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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2
Rks pov

It was a bright sunny morning n in three months for the first time i waked up
with a smile on my face . I had been in my lil delusive world
but not anymore , now i know that i love my madhu , i have always had n now i ll make it upto her
in every way possible even if it takes a lifetime i ll try n win my madhus trust n love back
n i know my madhu will forgive me as she is the one who taught me to forgive n move on frm my past
but y i m feeling so unusual . Like something bad is going to happen . No rk nothing will
happen , u r thinking too much nowadays , now go n get ready bcoz u have to go to chawl n put colour on madhu first , retorted my
subconcious . Yes i shd get ready n leave for chawl fast .I quickly went to have a shower n got dressed
in white kurta , denims n blue scarf . I was checking myself in mirror wen bittuji came in shouting
his usual chanting ,'' chief , chief ... but as soon as i turned around his mouth opened with a o look .
I glared at bittuji n shouted '' wat is it bittuji , y do u have have to chant my name early in the morning
dnt u see i m getting ready for holi .
Chief wo wo u r going to play holi n u got early too , said bittuji hesistantly .
Y cant the superstar rk play holi , i said with style sometimes i think y i hired bittuji as my maager
y does he ask silly questions to me always .
anyways bittuji get the car ready , i m coming in five minutes .
but chief where r u going n that too so early ,'' ab aap bhi rk se sawaal jawaab karenge bittuji
jaiye aur jaakar car nikal liye mujhe irritate karna band kariye .

Finally i was ready to meet my madhu , i took blessings of bappa n my papa
i really need them today . I turned around to go out of my room wen maa came
hurriedly n luked at me with surprise n i shrug my shoulders .
maa , bittuji must have already told u that i m going out
so before u cld start ur enquiry let me tell u
i m going to celebrate holi with ur bahu .
maa luked at me stunned n suddenly i felt as if i have grown two horns on my head .
wat did u say u r going to celebrate holi with madhu , maa enquired me again .
i smiled n said yes maa i m going to her only now will u let me go n get ur bahu back
i know i have been a jerk but now i realise that i love her madly , i cant let her go away n she has to come back to me
anyway how .
luk rishu , its gud that u realised ur fault n want to correct it but dnt force her in anything
she had moved on n if she doesnt want to ... before maa cld complete i stopped her frm saying
wat she wanted to say , i cant hear that not in this birth atleast .
maa i know wat i m doing u plss just bless ur son n pray that i get success in getting her back
n dnt wrry i wont force her , i ll apologize to her n her family n then only i will ask her to come back .
i bend down n touched maa's feet n she blessed me with tears in her eyes n said
today u r making me feel proud rishu , if ur papa wld have been here he wld have felt s happy
seeing his rishabh so mature n sensible , today finally my rishabh has come back .
i hugged maa n soothed her , i also felt so good after years , i closed my eyes n a tear escaped my eyes
as the person who gave me this happiness is away frm me n with that thought i parted frm maa n wiped her tears
n instructed her not to cry anymore .

i left alone in my car , bittuji wanted to come but i didnt wanted anyone to disturb me
i just wanted sometime alone to think properly to wat i have to say to madhu .
i know its going to be difficult but challanges r made for rk
n rk never loses one , i thought n smirked in the rear view mirror n said
biwi here i come , u cant run away frm me .

