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LoVe ForEver (SS)


CHARACTER SKETCH:



RK: Rishabh Kundra,Very handsome and Dashing Personality.

Trishna: sister of RK by Profession doctor and a widow.

MK: Mohan Kundra,Buiness Tycoon and Father of RK & Trishna.

Radha Kundra: Mother of RK & Trishna.

Payal and Ansh:daughter and son of Trish.They are 8yrs and 6yrs...

Dips: Cousin of Rk

Madhu:Beautiful girl who lives in chawl and from middle class family.

Padmini:Mother of Madhu.

Malik:Father of Madhu

Sikki:lost his Parents at childhood and lives with RK's family and best friend of RK and Loves dips.

Bittu:Manage all the things of RK mansion.

INDEX:

PART 1,2,3: Page 1

PART 4,5: Page 2

PART 6,7,8,9:Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part :1


At Chawl:

P: Madhu...getup...its 7 in the morning...

P(to herself):hey...Bhagwan...I said this girl...studying late in the night will effect in

the morning...

P:Madhu getup...did u remember today is ur final exam..

M(quickly gets up and sit): Meraa exam...and jumps out from bed and goes to fresh up herself...

Madhu comes with getting ready...

M:maa bye...

P:Have your breakfast madhu...

M:no maa...I should go...its too late now...

Malik comes from Market...

M:bye maa...bye malik...

Malik:all the best madhu beta...

At RK Mansion:

Radha:bittuji Are u going to airport...you know naa...today Rishu and sikki are arriving from US.

B:Yes auntiji...

Bittuji moves to leave but suddenly looking to someone at the door he stops right there...

RK:Surprise...Surprise...

Radha:aree...rishu...how did u come and this early...and we were sending you bittuji for picking u both...

RK: If told u right time..then how u people would be surprised like this now...

Trish(coming from behind Radha) : U never change Rishu...

RK: ya im the right kameena...di...

Sikki (from behind RK): Mom not only RK its me too came...

R:aree...hw could I forget u...come in both of you...

They both get in and Payal,ansh come to rk in running...

Payal:hey hero...

RK: hey my angel...

Payal:Did u bring choclates for me...

RK:no...

She makes puppy face...and doesn't talk...

Ansh:hiii...Did u bring my Play station

Sikki:yes

Then Rk goes knee bend near to Payal and...

RK: Plant me a kiss on my cheek or else I wont give u the choclates...

Payal: wow...really and gives a kiss to RK...and take the box from him...

R:now you both fresh up and come il arrange breakfast for you...

Si:Oh..ya..dont know about RK but im very hungry...mom...

Rk and sikki goes to their rooms...

Trish in the hall:

T:common ansh show me ur report card...

Ansh was afraid and bent his head down because he was a lazy boy who

doesn't have intrest to study...and now gave his report by bending his head to his mom

T:what is this...is this called a report card ...Look at the marks...u both are not

concentrating and studying daily...not like this il appoint a home tutor...then

he/she makes u study...because nowdays im busy in the hospital...(she is a doctor)...

Then Rk and sikki comes from upstairs...after fresh up

RK:di...y r u scolding him...he is a kid...he doesn't know what is studying in this

age...See to sikki he even don't study now...

T:u shut up Rk...i should first scold u guys for spoiling both of them...

RK:ok ok...u can scold later now..lets have breakfast...

They all are having breakfast...then there comes dips who is RK's cousin...

Dips:hey Rk...hw r u...

Sikki: not only Rk its me too dips came india and waiting specially for u since reached home...

Dips fumes...

D:Rk say something naa...want to listen ur words...

RK:im not a Radio Jokey dips...

D:I like this attitude...of urs Rk

Si:dips I will also develop attitude for u...

Dips:plz...can u be silent im talking to RK...

RK:but I don't wanna talk to u...

Dips: its ok Rk...and I came here to take u to my friends...I want to introduce you...plz...come with Rk...

RK:no...no ways...take sikki ...he is ready...

Si:ya sure...

RK: Mom...im going out for a small shopping...

D:me too ...

Then dips and Rk go to shopping but rk unwillingly takes dips...

Trish: Mom my break fast is completed now...I should do a important work that is to call a newspaper and make them to give an add in paper..for a tutor...

Ra:ok...

Trish calls the news paper agency and makes them to give an add for a home tutor...for Payal and ansh...

