Rishbala SS- Lamhe COMPLETED @page 38 - Page 3

Haha u ould have not said the last line of ur ps btw interesting start

Ohhh my RK My hero...he is in pain
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congr8ss for new ss

Awesome start Neha!! I haven't read a story for long now as I wasn't getting tge time but ur title just grabbed my attention! I gyeas that is becoz I was planning to name an OS of mine that but oh well...

Seriously a lovely start and I will try reading and commenting on ur story even if I am terrible at that 😆

P.S. hahaha hah girlu just gave away ur plot...u should just leave ur readers in panic 😆 but I bet u have more than that in mind so will be waiting for itand update soon XP

Nice start.loved ur ps. Thanks for the pm

Awesome update Neha
Reminds me of the Holi episode and the hot Rishbala dance 😳
Continue soon
Loving it so much 😃

Now cant wait rk will again enter and madhu ki heart me ghantu bajegi aur sullu ullu ko 2 4 maar bhi padegi ! Wat a mast wala update !! Sulllu bhai mb sirf rk ki hai sapne mat dekh jyada aur ye paddo yaar !! Seriously y the hell she wants her daughter to marry sullu gangster hun ?? Thanks for the pm waiting for ur update as rk will in his biwi's engagement will be a dhamaka !!

superb start neha..
continue soon & thanks for pm

Nice update dear
Thanks for pm

Congo shongo Neha for your first ever SS...
Nice prologue but again Sullu and Bhujang!!!! But where is my herooo!!!!!!
Madhu tum toh samajsevi ban gayi... 🤣
Now you cursed yourself but I know I know your RK will save you...
Is this the track after RK's revenge in show... Well if yes then it will gonna interesting to read further...
Update soon... Ohh actually you have updated first part already and I am commenting on prologue only 🤣
Okayyy!!! Will comment on first part after reading...

Chalo come with another comment.. 😆
Dnt you think its quiet short.. I wished I can read more...
Liked RK's POV but yaar Neha you make him beg for forgivness no yaar dnt do this... It doesn't suit RK's image... Attitude only suits him... So make a dhasoo entry of my SUPERSTAR at Holi... 🤣
I wish they dance again... Ahh I want that RK bring his biwi back in his style... 😉
Madhuu!!! What can I say for you... Your heart know that you love only your RK then how can you get engage with Sullu... Have you lost your mind??? Kaha chod ayi apni dimaag ko?? RK mansion??? 🤣
I wish yeh Madhu bhi apne didu pe jati like selfish... But shit!!! She is not like her... She is Mahanbala... Go Madhu make your mother India's dream...
But okayyy!! As you said RK ki entry hogi and also sullu ki pitai so just waiting waiting waiting 🤣
But I hope my poor RK doesnt get hurt... As he had a habit to go Hostipal and Jail.. 🤣 His another homes for chilax 😆
Hmm!!! I guess you are planning to send him his another home HOSPITAL.. May be my mind is working fast fast...
Waiting for next.. Post soon...
Thanx for pm..