Light in the darkness OS Last part pg4

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Positive story

i wish cvs could have shown something like this

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Amazing i would hv loved if cvs would hv shown dis in show

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Zoya2

@Zoya2

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Nice OS

Thank You for writing a positive story on Sultan

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice one
I so loved it

I know many ppl didn't like sultan
Bt I also believe his character could be positive
It unnecessarily spoiled
I agree he could have paired with trishana
Anyways I enjoyed it
Awsme ending

Love u
Keep smiling

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Thanks for PM,DEAR.😊

It was Brilliant OS.😊

It was so Nice that Rk and Sultan Both realised Mistakes,I likes it.😊

Rk and Madhu lives as Happy Family and Sultan too married Madhu's Sister,It was so Cute.😊

Please write like this.😊

PriyaCherry.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

I thanks 4 da pm! wonderful OS! well written

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

WOW!! beautiful dear...really loved Sultan's p.o.v...U described it well...Only the thing is that u didn't show the love story between Sultan-Trishna...She just appeared as a guest star at the end...I would have loved it more to read the interactions & romance between them...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

U r right.Actually I wanted to show the luv scene of Sultan Trishna.But since its an os i cud'nt go to the details.I just showed a scene where sultan admires Trishna

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! beautiful dear...really loved Sultan's p.o.v...U described it well...Only the thing is that u didn't show the love story between Sultan-Trishna...She just appeared as a guest star at the end...I would have loved it more to read the interactions & romance between them...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
U r right.Actually I wanted to show the luv scene of Sultan Trishna.But since its an os i cud'nt go to the details.I just showed a scene where sultan admires Trishna

Then u can extend this os into 2 shots...😳