Untitled Love - Final Part updated in pg 22

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Welcome back and wow! What a powerful message through such a beautiful story. Very apt for today's times. Please keep it up and update soon (and pm me).

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

1st of all welcome back...awesome start 👏👏 love it so much,

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Well, its an interesting start dear...

But i wont judge rk's character so soon...

Its so clear he holds high attitude...he is arrogant...but still he didnt restrict madhu in doing anything...he was not a barrier to her career...

Its just a misunderstanding... He thought she aborted d baby for her dreams but in real it was a miscarriage...so when he learns d truth he will come around... But he should not seed venom on his kids mind & turn them against their mother...thats wrong & also manhandling a woman that too when she was recently had a miscarriage... He shld behave like a human not a monster... Still i like this rk...he is complex...

I just hope they mend their issues & live happily with their kids...if they really love each other then they will forgive & love & support each other...

Liked d title...its kinda different...

Will be waiting for d next update...try to make it a two shot so that we wont have d need to wait another week for d final part Lol...

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Great start.

Reading first few lines i thought Madhu is writing them, but was shocked.

How can a person fall out of love so easily. There has to be back story for RK's behaviour.Hope he correct himself.

will be waiting for the next part.

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Twinkle

@twinklev20

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Lovely and intense story...👏...u have very beautifully and correctly explained the feelings of a married working woman with kids...👏...EXCELLENT...👏...LOVED IT...👏

plsss continue sooon...

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Nice concept

Rk is jealous or his ego what happened to him

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Very nice and different story Vinu👏

I really liked it. Rk is different Madhu is different and their love and life is different . Rk is hell angry at Madhu for the miscarriage. He even instigated kids against her. That is something actually happens in real life. If parents have problems with each other then they will try to influence kids for their support. Anyways shall we expect a happy ending? No problem if u decide the other way. I still love the story. Waiting for the next part

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Frozen11

@Frozen11

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Nice story.

I was shocked after reading the first few lines. How can RK behave like this in front of his kids. I think there is more to the story than meets the eye. Hope he realises his mistake n makes up for it. Hope their cute family does not break in the end.

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

omg vinu missed u so much my friendly sis love u and this awesome TS 🤗!! I can see how much Madhu is completely heartbroken 🥺and poor the kids and madhu suffering becoz of their dad Rk's rude arrogant harsh behaviour and wrong blames😵 !! omg feeling bad for madhu and kids !! cant wait for next part update it soon my dear😉!!Thanks for pm😊 !!

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Vinu,🤗this is your first story,i am reading,😳as i don't read stories much on IF 😆(o/w i am a crazy reader and i love to read books.) ,but i loved it dear.👍🏼This is the title or you will add title later on.😛 A powerful story with strong message.👏Loved this strong Madhu,and you have explained everything and written it beautifully.⭐️ Rk thinks,she delibrately did this and he's rude and misbehaved with Madhu and blame her for everything. but hope,he'll know the truth behind it soon.😃Feeling bad for Madhu but good that she's not weak but a strong women.👍🏼 Waiting for next part.😛

Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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