Rishabala OS: Pirates Of The Caribbean

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Lazy, i don't have word to explain how much i liked this story.

See, as i told it was too too too good,and pls pls give me this RK, i will keep him for me, he is so cute, so sweet, such a nice guy and he will be my old hag shirt forever.

Actually it didn't strike me that there could be chances for them knowing each other before, when trish asked "You didn't tell her?" i thought whether she was asking they both spoke to each other like that, didn't expect them to have such a cute memorable past and now i wonder after doing this much how could madhu forget about them.

Poor RK went to the movie second time, to see that kiss scene, but missed it because of madhu, she didn't even remember that she named him RK? So sad .The way madhu became jealous when joha flirted with RK and how she missed him were brilliantly explained, the way madhu reacting for phone call charges and data charges were awesome.

On the whole, i completely loveddd it.

Sorry Kuku di, but I must first direct this to Sudha. First congratz on being first. 🥳I am third. I have never ever have gotten this high position in any of Kuku di's stories. 😆 Secondly. Good God girl. You and I will soon compete on who writes a longer comment.😆 And honestly you are mocking Madhu's stinginess? For your kind information, she is doing the right thing. Yes you read that right.😆 Soon you will found out why.😆 But I think you can already guess why.😆

Sorry Kuku di. But first I had to give a comment to Sudha. Cause when I get to your story, my comment will be as long as hers.😆

Needless to say. An awesome, incredible, humoristic story. I laughed the most at the end, where Madhu argues with her dad. 😆 But I don't think those words quite covers it. There are probably more fitting words to complement your story, but my mind is blank for the moment. Sorry.😆 I said it before and I am saying it again, You are far one of the best writers in this forum. So me saying anything more then that or complementing one of your updates or stories won't cut it.

Okay over to the actual story.

When I read the title I actually thought this would be a pirate story. Where RK would be the pirate and Madhu would perhaps be his fair maiden that hated his guts but eventually falls in love with him.😆 Or her being a female pirate as well, making them rivals who hate each other. But nevertheless RK flirts with her and she shows him his place. 😆 But they soon join hands against a bigger threat and eventually fall in love.😆 Well if you ever decide to write a pirate story, I have already given you a plot.😆

So Madhu wanted to her parents to accompany them on their honeymoon.😆 Good choice Madhu. No privacy at all. It's the perfect honeymoon. Your parents hovering around you 24*7.🤣 Well why didn't RK think of that when he booked those tickets.😆 That would be so much fun.🤣 All of them could have dressed up as pirates. I bet their parents would love that.😆

I am glad Abraham was quickly out of the story and Madhu used her brain.😆 He played one little but crucial part. He left Madhu in the middle of nowhere.😆 But it could have gotten worse. He could have tried to molest her, perhaps even beat her for defying him. So the best happened in a terrible situation.

So Madhu faked a head ache. I am so glad that RK returned the favor at the end, when he visited her in GB. It got her thinking and remembering how she treated him. Great plan and payback.😉

And the password Caribbean250703.🤣 I knew that that date had some significance.😆 But wouldn't actually think that a 17 year old would fall in love with a 12-13 year old.🤣 Sure Madhu's ways are cute and she is stingy. But to fall in love and prey to God to get married to that young girl.

Now over to Madhu's stinginess. I totally agree with her. If he has Wifi why does he keep using his phone's net? And why doesn't he make some use of him having Skype? Hello videochatting? Thank God Madhu is there to explain everything to him. 😆 And quite frankly I have to admit, I would do the same thing.🤣 I am not better than Madhu in this story. I might live a country where most people think you can't bargain on things like when you buy new electronics or clothes. And they get surprised when I tell them that they can. But then again they haven't met a stingy person like me. I never buy anything with a full price, unless the groceries. Those I can't bargain on. I can't bargain with the cachier in a supermarket. They would never let me in again.🤣

Okay there are some more things I would like to comment on. Like RK supporting Madhu, giving her space flying over to GB to bring her homemade food. Spending some time with her. Even if it means losing his reward. Doesn't care about her past. And the time at the movies.

Smart move Madhu. I would do the exact the same thing with the cab.😆

Thanks for no words affiecient enough to describe it OS and the PM.

I think I got a PM, I am not sure. There are so many of them.😆 If not. Well thanks for the PM in beforehand.

So rk loved madhu since he met her n dey watched da movie together,she loved da movie n it was her wish to visit da island dressing up like dat n dat was da reason of keeping dat password fr wifi n once madhu kept da name rk so later on he only wanted her to call him dat.epic love.

loved the story

pirates of carribean i too love it

wud like another part😉