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PART : 2

Madhu finished her exam and with all her friends she comes out of Exam hall...

Madhu's friend Neha :hey madhu shall we both go for shopping...as it been many days since I bought something for me...

Madhu:ok...lets go and have fun...

Madhu and Neha...go for shopping in a complex...and dips ,Rk also comes to

that complex as there is a book store...(Rk and madhu loves to read novels)...so

M:hey neha...you look at these dresses..il be back in a while...

Neha:oh...going to book store...

Madhu smiles...and say yes dear il just see my Preeti shenoy's book is there or not...

Neha :ok go...

Madhu...goes to the book store...

Rk also comes to the store but dips attracted by clothes store in the opposite side of books shop...so...she moves to the clothes store...

RK and madhu in books store searching and looking for the books...

RK from other side of books rack takes out a book and madhu also the other side

of RK takes the book from same rack...RK looks madhu eyes...and was attracted

by her big eyes which are shinning and stuck there seeing her eyes which were

reading some book... with her kajal outline filled eyes...they were tempting him

to see the girl who was the beautiful princess of that beautiful eyes

and...then...he walked to madhu who was the other side...but madhu for some

book at the top...to take was suffering on with legs which stood on

toe...then...RK comes from behind..and lifts madhu from back in his hands...to

make her height high to reach the book she needs...then madhu suddenly seeing

back shocks...and fell back in arms of RK who catched without her falling ...and

then the both look into each others eyes...and RK was mesmerized by her

beauty now...eyelock of both for a moment...after sometime both come to their sense and madhu gets down from Rk's arms and...says...

M:R u mad...y did u... Then Rk puts his hand against her lips...madhu shuts her

mouth and shocks...and looks straight into Rk's eyes...she was lost into his eyes...

RK:whats your name sweetheart...

M:mmm...mm...Rk then moves his hand...madhu fears that he is not a nice guy

and moves from there...fastly...then RK follows her...Madhu by seeing RK goes

into the lift...RK too goes into lift and shuts the door and press last floor button

and then madhu afraid of RK and then goes back...RK moves to her...and pinns

to the lift...and her phone slips out of her hand and ...RK...comes nearer to

madhu and closes her way to move

Now they are very close even madhu can smell his perfume...then Rk asks her

name...again...when Rk was looking into madhu's eyes then madhu from her bag

takes out pepper spray bottle and sprays on rk and moves away by taking phone

which was down...now...

RK:aaa...what did u do to me...

M: Pepper spray...

RK:Y did u do this... R u gone crazy...

M:U were coming nearer to me naa that's y...and now im going ...

RK:no...I was coming because there was a fly back of u...see...

Madhu sees the fly and shouts aaa...

M:wait im so sorry il wash ur face...madhu wash his face...

on the top floor lift was stoped a long time back and they were not in sense that it was stoped...after washing his face ...with her waterbottle

RK (coming nearer and taking her bag and throwing):what did u say...y did u put

me this solution now il do that which u expected before wen im coming

nearer...madhu shocks and then remembers ...and shouts...

M:lift is stoped... oh god...

RK:yes it is stopped because my friends had stopped it...

M:what

RK:yes...

M:im so sorry...tell ur friends...

Then suddenly the lift starts going down as it is now cleared by the

mechanic...and there comes a voice from top...now it is cleared by

mechanic...sorry for inconvinence...then...

Madhu fumes with anger on RK...

RK: no problem...also in angry u r more cute,than previously...and then the floor

Comes madhu gets down by taking mobile and her bag...

M:neha come lets go fast frm here...(and she takes her)

Neha:ok my shopping over lets go...but wts the matter...y r u afraid...

M:nothing here some people are irritating me...

N:Ok...chalo...

RK:did u finished ur shopping...

Dips:yes Rk lets go...

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PART : 3

Madhu goes home and goes into kitchen and drink 2 glasses full of water and then..

P:what happened madhu...y r u drinking water in hurry Did u write the exam well...

M:yes maa...I have written well...but today had a bad shopping with...neha...dats

it...its ok leave it...u tell didn't u stich today(she does stiching for earning)...

P:today im having pain in my legs...so il do it tomorrow...

Madhu thinks something and feels sorry and decides to make her stop this and

she will start earning in the house as her studies are also completed...

