Rishbala TS (Part 2 - Page 5)

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Meera is atleast straight4ward i guess,but phabho smiles n hides poison inside.Sad that Trishna is a widow n she cursed Madhu that she will also suffer like her.Hope her curse doesnt affect Madhu like Kashi of BM got affected by her friend's curse.Madhu tried 2 poison food.But seeing shadow she backed out,so she could eat d food 2 prove that she hasnt poisoned it when Pabho n Trishna accused her of poisoning.Shocking is that Rishab had seen it.Liked when he said that he will not poison his wife's food.But Madhu is still adamant abt poisoning his food again.Rishab got attracted 2wards her beauty,but controlled it n divided d room 4 each.ur edits reminded me of Bajiroa n Kashi.liked 1st,4th n 5th edits

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sneha lokwani

@Snehalokwani200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

awsome update

loved it

nyc editing

update soon

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ajuswa19pm

@ajuswa19pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

wow! yaar this is going

so good m just wanna keep

starring at the pics n love d part😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

unresd my comment on page 6 😳

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Seema

@...Seema...

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

amazing job.im loving dis story.

madhu wanted to kill rishabh but then postponed it n he knowa about it..interesting

looking forward to next update

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: madhurish
I m the desperate one here...
I came first...😆😛Ha ha!! You never loses a chance in taking first place!!!

Thanks for the dedication dear..

Lovely update...
It was so filmy... So many scenes... Reminded me of jodha akbar & bajirao mastani movie...
That madhu being accused of adding poison & asking her to eat the king's food... & that curtain wall scene reminded me of jodha akbar movie... I could see only Ash & Hrithik in this update mostly... Lol!
And that bath room drooling scene reminded me a BajraocMastani... Lol!
Hehe... Madhu seriously tried to kill her patidev?😲
But i like Rk here... He hates madhu but he respects her too... Good!
Feeling sad for Trishna! Poor girl lost her hubby.. But i dont get why all r hating madhu... Even she lost her father... It happens in wars right? But all are plotting against madhu & want to see her cry or simply kill her... Hope rk will protect his biwi & also love her..
I dont know why i get this feeling that this story will have a sad ending?Bcos not even a ruler or king lived for long... They will be get killed at a very youg age.. I dont want rk to die soon... Hope these two live happily for long...
Thanks for the lovely update & pm...
Sorry for the late reply... Was little busy!

Don't worry I will not kill Rk.. And thanks for such lovely comments

Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Edits were superb👏👏👏
Thanks!
Felt bad for Trishna 😭😭and hate for Pabho and Meera😡😡

🤣🤣Oh gosh ! Rishbala fights like a 5 year old kiddo😆😆 Damn that scene was hilariously cute when RK says that he saw her taking out something from her blouse and the embarrassment they both had😳😳😆

Their fights were cute😆😆😆but bcz of Madz's plan Trishna got slapped😲😲The ;ast scene was so cute when Rk was checking out Madz and the bed making scene reminded me of MB😭😭

I am waiting for that moment when they will fall in love😳😳Now make them fall in love soon😛😛

It was a sweet yet emotional and a funny update Thanks! . Update the next part soon Will update soon.😳😳

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: RISHBALASS
Interesting story.
Continue soon.

Thank you so much!!

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sapnaf52
awesome update proova.
pabbo is here ,i hate her so much. Even I hate her!
she thinking for killing madhu.
feeling sad for trishna,but that was not her fault or madhu fault.
they hate so much how love start?
radha is nice.
interesting update,waiting for next.
thanks for pm

I am glad you like this part.. Will try to update soon!