Memory Loss Rishbala TS Alternative ending Pg11 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
WOW! nice update...hope madhu accepts RK & stays with him...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Madhu has already accepted Rishab's proposal
😊

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW! nice update...hope madhu accepts RK & stays with him...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
amazing update..
loved both parts very much..
beautiful pics nice selection..
can't wait for next part
plzzz update soon..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
love it hope maan understand soon she lost her memory
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
read both d parts together.
Wonderful story dear.
i loved it.
u have nicely merged maaneet & Rishbala story...
hmm..since i m a rishbala fan i wish they dont get separated & Stay together forever.
but i will love to read d way u have planned.
thanks for d pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
ohh my...they are going to get married..Maan has come...
I am eager to now..what will happen next...its quite interesting to see Maan and RK..fight for Madhu/Geet...
wwowww👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
both the parts r awesome
since i m a rishbala fan only so will want mb with rk only always
but i guess rk will understand n give maans geet to him n he will go away in next update maybe lets see wat u have planned
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Don't worry.Guess u didn't read the note I left b4 the 1st part.This TS will have double ending.In one ending Rishbala will be together.

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

both the parts r awesome
since i m a rishbala fan only so will want mb with rk only always
but i guess rk will understand n give maans geet to him n he will go away in next update maybe lets see wat u have planned

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Wht next yaar..
Kya hoga ab.. rishabala ya phir maneet...
Good one
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Thank u all 4 reading this TS.
Memory Loss Part 3
Rishab did not want to accept what Maan said.He did not want to lose Madhu.
R:How can you be so sure that it's your wife?
Maan said after a brief silence:I want to see her.
Rishab got tensed.
R:Ok.
Rishab took Maan home.Maan waited outside.
R:I will call Madhu now.
Rishab went inside.
Maan waited to see her eagerly.

Seeing Madhu inside Rishab lost his control due to tension and caressed her face romantically.
He was scared whether it would be their last intimate moment.
R:I love you Madhu.
Madhu smiled:Love you too Rishu.
Rishab was emotional:You will not leave me ever.Right?
M:No never.

Maan saw this from the door way and his heart was broken.He was reminded of his romantic moment with Geet.

Flash back...
Cuppng her face Maan told Geet:I can't live without you Geet.Promise me that you will never leave me.
G:I promise you that I will never leave you Maan.

Present...

Maan said in his mind:Your broke your promise Geet.

Seeing Maan ,Rishab and Madhu became embarrassed.
Madhu/Geet looked at Maan.
She:Who is this Rishab?
Maan's heart broke again.
Rishab lied:My friend Maan Singh Khurana.
She:I will make tea for your friend now.
She went to kitchen.
Rishab was tensed while looking at Maan to know his reaction.
He stammered:This is not your wife. Right?
Controlling his emotions Maan opened his mouth:
She is not my wife.Sorry for the disturbance.
Rishab was relieved.
Maan left from there heart broken.

Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera
Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina


Geet/Madhu came from kitchen with tea.
She:Where is your friend?
R:He went back.
G:So soon...?
R:He has an urgent work to do.
She kept the tea on the table.
Feeling so happy Rishab took her in his arms.She was blushing.
Maan who reached the gate turned back hoping to see his Geet for the last time.
Seeing Geet in Rishab's arms he was shattered.
Their lips were about to touch each other.

Not able to bear it anymore wiping his tears

Maan walked away fast.



Ho teri saari shoharatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhi pe saari rehamatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina



After some days...

Rishab-Madhu got married.
Seeing their wedding picture in the newspaper Maan remembered his wedding with Geet painfully.

Tu hi hai kinaara tera
Tu hi to sahaara tera
Tu hi hai taraana kal ka
Tu hi to fasaana kal ka
Khud pe yaqeen tu karna
Ban.na tu apna khuda... (x2)




Savitri and Dev were upset.
D:Why did you sacrifice your Geet bro?

M:Because Geet's happiness is Dr.Rishab Kundra now.And I don't want to snatch their happiness.I want her to be happy always.

Tear drops flowed down from his eyes.


Khizaan ki shaam hoon main
Tu hai nayi subah
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

Years passed...

At a park...
Maan's eyes struck a cute family.He was shocked.
They were Rishab,Madhu and their little daughter.They were very happy and were chatting and having fun.


Maan's heart pained.
He just left from there silently.

Some couples are not meant for each other...like Maan and Geet.They are destined to be with someone else else.May be God twisted their love story to make them more happier.

The end

NOTE- U all may find it an abrupt ending as Madhu and Rishab did not know Geet's past with Maan and without being aware of the truth they got married.But the movie Innale which inspired me to write this TS had a similar ending and I didn't want to change it.Making Madhu know the truth and still uniting her with Rishab doesn't make any sense 4 me.And I didn't want to kill Maan just to unite Rishbala.
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago

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