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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

hmmm You killed Rk

I seriously dnt understand why you are allergic to Romance ...huh so not into romance lol
let's see how you can resist as I am gng to make my FF, super hOT rofl 🤣🤣 I am not allergic to romance but I want to try something different and yeah I am waiting eagerly to read your FF . Oh god are you seriously making your FF so damn hot 😲😲😲?? Why Di why ?? Already its damn hot in the month of April and you want to make your FF also a hot one .. Fine make your FF hot bcz I have increased the temperature of my AC 🤣🤣🤣
is my RK dead, really!!!! GOD what is this story then without the main super lead , and Sullu , iske pehale the bhoot of RK kills Sullu , I am so gonna kill him 🤣🤣 Patience girl patience .. Wait how many people can claim 1 RK ?? Decide it that whose is RK ?? Yours , Sudha , Samitha or other RK fans???
Madhu seeks revenge from RK, why what did he do to her, if he does then why are you helping her to take revenge (lol) You have to read the story to know about Madhu and her intentions
and finally I will calm down coz its just the prologue and haan add atleast a cutie lil kiss to them ms.Blaze I will see if i can add some kiss or romantic stuffs b/w Rishbala 😆😆
thanks for the update and keep it up sweety


Thanks a lot Di for your comments 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Pls don't kill rk n Madhu helped Sultan in killing rk
Interesting concept


🤣🤣 Let me see if RK will be alive or dead 😆😆

Thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: madhurish

Where is the next update??😔

U told us u will post by today/ i mean yday noon?? Then where is the update!? Oh yeah... I forgot... U were busy chatting with ur husband nah? Okay fine... Excused! Post the update atleast by tmrw, BIWI!!



🤣🤣🤣 I wrote comments yesterday morning between 12 to 12.30 AM and I wrote that I will update the part tomorrow that means today . Have patience ! I will update the chapter in an hour 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze



🤣🤣🤣 I wrote comments yesterday morning between 12 to 12.30 AM and I wrote that I will update the part tomorrow that means today . Have patience ! I will update the chapter in an hour 😳



What? No!
U wrote replies on 18th... & told u will post tmrw i.e 19th noon... So 19th night i asked why u didnt update?? Dont confuse this confused soul... Then I will think all that happened in my dream...😆
Okay... I will wait... I have viva tmrw... So i will be preparing for that... Will try to peek in... If not i will read & comment tmrw evening...
Love ya!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: madhurish


What? No!
U wrote replies on 18th... & told u will post tmrw i.e 19th noon... So 19th night i asked why u didnt update?? Dont confuse this confused soul... Then I will think all that happened in my dream...😆
Okay... I will wait... I have viva tmrw... So i will be preparing for that... Will try to peek in... If not i will read & comment tmrw evening...
Love ya!


All the best for your Viva dear .. You will rock your Viva I know that 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

I have replied to everyone's comment on previous pages . If you are interested you can check the replies else enjoy this chapter 😆😆

I am going to make it a 3S because I can't make it a SS or FF since it will consume a lot of time of mines and I can't give you my time maybe from the last week of April that is why I will keep this story to the point so that I can finish it within 3 updates . Here goes the 1st Part 😛

P.S. - Ignore all type of grammatical and tense errors

P.P.S. - All those new readers who are not in my friend list , Well I am sorry guys for not sending you PM . If you want PM for the other 2 parts then you can add me to your buddy list and please feel free to comment for this chapter . Thank You 😳




PART 1



*Year 2010 , Venice*


"RK Sir we are ready with the final changes for the next

scene" , Arjun the director of the movie said


"OHK . So what's the scene??"



"Aryan (RK) will be standing under the chandelier waiting for

Dia (movie's heroine Nysha) and Rohan (Yug , villain of the

movie) will be standing near the staircase to know the answe

r of Dia . Dia will come running towards Aryan with a "Yes" ,

making Rohan angrier and he will see that his friend , Aryan is

standing under the chandelier and Rohan while giving an evil

smirk to himself will go towards the chandelier's rope and he

will cut the rope half way when suddenly his mobile ringtone

will alert Aryan and Dia that someone else is also present

here in the restaurant other than them. Rohan will hide

himself from Aryan and Dia's gaze when suddenly Dia will

notice that the chandelier is much below than its normal

height and she will push Aryan and herself from the

chandelier hitting them" , Arjun explained the scene to RK



"RK Sir ! So you want any other changes in this scene ??" ,

Arjun asked to RK when he saw that RK dint say anything

about the scene



"No ! the scene seems perfectly fine with me . We can start

the shoot"



"OK Sir . And Sir don't worry ! The knife with which Yug sir

will cut the chandelier's rope is blunt , so the rope will not cut

and we will just shift the chandelier down during the scene ,

so it's a completely safe scene"



"Yeah Arjun ! I trust you . Now get the shot ready"



"OHK Sir . Even Nysha and Yug are ready with their scenes"


"Scene 81 "Pyaar Aur Intiqaam" roll sound , camera and action"



The required scene for the movie was going perfectly fine

until the rope cutting scene , when Yug was supposed to cut

the rope halfway and his mobile was suppose to ring alerting

RK and Nysha . But things went haywire when the knife with

which the rope was supposed to be cut turned out to be a very

sharp knife and it actually cut the rope shocking Yug to his

wits end .



