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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

its very brutal
i skipped most of rk-rohan's part
but loved the last para all ur stories titles included 😊
atlast one question are u leaving this forum also?

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Anish

@anish17

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Sorry sudha I couldn't able to read this os .
Read till rohan's entry .
I thought to give a try for sad and painful story but I couldn't .
Loved rishbala phone convo
Thanks for the pm .

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

its a really painful story bt nicly written

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

such a heart wrenching OS sudha dear!!! very well penned and presented!!!

you too quitting why?? please don't do this dear!!! I started to read your stories nd u quitting... 😭
will miss your writings a lots!!! love you dear!!!

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tavamm

@tavamm

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Can't stop my tears. ..really feel sad for rk and madhu. And the baby...heart breaking part.
Sudha the last part awesome. .superb.
pls stay sudha. .missing u.

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

This is one of the best os I have read...outstanding dear...

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Swati

@PRATHA1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Res!
Unreserved!
Emotional, heartbreaking & tragic update!
Evil rohan ruined happy married life of Rishbala! It's very difficult to write down stories on such sensitive issue, you handled it very well! Madhu's physical pain, more than that her mental pain is nicely described! RK took revenge by giving him brutal death, such person deserved this or i can say more than this! I feel very bad for RK! I can't imagine how would he survive in those days without his madhu, with so much pain & more than that guilt of killing his beloved biwi by his own hand! It's very very heartbreaking to see our beloved couple's brutal death! This Rishbala's end is more tragic than what they had shown in serial!
I like that last para where you used your stories' titles brilliantly! This title is perfect for this story!

Edited by PRATHA1 - 10 years ago

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2thless

@2thless

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Nice OS... a story surrounding a very sensitive issue... very well written...👏
Rapists should be punished the way RK did... they definetely deserve that for putting a women through so much pain... hurting her body and soul...

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SpotlighT

@Spot_lighT

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

sad story..but u described nd write it beautifuly 👍🏼
thanx for the pm..

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Ohh My Sudha...I never expected this kinda story from you... OMFG..seriously...

aww..coming to the story, to be frank it is one hell of a Thriller ...

the way you narrated what ROhan did to Madhu and How Madhu struggles...ohhh my very gruesome...

but I loved how RK took revenge , tortured that Bas#$% and the killed him brutally...I mean as you said at the end, every person who think of other female like ROhan think should be killed or punished to Death...

That was a n awesome attempt and you have done it brilliantly...👏👏👏

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