Rishabala OS: Pirates Of The Caribbean

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

yayyy...finally an OS from you...

this what I love abt you...simple concepts but beautifully narrated...ur one hell of a writer for me...lolzzz

Keep writing gal...makes us so much happy and healthy too...lolllzzz

Have a nice day sweety...😳

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@navk

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

omg it was damn superb
flashback scene was so nice
loved it

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wonderful story actually very cute
Aww rk had wished to get her when he grows up
Rk was really adorable n madhu was weird but cute
Every girl would like to get such a lovely husband
I toh would love to get it
Beautifully written

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Remona

@Klaroline.Lover

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

I love u diii. ...

U made my day...

First let me read... love u...

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Amazing OS.

RK is so sweet n Madhu so adorable. Loved the old shirt phrase for love.

Finally the flashback and the connection to the movie.

Beautifully written as usual.

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Shivangi.

@caffeineaddict

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

OMG! One adorable story. This RK, Aww Man! His craziness for Caribbean has everything to do with the careful sweetheart Madhu! AWW. Her saving-money-wherever-possible attitude. Just imagining how it must be for Rishabh. He had witnessed it years back and then God gave her to him forever!

PS: Your stories serve for my bedtime RishBala stories Lazy <3 I cannot sleep without reading one story of urs.

Edited by Temptations. - 10 years ago

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Omg RK is a darling
Madhu asked him to call RK ,RK
luvly
RK remembered every words of their convertions
awsmmm di

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Boo Bear

@-Babydoll_Pooh-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Awesome os di...

Loved it... By the way who told it was silly huh? It was super duper intresting.

Loved my stingy Madhu and my Old hag shirt Rk...haha...😆

They both are made for each other...

Loved the childhood part a lot...😊

I loved this os so so so so. ... much especially the crazy obsession of rk that is Pirates of Caribbean. ...

Di... If u can please write another part for this okk...

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Why do you told flashback was silly? Trust me I found it cute. Lovely story and I loved their relationship. I always thought why RK is waiting for her so much? But in the end you defined it he always loved her. Keep it up and thanks for sharing. 🤗

Edited by beautiful_heart - 10 years ago