Yug saw that the chandelier's rope became loose which meant

that it can fall any time on the ground .



"RK move aside ... The chandelier is gonna fall on you" , Yug

said in a panic stricken voice and ran down stairs to push RK

from under the chandelier



"CUT... Yug Sir ! This dialogue was supposed to be said by

Nysha mam and not by you" , Arjun told Yug lookingin his

direction when Arjun saw that Yug was not saying Nysha's

dialogue but the truth



"RK move aside... The rope is actually been cut" , Arjun said

to RK with a horror stricken face and ran towards him



RK looked upwards and saw the chandelier that was going to

hit him any time soon if he dint move from there , and he ran

from under the chandelier when suddenly the chandelier came

with a force and hit RK on his legs



"Ahhh..." , RK said and passed out because of the instant pain



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*San Camillo Hospital , Venice*


RK opened his eyes and saw Arjun , Nysha , Yug and his

Secretary standing there with worry written all over their

faces



"RK how are you ??" , Dipli his secretary asked him with

concern and helped him to sit



"I am fine Dips and stop worrying all of you . Please" , RK said

with a smile



"Guys why are you all so sad ? Someone died or what ?? that

you guys are mourning ??" , RK asked with a smirk when he

saw that no one replied anything to his statement



"Dude I am extremely sorry . I don't know how that knife

turned out to be a sharp one and how it fell on you" , Yug who

was sitting on the chair kept besides RK's bed said with a guilt




"Chill dude . Its OK" , RK who had his leg plastered said with a

smile while patting Yug's back from his bed



"No dude... It happened because of me"



"Arey !!! I said forget that incident . I am alive and fine , and

that is more than enough" , RK said with an assurance



"I guess RK you should take rest . We will come later" , Nysha

said



"Yeah ! Even you all can go back to hotel and rest since its

already late night . I will be here with RK " , Dipali said with

an assurance



Dipali was RK's secretary since last 3 years and she loved him

since then . She would take care of RK's schedule and office

just like a dutiful wife in a hope that one day RK would

recognise her love & care she had for him. But RK was

ignorant of Dipali's feeling towards him since RK was already

in a relationship with Madhu much before Dipali had become

his secretary , and RK loved Madhu very much and so he would

treat Dipali as one of his employee and would keep only

professional attachment with her . Still Dipali would do things

to make RK realise that she loved him , like she would bring

coffee for him when she finds him exhausted with his work or

she would just take him out to restaurant if he has skipped

his food because of his work .





RK takes his phone from the side table and dials a number with

a smile



"Hello Rishu !! How are you ?? When did you gain consciousness

?? What did the doctors say about your injury ? Is the injury

too deep ?? Is it paining too much ?? Rishu say something .

Why aren't you saying something ??" , Madhu asked RK in a

worried tone from the other side of the phone



"Time up Madhu"



"What ??"



"Yes ! Your time up is up for asking questions Madhu . Madhu !

From the past 3 minutes you have asked me 5 questions and

that too without a break . Madhu take a deep breathe and

then shoot your questions" , RK said with a chuckle



"Shut up Rishu . Do you think that I am cracking some kind of

joke at the middle of the night ??" , Madhu said angrily



"No sweetheart !! When did I say that you are cracking a joke

?? It's just I that I care for you , so I asked you to take a

deep breathe because you asked me questions without pausing

for breathe . And just tell me this that how do you expect me

to answer your questions when you are non stop shooting your

questions without giving me a chance to answer ??" , RK said

with a hearty laugh



"Rishuuu"



"Madhu I am fine and its just a minor injury , and you know

that such things are common to happen with actors and

directors in movies . Stop taking tension Madhu . At times I

feel that after marriage I should stop acting because the

amount of worry you take for me , makes me concern about

you and your health"



"Rishu ! Why do you have to do such stunts risking your life ??

Do you know if anything would have happened to you then I

would have died" , Nadhu said breaking down



"Madhu Shhh... Stop crying . You know that I don't like to see

you crying . And unluckily I am not there with you in India to

wipe your tears . So please Madhu just stop crying . Acha I

am sorry . Next time I will take more safety and precautions

while shooting any scene . If necessary I will take help of a

body double . Now happy??" , RK said in a soft tone to assure

Madhu



"Rishu please don't ever leave me" , Madhu said while

controlling her sobs



"It's a promise Madhu . I will never leave you , and wherever I

will go I will take you along with me . I love you Madhu and will

always keep loving you"



"I love you too Rishu"



Before any one of them could speak another word RK's phones

battery died



"Shittt this battery . Dips... Dips..." , RK shouted her name



"What happened RK ? Do you need anything ??" , Dipali asked

RK while coming inside the room after dropping Yug , Nysha

and Arjun outside the hospital



"Can I get your phone ? My phones battery is dead and I don't

have its charger now"



"Of course RK . Here take my phone"



After Dipali gave her phone to RK , he messaged Madhu that

he will call her tomorrow from his phone after charging his

phones battery .



