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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

aaah finally first chapter is up...hmmm

let me start with my guess game, first and foremost , the knife is sharp or Sullu ullu planned smthgn against RK, he felt sad that his plan didn't wrk ..hmmm
next RK Madhu are in rlatnshp for past 5 yrs and still you dnt bother to show us their romance GOSHHH 😛😛. And Dips is usual trying to lure RK who is madly in love with Madhu, GODDD why si she so chipku..
LOL RK got hurt wait he called her DIPS 😲😲 really !!!! 😆😆😆, RK ki DIPS dreamy ROFL
BTW uber cute phone conversation, I loved that cutie Madhu and sweet RK (you didn't write anything to call him naughty😉😉).
SO Dips got Madhu's no ,,so is it like Madhu is playing along with Sullu to save her RK ????? don't knw, I just got this idea lol if it isn't may be you can write another TS with that concept 😃😃
thanks for the up sweety and the update
I read your comment, started imaging ahem kiss of Rishabala
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
nice start...everything seems so beautiful n lovely...wonder what is the twist...or is madhu n sullu putting up an act at present when they have preplanned everything before hand...waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Unresed my comment on page. 8
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
nice story
i am fine with anything just dont kill MY Rk 😆😃😛
waiting for update ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Awesome update, loved it to the core.
Everything seems to be fine then what could be the twist.
Curious to know.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Sorry for late comment.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: vishuv

HEY ishu dear thanks for the pm!!

OMG in the first scene itself you are giving a trial for RK's death it seems. But my heart is so weak to take shock😆 Oh girl I can't help it from giving shocks to my readers since I love giving shocks 😈😈 BTW consume green tea and ginger for healthy heart so that later on you don't blame me if anything happens to you in the process of reading shocking updates 🤣🤣🤣

RK reminds me of actor Ajith kumar. You know him? The famous kollywood actor. He does all the stunts himself instead of a dope and ends up injuring himself. hHe is such a devoted passionate actor. Yeah till the unweddng track RK was a dedicated person whether in love or hatred or in his profession so thought to show him that way only 😛

Rishbala are so sweet. They are having a healthy relationship. Then why does madhu wants to take revenge? As far as i can see RK is not arrogant or egoistic ! which is so unlike him. Dips is a stupid vamp. Wonder why is she here. Is she really dumb or planning to separate rishbala, which i know will not happen. No force can separate them , not even you ishu😆 ROFL Baby here I am the writer so I can very well separate them or get them married 😈😈 Well I am sure by the end of the 3rd chapter you will come to know everything about these 4 characters since most of the things I have written in the 1st chappy itself😉


Why is this sultan faking concern for his bro. Such a cheap fellow. He is not worth my comment so am not saying anything about him 😡 🤣🤣 I need to keep some dialogues for that creep that is why I had to give him something to utter bullshit bcz I can't make any of my characters just stand like Christ the Redeemer 🤣🤣🤣 OK next time I will try to keep his f**king mouth shut 😆😆

All the other characters seem to be innocent. Wonder if they are indeed innocent as you portray them to be. You need to read further chapters to know if they are innocent or if they are actually different 😆😆


Glad its a TS or i couldn't hold my suspense yaar... 🤣 Courtesy to my upcoming exams that I will be sticking to this story to the point since I don't wanna continue any of my stories after my exams


Thanks for your wonderful feedback . 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: vishuv

Wanna know if you are still feeling sorry. You can reply to me first, no probs !😉


ROFL ... I do what I say and as said I replied you first 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: madhurish

First!!

