RM SS - In the Toils of Despair!! updated - part 2 on 22/07 pg 9 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous update.Little vani is suffering from cancer n Madhu is facing all alone.Why rk is not with them vani is his daughter having same habit of sleeping with fist.Past flashback shows he loves her.what happened then.update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rk madhu had shared a very loving.. Caring.. & affectionate relation.. Then how come things changed so drastically...!!!! Madhu's lil daughter is in pain.. Being a mother.. She is trying everything she can do.. Awesome update.. Thanks for pm.. :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update, loved it and feeling bad for Vani, poor little baby has to go through so much pain. Hope R.K helps Madhu. If Rishbala were so much in love why did they go separate ways.
Curious to know what happens next.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Simran could you please PM me so that i don't miss on the stories you write.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Well .. that is a painful concept, i hope no parent suffer from such pain with their kids and vice versa
smoothly written, liked both prologue and the first chapter, waiting to see how it all fall in coz i don't think that RK knows yet .. no parent as bad as they might be will be able to smile and that too a dimple wale smile knowing their kid is dying .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow, this story is going to be an emotional roller coaster. I can feel it.

How did these two love birds end up like this?? And how can RK turn his back on his daughter?

Many questions!!!!

Good luck.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Hey lovelies thanks for liking the first part and showering your wonderful comments on it.
Please keep encouraging us like this.🤗

Here goes the next part enjoy!😉


PART 2

Madhu woke up still holding Vani's hand as she felt some movement...she quickly got up and first thing she saw was Vani who just now came out of her unconscious state...she smiled looking at Vani.

"Baby just wait I'll call the doctor" Madhu said in agitation.

She was about to call the doctor when the doctor himself entered the room.

"Hey princess is awake...how are feeling now" Doctor asked Vani.

"Now I am feeling okay doctor uncle" She had this habit of saying the complete sentence.

"Okay then let me check you" Doctor examined vani and read her prognosis report. Madhu was continously looking at the doctor wanting to know what he has to say about Vani's condition. Doctor read the reports carefully and turned down his head...and Madhu knew what he has to say.

The doctor looked at Vani when she called him in her sweet dulcet voice "Doctor Uncle"

"Yes little lady" Doctor replied

"Can I go home today...please...you know what doctor uncle Vivian Dsena is entering today in my favourite serial Madhubala...I can not miss it"

Yes Vani who was just six years old but still she was a huge huge fan of Actor Vivian Dsena... So, as today her favourite actor was entering the show she couldn't afford to miss it.

"Vani" Madhu stopped her.

"No dear you can't go home today" The doctor interrupted giving a despairing look.

Vani made a puppy face after listening to it but then again doctor prompted

"But...TV is right in front of you...so you can watch your show here...no one will disturb you...alright?"

"Sacchiii??...Thank you doctor uncle" Vani replied in excitement.

Madhu couldn't help but smile seeing Vani's excitement.

"Miss. Malik" The doctor called Madhu

"Y...Yes doctor" Madhu stammered.

"Come to my cabin I need to talk to you" Doctor said solemnly

Madhu gulped in nervousness and nodded in reply while the doctor left.

"Vani" Madhu said caressing her hair.

"Yes glycerine" Vani answered.

Yes she calls her mother with this name whenever she felt that her mother is upset or about to cry. And yes she learned this from her favourite show Madhubala.

Madhu rolled her eyes and said "I am not gonna cry...so don't call me with that name"

She giggled listening to that

"I'll be back in few minutes...till then no masti okay?"

"Oh fo mumma...I am lying on the hospital bed...what mischief I'll do here?"

Vani was a kid so she didn't realise what she was saying but Madhu did realise it. She hugged Vani instantly.

"I'll be right back" Madhu said while breaking the hug.

She turned around and was about to leave when Vani stopped her

"Glycerine"

Madhu turned around

"I hate tears"

This gave Madhu shivers...and she remembered how RK used to say the same line in the same manner. She looked at Vani again and wiped her tears while Vani gave a thumbs up in return. Madhu smiled and left the room.


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Madhu sitting in doctor's cabin

"Look Miss. Malik...we have already told you before max to max she has only an year to survive...and untill we get the bone-marrow we can't do anything...her condition is getting worse day by day...I am afraid If nothing is done soon we will lose.." the doctor was about to say when Madhu interrupted.

"But doctor from where will i get the donor...Vani is my only daughter doctor." Madhu said with a pain in her voice.

"Then I don't have much to say Miss. Malik...I am sorry" Doctor said in a low voice and left the room to attend his patients.

Madhu lost her patience and cried sitting the cabin.

"Madhu I'll be with you even if I am not there with you."

This is what RK had promised to Madhu and this was echoing in her head while she cried her heart out"

"Why did you leave me RK when i needed you the most...why" She said burdened with mixed emotions of anguish and despair.


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RK was busy going through the project files when suddenly his phone rang in between.

"RK" the boy said from the other side trying his best to make his voice loud and angry.

"Oh no...I think chief is very angry with me" RK said closing his file and resting his back on the chair.

"Yes I am...you promised me something do you remember?" The boy said in the same tone.

"Ummm...yes yes chief...I do remember" RK said scratching his forehead.

"Then why didn't you take me along with you?"

"Because you were sleeping at that time...I didn't want to wake you up...plus i had some important work so I came here...but now I am almost done with it so get ready...I coming home to pick you ok?"

