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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: harini_

fab update and awesome banner,

Thank you so much.
thoroughly enjoyed reading it
I am glad you enjoyed it.
rk's parents wanted him to get married to trishna,
Yes... that was their plan.
rk is so guilty for what had happened he apologized to them,
Yeah, he needed to apologize.
loved this madhu she is naughty, strong and confident ,
I am glad you like Madhu so far.
rishbala were close before but why rk didn't remembered it ,
You will learn about all that later in the story.
thanks for the update


Thank you so much for your feedback.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Superb part.

I'm loving this Madhu.


Thank you so much.
Glad you like Madhu so far.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update, thoroughly loved reading it.

Madhu is bold and confident, loved her, she is exactly opposite to what he father thinks her to be. They were close to each other when they were kids but R.K does not remember it. Light hearted dark humour story, waiting to read more of it and how Rishbala are going to fall for each other.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Maria thanks for the PM dear.


Thank you so much.
Yes, Madhu is different from how her parents see her. I am happy you like her.
I am actually very happy you like the dark humor because more of that is coming.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: flowing_river

oh my my
never ever in my thoughts I would have imagine this situation...
and godd..madhu ..she is such a innocent devil...
lol...pooor rk..😉


Haha! Yeah ... you will have a better idea of how poor RK actually is going to be ... in the next chapter... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

I should have known from the way madhu and team planed the prank, she is the devil in the disguise of an angel...poor rk...I liked the scene where yuvi complained of getting hit by everyone ha ha...I think madhu used to have feeling for rishu...and now sad because he did not remember her

Good work dear,...waiting for next update


Yes... poor RK.. 😆
I am glad you are enjoying this story.
Let's see what happens next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: aravindam100

Sm1 gussd and it was ryt, depali has 2 sis. Okieee

i seriously doubt dat mohan solvd d prblm. Itzz madhuu i thnk. She must said dat he was alwayz lil dat a prankstr, bcz frm her convo wid Rk it s clear dat she remember all d childhood incidents, bt Rk doesnt. Hmmm😆 intersting. Waiting fr mreee😃


Yeah. Dipali has two younger sisters. Yes, Madhu played her role in pacifying Shamsher. Rk doesn't recall all that ... but more on that later.
Updating this in a bit... and I know you have been asking me to update entwined and I really want to but I will do it a bit later... I hope you won't mind...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Looking forward to the dark humor😃


Hope you will like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze


Incredible update again from you 👏👏👏

Thank you so much.

So RK's brain actually got jammed for a moment on hearing about Madz's blindness from Yuv - quite a usual human reaction . Ohk so Malik's and Kundra's know each other since the time their kids used to play with each other 😲
Yeah... that was a very realistic reaction I would say. Yes, Mohan and Shamshr are old friends.

🤣🤣🤣 Gosh RK and Yuv's parents are too much 😆😆😆 And the way RK hid behind Yuv RK and Yuv pushing RK so that they were side by side when Mohan called RK's name was hilarious 🤣🤣 LOL Radz and Mohan actually smacked their son's like little 4 year old kids and that line by RK that "you can wait and hit us all you want at home" was so cute and adorable 😳
Hahah! I am glad you liked it. All of them actually fight a lot but they all share strong and affectionate relationships with each other.

I must say his Kaka also knows him so well that he dint need to ask RK the reason for his defeated look 😛 OHK so the puzzle is solved as to what keeps RK calm and happy - and the answer is Ice Cream Sundae 🤣 OK jokes apart but it was so caring of Kaka that he brought sundae for RK 😳😳
Hahah! RK is a drama queen. 😆 And Kaka is family too... and he understands Rishu.

RK and Yuv are really cool ... That scene was quite comic when Yuv found RK already sitting in his car 😆😆😆
Glad you liked it.

I loved how RK apologised to Malik's and they even forgave him ... Wait !!!! Am I missing something ??? Even at the beginning of the chapter Yuv tells RK about the Malik's daughter and their childhood and even here Paddy and Shammo talks about RK and Madz being notorious and naughty in childhood BUT why doesn't RK remembers any such thing ??? Even if not minutely or accurately THEN a vague memory is always there related to childhood . So how come RK doesn't remember any such thing about Madz and even the other 2 sis ??? Did I miss something while reading or you actually wrote that ?? 😲😲😲 Can you clear my confusion ???
No you didn't miss something. Maybe ... I don't know. I will explain it all later as the story unfolds...

DAFAQ 🤣 Here poor hero is all nervous and guilty for his Indecent proposal act and all Madz said was that the proposal was lame 🤣🤣 RK must have got a shock hearing that 😆 So Madz could actually make out from his proposal that what kind of movies he watches and if she acts spooky sometimes or not 😎😎 I guess this 6th or 7th whatever sense you wanna call it is present in all the blind people . They have this extra smart sense unlike us which makes them behave like James Bond , Sherlock Holmes etc etc in all kinds of situations 😳😳😳
Haha! Yes... RK was totally taken aback. He did not know how to respond. It's actually just observation... his proposal was cheesy... and he acted so romantic... she concluded he must watch a lot of romantic comedies... 😆 but yes true... Visually impaired people do have strong intuitions..
🤣🤣🤣 Not only RK but even we came to know that why Trishu rolled her eyes on her father's statement of Madz being an innocent angel 😆
Yeah... 😆

OK now you seriously need to clear this that has RK has forgotten some important part of his life in past maybe in an accident or something ?? Bcz when Madz says that "you don't remember" and RK says "remember what ??" so it means RK doesn't remember some major incident of his past . So Madz getting blind and RK loosing some part of his memory are both inter connected through a past incident or an accident happened in the past ??? Isn't it ??
It's nothing major actually... I will explain as the story unfolds. Don't want to put forced exposition in the narrative right now... but be assured it's on purpose. And RK has not been into any kind of accident or is not suffering from amnesia.

You have marvellously written it and I am enjoying this story . Yet again this chapter was a mixture of emotions and comedy 👏👏👏 Loved the update thoroughly 😳😳😳 You are a remarkable and a noteworthy writer and I am enjoying this story . 👍🏼👍🏼


P.S. - you haven't commented on my post on page 4 for the 1st chapter 😭




Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Really appreciate it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Tinku16

hi..nice update...so kaka does'nt need an expalanation to know rk's deeds...and dips has 2 sisters...nice thought...but the most stunning and the twist of the day was madhu's boldness and 😳...comments...wow is this madhu?????? waiting to know how she got blind and how the story turns around...pl... pm me...


I am glad you are enjoying the story. Hope you will like the next chapter as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: DVDfann

have read both the update in one go.

I love this madhu character. Keep going 😃


Thank you so much. Glad you liked Madhu.

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