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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: karamjeet
Outstandinggg + Tooo Emotional OS...
Can't stop my tears ...
Feelinggg bad 4 Rishbala ...
specially when Madhu asked Rk to kill her nd told about baby too it's a Heart breaking part for me...Loved d Way Rk killed dat Rohan...

thank u so much dear.

ur comment means a lot to me.

this story is something very spl to me & I value everyones comment.

if u really felt this story emotional then i feel like i had succeeded in a very tough exam.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: omama_raza
what an evil story.
madhu's death was very painful:(
will surely gonna miss your stories

thanks dear.

awe..even i ll miss writing & More than that i ll miss all my lovely readers comments.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sss333
Really sad endg.
Ronan is an evil.
Heart wrenching story😭

awe..dont cry dear.

its just a story lol.

thanks for ur feed back

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: zoya789
Heart Breaking OS

thanks for ur feedback dear.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: uma88
Unres, but the main thing is you have so much guts that you made an evil dead for rohan, kavya wil be standing beside you trying to strangle your neck for making her rohan this much evil.. Just kidding sudha.. Truly amazing work

awe..akka, i think she wont be trying to strangle me but probably give me a hug & Jalebi to eat lol for making her rohan so evil lol...

thanks akka. I m so glad & Feeling better after reading all urs comments that i did justice to this story & Make my killer happy.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: .PassionateLuv.
nice OS sudha 😳
HBD kavya dear 😊

Thanks dear.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Mikolingam
Very emotional and painful to read your story moved me to tears. You have written so well the rape part and Madhu's and Rk's pain .
Very talented . Pls continue to write more

Awe...thank u so much dear...

I was so nervous to write this story but now i m so happy that u all liked it & u all felt d pain of madhu & rk...

Thanks for ur appreciation...

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: AzraZaidi
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Unres

Standing ovation for you !!! You need guts to write smthng lik this
but wen u start telling which rk had in his kit ... I was shocked and i understood that aaj rohan kutte se bhi bori maut marega
so i skipe and came to d last para ... I just couldnt read it ... Sorry
but i liked d last para so much !!! it was a very nice end to ur story

Awe...azra baby...i m honored...thank u so much...

Haha...i know i wrote that bit a little scary...i want to write more but i controlled myself not wanting to scare u all buy still u skipped that part...but thats fine dear...

Glad u liked d last para...since its my last story i thought to use all my stories title...

Thanks dear...