Fault in our stars - Rishbala TS (Next part updated on Pg 5)

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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Yay ! Me first 😆

I just posted the above part n came came running to grab my position 😆 After ressing i again logged in from ur acc n edited the post. aint i too clever ? HAha 😆

I came to knw almost whole story while editing the dialogues 😆 But will comment in brief tomorrow 😆 Now i m going to sleep. Tired of editing 🤣 Its way to long 🤣 a treat for readers, But to edit..oh my ! 🤣 My hands r literally paining 😆 But anything for you. ❤️ Now, off to sleep.

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Ok so as promised, i am here to share my views 😆 So, firstly, i love love love katya. Such a cute baby she is. And she is so strong in such a young age ! And then i m glad tht the misunderstandings cleared in just one meeting 😳 😆 Awesome os...As i told u ..haha ❤️ N i loved the last para the most.

Edited by shriyakadge - 10 years ago

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

It was a lovely emotional story.

Do write more.

Best of luck for your exams.

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

OMG such an emotional n heart touching story❤️ .

Beautifully written.👏

loved it n thanks fr givin g us happy ending. Hope this hppns in reality too n each n every sick person gets cured .👍🏼

Do write more buddy. 🤗👍🏼

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

a very beautiful n emotional update
loved katyas n rks bonding
awww poor rk suffered so much
n he treated his daughter thats so grttt
lovely ending vinu
thanxx shriyu for posting

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Meghana

@simply.meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

That was a beautiful ending Vinu
So cute...loved those reunion and the father-daughter love between RK and Katya
And now they are one big family
Beautiful 😳

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Awesome second part!!

excellent story & excellent way of writing!!

very emotional & feeling sad for all who suffer in that deadly disease cancer but glad u showed both Rk & his daughter surviving so those who are suffering from cancer too will get hopes that its curable & they can live a normal life like other!!

thanks for clearly explaining the technical terms dear!!

i know u r studying medicine but dn't know in which field u r specializing but one thing is sure that u ll become a great doctor!! God bless u sweetheart!!

Do write such wonderful story in future too only when u get time & ideas!!

thank u!!

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Mrs.Somerhalder

@Mrs.Somerhalder

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Beautiful! :) I love this story a lot! Got me emotional for a while!

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Mikolingam

@Mikolingam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Great update but was expecting a little bit of elaboration it was just too short, but good thanks

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rdave1

@rdave1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Wonderful story! Read both of the parts in one go. Oh how communication is a very big key to every relationship. They were both right in their own decisions yet they lost so much precious time. Wonderful job!

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Titli

@afterlife.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

res😆

unres

another brilliant story from u, vinu sis. Happy to see u remember us but unhappy to read ur story. Its so painful. Not only Rishbala broken bt also their only mark of love is also on the verge of death. Why rk left madhu? I don't think career was the reason.. u have updated 2nd part already..hope I will get my answers there..😳 thanks for pm.

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