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Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Awesome update. Loved it. Wish if rudra reaches out for aadi. Shaurya case is going interesting. I know rudra will kill him like maya said. Waiting for rudra maya confrontations. Thanks a lot for the pm.


Thank you so much.
I am glad you liked the chapter. Yes, let's see what Rudra does.
You will get loads of Rudra-Maya scenes from Chapter 32.
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Originally posted by: GERUA

fascinating update


Thank you so much.
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Originally posted by: aravindam100

Yaarrr kuch samaj mein nahi aahh raha haiii. Watzz happening. There s lot more to open up. Twists abhi baki hai kyaaa???? muje sirf itna pata hai kii i want to knw mor and morrr. Waiting impatiently. Shauryas case s getting stronger. Waiting for Rudra & maya confrntatn 😳& RK- Madhu milan😛


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What you don't realize is that you know nothing much about Rudra. I mean... you know about RK... Rudra has been Rudra for nearly three decades. Of course there is more for you to know about him. The brothers'past is important. And as long as the story is going to go... there will be twists coming your way... 😆

Wait till Chapter 32 for Rudra-Maya scenes! 😛😆
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update, loved it, story is getting more and more interesting with each update.

Continue soon, shall be waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM Maria.


Thank you so much.
Will try my best to post the next chapter by tonight.
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drum rolls ...mera rishaan aa gaya

meera-aditya flashback scene is so sweet and heart touching...it makes you see how one can fall in love in a single moment and how it can last forever. i love the setting...the empty road and the faint street lights..the calm outside n the struggle inside.
such a contradiction that one wanted adventure and another wanted peace and both were broken in their ways...goes to show how too much of both is bad.

maya meera looking for rishaan right from dawn to dusk to midnight and finally find at their own house...umm wat is rishaan made out of? entangled hair? 😆

maya-rishaan ...oh no why the hell...shit ...no i cant write about this. kya likhu? [:'(]
i knew rishaan loves maya...it was obvious...he confessed today for the first time knowing all well that he had to hear n wanted to hear the no. that breaks my heart. he did not even spare himself to be able to live in the bubble that maya has feelings for him. ofcourse by now he has put two n two together n assumed that rudra is rk and maya is madhubala. he pretty much understood from rudra's paintings i presume.
maya had to say to know to him knowing he loves her so much that he almost gave his life just to get her justice!
wat maya doesnt know is that he really gave his life...he died. rishaan died. aadi confessed his love today to free himself of the leftover rishaan.oh so brilliant u girl!


Viraj is heartbroken to see meera hurt ...the man deserves an award in patience and selfless love ..oh n also humour. amazes me!

rudra- the man is in pieces already. *my mouth is zipped*

rishaan - meera ... wait what? rishaan calls her?!! didnt expect this. rishaan is really made of entangled hair u take it...i m telling you bass! the man has charm n style n ocean big heart and then he says he is empty! rubbish! he is filled with love. how i wish he could spread it. really really really.

rishaan- meera breakup patchup let go ...umm watever 😆 The scene was so so so brilliant. my favourite one till date. and the conversation and the dance and that last line before they part! took my heart away! Maria...thank u for the adventure😆
oh n i shud mention this scene take the cake and the cherry too
..and yeah rishaan takes the bakery too 😆

meera-viraj.. such a mature scene ...so much understanding n space this man gives! how does he not hav million girlfriends by now ?!

And my ship has arrived! rudra -rishaan finally aftr million years! And my ship is sinking too! i hate u!
oh the scene was so painful...rudra has finally lost rishaan. he didnt realise in all these years. finally rudra has realised. but its too late...his brother is way too far from him in the head. and rudra is left sulking in shame guilt and pain ...ironically if the same amounts that he left aditya with, years ago...today he is broken aftr so many years of avoiding n hide n seek n self pity n shame ..rudra has finally burst open.
i still want him to mend his way to rishaan...they deserve it.
besides, i deserve my ship!!


ps - i cried drums...now i want ship 😆

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A wonderful update full of emotions, it made me sad too, though I know in real life too we can have only bitter-sweet moments, it can't always be happiness all the way, but yes you feel more peace when you take a decision and you accept your fate. I guess characters in this chapter kind of took a decision at least things were dicussed, no more avoiding to discuss things, obviously the center of this chapter was Rishaan, I loved all his interactions with people, and though I still think that it's not all he will get I mean I know sometimes it's difficult to get over our past, to mend our broken pieces, it's not easy to heal, but I believe he will get better, he can better!

And yes I agree with you this chapter was special, the way it was written, the scenes the interactions were beautiful, maybe because finally all characters led by Rishaan mainly (he is the catalyst) and including him, opened their hearts and finally spoke what they felt sincerely without trying to run away from the truth or hiding or doing any camouflage of their emotions!