Madhu and RK were in a relationship since last 5 years . Madhu

wanted to gift her parents a visit to Greece on their 25th

marriage anniversary , so soon after completing her Bcom

degree she was searching for a job . In the employment news

she found out about the internship in RK industries . The

internship was for 1 month and if the manager is happy with

the interns hardwork and dedication then the interned

student will land a job in RK industry and the orientation

would be given by RK himself to the freshers . Madhu after

completing the one month internhsip landed a job in RK

industry and on the day of orientation she met RK for the

first time . After the orientation was over , the manager was

introducing the interned students to RK . When Madhu met

RK , everything changed for them . That one meeting made RK

and Madhu come closer to each other . It wasn't an instant

love but that attraction was mutual and so both decided to

know each other well before entering into a relationship .

They became friends which made them to turn into best

friends and they did all kinds of craziness which just made

them come more closer to each other thus making them to

enter into relationship . RK was bowled over by Madhu's

principle , simplicity , honesty and beauty while Madhu fell for

RK's honesty , caring and sweet nature along with his charming

personality and a strikingly handsome face .





"Oh no ! I need to call Sultan and tell him not to worry about

me else he will just take the whole world down with his anger"

, RK murmured to himself and saying this he dialled Sultan's

number from Dipali's phone .



"Hello Sultan ! Its me RK . My phones battery was dead so I

am calling you from my secretary's phone"



"Thankgod Rishu that you called me up . Arjun had called me in

the noon telling me about the accident but that time you were

sleeping because of the injections so I was waiting for you to

wake up so that I can call you . But its OK that you called me

up . How are you Rishabh ? You just scared me . I feel like

punching that Arjun for adding such a scene in the movie and

Yug for his carelessness"



"Chill Sullu . You know that such mishaps are common on a

movie set"



"But still RK . If anything would have happened to you then

???"



"Leave all that Sullu , and listen to me carefully . Sullu ! Till

the time my health is not fine and my movie doesn't get over

just take care of the business . You know that how fondly Dad

made this whole industrial and food chain business and how

much he loved his business seeing it expanding so rapidly" , RK

said with a smile



"Yeah Bro... Don't worry . I know you loved Dad so much that

you want to always keep him happy wherever he is . Just chill

and take rest Daddy's boy" , Sultan said with a chuckle

making RK laugh



"Thanks Bro"



"Oh comm'on Rishu !! Don't be so formal with me"






Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
First!!

🤣🤣🤣

Facts:
1. Rk is so sweet!!! So hot!! So rich!!
2. Rk & Madhu are so in love!!!
3. Dipali is a good girl which is fishy!!!
4. Sultan is clearly acting!!!
5. Rk loved his dad more... So that his weakness!!!
5. That chandelier dropping incident is preplanned!!!
6. Both Madhu & Sultan were not in Venice with Rk at the time of the events happening!!!
7. Madhu concern vaguely sounded fake ... Bcos sultan sounded the same too... Same set of questions... Same panicking act...

Issues:
1. Whether Madhu truly loves Rk?
2. Whether dipali has her own share in all this?
3. Whether dipali framed any shit to Madhu like she & rk were together? Madhu will feel cheated & took revenge on him...?
4. Is Rk blind to see sultan's true face??
5. Now the main issue is... How will Ishu complete this story in the next two parts??? Well first update really went in a fast forward mode... But still... A lot to reveal nah??

Sorry... I dont know Case Law or illustration to quote!!!

Judgement!! -
Ishu J. will pass the judgement soon!

Critical analysis - I feel Rk is still alive... & he will order death sentence to sultan... & madhu will be arrested & kept in Rk's arms forever!!

🤣🤣🤣

Loved the update!👏
Great going!😛
Continue soon!😳


Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
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Im second !!!

Hey !! This Rk is sooo sweet ☺️ love himmm already...
Btwn dips is his faithful caring in love PA... I guess u too love in making dips always positive char like me...
And Rk is too much in love with madhu... but wt abt her... Y does she wants a revenge... i.e to know & Im waiting for the story to unfold...
This Ullu he's one grt actor... he's so selfish & doesnt like his step bro... but loathes him & greedy for his money...
poor Rk he's unaware of it...
I'm guessing acc to prologue...Rk will come back & avenge Ullu & finds abt madhu y she's helping sultan & may be dips helps him in his plan...coz i can she has so much of love for Rk...
I have no problem of no roamnce in this story but I wish atleast madhu & Rk be together at end & not dips & Rk...
But lets see...wt r u going to give us...
totally...Suppperrrb update dear... 😃
Edited by Nithunavi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
awesome update ishu.
so rishbala are in relationship
then what was happen that madhu want revenge?
so depali loves rk.
i have strong feeling, the knife get exchange (sharp) that was sultan plan.
waiting for next.
thanks for pm.
and pls pls don't kill rk in this story.just make that was his plan to expose sultan.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze


Thanks a lot dear for your awesome comments 😳

he he great to know that 😉n welcome sweetheart 😳

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