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Posted: 10 years ago
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🥳 - haha...i came 1st...feeling like a DON!! Ni, do u remember long back when i didn't hint u abt my story "We are a family" gonna update & u lost ur 1st pg. spot & came in 3rd pg. u said u will take ur chance & asked me if i'm a good stalker i should make it on my own without u helping me...so now what will u say abt my staling ability???😆😆
but to be frank i found ur post unresed on 3rd pg. LOL when i woke up i use to check forum pg on mobile & lucky saw 2 posts of urs have been resed & i quickly took my laptop out & resed & i saw the time u have resed...i did after 2 or 3 hours of u resing LOL😆😆

okay, coming to the update!!
😲 😲 😲 did i read Ni's update?? is this "LTKFTL"?? i'm blinking my eyes rapidly & rubbing it to make my vision clear whether i'm reading the right story?? even i pinched myself to make sure i'm not sleeping & dreaming LOL!!😆😆 i read this part thrice so far, i may read more too but still cant believe it was Ni's story...😲😲😲
u know the reason for my shock!!😆😆
☺️ ☺️ how i got this hot blushy update from Ni?? the world wants to know?? LOL😆😆 seriously Ni, tell me after reading continuously & writing exams did ur brain got collapsed?? or did u hit ur head somewhere?? i'm worried Ni...tell me what happened to u dear?? LOL u gave me a coronary by giving this update...LOL suddenly i felt like earth & heaven was swapped LOL!! earth sucks for me without romance LOL & this update is like heaven...😳😳 u often surprise me but i would say this is the most unexpected pleasant surprise for a person starving for romance in this story LOL😆😆

haha...though Rk wants to enjoy the moment but he was scared of his jungli billi...so he himself tried to take her off of him but nah...our spybala is so high in nasha so she entangled her legs on his & slept on his chest peacefully☺️☺️ how i wish i was in her place!!😳😉
okay, sleeping beauty came awake & shamelessly question him what he was doing not realising she was one on top of him LOL😆😆
kiss...kiss...kiss...miss...miss...miss...😭😭
Rk, ur slow romantic kisses will never work with this lady...she is meant for ur sudden assaults LOL...kiss her like u kissed on taxi LOL!!😆😆 if u take time then u will land in trouble as she is quick in her moves, see how she kicked u & made u fall flat on ur butt...u deserve this mann..for letting her sleep on ur chest...u should have thrown her legs on urs in such a speed that she rolls & falls on her face & break her nose but u didn't so she took the chance LOL😆😆 after all this u have never to ask her to shower with u...Go, follow her to the shower then she will give u swift kick on ur balls with her knees & knock u out of the bathroom LOL!!😆😆
oh why would she use her knees or arms to hit u when she has her handy friend walter??
Man...what a spy u r?? don't u know walter?? like a dumb ass asking who is walter??😆😆 go bang ur head on wall or kill urself with that walter for asking such a stupid question... LOL!!😆😆
why madhu drooled him for long?? is it becos she wont get a chance to drool over him again as she was gonna kill him??😆😆 poor guy without knowing her inner motive he was showing his sexy abs to her LOL😆😆
now i want to bring back sullu & kill him on my own hands for not telling the truth to madhu before he take is hell trip LOL...he started "Rk.." & chewed the remaining & died making madhu thing Rk was behind all... actually what was behind...i dont know what happened yet...😆😆 already its one confusing story but unfortunately i was quite clear with what all happened so far...but u added some more confusions...what secret Rk is hiding?? will he also die before letting the secret out to madhu like sullu?? 😆😆 why Rk cheated madhu?? why they didn't get married months back?? why he ditched her?? from whom he wanted to protect madhu?? mystery mystery mystery...Rk reveal it to madhu before u become History history history LOL😆😆

spybala has the license to kill but forbidden to love with some conditional apply LOL!! she can love & romance while sleeping & when she is awake she will point the gun at hero & conduct a head shot operation LOL!! waah!! wahh!!😆😆

Well, Ni...i should say this is my most favorite part in this story...i loved it & u are damn good in writing romantic stuff so please sprinkle some love & romance in this suspense story before u kill..no, brutally kill the leads for ur baby stalker LOL😆😆

thanks for giving this stupendous update & also for the pm which is of no use for me...LOL😆😆
try to update the next part soon & eagerly waiting for ur hilarious OS/TS LOL😉😉



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kg15 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Aahhh... Finally an update is up! 😉
Coming to it... It was quite interesting Ni... But I won't say I finally understood everything! 🤣 In fact, the conphoosion is still there... so grounded! 🤣

RK was drooling over the sleeping beauty... The moment he touched her strands... I thought... "Don't touch her Pagal... She has got the license to kill...🤣 She can do that even in her sleep!"

