RM FF: Entwined - Thread II (Chapter 32 POSTED) 6/04 - Page 27

Hey loved the update nice written thanks for pm

I was waiting fr d update fr d past two dayzz lik maniac. And nw it s here, but phir bhi i m acting lik maniac. Watzz all dis yaaarrr. Itz full f suspenz miseryy. Ohhh God, i m confused. Likd meera- aadi confession. Heartbrkng Rk-Aadi part. But in b/w dis der s a lot missing. Waiting d misseries to open up, and i get my ansrs. 👏

Awesome update. Though it was sad, still hope rudra reaches out for aadi. Meera rishan viraj, im still confused with them n got more confused after this. Will rishan call her back? Waiting for aadi n rudra scenes n maya rudra confrontations. Thanks a lot for the pm. Do update soon.

From last few updates you made us feel sadness with the way you have written their feeling and everything happening around them.

Today's update made me cry. Everything is falling apart. Why did he leave mansion? And did he really like really love Maya. Both brothers are in love with same lady.
He really did his work nicely. He confessed his love to maya. He could not love back to meera but made sure to give her moment of happiness to remember and made her to accept that she will move on. This is the rollercoaster ride of emotions feelings.

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You were being apprehensive for this!! Really!! This has come so naturally to the flow of the story...I did not find anything undue/ unacceptable in this update...in fact I imagined much much worse...

Anyway...will come back with a detailed feedback..

I read through the chapter again, and it was so very impactful..I am sorry I cannot write the full feedback in one go...it deserves way more appreciation than I can articulate...anyway...this is the first half...I will write the rest of the feedback tomorrow...

So the story between Meera and Reeshan goes back 7 years, on a lonely night, when both of them had been trying to hide away from the inevitabilities of life and search for something unknown. You did divulge the story of Meera, how she had been just a player in the perfect coordinated life of hers, how she could did not even have the ability to take any decision on her own, and how this perfect fairy tale life of her was gradually choking her into an ultimate nonchalance for her life itself. It is perfectly understandable. But what I missed here, and I know you deliberately avoided mentioning was Reeshan's side of the story. What was he doing, sitting all alone on the road in dark? It was intriguing how he articulated Meera's agony from the very few words he got to know about her. And suggested her to make her own adventures, kismet and life itself. But throughout the chance meeting, he did not reveal anything about himself. No wonder, Meera had been so deeply impacted by his sudden appearance and disappearance in her life, and she held on to it till the end. But as I mentioned before, I will look forward to knowing Reeshan's side of the story, as it is going to be no less intriguing.

And then the scene between Maya and Reeshan. You know what, I am running short of English vocabulary to express my awe and appreciation at how you supersede in portraying such heavily intense emotions so realistically in your words! Every small gesture, every little pause between the words, every subtle reactions that you mentioned was a character in itself. And I must confess that throughout the story Reeshan's character seemed too guarded and unfathomable, but with this scene he has become one of my most favourite tragic heroes. His dilemma between being the captor and the lover, his urge to know Maya's feelings for him in her words in spite of knowing it in his heart already, his ultimate solace in setting her and himself free from this bondage, were so heart wrenching and passionate. At this point it really did not matter to me as to which of the brothers would get her, because she is not a trophy to be won. But the heart and soul that went into those strong emotions was very palpable, and it did feel like if for once his feelings could be reciprocated.

The same story goes for Meera and Reeshan. It seems fate is indeed playing a cruel game with these lives where one is forced to walk out of the other's life, leaving it incomplete. Still there is a little solace in all these melancholy, just the way Reeshan felt while setting Maya free, Meera for the first time felt being in Reeshan's notice, after all these 7 years of waiting.

I will continue in details on Meera Reeshan scene tomorrow...you are such a task master, forcing us poor readers to try to give our best in commenting to your superb writing!!
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WOW!! outstanding chapter...I loved all the scenes and it's very difficult to choose which one is my favourite...Starting from rishaan's confession , it was heart breaking for maya to say the truth how she feels about him...She lost her mentor , her only true friend...Will she go back from where she came ? ...or like Rishaan said that Rudra will take care of her...Maya-Aadi scene was sad , but I loved the honesty of rishaan...It was marvelous...Last scene was expected...Rudra was late to reach out for aadi...Finally he left , but I want him to keep trying to bring him back...

Originally posted by: silverfire

Chapter 27

'Wicked ' OMG! We saw a new side of Rudra in this chapter. He is blackmailing his brother's kidnapper. How come shaurya does not know much about Rishaan 's twin bro? How did he overlook this? Well, the villain too has flaws.

Rudra has many shades. He is very complex. There is still lot more to learn about him.

Shaurya did know that Rishaan has a shady twin brother. However, Rudra has lived his life in shadows. Media and people only speculated about him. He was never social. In fact he would only talk to people for business and nothing else. Rishaan, on the other hand, as we know had the spotlight on him. He was the RK. Everyone's attention was on him... and Shaurya's as well.

Felt very sorry for the family. The kids r dragged into this. This is what happens in real life too. I'm with Rudra regarding the wife. She has lived with him for 22 yrs n is unaware of any this is a little too much to accept. She must be having some kind of doubts about her hubby.

Yes, the family went through a lot... and they will go through a lot. I don't think it can get better for them ever. Rudra was being judgmental... even he knew... deep down...the wife didn't know. He has been a lawyer long enough to know that there are people like Shaurya who are closet psychopaths ... and there are people like Shalini, his wife, who have no idea that they are married to a sadistic killer.

Rishaan has done something in the past n his bro blames him. Wonder what it is?

Adi Kapoor. That's a suprise. Did he change his name for Bollywood?

Yes, he is Aditya Kapoor. And rest you will find out later.

The last few lines r very beautifully written. Rishaan is Rudra lap before his eyes roll back.

I am glad you feel so.

I have a lot of catching up to do.

Will comment as I read.

Great updates.

Thanks for,the PM.

v emotional update now waiting to see what turns takes place in everybodys life...i pray for happibess of everybody n hope rudra n madhu get together for they deserve togetherness after so much trauma...hope to see lovely moments of them...

Originally posted by: manna43

Amazing update.They got enough proofs against shaurya.

Feeling sad for viraj.Maya is out of guilt but rudra is not. Who is arpita to them n where rishaan has gone.?

Update soon.