M(by pulling her mom to sofa):maa...u come here and sit I will maalish ur legs...

P:no madhu not now...

M:maa...plz...don't say anything...im not going to listen...

Madhu (while maalishing Padmini's legs):maa...u stop this stiching from now il say

any tutions and earn...im free now...il do the job plz stop it...

P:madhu now a days malik is also becoming old he is also not getting work

continuously...il continue if u want to also do...u do...

M:ok...

Madhu takes the newspaper and searches for a tutor job and sees the add for

home tutor given by Trish and calls to that number and

conforms with bittuji that she would be coming from the 2days later...

At RK Mansion:

RK was in his bedroom...near window and remembered madhu and her

beautiful eyes and also the incident...and smiles himself...and then Trish comes

there and see rk who was smiling himself...

T: rishu...what happened...

RK:nothing...

T:no something special had happened today...tel me...dont u tell to ur sis...

RK: today seen a girl at book store...she was so beautiful...her eyes made a magic

in me couldn't forget her...and she sprayed pepper spray on me...and tells the

whole story happened...and then...

RK:di...do u know now a days there are no girls like her...

T:what do u mean...

RK:now a days the girls becoming open,daring and dashing,their exposing

dresses...their rude behaviour...even not in india...but after seeing her some

magical poems within me made me crazy...she is afraid of me...I can see it in her

eyes...and she was feeling the first touch of a guy and was tensed...has senstive

nature,kind heart...wen I was suffering from her spray making me comfort...

T:oh...plz stop your poetry...how do you know about her inner feelings...firstly

say me that...

RK:oh god di...I m a psycologist...did u forget that...

T:hahahahaaa...ok I have work if I sit here with u...u r really making me go mad...im going...

Rk smirks...

And then Bittuji informs trishna about the new home tutor...

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love the 3 updates
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PART : 4

2 days Passed...

At RK mansion:

Rk and payal were playing by making eachother run...

Madhu entered the Mansion and was coming inside the gate...

And the other side RK and payal were coming by running...Payal came running towards madhu and rk followed her...payal went near gate and RK who was running came and bumps on Madhu...and both together fell in pool which was beside...

And madhu doesn't know swimming...Rk thinks that she can survive but ,she

couldn't and was going under water but rk caught by her waist brought up...

As there was no one in the house...then he pressed her stomach...then water were out...Madhu then got up...and sat and then she shocks by seeing rk...

RK:hey don't get tensed...I wont do anything...and there comes payal from

back...and puts her hand on madhu...

Payal:who are you...di,...

M:im...im...new tution teacher...Rk smirks..

Then from outside gate Trrish comes with ansh along with Radha maa...

T:Rk what is this...what happened and who is this girl...

RK:nothing happened di...she is new tution teacher...

T:oh...

Then madhu gets up and...

M to T:il come tomorrow...

T:but wait u cant go home like this and gives a towel...to madhu..

Madhu wipes her hair...

Radha:Rk change ur dress and come... u must drop her at home...she cant go like this...

Rk after changing comes to car and starts...

T:I forgot to ask ur name...wt is ur name...

M:madhu...

T:ok madhu don't worry he is my bro he drops u at ur home safely...from tomorrow u start the tution and we r very sorry for all this...

M:no no its ok...it happens...

RK takes her in car but madhu was afraid again abt him...and his behaviour...and

when she came to know that he is a rich guy she is now even more afraid because

she had an experience of her friend who was cheated by a rich guy so...madhu

from there doesn't talk to rich guys...

In Car:

Rk was driving and madhu sat quitely beside him in the seat...and then suddenly

Rk stops the car and locks all the glass windows and doors...madhu feels

something is going to be wrong...then Rk comes nearer to madhu...close to

her...and gently moves her hair which is on her eyes falling ...with his fingers...

Madhu...then closes her eyes...and then Rk slowly moves his hand over

madhu...she was tensed now and sweat started and RK with his hand took the

seat belt and fixed to the seat...

Now Rk was in his seat and started driving...madhu was continuosly staring Rk...

RK:I know that u r feeling sorry because u understood me in wrong way...

M: how do u know...

Rk smirks...

And then madhus home came...

Madhu was going to get down from car then...

RK:madhu...

Madhu turns to him...

RK(forwards his hand): this is RK...friends...

M(remembers her mom's words about rich guys):sorry...

And then gets down the car...

