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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naazishali

Wow...Such a perfect epilogue ! 😃
Thoroughly enjoyed reading d pregnancy phase...
'Twas fun to see, Rishabh n Pari catering to all of Madhu's needs...😆
Poor Pari lost her snickers to it ! 😆
Some desperation Rishabh has ! 😆
Couldn't even wait for Aaro to at least turn an year old ! Started his job as soon as Pari expressed her demand ! 😲 😆
Loved their romantic session. ☺️
Wish at least in this story they were able to complete their family wid their 3 children. We weren't fortunate enough to see that in d show. 😭
Thank u for this beautiful story...Will keep missing ur stories until u start another one. 😛
Enjoy ur vacation n be back soon...we'll miss u here. 🤗

Daddy & the kids are demanding for another baby 😉🤣 Poor Madhu has to bear them! 😆 Glad you loved this crazy Kundra family 🤣Thank you so much for your lovely feedback & words of appreciation, Vrishti 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Superb epilogue, loved it, it had all the elements in it, thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Glad you loved & enjoyed it Ananya 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will, surely 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Roch, thanks for the PM

You're welcome 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Welcome Roch..🤗talent must be appriciated dear..👏love you too..❤️sure come back with another story..😃till than enjoy your vacation.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BurnThemAll

Awww such a cute epilogue 😳 . Finally they both enjoyed Madz's prego phase . Acha Ji that's not fair . You can't make them stay forever in Melbourne . 😡🤣 No way! 😈I want to keep them here forever, with me 🤣

Awww my Pari baby has grown up and I love this very very over protective RK 😳 . The way he is handling Madzs's preggo and cravings and all those mood swings is so cute 😛

🤣🤣🤣 I hate you 😡 You made Madz eat my Pari's snickers . You are always mean to my Pari 😭 . First you din't tell her that why her bed doesn't has any rose petals whereas her parents bed has rose petals and now you even snatched my Pari's chocolate bar 😭😭 . I am cursing you that even your snicker bar or your favorite chocolate will be snatched by your friend or your sis when ever next time you will eat it 🤣🤣 Honestly I hate snickers 😳🤣 Idk why! 🤣 OMG ! You made a curse 😲🤣 If someone snatches away my favourite chocolate ( Lindt/Cadbury/ Ferrero Rocher either of these 😆) I will make that person's death look like an accident 😉😈🤣

But the scene was so damn cute when Pari runs in jet speed towards her parents bedroom to find her choco bar as if her whole life is dependent on that choco bar 🤣🤣 And the way Madz eats her choco bar instead of repeated attempts of RK telling her not to eat those stuffs . And then that RK-Madz scene of arguing over food habit is so Awww . Now even Pari understood that how crazy and kids her parents are 🤣🤣 Just tell me one thing that Madz has a stomach or a Kitchen inside her stomach ?? How much does she eat ? 🤣 Ikr! Madhu was exploiting her pregnancy to the fullest. 😉😆

Haaye that phase 😳 where RK accompanies her to doc trips and the way he took leave for 3 months wish if that happened in real life also with every soon-to-be parents couple 🤣

Chocolate Lava cake 🤣🤣 So the dddy-daughter duo made the cake and it got eaten within few minutes also 🤣🤣 Such a Glutton family this is 🤣 Glad you liked this crazy family 😉🤣

W*F was that now 🤣 Water broke vs Water leak . Miss counso should I call a plumber to fix up the water leak ?? 🤣 Yes water is liquid Glad you found that scene hilarious. 🤣I wanted to add something like Madhu screaming & shouting at RK for getting her pregnant while she was on labour pains🤣 but I have already written that kind of a scene in one of my previous stories 😆 So thought of adding something funnier related to her delivery. 😉 Thankfully this crazy idea popped up in my mind 🤣

So finally Madz delivered a cute baby boy 😳 and I love this Pari always jumping like a rabbit from here to there 🤣🤣 I am sure she must have been a rabbit in her previous birth 🤣 All the time keeps on jumping on her parents bed and then even to see her bro she jumped on the hospital bed 🤣 Rabbit?? Lmao 🤣 I can say, Pari is hyperactive 😉🤣

