Memory Loss Rishbala TS Alternative ending Pg11 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome story dear u included both rishabala n mannet in did story d concept is very gd geet loss her memory n got a new identity as madhu which I hope ll remain till end coz madhu is made for rishab plz update d next part asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Excellent update. So my Rishbala get close i love it. Please update soon. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. I loved it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Memory Loss Part 2
Rishab-Madhu became close friends.They had feelings for each other.But they hid it.
Once they arranged a surprise birthday party for Nandini.Nandini was very happy.After the cake cutting all the couples danced.
Rishab went to Madhu:Can I have the pleasure to dance with you?
Madhu blushed.They both danced together romantically.

Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha - (2)
Dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha) - (2)
Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha...(Jism).



Seeing them together Nandini realized their feelings for each other.
After the birthday party Nandini went up to Rishab.
N:You love Madhu.Right?

Rishab became shy.
N:Don't try to hide it.I sensed it.
R:But mom...I don't know if Madhu feels the same for me or not.
N:You have not confessed to Madhu yet?
R:No.
N:Then confess to her soon.It's sure that she too loves you.I saw it in her eyes.
Rishab smiled.

Maan remembered the Valentine's party he spent with Geet.He had danced passionately with Geet.

Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui
O.. khud se hai ya Khuda se
Iss pal meri ladaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui
O o...

Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot.te bante vishwaas ki
O.. Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui

(Aashiqui2).

Holi celebration everywhere.
Maan cried:Geet...since you left the colours of my life have also gone.
He remembered their first holi.
Maan coloured Geet's cheek.
M:Geet...through this colour I'm giving my love to you.Yes...I love you Geet.
Geet was surprised.


Maan said in his mind:If you love me,you will colour me back.
With a smile Geet took colour powder and put it on his cheek.Maan was very happy.They shared a romantic eye lock.

All were dancing during holi.Madhu was also dancing.Rishab pulled her closer to him and applied colour on her face passionately.

R:I love you Madhu.
She coloured him back.

Madhu blushed:I love you too Rishab.

They looked at each other passionately.

Dr.Nandini announced Rishab-Madhu's marriage fixation to her colleagues.Dr.Adarsh went to Nandini secretly.
A:Dr.Nandini,how did you choose Madhu as your daughter in law?I mean...we don't know who she is...is she is married or not.What if she is married?
It pricked Nandini's heart.
A:I think Madhu's medical test should be taken to know if she is a virgin or not.
Rishab who overheard it became dull.Nandini went to him.
R:I heard everything mom.
N:What do you say about it?
R:I love Madhu and her past doesn't make any difference to me.I don't care if she was married before or not.Because now Madhu loves me and she is only mine.
Nandini smiled.

Rishab Madhu got engaged.Madhu slipped,but Rishab held her from falling down.
She smiled feeling nice in his arms.



R:Careful my future biwi.

She became shy hearing him address her as his future biwi.

Seeing the engagement ring on the finger Maan was reminded of his engagement with Geet and wept.
Maan followed Geet secretly at the Engagement party.Knowing that Geet blushed,
but pretended to be unaware of it.

Within some time they exchanged rings happily in front of all.
After the ring exchange Maan took her to a private room.
M:You are my fiance now and I have right on you.
He tried to peck her rosy cheek.The shy Geet ran out.Maan smiled.


Geet's cousin Roopali who was travelling in a car was shocked to see Geet with Nandini in another car.
R:Geet?Geet with Dr.Nandini?

Roopali went to Khurana Mansion and screamed:I saw Geet.
Savitri,Dev and NT were shocked.
D:How is it possible?
NT:You are hallucinating Roopali.
R:No.Believe me.I saw Geet.

R:I don't know.But I saw Geet and my eyes can't cheat me.I saw her with the reputed Doctor of our area;Dr.Nandini.My husband Amit enquired and heard that one of her patients who is suffering from memory loss stays with her and she is engaged to her son.What if she is our Geet?
Savitri and Dev were confused.
Maan who came from behind was stunned to hear it.His eyes became wet:My Geet is alive...I will go get her back.
NT was irritated:Even if it's Geet she is engaged to someone.Then what's the use of getting her back?
D:Shut up Naintara.If you hurt my bro with your bloody tongue I will shut your mouth with a dirty cloth.
NT's eyes were full of tears.

She thought:Because of Geet Dev insulted me in front of all.
D:Bro...you should go and see if it's Geet.
Maan was very emotional.
S:God,please bring back Geet.

NT was restless in her room.
NT:Though I hid the news of Geet being alive,the truth is out now.Oh!
Dev who overheard it was shocked.
He shouted:Naintara!What did you say now?You knew that Geet was alive?
NT stammered:No.
D:Don't hide.I heard everything.Tell the truth dammit.
Before Dev's anger NT had to admit that she had seen Geet's photograph in the newspaper with the news of her being alive.
Dev slapped NT.
D:Because of you bro and Geet had to stay away from each other.You don't deserve to be here anymore.
NT cried:Dev!
Dev kicked her out:Get out.

Savitri and Maan came.
S:Dev...what are you doing?

Dev told everything leaving them shocked.But they were happy about confirming that Madhu is their Geet.

Maan reached Medical Stars hospital happily and met Dr.Rishab.
M:Hi...Dr.Rishab Kundra?
R:Yes...
M:I am Maan Singh Khurana;Geet's husband.
R:Geet?
M:Quite some time ago you all had enquired about a patient's family.Right?Sorry...now only I came to know of it.That's Geet;my wife.
Rishab was shocked.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update love to read rishabala bonding they r d best couple but yaar I don't want rishabala separation if there is such of this kind of story where there is no rishabala in future then sry I dnt want to read it in future pls dnt mind it its my POV only because m a truly rishabala fan again m sry dnt mind it yaar waise thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
This story will have 2 endings.Don't worry.In one ending Rishbala will be united n in the alternative ending Maaneet.Next is d climax where Rishbala will unite.so keep reading

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

superb update love to read rishabala bonding they r d best couple but yaar I don't want rishabala separation if there is such of this kind of story where there is no rishabala in future then sry I dnt want to read it in future pls dnt mind it its my POV only because m a truly rishabala fan again m sry dnt mind it yaar waise thanks for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
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its excellent very interrestingly it s unfold now maan and rk the two titans face to face lets see whats in the wrapper am eagerly waiting for the reaction of rishabh and madhu aft seeing maan hope the last part will be more spicy eagerly waiting for the next part
and yeh the pics and songs are awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
OMG!! can't believe the climax is nearing...can't wait to read it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part
Edited by dreamymishti88 - 10 years ago

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