro is also too good...she is an Angel!

And yeah the title is so catchy...and kudos to you for choosing it 👏 I opted for google momma or baba 😆to check the meaning 😉

Heheh...Madhu made Sultan say sorry but she can't make RK help her when she fell down 😆 Such cold heart han? Rk! Man! He is too much...I loved it how he didn't give a damn to her...and called her a showpiece with good looks 😆
One doubt...are u sure that Sullu won't ditch RK? Coz I am sure RK is gonna take care of her in Swiss...then either of them will fall in love with each other and can't live without the other...so u sure that Sullu is good to his brother? 😕

Sultan! 🤣 He wants Madhu to be hale and healthy...wants her to eat, drink and be happy...what sort of a lover is he? He didn't see her after that first incident...didn't confess his love...in short Madhu would have forgotten his existence right? Then how can he expect her to be happy? But...Madhu she is not much sad about being with RK 😆 She is sad that he tied her beautiful eyes making her scared of the dark...her hands making the blood to stop 😆 What the f**k? 😆 She is so adorably crazy ❤️ And yeah way too expressive for RK!

Is she pissed off with RK talking on the phone but not talking to her? LOL 😆

How she sleeps in weird positions? Star fish, jelly fish and all sorts of fishes and baby positions 😆 Poor RK! Got frustrated 😆
I love RK babysitting Madhu! Should thank Sullu for believing him and allowing Rishbala to come closer...


Guess I have used too much of emoticons 😆
But I don't have patience to count it unlike Sudha akka 😆

Thanks for the PM. And update any one of your stories soon 😃
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Interesting start
So rk a goon
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Wow. ..Aani. ..
congrats for new story!!!!
it's unique. .dear. .
rk. ..god kitna kam bolta hai. .
cool man. ..
madhu. ..madam to chatter box hai. ...
her situation me bolti. ..rahi hai. ..
and sultan. ..i am going to laugh in climax for his condition! !
milk ke security guards cat ko bana diya. .lolz. .
silky. ..needs baby.!!! Ha .
poor soul ab police stations jaya ga. ..
trishna us he chode ge nahi. ..
back to the story...
awesome story! !!
as well your unique style. ..
love it. ..
firstly sultan. ..put gun ..just she dropped some water...awe. ..
but when he see madhu. ..love at first sight! ! really! !?
and madhu what a idea to solve problems. .

rk finally our hero entry! !!
he is so cold heart man...may be he have really bad past. .and reasons was malik. .
lo sultan made rk ..baby sitter. ..na..lady sitter. .oh vi crazy chatter box lady ki ...
and party. .
madhu hugs floor and rk didn't help her it was rude. ..
gift part was cute...
rk kidnapped madhu ..having lots of difficulty. .
lolz..this girls do...yoga in sleep. .
finally he kidnapped. .
and car parts. .
girl..she is totally crazy.
u are not invite in party ..my dad have not money ...like questions. ..
and i laugh. .when she say...party food was so good , so u kiddnap me..but I didn't cook. .
and rk ..only speak with sultan ..
and sultan I laugh hard. ..
poor boy don't know what happens in next. ..
and poor sikky us k to band bagne wali hai. ..
and
last madhu mahal. ..
lolz...madhu to hogi but banane wala nahi hoga. .usme basne k lia. ..
amazing story. ..
update soon. ..dear. .
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Aaniya congrats on the new story, waiting to read.
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quick comment -
title - perfect!

Madhu - Looney!

Rk - Moody!!

Trishna - Greedy!!

Sultan - Rowdy!!

Mallu and paddu - Oldie!!

okay... coming to the update in detail..

interesting start... like everyone even i thought Rk was the guy who pointed gun at trishna and went gaga for Madhu... but u fooled all of us... i hate u Evil for showing such an impressive intro for that ullu sullu... LOL!!!😆

Rk works for that brick face sultan? 🤢
but i know what will happen in the end if my guess goes right... 😉

Madhu is cute and a big chatterbox... she really pissed Rk... i was expecting him to slap her right on her face when she kept on and on... but he behaved like a gentleman... 😳

What? he didn't find her attractive? Man, u will soon eat ur own words... u r gonna steal Sultan's lover... and Madhu will also fall for u and make u fall for her...😆

why Rk decided to kidnap madhu.. no correction babysit madhu after hearing she is Malik's daughter? is Rk wants to take revenge on malik? if so why? what he did? curious to know...

looking forward to read the next... 😳
thanks dear...😃

Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aaniya congrats on the new story, waiting to read.

thankyou Ananya.. Will post soon..⭐️
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Niceee Update.
In starting part ,I thinked the fighting members are Madhu & Rk.
But that is Sultan and Trishna.
I guessed wrongly.
But I like that twist.
Sultan is don.Love at first sight.Vareva...
Rk is right hand of him.
Normally I have read Sultan & Rk are enemy or friends in stories.
But this time ,Rk is working for him.
So unique...
Rk Entry is damn good.
Sikky character is always comedy.
But here he is a small villain.
Any don fall in love.They will become like joker as sultan
He is over caring about madhu.
Madhu is always chater bOx.
Always talking..
RK kidnapped her.
But She asked ,How dare u come inside without knocking?
which kidnapper will inform ?
So funny.
Sultan said to Rk,"She is sweet girl"
No boss,Over sweet bad for health.
He is a murderer ,not a monster..Nice.
Feel bad for ,She is irritating him.
Madhu Said to him"Why did u kidnap me?,I didn't cook that foods.
Super comedy.
She kidnapped By him.But she is acting like child.
Her position in bed star fish ,jelly fish like babies
Rk irritated of her sleeping position changed by her.
Sultan is think him like a ShajAhan.He is going to build Madhu Mahal .
Why the dons are become comedian,After fall in love?
In coming episode Rk is going fall for her.
What is the matter behind RK & Malik?
I am waiting for known.
Update soon
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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I'm here now. Res for comment...

Unres
OK..so that was Sultan...underworld don..
Trishna was saved by Madhu but her life, it's in
danger now...

So, Sikky and her broke up happened..
Madhu, she is too much...told him impotent and all..
Haha...poor Sikky...

Rk...oh no!! Knowing Sultan is don, I thought
Rk must be some cop or a good person
but he is Sultan's right hand...
How mercilessly he killed that man...
And his cold stare...

So Sultan wants to make mahal for Madhu..
And he is asking Rk to take care of her...
Thank god, he did so...
Now staying with Madhu, he will be changed..

Rk loves killing, killing soothes his mind..
what does it mean? Does he have dark past?
And what has Malik done? Must be he has
done something, so he wants to take revenge.
Has he killed Rk's parents? Just guessing..

Hmm...Madhu seems carefree, bubbly,
innocent girl...
So she met Rk...haha she was talking non stop
and he was not replying anything..

Hmm..so he kidnapped her...
Poor Rk...too much hard work...
she changing side so quickly...

Sultan...here he is being irritated and he is calling
frequently to take care of her..
Madhu seems so innocent..poor Madhu..

Haha...here she is kidnapped and she is
bothered about him coming without knocking lol..
And her logic, food was not good, so kidnapped,
she is too much..

She is telling quotes to him...so who is Malik?
I thought he is some minister, but she is telling
repeatedly he doesn't have money..

Rk succeeded in feeding her..
Madhu...oh she became scared thinking about
him selling her..

Rk is not in human trafficking...glad to hear it..

Interesting concept...loved it..
You're expert in giving new - new type of
couples...and this one too..
Looking forward to read more on them

Thanks for pm..

Edited by kaustavi - 8 years ago

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