Rishbala TS: Fifty Shades of Kundra (Part 3, Pg. 17) 4/8/2015 - Page 2

Curious to know how Madhu is going to shed her inhibitions.

What the h??
who said ana & Grey's love is not true?? Their love was so True thats why she could bring him out of his past & he could come out too. Its not only mere attraction they felt or wanted only hot rough sex!! They had loved each other crazily too okay??
first tell me what fifty shades u will show in ur os?? Are u gonna copy d work of e l james & Show rk as a mercurial kind of man like grey??
if i say there is only one rk the superstar & I damn well say there is only one christian grey!!
ur title itself irks me...sorry to say but truly!!
i loved d book not only its erotic but story wise i found it different & Amazing so dont make a mockery of the story which were read by more than hundred million people...try something different on ur own!! Cant even imagine madhu in place of ana or rk in place of grey!! I seriously wonder what u r gonna write & What mockery u r gonna create. Now itself few started commenting on fifty shades of grey book a crap & Loathing the writer e l james...its so annoying to see people mock someones talent.
well, i have read few of ur os & I really loved it bcos they r urs & Given my heartfelt comment on it... & Dont tell me this is also my creation, ur title is enough to show what it is!!
i hope i dont hate rk the character i loved most
but at the same time i love christian grey eveb more so dont insult him.
i always give honest comment so i did here too.
u r a good writer so write something good & Pls spare grey & ana!!
if u still say i have freedom to write whatever damn well i pls then i would say d same. I have damn well have dright to comment what i please.

Its a heartly request that if u dnt know abt christians n anas love then dnt drag it anywhere for u ur rishbala might be only lovers but let me tell u there r more lovers for ana n grey n just like u cant tolerate ur mighty mbeiej being copied by anyone we christian grey lovers also dnt like our grey being copied

Originally posted by: madhurish

What the h??
who said ana & Grey's love is not true?? Their love was so True thats why she could bring him out of his past & he could come out too. Its not only mere attraction they felt or wanted only hot rough sex!! They had loved each other crazily too okay??
first tell me what fifty shades u will show in ur os?? Are u gonna copy d work of e l james & Show rk as a mercurial kind of man like grey??
if i say there is only one rk the superstar & I damn well say there is only one christian grey!!
ur title itself irks me...sorry to say but truly!!
i loved d book not only its erotic but story wise i found it different & Amazing so dont make a mockery of the story which were read by more than hundred million people...try something different on ur own!! Cant even imagine madhu in place of ana or rk in place of grey!! I seriously wonder what u r gonna write & What mockery u r gonna create. Now itself few started commenting on fifty shades of grey book a crap & Loathing the writer e l james...its so annoying to see people mock someone talent.
well, i have read few of ur os & I really loved it bcos they r urs & Given my heartfelt comment on it... & Dont tell me this is also my creation, ur title is enough to show what it is!!
i hope i dont hate rk the character i loved most
but at the same time i love christian grey eveb more so dont insult him.
i always give honest comment so i did here too.
u r a good writer so write something good & Pls spare grey & ana!!
if u still say i have freedom to write whatever damn well i pls then i would say d same. I havr damn well have d write to comment what i please.