RK:why is she afraid...

To be cont...


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PART : 5

The next day

Madhu was in RK Mansion and teaching to Ansh and Payal...and there is no RK at home...

M:ok ansh u read this...il ask in 5mins...payal did u completed what I said before...

RK comes to home and suddenly looks at madhu and with staring at her

smirks...and will stand at balcony and continuously stare madhu...suddenly

madhu looks at RK and feels uncomfortable...and again after sometime she too

looks continuously and both will be lost in eachothers eyes ...then

Comes sikki...

Sikki:RK...RK...and he also looks to madhu for whom Rk was staring and madhu by seeing sikki comes back to sense and do her work...Rk also comes back to sense...

Sikki:wht is this man...first day of her coming and u made her fall for u...

RK:shut up sikki...she is not like rest of all girls...

S:oh..so love...

RK:nothing like that but she is something spl...

S:then it is love...right...

Rk smiles in a yes sign...

S:ok I have some work with ur lappe...give me that and u go to ur princess...

RK stands again near balcony...

Madhu gives the both of the kids to read some thing and comes to RK...

M:Y r u staring at me...

RK:Y r u beautiful...

M:what is this question...

RK:then y did u ask that question...don't u know tajmahal is beautiful...

M:so...

RK:then everybody stares to that beauty,same as that u r as beautiful as tajmahal...

Madhu feels shy nd couldn't understand what to say and then says...and blushes in herself...

M:...I know you rich guys...u people say these type of words and trap the girls...

RK:what...if u really feel im flirting u I will go from here bye...

Madhu stands there and was puzzled about RK and his words...

Then the next day...

Madhu was teaching to kids but again the same repeated by rk which is staring

at her continuosly and smirking...and their both eyelocks made eachother set

fire in them...developing of something special feelings to eachother...

The next day as usually madhu was teaching kids but there was a

difference...because she is not only teaching but her total concentration was on

balcony...and her eyes were searching and her heart was waiting...he still didn't

come...yes she was searching Rk...after sometime...

M to Payal: Payal...u both of u study...il just be back in a minute...

P:Mamaa's room is rightside...(she says by seeing in book as indication to madhu)...madhu shocks by this...

Madhu without giving any reply to her...goes near RK room and peeps from outside...Rk was playing play station in his room and by seeingn him ...

M(in herself): Today Y did he come to stare at me...

RK (from his room with playinG): Don't be confused sweetheart...

Rk comes out of his room to near madhu:what r u doing here...

M:me...me...nothing...thought trishs di's room...

RK:oh really...

M:see..i didn't came for u ...or to ask y didn't u come to balcony today...

RK:woww...nic answer..i didn't asked u anything u only gave me the answer ok...I know u like me naa...

M:shut up...

RK( by coming forward to madhu): Really...don't u like me...

M:mmm...mmm...u...

Rk then pins her to wall...madhu then tries to escape...and then he blocks her

way...and comes closer to her...by slowly moving her hair... and then comes

closer with his lips...madhu also closes her eyes now...they can breath

eachothers perfume...Rk then suddenly moves back and then...madhu opens

her eyes...with embarresment...then...

RK:sorry...and then he goes away...

Madhu goes away running from there...

Rk smirks and says...Kya karun teri...hayeee

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PART : 6

Then one day it is Rk's birthday...Mk arranged B'day party at RK

Mansion...Then madhu also comes to mansion who is invited...

Madhu then stands with Payal and ansh and they both start playing hide and seek

with madhu...while playing madhu goes to Rks room to search for ansh...and also

secretly to see RK suddenly ansh comes from outside and closes the door of the

bedroom...and then from bathroom RK comes out with a towel on his waist...he

was damn handsome

madhu was also very beautiful with a white anarkali...madhu suddenly shocks and

steps back Rk looks at madhu and comes to madhu and pins her to wall and

closes her way of going and with bear body moves close to her...his hairs's water

drops fell on madhu's cheek ...and then his head comes front and his lips comes

close and then

RK(in a whispering tone): Did u come to wish me...

Rishbala eyelock...madhu stands there like stone and will be lost in rk's eyes which was a romantic moment...

Madhu coudnt speak out in that moment...

RK:Im definitely not a gud guy but not a bad guy...today I wanna say u my feelings

for u in front of everyone be ready..

