Memory Loss Rishbala TS Alternative ending Pg11

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Memory Loss Part 1
This TS is inspired by the Malayalam movie Innale.But I have changed the scenes.Since Maaneet and Rishbala have equal number of fans this TS will have new climaxes. In one climax Drashti's character will unite with Maan and in another climax Drashti's character will unite with Rishab.So both Maaneetians and Rishbalians be happy.


Flash news on TV...

Supriya Travels met with an accident on the way to Agra.It's so unfortunate that all the passengers who travelled in the bus passed away.
This news tore all the Khurana hearts.Maan Singh Khurana screamed hearing the news as his beloved wife Get travelled in the same bus to attend her only cousin Rupali's wedding.
M:Geettt!
His Dadimaa Savitri and brother Dev tried to console him.
S:Maan beta...control yourself.
M:How can I dadimaa?I lost my Geet.
D:Bro...
Naintara;Dev's wife smirked.
Maan fainted down and hit his head.His head started bleeding.
Savitri cried:Maan beta...
Dev made Maan get up.
D:Dadimaa,we will take bro to the hospital.
S:Yes Dev beta...
Maan got admitted in the hospital.
S:Dev beta...Geet...
D:Dadimaa,since bro gained consciousness now itself I am going to the spot where the accident took place.Naintara will be there with you.

S:Ok.
Dev reached the accident spot and came to know that the bus fell off cliff.He went to the see the dead bodies.All dead bodies were looking so pathetic that he couldn't recognize Geet.Most of the bodies were scattered into different pieces.He left from there weeping.
Savitri and Maan wept hearing this.
M:I couldn't even see my Geet for the last time.
Savitri caressed him weeping:Maan...


That time people brought an unknown lady to the hospital Medical stars.She was unconscious and her body was injured terribly.

1 of them to the senir Dr Dr.Nandini who is the hospital owner:Dr...we saw this lady floating in the river.
Nandini's son Dr.Rishab came.
N:Rishu,this lady's condition is very bad.A lot of blood has gone too.A sudden surgery is needed.
R:But mom...where is her family?
N:Her family hasn't come.Some people got her from the river.



R:Oh!
They did the surgery.
The lady gained her consciousness.Nandini and Rishab smiled.The lady was scared.
N:How do you feel now?
She was insecure.
R:What's your name?
She:My name?
She strained to reply.
She:I can't remember my name.
Nandini and Rishab were shocked.
R:Your family?

She cried:I don't remember anything.
Nandini and Rishab were shocked.They consulted another senior doctor Dr.Adarsh.
Dr.Adarsh:Because of brain injury she lost her memory.A memory loss.
They were shocked.
She cried:Memory loss?Then how will I live?
Nandini and Rishab felt sad for her.
N:Don't worry,we will find out your family.
Nandini and Rishab put her photograph in the newspaper to trace her family.
NT saw it in the newspaper and got shocked.
NT:Maan Veerji should not get Geet back.Because of Geet was always sidelined.If she comes back I will again lose my importance.

NT hid that newspaper.

Days passed.Geet became depressed as no one came to enquire about her.
She cried:That means I have no family.If I had a family someone would have come in search of me.I am alone.
Nandini and Rishab became upset.
N:Don't cry beta.Don't think you have no family.Now onwards you are our family.You will stay with us.
Rishab was surprised with Nandini's decision.But he felt happy.
Nandini hugged Gee.
G:I don't know how to thank you.
N:No need to thank me beta.By the way we have to find a name for you.

Rishab smiled:Ya...what about the name Madhu?
Geet smiled:Nice name.
Nandini smiled and went away.
G:How did u choose the name Madhu for me?
Rishab smiled:Because you are sweet like honey.
She blushed.
R:What will you give me for giving you a sweet name?
She smiled:What do u want?
R:Your friendship.

He extended his hand towards her.She held his hand slowly.Unknowingly they shared a cute eye lock.

She started staying with them in their house.

Thinking of the first meet with Geet Maan shed tears.It was during the dance competition which Maan sponsored that her met her for the first time.He was impressed with her dance.

Phenke nazar ke sikke usne
Bik gayi hoon main
Usne jo chhoo liya tto haaye
Lagey ke nayi hoon main

Yun tto premi pachattar humare
Leja tu kar satattar ishaare
Dil mera... muft ka

Khamkkha hi taraste bichare
Leja tu kar satattar ishaare
Dil mera... muft ka
Dil mera... muft ka(Agent Vinod).
She was tensed while announcing the result.
They announced her as the winner.She was very happy that she won the trophy.He went and congratulated her:Your dance was beautiful like you.I have become your fan.
Geet blushed.They became friends soon.She shared her worries with him.She lost her parents at a young age.All her relatives deserted her and she had to live in an orphanage.The only person who showed sympathy towards her was her cousin Roopali.Feeling her pain Maan cupped her face in his arms.
M:You are not alone Geet.I am with you.

He wiped her tears and consoled her.She found solace in his chest.
That moment they felt something special for each other.
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww..congrats for the TS..
BTW haha..loved ur idea to unite her with both Maan and RK ..in two dfrnt parts...nicey nicey..

Comign to the update...hmmm memory loss...and oke got it..she will get close to RK...may be after wedding Maan meets her ...but she stays with Rishu..and the Maneet version is vice versa..

nice one...will wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it 👏continue soon n plz pm me if u write on rishbala😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jasmine nice start to TS...
Update soon dear...
Thanks for PM dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Story! Liked it a lot!
Do send me reminders for whenever you update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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There r no 2 diff versions 4 Maaneet n Rishbala.Its just that there will be 2 endings.In one ending Drashti with Rishab n in another ending Drashti with Maan.

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

wowww..congrats for the TS..

BTW haha..loved ur idea to unite her with both Maan and RK ..in two dfrnt parts...nicey nicey..

Comign to the update...hmmm memory loss...and oke got it..she will get close to RK...may be after wedding Maan meets her ...but she stays with Rishu..and the Maneet version is vice versa..

nice one...will wait

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice starting waiting for the next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! awesome story! Cuz I love both the couples ❤️ 😳 continue soon ! Please PM me the updates 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely start
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!! I am both a rishbala & Maaneet fan...U made me to choose between heart & lung...how can I choose???...😲...Maan ho ya Rishabh...my heart bleeds if I see them crying...😭
...Coming to the update , I loved the concept...I decided to read both...

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