Now I am wondering that whose head should I bang against the wall 🤣 Mines or yours for writing this or Madz's ?? Seriously Aaru is not even months old and Madz seriously thinks that he would have witnessed his parents erotic love making session ?? 🤣🤣 Even if he witnessed it who the hell remembers all such things which happened with him and that too when he is not even 1 year old 🤣🤣 Madz is seriously nuts . BTW Miss Counso I was expecting some more erotic scenes . Its OK even if Aaru disturbed their love session but I wanted more from you on this 🤣 Ikr 🤣 Babies do remember nothing 😆 Well well, sorry if the romance didn't reach up to your expectations 🤔🤣 I cannot write something that is sexually explicit. 🤣There are under age kids peeping in to this forum 🤣 & I started following your rule of saving reputation from those erotic write ups 😉🤣

Oh Shit ! What's this 🤣🤣??? Pari wants a baby sis just to prove Adriana that she din't copy her for a bro and RK is all get set go to add a third member in the family 🤣 WOW RK is so smart . He understands the preciousness and value of time 🤣🤣 that he din't even wasted his precious time with Madz to add the 3rd baby in their family and as soon as Pari went out from her parent's room he got started 🤣🤣 . Thanks to his daughter's friend RK got a chance to have a wrestling tournament on the bed with his biwi ☺️🤣 But it was interrupted by junior RK 😉🤣

Everything from the starting of the story till epilogue very well justified the title and theme of the story . Though they faced so many hardships throughout 6 years yet they always remained loyal and inseparable by heart that even destiny has to bent down on it's knees to make them together once again . 👏👏👏 Glad you liked my story Ishu. I have tried my best to stick on to the main theme, of being inseparable 😳

Ufff So soon this chappy ended and so does the story 😭😭😭 *Hand over a box of tissues for you* 🤣

Enjoyed reading the story and chappy . YOU ARE COMING BACK WITH ANOTHER STORY SOON AFTER YOUR LONG VACATION . AND THAT'S ISHU'S ORDER . I hope by my birthday you come up with another story 😳😛 Aye aye captain! 😉🤣 Btw when is your birthday??

TC & God Bless You 😛

HAPPY JOURNEY BABES !! 😳 Thank you 🤗

P.S. - I am glad that you smile when you read my comments 😳 😆😆

Thank you so much for this lovely review 🤗 Made me smile brightly as usual ❤️ Read it several times as well 😉😆 If for not you & Sudha's lovely feedbacks, my story would have been quite boring 🤔😆 I'm thankful for you guys 🤗 Already missing your competition on this thread😭 🤣 You guys have given me so many memories ❤️
PS- I counted the ROFLing emos in your comment 🤣 There were 38! 😲🤣 Don't roll over much on the floor Ishu! It'll hurt 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Lovely epilogue.

it was damn cute.
Rishbala's silly fights, Pari's cute antics, Rishabh pari equation and the last part too.
loved reading this story.

Glad you loved it. Thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

Awesome epilogue..
Loved it..

Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anish17

Aww baby this was a best epilogue I ever read 😃
awesome and hilarious epilogue 🤣🤣
Haha mommy ate the snikers bar,my fav one 🤣
Poor rishu handling his crazy biwi 🤣
Water leaked 😆
Most enjoyable and funny part was their love making session after on requesting of their cute and naughty daughter for a sister 🤣
Omg baby I couldn't control my laugh 🤣their love making was so hot ☺️☺️
Aarav saw everything wat a stupid qus madhu is asking ☺️🤣
To divert her rishu started kissing her ☺️☺️
But I feel bad for madhu as she is fulfilling both dad son h-----(ll tell u later or I hope u understand 😉) at a time ☺️🤣🤣
Love this epilogue very much baby ❤️
Ll miss this story
Do write more after ur enjoyable trip 👍🏼
Thanks for the pm 🤗

Glad I could make you laugh with this outrageously hilarious epilogue 😉🤣 I understood what you meant 😉🤣 Haaw you have got an extreme gutter mind 😉🤣 Thanks for your lovely feedback. Thank you for all the love & support Baby 🤗 Really lucky to have you as my bestie here ❤️ Love you 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Lovely epilogue

Pari chocolate Madhu ate it each and every scene
Is awesome
Enjoy Ur vacation
Waiting for Ur come back

Thanks a lot 😃

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