Madhu fears and runs away from there but she wants to hear the feelings of him

and she also loves but makes her heart as stone and says it to not

react...but in birthday party RK cuts the cake and plays guitar and plays his

feelings of "TUM HI HO" and after party while dropping madhu home...

RK and madhu were in car...Rk suddenly stops the car..

RK:get down from the car madhu...

Madhu was confused...says 'but y'

RK gets down and comes to madhus side...opens the caR DOOR OF madhus side and forwards his hand...then madhu gives her hand and gets down...

Then Rk takes a bouquet of rose flowers and goes down on his one knee and...says...

RK:Madhu I LOVE U ...

Madhu shocks but couldn't resist herself and cries...and goes inside car and sit...and RK was puzzeled...then Rk also goes inside the car...

RK:Madhu what happened...y did u come inside...I know u also like me naa...

M:RK drop me home...I don't want to talk anything now...just take me home...i know u rich guys...fool the girls flirt with them and pley with their feelings...

RK:madhu...

M:RK I can also walk and go...plz if u r not intrested in dropping me home...il go by walk...

And then Rk with confused mind drops her home...madhu without talking anything goes inside and goes to washroom directly without talking to anyone and cries a lot...

M (to herself): I too like u a lot...but no I cant forget about my friend...but Im not understanding then Y im crying RK...

Happiness and sadness are at a time in madhu's feelings...she coudnt resist herself from loving RK and forgetting him...so she decided to leave the job...

Then the next day madhu calls Bittuji...

M:hello bittuji...

B:ji...madhu ji tell me...

M:im not going to come from today...sorry...I got job at an institute...sorry for sudden information but everything happened suddenly...so im leaving ur job...sorry..

B:But...part time cant u manage...because now we cant...

M:bittuji please sorry...I cant...

Then madhu cuts the call...

Bittuji informs the whole thing to Trishna...

T:what y did she didn't tell before...now suddenly how can v manage...exams are approaching...

Rk comes from upstairs...

RK:di wt happened...Y r u so tensed...

T:Madhu is not going to teach anymore...so...

RK:what?

T:yes...

RK thinks to himself :Y madhu is behaving strangely...I just proposed her not even forced...then y she is ...

RK to T:di I have to talk something with u come with me...

T:hmm...and they both go upstairs to RK's room...

T:now tell me what's the matter

(Rk shares everything with trish & sikki from childhood)

T:tell me now...wt's the matter and y did u brought me here...

Rk : di...once I told about a girl...whom I met at book store...do u remember?

T:ya...

RK:do u know who is that girl..

T:how can I know...

RK:she is madhu di...

T:what...

RK: yes and yesterday I proposed her...and she said that all rich guys play with girls feelings...she has a wrong opinion on guys of rich class but im sure she likes me...that's y to not face me again she resigned this job...

RK and Trish were talking in Rk's room and Dips in the mean while comes when they both are talking...she listens everything that Rk told and also listens dips version of "convincing madhu for marriage" and she fumes in anger and turns and goes while going sikki bumps with dips...

D:aaa...cant u see...where u kept ur eyes...

Si:sorry...dips did u get hurt...

D:shut up...

Sikki goes into the room and sikki also comes to know about everything of Rk and madhu and feels happy...

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PART 7

Then after knowing about Madhu and Rk's love...dips fumes and drove fast to

madhu's place and then...

At chawl:

Dips knocks the door...

D:May I come in...

P:yes but who r u?

D:yaa im...

Madhu comes from behind...and sees dips...

M:U...here...

D:to talk something about u...

M:me...but about what...

D:lets sit and talk...

M:ok...

Padmini,madhu,dips sit and then...

D:madhu im a girl...i can understand ur feelings for RK...

Madhu then shocks...

P:RK...who is he madhu...

D:aunty Rk is MK's son...sorry to say but he is a very dangerous man...he is

trapping ur madhu in love...i know him from my childhood...and I cant see a girl

like madhu to be fooled by Rk..he plays with girls by telling that he loves a

lot...and the same he did wiith u madhu...by knowing...all this I came here to say

u all about him...and protect madhu from Rk...don't believe him madhu...im also

fooled by Rk in his love game ...he is a play boy...

Madhu and padmini shocked by all this and Padmini was fuming but madhu

coudnt believe...all this...and she again remembers her friend and belives may

be its true what dips had said...

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