Bala and Brunhilda... 🤣🤣 Superb!!! 🤣

"Get off me RK... Right Now!!" Look who is asking... Balaji... YOU have wrapped yourself on Heroji all the while in your sleep... It would be quite better if he would have kicked you down the wooden floor in that beauty nap... 🤣 But what happened other way round is also good... That silly hero deserve that ass kick... 🤣 The lady is not giving you two hoots, still you are chipkofying around her... 🤣 Ullu Kundra you are!!! 🤣 Now you desire for a couple shower too...! 🤢 😆 Kuch nahi ho sakta tera... Kundra!! 🤣 There she is looking for a chance to kill you right away and you are dreaming for a sexy shower with her... You seriously need my KILLER ROHAN in your bathroom... 🤣 He has got a PERMANENT LICENSE TO KILL... EVERYONE!!! 🤣

And the mystery continues... 🤣 You told me, some of the mysteries will be solved in this part but... 😆 Wasn't that Sullu Pullu enough to maintain those secrets that this Ullu Kundra also has one secret...?! 🤣 He left her... ditched her... but WHYYY???? 🤣

This WHYYY is going to become a watermark in every comment of mine, NI! 🤣 Already I have a big list of WHYs and this update added one more to it... 🤣 You are going to be the ultimate victim of this list, Ni...🤣 Be careful! 😆

So she wants to kill the Ullu... NO!! A BIG NO!! Not like this yaar... 🤢 At least give that ullu Kundra one sharp Rampuri knife so that he can pull out her eyeballs and she can shoot directly in his eyes... 🤣 I want a match of equal strengths yaar... Let them tear off each other equally... 🤣

All in all... I would say...

I AM SO CONPHOOOSEDDD... 🤣 🤣

Edited by kg15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
In the real sense...I'm first because I'm the one to proofread this🤣
Sorry Sudha and Di... I beat you both to it

And you're welcome Nina...glad I could help😃

Now to the update...

Now RK and Madhu are sleeping in bed...and RK is worried about when she wakes up😆 Don't worry RK she won't eat you...too much muscle to chew through 🤣 And she herself doesn't want you to leave...look at her clinging to you like glue😆

And scotch and sleeping pills...this is tallibala Version 2.0😆Taking it to a whole other level 🤣
And the kiss miss again...well not a kiss miss...Tallibala is just mad🤣

The beauty pageant girl dialogue from RK cracked me up!🤣 he would win first place 🤣

And she has a bodyguard? Walter🤣 RK has some tough competition...😆 I wish him luck

RK just seemed too hot in this update...I was imagining him while he came out of the shower...I was drooling all over the place...😆

Now Tallibala can't stand in one place...she wants to go out😆 And maybe try to kill RK...damn Nina...it was supposed to be the other way around...Tallibala must die 🤣
Walter must be feeling happy on shooting his competition...unless RK turns the tables at the right time
Too bad Walter, you'll never get the tuxedo that you could wear on you wedding 🤣

Loved the update Nina and I can't wait for Friday
And thanks for the PM even though I read it beforehand😆


Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for the update lazybones 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Finally u update...
Thanksss 4 update...
Superbbb update...
Rishbala moments r Mindblowinggg...
loved it...
In end u gave Shock...
curious to know Why madhu pointed her gun on Rk?????
Continue Soon dear...
can't wait 4 next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome continue soon

Tfs for pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
🤣🤣🤣tallibalas ka season to bhadta jaa raha
i wonder y all tallibalas r my sautan 😆😆😆
wat the efff first she slept hugging him like fevicol ka jod 😆
arousing his desires n then she has nerve to kick him off 🤣🤣🤣
well he difinately deserve that kick for making me jealous
spyman keep ur dirty mind off otherwise i m going to kill u in my own way 😉
ahann after showing him attitude she is drooling over him 😆😆
surely naked rk is a sight to watch ❤️
aye hayee blindfold karke she took him to private place n i was thinking
that she is going to propose him 🤣🤣🤣
par yahan bhi sullu miyan ne phoonk daali huyi hai😆😆 n their secret work made
rk broke her heart so gud for me spyman is all mine 🤣🤣🤣
but duhh he still wants her
casonova spyman dnt u dare eye her
bcoz nina will kill her n u r mine so better keep ur hands off 😆😆😆
huh spybala satak gayi 😆
she pointed gun to my rk
arey waah she is too eager to die frm my spyman 🤣🤣🤣
koi nahi go bala die u r free 😉😉
but then dnt come back to maaro chance on my spyman even in ghostly form u r not allowed
my darling sautan 🤣🤣🤣

nina r u trying to tease by making spybala 😆😆😆
point gun on my spyman n even with her secret drooling 😉😉
anyways it was one hillarious update
njoyed frm start to end
waiting to read more 😛
Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hahahaha loved the update! why does madhu want to shoot RK?😕 can't wait for the mystery to be revealed😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations for starting new thread
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
in lab class now
will comment soon
sorry nina for being too late😳
just stuck on classes
coming to the update
it was awsmmm
u gifted a small romance in this update😳
I Love the whole part but in the last I got shocked as RK 🤣
Ok really why madhu did this?
U r such a good story teller
Always manage to keep suspnc
upadate soon
And how is ur health now?
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago

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