"Awesome...Thank you dada...you are the best" The boy jumped in excitement.

"Okay be ready I'll be there in 20 minutes"

"Done dada"

"Bye champ!!"

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Vani always hated the hospital environment but it was an irony of fate that now her life was only surrounded by hospitals and doctors. At this age in which kids to go school and play with toys she had to spend nights in the hospital and play with injections.

Vani was again in the effect of infusions and fell asleep. Madhu thought of get something for Vani as she was badly missing her toys in this horrible environment. So Madhu left for the near by mall.
She was at kids corner where she saw a beautiful doll which she thought Vani will love it...so she decided to get it for her and then headed towards the billing counter.

"Ouch" Madhu said when she got bumped with someone.

"Sorry"

She looked down and saw a kid standing with his head titled up looking at her with those innocent eyes. By looking at him automatically a smile covered her lips.

"It's okay beta..." Madhu asked softly touching his chin...and looked here and there and by not seeing anyone with him she asked him "Have you come alone?"

"No" the boy instantly replied.

"Are you parents here?"

"Yes"

"Where are they? Madhu asked him thinking that he got lost in this mall.

"Why??...i am a big boy...I can take care of myself" The boy said furrowing his brows.

Before Madhu could ask him anything further a voice came from his behind.

"Arjun...Arjun" A lady came calling his name.

Madhu looked at the lady coming towards them.

"Arjun where were you?" The lady asked him getting worried

"i was here only mumma...I got bumped into Aunty" the boy said pointing towards Madhu.

"Oh I am sorry...did he hurt you" The lady asked madhu.

"No no...It's totally fine don't worry" Madhu replied with a smile.

They ladies talked for few minutes and then introduced themselves

"By the way...I am Deepali Kundra"

"Madhubala Malik" Madhu replied

"Arjun...Arjun" Again someone called him

"Oh fo...first you and now dada" Arjun said to Deepali getting irritated

"Arjun where were..."

RK was about to say further but he stopped in mid way seeing Madhu standing in front of him. At that very moment the time stood still for both of them. Madhu's heart skipped several beats seeing him after 7 long years. Those moments which they had spent together were fresh in her mind all over again. She couldn't believe what was happening with her. She had decided not to meet him again in her life. But here he was standing in front of her after so many years...BUT even he was not the same RK whom she knew. Now he was married to someone else and had a son too.

"And he is my husband..." Deepali was about to say his name when Madhu prompted in between

"Rishabh Kundra" she said while a tear rolled down her cheek.

Madhu had many things to say, many questions to ask but she couldn't ask...she just couldn't...and without wasting anymore time quickly left from there.


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Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res!
unres!


firstly... i m so happy for making Dips my darling as Rk's wife instead of Ria... 😆

oh! so now only Rk & madhu r meeting after 6 yrs... for a minute i was like... didn't they already met & Madhu begged Rk to help her in saving their daughter?? then i check the first part... then went back to prologue... so it all happened in prologue... & now only Madhu is knowing Rk is married to dips & also having a son...

Why i feel Dips is not bad in this story? didn't she seem polite in the mall with madhu??

i wonder what happened in the past & how Rk & madhu separated...
hmm... vani is 6 yrs... Rishbala lastly met was 6 yrs... so did Rk left madhu when she gave birth to vani?? but then he didn't knew abt vani being his daughter before right? may be they parted before knowing the fact madhu was pregnant with his child...

hmm... what's Arjun's age? if he is older to vani then Rk must be married to Dips first & then had an affair with madhu & abandoned her... LOL

Arjun seems so brave... & naughty demanding boy... so i guess he will boldly step forward to donate his bone marrow to his sis...

i just want vani baby to survive... it terrible to see a small baby girl suffering so much in her young age... i just got tears when vani said "i hate tears" just like her dad...

hehe.. she is calling her mom 'glycerin' & making fun of her momma... she is cute!

lots of questions! but i know its just the start of the story.. & soon u will answer to all the questions!

Thanks Seema di & Sim baby!

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No no no no NO... DIPALI CAN'T BE RK'S WIFE and MOTHER of A SON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah... No please.. Maybe Dipali was Pregnant with Someone else And Rk helped her by accepting her and her son and that is the only reason Rk is ready to For his son's bone marrow transplant to Vani.. Poor Vani I can't see her like this.. That's it... Please update soon.. Can't wait anyone.. My heart is thumping is loudly!!!!
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Awesome update, loved it.
Poor Vani in so much pain cant see the little girl in pain and so is Madhu, hope R.K is not married to Deepali, Arjun is a cutiepie.
Curious to know what happens next, waiting for the next update.
Simran thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wohooo heart touching one n brilliantly written
Madhu is helpless God
Vani wanted to go to home as her fav actor Vivian Dsena was entering into meiej ...wow wat a touch..vani hi thi na seema ki hi tarah boli..I alwayz do da same chant n mom
..she never scolds me..stubborn me I sometimes really sneak out of da hospital..fr watching viv..me n vani da same crazies lol
OK nw update..madhu n Dr Convo..ufff God she can't do anything
N she met rk,his wife n son omg...she is broken but I feel fr rk too..
All n all fantastic update..but da highlight was da realistic touch of vani being Vivian fan..hats off simmi
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Edited by ...Seema... - 9 years ago

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