I loved all the scenes

Scene between Meera and Rishaan in Barcelone was a surprise, the girl who had something close to a perfect life, yet felt miserable, maybe because she never got to take her own decisions, to live something special, maybe because our life can't always be planned we should let some things happen, take some risks, live an adventure, the way Rishaan told her but we shouldn't forget that when we can afford ourselves some adventures from time to time, we can't make of it our life, sometimes people can find peace in the security of the planned life they live! I don't know whether then (7years ago) Rishaan had already lived his tragedy or was he just the same guy who adviced his brother that maybe they are the freaks and not him, maybe Rudra is just special and talented, it doesn't mean that he is a freak! All I know is that here also he was a sweetheart, he brings light wherever he goes, he has this natural capacity of understanding people, he knows how the say the right thing at the right time!! I still wonder what made such a beautiful soul lose hope in life and be so harsh on himself!


The scene between Maya and Rishaan was nice too, his confession, he doesn't want to hide anything anymore, he said he wanted to set her free and set himself free too! I think he had a small (a very small hope ) that maybe she feels the same for him too, but I guess he was prepared even if still disappointed by her answer, he was prepared to her no too, as even her no would set him free, he would get his answer he won't wonder anymore and also he will see what he feels, finally Rishaan is trying even when his so shattered to have a heart to heart conversation with each important person he has in life, to apologize, say what he feels and leave without any grudge on anyone!! We know Maya didn't want to hurt him, she loves him so much but she isn't in love with him! sad but true, this is life!

Meera witnessed their conversation and even though she saw it coming but she always had hope, as they say hope is the last thing one can lose in life! but now she heart from the horse mouth!! he saw her and after he called her and they went for a long drive! I just loved their scene so much! she thought he didn't remember when they first met, how wrong she was! he opened his heart, he said he knew she loved him but he was selfish to keep her with him, he needed to feel loved even when he knew he is maybe hurting her, even when he tried to send her away but never could, he felt humbled and overwhelmed by her love, he told her she is so special but alas even he loves her but isn"t in love with her! heart doesn't choose whom to love! add to that the fact that he feels unworthy of love!!! he thinks neither he is made to love nor to be loved! he thinks these two things were wrong!! the fact, of him opening to her about who he was (Aditya) and what he did to himself by killing his oldself and becoming Rishaan just to see even that new identity destroyed, proves how much she is special to him, usually you would feel more open and have more trust in the person whom you know loves you genuinely and won't judge you, so he talked about that only with Meera! I think Meera herself would have felt happy with that. She knew she won't have his love, she promised to move ahead the way he asked her but she gave him her friendship willignly not out of pity and he accepted it happily too. I loved their dance, her confession and their hug, I think both found some peace finally though I think Rishaan's story won't end here as I don't believe this is all there is for him, for Meera at least that's her bitter -sweet closure, I think now she is much more in peace, she accepted her faith and she will be happy with his friendship and try to move on eventually with Viraj.

I liked the fact that at least made her so happy when he thanked her for the adventure she gave him the way he gave her in the past thus making her understand that yes he remembers her and he was sincere when he said she is special, she can at least be happy for that!!!

Viraj can now hope, at least he will wait knowing she is willing to give him a chance instead of waiting anyways without knowing whether this will ever happen!!


Last scene was another nice scene between Rudra and Rishaan, the first open conversation between these two without anyone of them trying to run away from expressing things! Rishaan has took his decision, yes they were leaving under the same roof but they can't anymore hide the fact that there is a huge rift in their relationship, while Rudra still had hope that things might get better, Rishaan wanted to go away from this farce, yes I feel deep inside he knows Rudra loves him but he still couldn't mend his broken pieces, he thinks he might never do it and he took the decision to leave and try to find some peace, but Rudra was shattered, tried to make him stay even used Maya's card but I guess Rishaan already understood the bond between Maya-Rudra and is now leaving the way clean and clear for them to come close, but will Rudra ever be able to live happily without his brother getting better or at least finding some solace in life!! I feel there is still something coming our ways in the next chapter, I think you might focus on Maya-Rudra now but sure Rishaan will come later maybe!!!


Ignore my typos, I don't know if I made much sense, I'm sure I forgot many things but this is what came to my mind now! 😃
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Yh I don't care that i haven't unresed my other comments yet because i can't wait right now. I need to get out these emotions i am feeling right now after this chapter! I'll unres the rest whenever i get time and i am honestly so sorry that i haven't done them yet but I've just been having a very hectic month, with my best friends surgery, then recovery which just isn't working out and if all this wasn't enough my other best friend went and broke his arm! I am telling u, boys r trouble so stay away from them (in my case they r medical trouble 😆 ) And I had to go to Germany due to some emergency, so again i am really sorry Maria.

