Light in the darkness OS Last part pg4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Again I am with an OS on the track involving Rishbala and Sultan.On the show Madhubala when Sultan made the wedding photograph of Mohan Kundra and Meera public, Madhu asked Sultan what pleasure he is getting out of it.She blamed Sultan and she asked why he refused to take money as a compensation.I felt that Madhu being a sensible woman should have understood that money can't replace the insult Sultan and his mother Meera faced in society.Sultan failed to justify himself during their confrontation and the CVS made Sultan's character stoop so low that he admitted that he did that only to destroy RK to get Madhu in his life.Instead of going insane after Madhu all of a sudden they could have paired him opposite Trishna.If so Trishna's character which had substance in the beginning would not have gone wasted in the show. RK never felt guilty for calling Sultan a man without surname and Sultan never felt guilty of destroying the peace of Kundra family.I felt that instead of showing them fighting against each other cruelly they could have shown them as brothers.This OS is based on that track which I found disgusting on the show.

Light in the Darkness

Sultan got the wedding photograph of Mohan Kundra and his mother Meera and made it public.The media flashed the news that Mohan's first wife is Meera,not Radha and it is Sultan who is the legal son of Mohan,not RK.RK found it a lie,but Radha blasted out the truth that it is true.RK was shattered.He walked out.Madhu followed him:RK...
RK:No Madhu.Please leave me alone for some time.
M:I can't leave you like this.
RK:No Madhu.I want to be alone for some time.Please understand that.
When he left Madhu stood there helplessly.

She visited Sultan.
M:So much of poison in your mind.I thought though you were a Don you had a soft heart.But your heart is made of rock.Why did you defame Kundra family's name?What pleasure did you gain out of it?You broke RK's heart by making the public call him an illegal son.You are so selfish.Why did you do this to us Sultan?


Sultan:Am I selfish?Then what about you all?
For some selfish reasons...ie just to protect the family name you all hid Mohan Kundra's past from everyone.At least once did you all think of my mother?The whole life public humiliated her for being a single mother.Though she was married to a big film producer like Mohan Kundra people called her a loose lady for producing a child alone.She lost her mental inbalance.You all hid the truth from others.Because of that people continued misunderstanding my mother's purity.When you all were trying to protect the family name did you think about my mother's image in the society at least once?You said because of me RK is being called the illegal son by public.You must not forget that the same RK wounded my heart many times calling me a street goon who has no father.He called me a bas***d who lied only to get a surname without knowing the truth.Have you ever thought about the mental turmoil I faced when my mother and I were insulted every single moment?
Sultan was very emotional.
Sul:Why don't you all think about my position?Trust me.I never wanted Kundra as my surname as I am ashamed to be known as a cheater's son.Still I did all this to escape from the humiliation my mother and I faced for 30 years.Am I that cruel?Tell me Madhu.
Madhu shed tears.
M:Sultan...I understand.You may be right from your point of your view.But I am a wife and a daughter in law.I feel pain when my mother in law cries as her husband's name got spoiled.I get depressed when my husband RK is frustrated.For me RK is more important than anything else.
Madhu cried.
Sultan felt sad.
Madhu went away.

Madhu searched for RK.Finally she found RK.

She saw RK dumping his father's belongings on the ground.

M:RK...what are you doing?
RK took the match box.
M:RK!You preserved all this till now RK...these were your beautful memories.Still you are trying to destroy them?

RK:No Madhu.Don't try to stop me.This man always pretended to be a good father and a good husband.He betrayed my mother and an innocent lady.I can't forgive him.I am ashamed to be known as his son.I don't want to even remember him.For that this is needed.

M:RK!
RK burnt Mohan's things.
RK cried.
Madhu held his face tearfully:RK...don't be weak.I can't bear your pain.I want my RK back.

RK:Madhu...how could he cheat all of us?How could I see blindly believe a cheater?I am so foolish.

M:RK...just forget it and start a new life.Please RK...
She embraced him and consoled him.

RK wiped his tears.Suddenly some rough arms fell on his shoulder.RK-Madhu were shocked to see that person.
RK:Sultan!
Sul:I know you hate me.After what I did to you now you all hate me more.But I came here to apologize.I realized my mistake.I should not have protected my family by defaming a happy family.I am sorry RK.
RK:Even I want to apologize to you Sultan.Without knowing the truth arrogantly I called you bas***d many times.And I am not angry with you now for making Mohan Kundra's and Meeraji's photograph public as it made me know the truth.
Sultan and Madhu were surprised.
RK:Sultan...there were only hatred between us till now.Shall we erase hatred from our hearts?
Sultan looked at him in confusion.
RK:We both do not want to be Mohan Kundra's sons after knowing his true colour.But still we are brothers.Right?Why can't we live as brothers?
Sultan and Madhu were surprised.
Slowly Sultan smiled.RK and Sultan hugged each other.Madhu was happy about this unexpected surprise...enemies turning out to be good brothers.She smiled tearfully.

Sultan went back home happily.
Sul:Poison in mind can never give us peace of mind.But now I have so much of relief.
Unexpectedly he saw Trishna coming.
Sul:Trishna.
T:I came here to request you not to trouble Madhu and RK.Please let them live a peaceful life.



Sul:Don't worry.We have sorted out the problems and RK has invited me and Maa to live in Kundra Mansion.
Trishna was shocked.
Sul:He is not giving me the permission to live there because I snatched the right from him.He invited me happily as we realized that our life is not to fight with each other,but to live with each other as good brothers.
Trishna was very happy.
Sul:Now I realized that you are also like your sister Madhu.You care so much for your sister's happiness.
Trishna smiled.

RK,Madhu,Radha accepted Sultan,Meera and Aryan as a part of their family and received them inside.


Time passed...

RK-Madhu are the proud parents of 2 kids.
(This pic is not merged by me.The credit goes to the original editor)

And Sultan is leading a happy family life with his mother Meera who is completely normal now ,his son Aryan and his newly wed wife Trishna;who is Madhu's sister.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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I hate sultan and this bakwas track.
Edited by lovermg - 10 years ago
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Nice os. But dear I hate sulu very much. U make this story very positive. That's I like it. I love you stories. Wait more and more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os..You gave happy ending thats good..
Keep writing more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb os dear loved it
After a very long time u posted something
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was a nice twist.

Sadly Sultan's character really was butchered but I always thought the character had potential.

I like your version.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS, loved your version of Sultan.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This OS was Indeed Interesting
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Nice OS! 😳 A different concept & a happy end 😊
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Nice OS
glad to see they had a happy ending with Sultan n RK leaving their past rivalry behind them n starting a new as brothers
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin

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