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Facts:
1. Rk is so sweet!!! So hot!! So rich!! Sweet IDK but yes he's hot and rich 😉
2. Rk & Madhu are so in love!!!
3. Dipali is a good girl which is fishy!!! 🤣🤣I am not revealing if she is good or bad , you can make that out from the first chapter itself 😆😆
4. Sultan is clearly acting!!! I need to give him some dialogues na to utter since I don't want any of my characters even if it is a side character to stand like a statue of liberty 🤣🤣🤣
5. Rk loved his dad more... So that his weakness!!!
5. That chandelier dropping incident is preplanned!!! Hmm lets see if that is the case 🤔
6. Both Madhu & Sultan were not in Venice with Rk at the time of the events happening!!!
7. Madhu concern vaguely sounded fake ... Bcos sultan sounded the same too... Same set of questions... Same panicking act... Obviously every one will have more or less same set of questions when a person has met with an accident . What do you want me to ask a person who has met with an accident ?? "that are you feeling good while meeting with the accident ? What was the height of chandelier when it was set loose ??" 🤣🤣🤣 Its normal people and friends and not police to ask different set of questions Miss Lawyer 🤣🤣🤣

Issues:
1. Whether Madhu truly loves Rk?
2. Whether dipali has her own share in all this?
3. Whether dipali framed any shit to Madhu like she & rk were together? Madhu will feel cheated & took revenge on him...?
4. Is Rk blind to see sultan's true face??
5. Now the main issue is... How will Ishu complete this story in the next two parts??? Well first update really went in a fast forward mode... But still... A lot to reveal nah??
For all these 5 issues I have only 15 words to say - you will get to know answers for all your questions in the next 2 updates 🤣🤣🤣

Sorry... I dont know Case Law or illustration to quote!!! I will not pass the judgement until and unless you provide me with relevant case laws 🤣🤣🤣

Judgement!! -
Ishu J. will pass the judgement soon! Yes the D-Day is very near

Critical analysis - I feel Rk is still alive... & he will order death sentence to sultan... & madhu will be arrested & kept in Rk's arms forever!! Lets see if your judgement is correct or not 😉

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Loved the update!👏
Great going!😛
Continue soon!😳



Hmm so under Section 10000000 of Ishu's Story Act the verdict is safe and the Honourable judge will declare the judgement very soon 🤣🤣 Thanks to client Ms Sudha for liking this update session 🤣🤣🤣 The court is adjourned for now 🤣🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
@ vishuv -. "No force can separate them , not even you ishu" --- baby dont say such strong words to Ishu... This girl will show exact opposite! Lol! So u better make request... No orders or over confident dialogues! Haha

@ Ishu - green tea & ginger good for heart! Really?then Put this as a disclaimer so that ur readers with weak heart like me wont get a stoke! 🤣
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

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Im second !!! Yay Congo , Zaire , Africa , Sudan , Namibia 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Hey !! This Rk is sooo sweet ☺️ love himmm already... Aww who on this earth will not love our RK ?? ☺️☺️

Btwn dips is his faithful caring in love PA... I guess u too love in making dips always positive char like me... 🤣🤣Dips is my first love 😆😆 Although she was a vamp but I liked her strong aura and powerful acting that I turn her positive in most of my stories 😆😆

And Rk is too much in love with madhu... but wt abt her... Y does she wants a revenge... i.e to know & Im waiting for the story to unfold... Patience baby 😆

This Ullu he's one grt actor... he's so selfish & doesnt like his step bro... but loathes him & greedy for his money... During Sullu's track , people on IF used to say that he sucks in acting so I thought to make him good in acting skills in my story bcz I hate dead pan expressions 🤣🤣🤣
poor Rk he's unaware of it... Yeah RK is unaware about his bro's deeds 😭😭
I'm guessing acc to prologue...Rk will come back & avenge Ullu & finds abt madhu y she's helping sultan & may be dips helps him in his plan...coz i can she has so much of love for Rk...
I have no problem of no roamnce in this story but I wish atleast madhu & Rk be together at end & not dips & Rk... Lets see if there is any romance or not ? If Rishbala will be together or not . Oh don't worry I am not making RiPali as a couple even if Madz is negative in this story 😆😆
But lets see...wt r u going to give us...
totally...Suppperrrb update dear... 😃


Thanks a lot for your super sweet comments 😳😳

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