Rima OS: EVIL DEAD - Page 4

Very touching painful story. Loved it.

Loved how you have incorporated all the names of your works aptly in this OS.

Sudha it's really a master piece
I know di is really enjoying this story as u made it worthy
No one deserve to be raped and rapist should be punished
And all punishment r small for them ...The bloody Rohan deserved more painful death ( I don't know how to make more painful though).
Really feeling bad for the unborn baby as well as Madhu
And of course RK
Ok Last thing is U really justify with Kavya di's challenge ( I think hope di also agree with me )
And the last para was mindblowing all ur story name was there ...really innovative
Thanks for pm

Superb story Sudha 👏

Wow kuddos sudha, what a challenge i really loved it, you really did justice to this concept and sure kavya would have loved it.. I can't believe our Jalebi sudha wrote this, what a suprise.. Since madhu died at the beginning, it didn't affect me much, but no girl deserve this worst and i didn't feel sad or disgusted while reading the tortures rk did for rohan, he really really deserve it and felt sad while rk killed himself.. You made us feel his heart through your titles of other works.. Thats really nice.. While reading the word my dancing doll i clearly got your idea.. You brought their past neatly with all your other works title.. Its not clumsy or any other thing.. On the whole its a neat brilliant work from you

Brutality and vengeance at it's best!!! I may sound weird but I loved this story a lot Sudhu!!! Since it's merely fictional so I won't connect with real life!!! It always take such issues to extreme ends of hatred from my side! So let's stick to fiction!
Guddu's favourite genre it was... Sad endings with ultimate villainess!!! So is mine!!! I am damn sure she would have applauded you for attempting it... From your pre story description I could figure out that you haven't written such genre ever... It was a remarkable attempt Sudhu!!! While reading it, I had so many funny funny thoughts in my mind which I wished to write here but I might have sounded odd so stopped myself!!!
All in all, it was superbly written! Kudos!

Originally posted by: zubeada

very very sad story 😕
but u described everything very well
its awesome...

Originally posted by: rima4ever

very touching painful story

Originally posted by: rima4ever

loved it