Rishbala SS- Lamhe COMPLETED @page 38

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

hey, baby, 1stly i'm so sorry i was busy with my studies as u know i have my exams & that's the reason i couldn't update my SS. & the same reason here too for not commenting on the prologue bcos i read both only now...i'm late... sorry!!

i loved the prologue & the 1st part too!!

very interesting!! hmm...after ditiching madhu our hero went to US huh? good!! after having some fun there he is back to madhu...bala..Ahaan!! LOL

poor Rk, doesn't expect in that short gap our mono expression good for nothing gold plated sadakcaah bhai will took his place LOL but never mind... bcos Madhubala is only our RK's!! uss par haq sirf aur sirf amara Rk ki hai so no worries!!

now this is my time to ask u for a solid dishyum dhisyum LOL!! Rk fighting that neeli aakhen with out shirt okay?

sorry dear i want to write more but due to time constraint i'm stopping here & once my exam ends i ll give u my best reviews!!

& haan... though i didn't like ur prologue u still sent me pm so thank so much for that dear!! please so send me pm for all ur works!! i love to read ur stories!! thanks!!

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Great first chapter Neha.👏

Never liked when Padmini supported Sultan in the show.😆 Lets get his heart broken all over again in this story. 🤣 Once wasn't enough. 😈 🤣

Why did you put our Right Kameena in such a position? 😭 Why did you write he cried? 😭 No tears. I know he feels pain, but no tears. Lets get him back in his Right Kameena mode. Ahaan.😎 Reunite with his Biwi. 😎

Let those two fight in a puddle of mudd shirtless. 🤣 We know who will win. Who else than our superstar.😆

Thanks for the first chapter, the dedication and for the PM. 🤗

Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago