Originally posted by: madhurish
Epilogue... First to comment...🥳 Congrats Miss. Stalker 🥳😉😆
🤣 🤣 what an epilogue yaar?? Never ever read such an hilarious epilogue...😆 LMAO!! I got stomach ache after reading this outrageously hilarious update... For every single line i was laughing like mad... 😆 Glad I could make you laugh 😉🤣
Sorry about the abdominal pains caused by this outrageously hilarious epilogue! 🤣I wanted to make it light & sweet 😆 It was damn cute & funny... Awesomely penned down by u dear...👏 Thank you 😳
Let me list out all the funny scenes of this epilogue which brough a face spliting grin to me...😆
Jeez... Water broke?? How?? Water only leaks!🤣 this one was priceless... 😆 Man... He was unbelievable... His wife was screaming in pain & he was wondering how can water break as its a fluid... 😆 madhu could have thrown something harder on him like bed side lamp or paper weight or even mobile phone instead of a pillow... Only when something hard hits his head his brain will work or else he will be a dumb ass & ask such idiotic question... But a part of me feels he was a f**king genius... 😆 he has a point nah? Its not a mirror to break... 😆 so this will be the place which cracked me to the core... Well i have more to say on where all i ROLFed but this one was ultimate...🤣 Ikr! RK has a good sense of humor 🤣 But he used it in the wrong situation! 🤣 Poor Madhu screaming in pain & this fellow talking about the difference between break & leak 🤣 I was thinking how to add something hilarious to Madhu's delivery & got this break & leak idea 🤣 Glad you loved it! 😆
Next most hilarious scene will be Pari asking for a baby sister as she wanted to prove her fri-enemy that she didnt copy her...😆 & Rk was only damn pleased to fulfill his sweet daughter wish... He readily got down to business... He didnt waste a moment after Pari slept... 😆
Poor Madhu... Already having hard time with two kiddos & now Pari & Rk insisting on having one more... Soon they will make a foot ball team i guess...🤣
I just want Pari to conform with her fri-enemy Ariana that her parents r not planning to bring any add ons before her parents bring one then again Pari will demand for one more baby bro or sis or even twins so that she dont want to be a copy cat...🤣 then madhu will become a baby producing machine...🤣 Thanks to Adriana they are gonna get another kid 😉🤣 Hopefully Adriana will not have anymore siblings as the story is over now! 🤣 Even I didn't want to add 3 kids at the end like a typical epilogue!😆 So I gave a hint on the 3rd kid 😉🤣 Poor Madhu! So many demands from her naughty hubby & kids 😉🤣 RK wouldn't mind being a daddy for a cricket team 🤣 But he gotta think about her poor wife who should undergo all the pains 🤣
Hmm... Next will be Aarav peeking at his parents hot love making...😆 & madhu panicking that aaeav had seen their passionate war... Poor girl felt so embarassed & also worried they were bad parents... Yeah... I m sure Aarav will be one sex maniac when he grow up as he has witnessed a special show when he was just 6 months... Poor baby could have enjoyed the shpw with pop corn but no teeth so screamed a cry to get some milk to watch the sexy movie...😆 but that cry of his spoiled all the fun...😆
But i guess he was patient enough to wait till they get one & only after they were contemplating on round two he cried... Good boy... Both the kids were hell bend to get one additional memeber to their family by helping Rk to reach his goal... 🤣 Glad you loved that scene! I always wanted write something like that 😉🤣 Perks of having a 24*7 active gutter mind ☺️ 🤣 Of course Aarav will be like his dad 😉🤣
Seriously... Rishbala subtracted all their family members by sending them to hell & heaven (mohan... Granny... Rash... I guess malik too) & adding news members to their own family...😆 Hahaha that's true! I wrote the epilogue with only 4 of them. The crazy Kundra family 😎🤣
Lol... Tooth fairy... That scene was cute & sweet... Hayee...my pari darling would look cute without front teeth... Lol.. Madhu ate her daughter's snickers bar & tried to escape from getting caught... But Rk smartly sniffed who ate the chocolate bar... Loved the scene when he wiped her chocolate smudged lips & chided her for being adamant & wanting to eat all the unhealthy foods... In their quarrel they completely forgot their baby girl... Pari was sweet so she simply pleaded her parents to stop fighting but champ was a smart brat... Gave a hard kick to his mommy to stop her bak bak...🤣 Glad you liked that scene 😉😆 But Pari got to taste Chocolate lava cake after that 😉😆
Hehe... Thai Chicken sweet potato soup...😆 Which spoiled Rk's blackberry made it's appearance after yrs... This is called soup love story... 🤣 I actually had it for dinner the day before I started writing the epilogue 🤣so I thought of adding it once again because I was missing that soup in the story 🤣
Haha... Though Rk was mean by saying her eating for Children (plural) but i agree with him... Even i wonder was it a stomach or garbage to put all waste unhealthy stuffs...😆 that was quite a big list which she had swallowed in & then too her appetite was more & asked for chocolate lava cake... 😆 Ikr! Madhu is thoroughly exploited from her pregnancy 😉🤣
i really love the bond btn Pari & Rishab... How nicely he took his baby girl with him to help him make the cake for her mommy & baby bro... My darling Pari was so understanding...😛
Well... Loved the hospital scene... The moments where Rk has tears when the baby was yanked out of hos mommy's tummy to this world & also when he carried his son for the first time... Pari's excitement seeing the tiny baby... That was one beautiful moment...👏 Glad you loved their family moments with the new born baby 😳
Glad that Rishab got the chance to be nearer to madhu & enjoy evwry moment of her pregnancy... He talked with his unborn baby... He felt his kick... He took care of madhu like a baby when she was carrying a baby in her... He ever took care of Pari... His sweet angel... He was so perfect... So amazing... I love him...😛
Loved the name of the baby... thanks for choosing one of my choice...😳 wondering what will be the new additions name will be...??😆 Keep suggesting 😉😆 & Thank you for suggesting a nice name for junior RK 🤗
Well... U didnt end the story just like that... U gave us a fiest... U have served us a nice love making meal..😉. Rishbala shld actually feel embarassed of us more that aaru as he was a baby so he wouldn't mind anyting but we saw everything... & blushed...☺️😆 Ahem ☺️ 🤣 Jeez I realized I've written 3 sex scenes in this story😲 ☺️🤣 But personally I think ,I have written their first consummation. their crazy car sex far more better than other two 🤣
Over all... I loved this beautiful story to the core... 😃 thanks for giving us this cute little family thru this story...😛Title was justified so well... "Inseparable hearts" As Rishbala's hearts were inseparable forever... Well their love was so strong & so pure so they could find happiness after all the hardships they had gone through...😳 Glad you found my story worth reading 😳😆
Thank u so much Rock baby for writing this sweet story & also for dedicating this lovely epilogue to me... Loved ur sweet gift on account of my birthday... Love u... God bless u...🤗
