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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting prologue... pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First Congo for ur new story dear
Banner is just wow awsome
Stroy is sounding intresting but dear u introduce madhu , salutan n alll but
Where is our hero RK introduce him soon
Waiting for part -1
Continue soon
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue Neha
Wonder who took the bullet...or who fired another bullet to kill Bhujang
I'm guessing it's RK... 😉
Continue soon
I'm waiting 😳
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Congratulations on new story neha di...
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Prologue is very interesting. ...
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Eagerly waiting for next update. ...
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awesomee prologue neha dear!!!
CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW STORY!!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly thanxx to all those who liked n comment .
Le me be very clear abt this story , it will start frm the holi track n the twist will go on frm there so the revenge has been done n after that as rk went to Us n madhu n sultan met all the things have been that pace only but its just here it has been two months of sulbala meeting n three months have passed to rishbala seperation rest everything is same but frm the holi scenario it will purely be my story . . Characters will be same like show n i might introduce some girl frm rks side so plss be very open minded while reading it . End product will be rishbala only so no need to worry abt wat i write in first chapter as second chap will lead to major twist .
so here goes part 1 .

PART 1

RKS POV

It was a dark n cloudy nite , all were in their deep slumber but sleep was far away
frm his eyes . He has just returned frm Us after two months of hectic shooting n
as he landed deepali took the chance n drop the bomb on him abt madhu remarrying
sultan .
His world crashed , his dead heart was aching but still he cldnt cry ,
he cldnt voice out his
thoughts to anyone , n how cld he wen he himself was the reason y this was happening in his life.
He left madhu thinking that he never loved her n hated her for humiliating
him in public but one
thing he forgot that he cldnt hate her ever , his heart had wanted her frm the first time he saw her
but seems it was not in his hands to be her destiny .
These two months not a single day has gone wen he didnt missed her or
he didnt cried himself to sleep .
He was living a miserable life but he never showed it too
anyone not even to bittuji .

How can she remarry so easily , was moving on so easy for her
didnt she said that she loved me so how cld she agree to remarry n that too to a gangster ,
thought rk . Y cant she remarry rk , suddenly he heard his own voice , he looked up in the mirror
n saw his own complexion , his subconcious answering him .
Tell me rk y cant she remarry , u left her , u broke her dreams then y do u even care whether
she moves on or stay with ur memories , rk luked away , he was not able to face this truth
he shouted at the mirror no she cant belong to anyone else she is mine only
only rks madhubala no one has got right over her bcoz she is my biwi .
Biwi , really ? did u forgot that u took away that right frm her long back
n his subconcious started laughing at him , rk got more furious n he picked up the vase n threw
it on the mirror n it broke into thousands of pieces .
His mind shouted at him '' look rk this is the condition of her heart n all because of u
u cldnt be the man she wanted , u cldnt trust her love , u feared she will also leave u
like everyone left u n before she cld leave u , u left her n destroyed ur own world '',
tearms brimmed his eyes as he thought of that fateful night once again , it has been the
same since the day he left his madhu .
He started sobbing n said '' i m sorry madhu plss come back to me dnt punish me like this
i know i have been a jerk but i love u a lot n i realize it now that i can never be happy
without u plss come back to ur rk , i promise i ll give u all the happiness of the world
but plss dnt do this to me .''
Suddenly his eyes went to their frame , he walked up n picked up the photo in his hand
n caressed madhus face n with a determined voice he vowed that '' i will get u back
at any cost i wont let u go away like this i know u only love me , tomorrow is our first holi
n holi is a festival of colours n i ll get back all the colours in our lives
i ll beg ur forgiveness n i ll tell u how much i love u i always have
n we will start our new life once again , no sultan can come between us
its rk n madhubala only , n will always remain '' with this he kissed on madhus face
n kept the photo back at its place N he head back to his bed to dream abt his madhu .

Madhus pov
Tomorrow is holi n i m going to get engaged to sultan in a private affair ,
sultan is a gangster but still he is gud at heart , maa wants us to be married soon
so that i cld go away frm rk forever but y i dnt i feel happy abt going away frm him
y is it hurting me so much , y i dnt feel like doing this engagement , she thought.
No madhu dnt think abt rk , he left u n moved on n now u shd also move on frm
his memories , sultan will keep u happy n u him n aryan will be cute happy family
there is no space for rk now in ur life , she dismissed the thoughts of rk n went to sleep .

P.S Madhu doesnt love sultan , she just agreed for padminis sake as
her mumma is getting on her nevers 😉 lol n though sullu bhai likes her but she will
chose rk only wen he gets back on her n dnt wrry i have solid plans of doing sullu uncle ki pitayi so be patient n yup they wont get engaged bcoz our hero will maaro his entry again in his biwis life . so relax n read .
plss likes n comments must .

Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
nice start ...padmini is imposing sultan on madhu and madhu is being mumma's girl ..waiting what happens in story next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hope madhu gets some sense ...thanks for pm
Edited by love_vivi - 10 years ago

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