Rishbala TS: Fifty Shades of Kundra (Part 3, Pg. 17) 4/8/2015

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Rishbala TS: Fifty Shades of Kundra

Index:

Part 1 - Pg. 1

Part 2 - Pg. 11

Teaser - Pg. 15

Part 3- Pg. 17



Part 1


Sex sells and anyone disillusioned enough to think otherwise,
should go live in a monastery. Certainly
nothing else would explain the monumental success of E.L. James, Fifty Shades
of Grey. Madhu thinks disdainfully, the
twisted love affair between a wallflower and a rich, handsome, controlling man
isn't exactly profound. It definitely
doesn't make one pause, look around at the world in general with a new and
improved perspective. Well perhaps she
and RK does share some common denominator with the characters. But theirs is true love, unlike Ana and Grey's
let's just have hot and dirty sex,
Madhu thinks wryly. Her dearest pati may
be a rich, hot, sexy guy and granted he was quite an ass when they first met
but he was always her hot, sweet, sexy ass.
And he certainly never used her to fulfill weird, sexual fantasies. Still, she thinks wistfully, she can't deny
that she's morbidly fascinated by the story and even more so by the trailer for
the new movie. It's like the forbidden
fruit. She shouldn't touch but just want
to sink her teeth right into it. Madhu
just want a little taste to appease her curiosity. For once she wants to shed her inhibitions
and give in to the lurid sexual fantasies that has been plaguing her, thanks to
Ms. James and her little work of fiction.

She nervously pulls at the sheer, silk, red lingerie that makes her feel more naked than without a stitch of clothing. RK better appreciate all the effort she has put in to plan for their evening of romance. Madhu blushes thinking about the knowing look she got from Radhaji when she casually suggested that she go out and spend the evening with friends. To say she was mortified, would be an understatement. Shouldn't the earth have opened up and swallowed her whole to spare her additional embarrassment? Mother Nature is a woman, she should have been on her side, Madhu thinks glumly. Nonetheless, despite all the embarrassment involved in her meticulous planning, Madhu is also very excited. She wonders, what will be RK's reaction? She giggles, he better be jubilant and more than willing to play the role of Ana. She grins mischievously, it's only fitting that as the Mr. India in their relationship she should get to play Christian Grey, and crack the whip, so to speak.

BIWI!

RK is here, Madhu thinks frantically. What should she do now? Then calling herself stupid in 2 different languages, she smacks her forehead. She quickly looks around one last time to make sure everything is in order before her real life hero comes marching into the room. Assuming what she considers to be her sexiest pose, Madhu lounges on the bed, letting the short, strappy lingerie ride up her thighs; allowing RK a clear view of what she's wearing underneath. To be more precise, what she's NOT wearing.

BIWI, RK calls out, right before he enters their room. As soon as he opens the door, he is transfixed by the welcoming, alluring sight that greets him. Luminescent in the warm glow from the candle light, her skin transparent through the sheer fabric, beckons him to move forward and worship her body with kisses. RK sighs happily, his biwi looks like a delicious, exotic dish that's all for his to taste and his alone. He moves forward happily, ready to take up Madhu on her silent offer.

Damn! RK stops in his track and frowns. Mother Nature is playing a cruel trick on him and well so is his biwi. Disgruntled, he thinks just yesterday night Madhu told him to keep his hands and little man away from her because she still has her period. Damn! Women. He look up at the ceiling as if seeking answer to a prayer, dear God, did you put women on this Earth just to bedevil us poor men? He looks at the enticing vision of Madhu on their bed and groans unhappily. Tonight is going to be one of the longest and most uncomfortable night of his life.

Madhu frowns in consternation. Initially she was ecstatic to see the flame of desire in his eyes the second he saw her but now he looks like he could cheerfully strangle her to death. She sits up irately, quite ready to strangle HIM for not showing the proper amount of enthusiasm that a man of his nature should be displaying. Madhu looks up at the ceiling, dear God, did you put men on this earth just so they can ignore and hurt our feelings? All her hard work has gone down the drain. Forget about jumping her bones, RK can't even be bothered to speak to her.

This is all Khushi's fault. Madhu thinks angrily, she should have never listened to her. So what if Khushi's Fifty Shades sex experiment was a success, hers has turned into a bloody disaster. Beyond furious now and also feeling quite humiliated, Madhu marches up to RK and grabs his collar.

Madhu (hisses): Mr. Rishabh Kundra...what is your problem?!?

RK grabs her fists furiously and glares.

RK (growls): My problem Biwi...? Bloody hell woman...(Shouting) YOU ARE AT THE ROOT OF ALL MY PROBLEMS!

Madhu gasps in outrage and tightens her fists around his collar. Glaring murderously, she wonders what would be the most efficient and effective way to kill him. SHE?!? The root of all his problems? INDEED!!