I reached chawl , it was decorated beautifully for holi ,
there was color all around but it didnt attracted me , i was luking for the color of my life , my madhu
where was she ? N just then i saw her glimpse n my heart skipped a beat . There she was standing in
her pink n white lehenga luking as beautiful as the sunrise . Her eyes glowing like sun rays
n she was happily chattering around but then wat i saw made me close my fists in anger .
My madhu was applying colour to some other man n he did the same , perhaps he was that
bloody gangster , my blood boiled seeing them so happy together .
Has she really moved on frm me that she is so happy without me
dnt she miss me , dnt she love me anymore .
Maa's words rang in my ears that if she has moved on dnt force her for anything
but can i stay alive after seeing this , can i live like this seeing my love again with another man .
For a moment it reminded me of the moment i found abt deepali n sikky then also i was left alone like this
cld i bear to be left out again in my loneliness , dnt i deserve any chance to be happy .
i cursed my fate n started to leave
i have no courage to go n talk to her i cant face her after wat i saw
i wont give anyone chance to laught at my vulnerable state
i lost myself 5 yrs back but not any more
i did wrong to her n now i m ready to pay for it by living away frm her
if she is happy without me i wont force her , i wont tell her that i love her .
i started to leave just then my phone ranged n it was bittuji
i cutted the phone n reached my car i took a deep breath n i was abt to start the car
wen i saw some goons entering the chawl ,
suddenly madhus safety became my first priority
i rushed out of my car n hided behind a tree to luk inside n the sight shocked me to core
the goons were beating the chawl ppl n some were kept on gun point
n a tall man who luked like a leader was threatening them .
I was not able to understand wat was happening around
who were they n wat r they doing here
wat enemity they have frm chawl ppl , then suddenly it strucked me that sultan
was a gangster so perhaps they r his enemies .
Wat u have got into urself madhu , who told u to help a gangster .
without thinking much i called bittuji n explained him
everything asked him to get police as fast as posible , but till then i have to keep eye on them
nothing shd happen to my madhu n just then the leader dragged her in middle
said something n pointed his gun at him .
Fear gripped my heart , my life was in danger how can i let it happen
but where was that sultan y was he not saving her , was he involved in this
all sorts of question ran in my mind n before i cld answer i was on my legs
running to save my madhu . Madhus eyes were closed
she was shivering with fear , the leader fired the bullet
n i jumped inbetween n it hit me in the same place where i was shot last time.
My body started becoming numb , n i cld see the goons running away hearing the sounds of
police van sirens n before i closed my voice
i heard muffled voices of madhu n bittuji calling me out .

P.S So here goes the second part
i completed it so thouht to post n i wont be delaying updates as i want to complete the story as soon as possible .
hope u guyss will like the update
do give ur reviews n those who havent sent me buddy request yet
plss send me on my account - NehaTekwani if u want pm of this story .
thanxx n happy reading .


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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Congrats for the new story and thank u so much for the dedication neha, but lil sad as RK was missing in prologue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
So RK was getting ready to get his biwi in his life, even though padmini urged her, how could madhu accpet for this, helping him is fine, but accepting to get engaged with him is really bad, where did her love for RK gone, ya i accpet he hurted her like anything, so for that this is not the right one, she should have stayed alone
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Me first first firsttt

Ha ha ha,coming to the update, oh my poor rk heart broken now, wait, why sultan don't have any support i mean, where is his gang people, they could have helped him na, so my RK jumped and got hit that too on the same spot, oh my poor good, now madhu wil realise how much he loves her and wil cry again to save him.

Waiting for next update
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
uma di not fair u always get 1st place :p
nyc update
so RK went to madhu fir her love
I love this matured RK a little more
but my rk got shoot do something neha
sullu ullu ki toh...
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Superb update n rk shot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
ohh My..i have sent the Buddy request..😆😆
coming to the chapter...woww...RK got what madhu is to him...wowww...nice...
Sullu ullu ke liye Madhu ko kyun maarna...anyways my RK baby saved Madhu...👍🏼

But u said he got shot at the sam eplace again...will that has anything to do with the story.//😛😛😛

Waiting for next post Neha👏👏👏...thank you for the updates sweety😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats Neha di !!!
So u hav started a ss Sorry for being late after 4 days i hav got time today to chk pms
Intresting

w8ing for Rk to sultan ko maar bhagaying 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
No problem! Thanks for buddy me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Liked RK's pov.
He wanted to move away for herhappiness. So unlike from show's RK.
Now madhu wil realize RK's love.

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