RM FF: Entwined - Thread II (Chapter 32 POSTED) 6/04 - Page 11

Originally posted by: zelja89

Awesome update 😊

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Tremendous update Maria ⭐️👏

You are an amazing writer, do you know that ?

Thank you so much! Means a lot that you think so!

Meera and Maya talk was very nice. I enjoyed it. Meera was about to speak her heart but immediately realized whom she is talking to. I really wants to see some friendship between Meera and Maya. Both of them needs that especially Maya. Maya tells her that there is nothing between her and Rishaan. Meera asks if she believes her? I am a little confused here. Does Meera thinks Rishaan has feelings for Maya? They are interrupted by Viraj with the news of RK's kidnaping. Maya is scared and guilty, Meera is panicking for Rishaan. Maya dont know hat to do. She takes her medicines, and was about to gulp down full bottle of tablets, Rudra called her and stopped her from doing that .Sh e trusted Rudra . That's a nice thing. She have learned to trust people slowly. I am glad that she belives Rudra is a good brother and he will save Rishaan.

Yes... Meera does believe that... as it seems. Maya trusts Rudra and she does believe that the brothers love each other and have got each others'backs.. She has always seen them standing up for each other ...

Rudra's condition is worse. He is angry at the police officers because of leaking the news. He manhandled a policeman and Inspector Agnihotri is angry and wants an apology from him which he refused to give. prakash understand his condition well. he supports Rudra. He then thinks about Maya and calls her, talk to her he is overwhelmed talking to her. Such an intense scene , i enjoyed it totally.

I am glad you enjoyed it. Rudra is going through a lot of emotions.. throughout this whole sequence actually... a lot of his shades will come to light...

Rishaan is iin pain. That psychopath is torturing him in the worst way. He is been tied up, hanged , and chained. He watched his fans praying for him in tv. and his brother also. Rishaan reads Rudra's mind by his looks. their bonding is weird and adorable. Rishaan also had a very dark past. He was tortured by his alcoholic father i guess.Did he kill him? Was he tolerating all these abuses for Rudra!! Just asking. Rishaan sees Maya (i guess) on tv from their movie clip. I am confused here. Is he in love with Maya?? He was determined not get provoked or give a reaction to Shaurya but still he reacted badly to creep's vulgar comment on her. I am waiting for Rudra to come and save him..

I am waiting for that as well.. and yes that was Maya... And obviously I cannot tell you much about Rishaan's feelings or past... you will have to wait... 😆

shaurya,.. what to say about him. He is a cruel monster . He is torturing Rk with out allowing him the luxury of death. Shaurya sounds very jealous of RK. He blaming Maya/Madhubala for misjudging RK as her savior or his competitor. I want to know more about him and real Rk madhubala. He could see through Rishaan's mask, The demon in him. But yet he is unaware of Rudra being real RK, He made a mistake there, i am glad that he made that mistake..

You will know more about Shaurya... he is an important character after all..

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter Maria. Can't wait anymore..

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Steph is editing right now... as soon as she is done... I will post the chapter.. Just wait a little while please...

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

nice update...

@Steph Muahahhaha 😈 I shall be first (or at least beat u) till the end of this story!!! 😈 😈

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Originally posted by: ..Steph..

RES RES RES.

Lubzz beat me to it dammit ! lol

Oh nuts! Missed the first position


Come what may...I will write my review today 😳
You will not believe, this is my third attempt

Anyway...I had this nagging question in my head from the moment I read your last update...is it for real that you are doing this humongous favour to us readers by letting us read this masterpiece for free??

All my 'dil se duaa' goes to you for your success as an author

Now back to the update...

Rudra finally gets to meet Shaurya's family...he is warned beforehand by the inspector to be careful while dealing with these people as they are also as much victim to Shaurya's nefarious activities, in a passive way...but Rudra is not in a state of mind to make things easy...and it is justified, he is a human afterall...his brother's life, unanswered questions from his past life, Shaurya's lecherous motives towards madhu/maya...all of these could have made any sane mind insane...but he is still in control...

About Sonia, Sania and Sanjay I really feel pity for them...their father must have been an idol, a guide in their lives but to digest such appalling evidences on the face would have been worse than a nightmare for any kid...About Shalini, I guess she is having some huge turmoil in her mind...she knows Shaurya for 22 years as wife...even if not his ill deeds to the utmost details, she must have known about his delinquent disposition from her experience...so like Rudra, I cannot believe she had absolutely no inkling about Shaurya's 'other self'...but like a dutiful wife and mother she is trying her best to be protective...and in a way that is justified as well...even if Shaurya is convicted, the kids should be protected from the public eyes and hatred...it is not their fault to be born as Shaurya's kids...

On the other hand Shaurya continues with his inhuman torture on Reeshan...what does he want him to confess? What mask does he intend to pull off from Reeshan's face?...well I am sure you would not let us know that so soon and keep on boggling our minds with the mystery...

On being refused totally by Shalini in providing any sorts of assistance, Rudra completely loses his cool...and the devil's advocate kicks back in his mind... 😈 ...he realised Sonia's soft spot for him because of his resemblances to RK...and he cleverly uses that to his advantage...in fact he manges to get the other two kids also in confidence...I simply love this badass side of him 😆 the public announcement is made Shaurya's family and Rudra succeeds in hitting the nail at the right place...

Shaurya is taken aback by the public announcement...I am sure he does not care much about his family being paraded in front of the world to get to him, but he is baffled more by Rudra...it is really a big surprise/shock for him to realise that all his time he has been hunting for the wrong RK...his arch nemesis whom he had slain years before has risen from the ashes 😈

Rudra gets to the core of the hidden evidences with the help of little Sonia and sets on his mission, his last resort to find his brother...alive

Shaurya realises his time is over, his intention has not been fully realised, but being the devil as he is, he unleashes the last strike on Reeshan...or is it Aditya? Aren't we already in a big maze running after clues and getting at dead ends to find what you are plotting with this story Maria?? ...that you had to introduce another deep dark (I am imagining it to be) secret? I do not know if he succumbed to his excruciating pain at the end in his brother's arms

Well I will not think about it more right now, and wait for your next update...

Buttt...I have one outrageous opinion at the end of the chapter...

I may be completely crazy to think that, but it is all your fault, you have made my mind go haywire with your superb and outstanding plot 😆 ... this story is always in layers...one that is apparent is not true always, there are always some hidden truths that peek to the surface time to time... Shaurya has been an evil character, that was apparent all along...but is there some evilness in Rudra, hidden in his distant past (not the past life, but this life itself) that keeps him repenting about his brother? Are his words "...and what you don't get is that I may not be a demon like your husband... but I am most definitely no angel either." hinting to this evilness that in some way led to his brother's tormented past? 😲

You know, with your writing I feel like being immensely adventurous myself about the characters...no one can be all white or black...shades of grey with some hidden darker shades are always such enjoyable mind teasers... 😳

Anyway...enough of my bigtime bakwaas...but this is the first time I am grateful that you did not update the next chapter before I could comment 😆 😉