So anyway over to the update! Tbh i don't even have the slightest idea how to reply to it..but believe it or not, this has to be one of the few written pieces that i have ever read that managed to bring tears to my eyes. Right now i can only think of two pieces who have managed that till date, this will be my third. And as surprising as it might sound, it wasn't during Maya and Rishaan's scene, I always knew that was coming so i was prepared. But it was during Meera and Aditya's scene. Rishaan has been my fvrt character in this story and u knw that; so during Maya and his scene, you made my heart bleed; Meera and Aditya's scene, you crunched it, ripped it up and then sew it back together leaving scars; and then Rudra and Rishaan/Aditya's scene u just ripped it out again and stomped on it! 💔

Woman, ur actually ruthless that I love it! You should definitely turn this into a book! Not even kidding, i would buy it the moment it would get published! Hell, I would even love to write a screenplay on this story, obviously some parts would then need to be altered then due to it having a different style and format but this is just such a thrilling and power packed story!!

Moving over the characters, Meera finally got a kind of back story!! She's been here since the beginning and all we ever learnt about her that she is smart, daughter of Bittuji, her best friend is in love with her and that she is in love with Rishaan! And we never even learnt how she came to love him, was it for his looks? love at first sight? his attitude? status? Did she fall for him whilst working for him? Which i kinda doubt as they never had any 'moments' together. So finally finding out from where it started and how was perfect! I kind of even feel proud for her, she took charge of her life, started living it on her own terms. Yes she got hurt, very hurt, but hurting is a part of living, which she didn't feel before. She was just frustrated at how perfect and planned out all seemed to be, making it boring even kinda, she got her adventure, one that ended up breaking her, and now she's starting a new one for which i wish her all the best for.😳 And it was an amazing ending/closure u gave on her part, her story might not be over but that love sick, always shedding girl definitely will be left behind i hope, with new shades and characteristics to appear and explore 😃 Wonderful Job done👏

There wasn't much of Viraj so i'll just combine him with Maya. Now he's a true friend and my heart goes out for him! Gosh why did u do this to me😭 I want Meera and Aditya to happen (and they better do *evil look*) but then I love Viraj too, and i don't want him to be hurt either He's such a sweet soul, bless him, and now he has more hope than ever which just breaks my heart..
And Maya, poor her, she ended up breaking a heart, that too of the person who i think is the only one he could call a friend (well now she has Viraj too, but he doesn't count). Everyone knew it was coming, yet it hurt. You wrote the whole scene so beautifully, managing to grasp every bit of emotion and detail, gosh i hate u for breaking his heart😭😭 (not really of course 😆 just kidding, hehe)

Rishaan aka Aditya! This whole chapter was his! Him trying to find closure and move on which is heartbreaking but i am happy for him actually. He needed all those moments, telling Maya how he feels about her, but yet he couldn't tell her that his name was Aditya, so that kinda surprised me when he told Meera. He trusts her and has let her affect him more than he would like to admit, or show. And he kinda just ended up answering her question from 7 years back, when he had said that someday she'll know his name and now she does. That sequence of them bonding, just made me ship them more than i ship Rudra and Maya..because well, he found a friend in her, a new friend after he left his old one behind. A friend that loves him, loved the Aditya she had met years back and the Rishaan too and yet again accepts the Aditya and wants to be a part of his life, making her own decision this time again. I can't praise the way u wrote that scene enough..but i still have goosebumps when i think of it.

And that Rudra and Aditya/Rishaan scene was just brutal! One begging his brother to stay, and the other adamant that he doesn't have anything left there. I really wan to know their linked past, but Rudra just lost him again. He should have reached out whilst he had the chance, he was too late this time. And he was right after all i guess, Rishaan really was dying, and now he's gone, leaving this broken human behind who needs his own space and time to heal now. But i want Rudra to keep trying, he might have left the mansion, but he shouldn't let his friend, his brother leave and break their bond. He needs to mend it, and for that he needs to try rather than wait and let Aditya reach out.

Overall, it was an amazing update and i loved every single bit of it! Song selection was perfecto! Just added more feel into the whole setting. Every character has seemed to reach a special point now, Rudra lost his brother, the one person who he wanted to keep with him; Maya lost her friend, her mentor, just someone she cares real deep about; Meera letting go and trying to move on from here; and then Aditya, one with a haunted past, yet again broken and letting everything go, to set himself free..

Love the way everything seems to be shaping up, not sure if Aditya/Rishaan will continue his Superstar career though? Is he just moving in another property or moving away for good? And i don't knw but with the way the chapter ended, r u thinking of taking a small leap or something? And again sorry for not having unresed my previous comments..

P.S. So i was really curious what ur UN meant, searched it and found "All Men must Die" 😆 Very Creative hahah, and then saw it's a GoT reference and if I remember correct ur a ASOIAF fan 😆 I would have never guessed it was from there hahaha
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