You have taken things out of context. The 2 lines regardingm Grey and Ana are all from Madhu's perspective and not designed to be my personal commentary on their characters. The story has 3 sets of readers, 1) Who understand the complicated love story of Ana and Grey, 2) Who don't understand it and are not fascinated by their sex lives and 3) Do not understand Ana and Grey but are fascinated by their sex lives. Given Madhu's conservative background though she's married to a superstar, I feel she falls in the latter category. She doesn't understand their love story but like millions of women want to enact some of the love scenes from the story with her husband. If you also read in the paragraph, she admits also to have share some commonalities with Ana and Grey. But as everyone else think about their own love story, she has hers up on a pedestal.
As for how I plan to narrate MY fiction, it will have nothing whatsoever to do with exploring the dark emotional and psychological aspect of Fifty Shades of Grey. My One Shot will be all about sex. Yes. That's right. All about sex. It will be written in my own style and with tons of my own and Rishbala personality. It will be vastly different from Fifty Shades of Grey despite my title. If my sex scene does end up similar to it, well that's only because Madhu is inspired to explore her sexuality like Ana.
I appreciate feedback and I respect your opinions but also respect mine. Hold off on your judgment till I have written and posted my story. I think you will find that I have no interest in creating a parallel in their respective characters other than Rishbala inspired to give S&M a try.
I chose the title because it's a homage to the novel and movie that has inspired millions of women to explore their sexualities. And I assure you that E.L. James would not find my passage insulting. I am sure she'll chuckle and quite enjoy. Every successful author wants their work discussed till there's nothing left and only way that happens if there are polar opinions. I understand your protectiveness for Ana and Grey but one little word about their love story doesn't mock and insult it. It just opens up a dialogue.
Anyway, as I stated at the beginning, words have been taken out of context and I would appreciate it if you held your opinion till you've the read the story in it's entirety.

Originally posted by: Love-Blossoms

Its a heartly request that if u dnt know abt christians n anas love then dnt drag it anywhere for u ur rishbala might be only lovers but let me tell u there r more lovers for ana n grey n just like u cant tolerate ur mighty mbeiej being copied by anyone we christian grey lovers also dnt like our grey being copied

Plss spare a grt novel like 50 shades of grey bcoz the original is going to remain original only even if u write it in thousand twisted ways ur superstar rk wont become christian grey even 1% so for heavens sake dnt mock our christian n anas love for ur not so grt rishbala bcoz surely grey has more lovers than ur grt couple so its better u dnt give invitation to them to drop on ur thread n say something which they dnt want to say n if u really love rk then keep him wat he was rather than making him wat he never can be neither rk can be grey nor madhu can be ana so plss spare others favs. For the entertainment of ur own fav.

things out of context. The 2 lines regardingm Grey and Ana are all from Madhu's perspective and not designed to be my personal commentary on their characters. The story has 3 sets of readers, 1) Who understand the complicated love story of Ana and Grey, 2) Who don't understand it and are not fascinated by their sex lives and 3) Do not understand Ana and Grey but are fascinated by their sex lives. Given Madhu's conservative background though she's married to a superstar, I feel she falls in the latter category. She doesn't understand their love story but like millions of women want to enact some of the love scenes from the story with her husband. If you also read in the paragraph, she admits also to have share some commonalities with Ana and Grey. But as everyone else think about their own love story, she has hers up on a pedestal.
As for how I plan to narrate MY fiction, it will have nothing whatsoever to do with exploring the dark emotional and psychological aspect of Fifty Shades of Grey. My One Shot will be all about sex. Yes. That's right. All about sex. It will be written in my own style and with tons of my own and Rishbala personality. It will be vastly different from Fifty Shades of Grey despite my title. If my sex scene does end up similar to it, well that's only because Madhu is inspired to explore her sexuality like Ana.
I appreciate feedback and I respect your opinions but also respect mine. Hold off on your judgment till I have written and posted my story. I think you will find that I have no interest in creating a parallel in their respective characters other than Rishbala inspired to give S&M a try.
I chose the title because it's a homage to the novel and movie that has inspired millions of women to explore their sexualities. And I assure you that E.L. James would not find my passage insulting. I am sure she'll chuckle and quite enjoy. Every successful author wants their work discussed till there's nothing left and only way that happens if there are polar opinions. I understand your protectiveness for Ana and Grey but one little word about their love story doesn't mock and insult it. It just opens up a dialogue.
Anyway, as I stated at the beginning, words have been taken out of context and I would appreciate it if you held your opinion till you've the read the story in it's entirety.

OMG!!! Madhu's wildest fantasies😳

Do continue with the story please😃 waiting eagerly😃

@T : The story has 3 sets of readers, 1) Who understand the complicated love story of Ana and Grey, 2) Who don't understand it and are not fascinated by their sex lives and 3) Do not understand Ana and Grey but are fascinated by their sex lives.

I am almost done writing the story. Hopefully I can post tomorrow! 😳