Madhu: How dare you RK?!? I am not the reason for all your problems but damn it...YOU ARE THE REASON FOR ALL OF MINE! Ugh! I spent all day planning to surprise you with a romantic evening, even suffered through the knowing looks from maa and the servants all because I thought IT WOULD MAKE YOU HAPPY!! But you pati dearest have never been considerate of any of my efforts and feelings!

RK's flushed face reflects the rage building inside him. He's almost tempted to turn his little shrew of a biwi over on to his knees even if it means signing his death warrant. Hah! Some nerve she has, accusing him of being inconsiderate of her feelings. What about his feelings? His needs?!? She can blithely ignore mine and I am supposed to walk on eggshells around her? Hah! Not bloody likely! He clenches his jaw and menacingly looms over Madhu.

RK (hisses): You have some bloody nerves accusing me of being inconsiderate of your feelings! Did you think about mine when you decided to parade around in our room in a flimsy outfit that shows off your delectable body more than it covers?

Madhu (stomps her feet in frustration): Huh?!? What the hell is that supposed to mean?!?

RK (snaps): Woman the way the silk is clinging to your body, I want to rip the bloody thing off and bury myself deep inside you. But can I let go and act on my desire? No!

Madhu (confused): Huh?

RK (clamps his hands over his face in frustration and groans): God Madhu! You can be such a nitwit. You said it last night that you have your period. So how the hell am I supposed to make love to you?!?

Madhu stares at RK uncomprehendingly for a moment before she bursts out laughing. The anger and the burning desire to put a muzzle on RK just vanished into thin air. This pati of hers claims he is quite intelligent, cunning but he's really dumb but still quite adorable.

RK scowls at Madhu's sudden peals of laughter. Usually he loves the melodious sound of her laugh, the way her eyes sparkle with brightness and humor and the upward tilt of her lips. Hell he still enjoys watching the pure joy on her face even though she's laughing at his expense, he thinks grumbly. The way she laughs is a bloody turn on, too damned sexy for his peace of mind. Still he must focus and get his biwi to understand and respect his needs, damn it, even if it kills him!

RK (snaps): I fail to see what the hell is so funny about our damned situation?!?

Madhu stops laughing and shakes her head ruefully.

Madhu (smiles sweetly up at him): Ohh RK...God gave you beauty but he forgot to give a brain.

RK (offended): Excuse me...?!? God gave me a brain thank you very much! But he forgot to give you...

His words are cut off as Madhu pushes him on to the bed and straddles his hips. RK gulps uncontrollably as he feels her rubbing against him in sweet, torturous motions.

RK (hoarsely): Biwi...?

Madhu shakes her head ruefully again. She grabs RK's hands and guides it under the hem of her ultra-short lingerie. Sometimes it's better to just show then tell. His hand brush up against her bottom and he realizes that Madhu is not wearing any underwear! She sighs and shivers in pleasure as she feels his finger probe into her.

RK (looks up her questioningly): Madhu...?

Madhu leans down and peppers his cheeks and chin with feather light kisses before settling on his lips. She teases him mercilessly with little nips and licks, pulling away before giving his tongue full entry into her mouth.

Madhu (teasingly whispers against his lips): If you had used your brain tonight pati dearest then you would have noticed that I am not wearing any underwear. No woman in her right mind would forego a tampon, let alone her underwear when she has her period. That means honey that you can most definitely make love to me tonight. Better yet, (grins wickedly and holds up 2 silk ties) I am going to make love to you tonight and you will be my love slave.


P.S. - I turned the OS into a Two Shot, since it was taking me far too long to update. So I should be posting Part 2 by end of this week...it will be all sexy times. 😉 Hope you all enjoy the story. And to those readers who thought the story would replicate Fifty Shades of Grey, I hope you now think otherwise. 😉 By the way, fun fact - Did you know that Fifty Shades of Grey was actually a Fan Fiction based on Twilight before the characters were changed? 😉 Maybe I should get my work published so I can be the next E.L. James. 😉😆

Likes, Comments, Feedback will be much appreciated. Cheerios!



Index:

Part 1 - Pg. 1

Part 2 - Pg. 11

Teaser - Pg. 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
Madhu wants to shed her inhibitions. 😲
Looking forward to rest of the story.
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I am all for this concept T ! as much as I loathe E L James and that poor piece of writing which has earned her a tonne of money, I don't mind reading your take on something similar.and that too on RishBala of course ! haha

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i can just imagine rk as mr grey 😉
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sounds good to my ears.😉😉
continue soon👏
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Well heck, you certainly grabbed my attention with that title!

I maybe the only person left who has not read that book. It's not my fault. No time. If I have time to read, it is on this forum and God knows I am so behind on that! 😒

But your story sounds very interesting and so do Madhu's thoughts.

Good luck and I will try not to fall behind on this one!
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Uufff .. knockout sexy intro!! Please finish this soon :)
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Congrats for the New story
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Congrats on the new story.
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Looking forward to the story

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